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I know you've seen some of these kinds of topics before, but anyway I feel like telling you about my kinda game.
It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig, leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done this and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in the Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and 'Underworld.'
As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests through the area and to get Torment.
What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to it.....
It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig, leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done this and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in the Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and 'Underworld.'
As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests through the area and to get Torment.
What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to it.....
I know you've seen some of these kinds of topics before, but anyway I feel like telling you about my kinda game.
It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig, leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done this and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in the Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and 'Underworld.'
As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests through the area and to get Torment.
What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to it.....
It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig, leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done this and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in the Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and 'Underworld.'
As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests through the area and to get Torment.
What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to it.....
Joinercus wrote:
> I know you've seen some of these kinds of topics before, but anyway I
> feel like telling you about my kinda game.
>
> It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
>
> It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to
> destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed
> to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians
> inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place
> of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
>
> But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig,
> leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the
> universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done this
> and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in the
> Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and
> 'Underworld.'
>
> As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests
> through the area and to get Torment.
>
> What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to
> it.....
I like this Kraig guy, he has character.
As for the story, after Kraig is banished you could have the 'Tormented Saints' rebel (their leader did just get 'Banished' to Hell after all) on 'Utopirist' but the civilians have to be moved to a safe heaven i.e. a planet, which we will call 'Tourqe', that Torment is about to destory, because he has to 'save' them, thus creating a Time Limit which creates Tension for the Player.
Voila! What a brilliant game.
> I know you've seen some of these kinds of topics before, but anyway I
> feel like telling you about my kinda game.
>
> It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
>
> It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to
> destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed
> to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians
> inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place
> of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
>
> But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig,
> leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the
> universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done this
> and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in the
> Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and
> 'Underworld.'
>
> As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests
> through the area and to get Torment.
>
> What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to
> it.....
I like this Kraig guy, he has character.
As for the story, after Kraig is banished you could have the 'Tormented Saints' rebel (their leader did just get 'Banished' to Hell after all) on 'Utopirist' but the civilians have to be moved to a safe heaven i.e. a planet, which we will call 'Tourqe', that Torment is about to destory, because he has to 'save' them, thus creating a Time Limit which creates Tension for the Player.
Voila! What a brilliant game.
Jez13 wrote:
> did you have to quote the whole thing?
Sorry about that, I was planning on talking about different bits of the story but got carried away.
But frankly, whats it got to do with you?
> did you have to quote the whole thing?
Sorry about that, I was planning on talking about different bits of the story but got carried away.
But frankly, whats it got to do with you?
mikelar10 wrote:
> Joinercus wrote:
> I know you've seen some of these kinds of topics before, but anyway
> I
> feel like telling you about my kinda game.
>
> It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
>
> It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to
> destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed
> to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians
> inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place
> of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
>
> But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig,
> leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the
> universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done
> this
> and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in
> the
> Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and
> 'Underworld.'
>
> As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests
> through the area and to get Torment.
>
> What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to
> it.....
>
> I like this Kraig guy, he has character.
>
> As for the story, after Kraig is banished you could have the
> 'Tormented Saints' rebel (their leader did just get 'Banished' to Hell
> after all) on 'Utopirist' but the civilians have to be moved to a safe
> heaven i.e. a planet, which we will call 'Tourqe', that Torment is
> about to destory, because he has to 'save' them, thus creating a Time
> Limit which creates Tension for the Player.
>
> Voila! What a brilliant game.
You didn't have to quote the whole thing, but what you said is good.
> Joinercus wrote:
> I know you've seen some of these kinds of topics before, but anyway
> I
> feel like telling you about my kinda game.
>
> It's called 'Torment' and its an RPG.
>
> It's about an over and underworld universe leader, who continue's to
> destroy the universe by dragging in planets that are being destroyed
> to 'save' them. But his name is 'Torment', leaving the civilians
> inside his spaceship called 'Utopirist' and leaving them to a 'place
> of heaven' and 'save'. They all die anyway.
>
> But, one of his captain leaders of the 'Tormented Saints', Kraig,
> leaves the spaceship of reasoning why Torment is demolishing the
> universe and his purpose. But Torment is knowing that he has done
> this
> and trying to capture, but he gets caught. Torment throws Kraig in
> the
> Apocylipctic Warp to get rid of him, into the 'Banishing' and
> 'Underworld.'
>
> As a soul survivor of his crew, he finds himself in Hell and quests
> through the area and to get Torment.
>
> What to you think? Its a bit evil, but it has many other things to
> it.....
>
> I like this Kraig guy, he has character.
>
> As for the story, after Kraig is banished you could have the
> 'Tormented Saints' rebel (their leader did just get 'Banished' to Hell
> after all) on 'Utopirist' but the civilians have to be moved to a safe
> heaven i.e. a planet, which we will call 'Tourqe', that Torment is
> about to destory, because he has to 'save' them, thus creating a Time
> Limit which creates Tension for the Player.
>
> Voila! What a brilliant game.
You didn't have to quote the whole thing, but what you said is good.
i think its good but change his name to craig.