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When i see your golden hair glinting in the the sun,
It reminds me of and orchid so delicate and pure.
When I see you your smiling face so warm and fresh,
Its like bathing in the still calm waters of the Deep blue sea.
When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
they glisten like a tropical rain forest after the rains.
When I see your cute little nose like a button
Its like a tiny mushroom so warm and so fair.
When I see you tiny fingers so delicate in hand
they are like tiny twigs swaying in the wind
When i see thoughs long legs like two stems from a petal
they are so pink and so pure.
When I see all theese things I smile
and know your mine.
It reminds me of and orchid so delicate and pure.
When I see you your smiling face so warm and fresh,
Its like bathing in the still calm waters of the Deep blue sea.
When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
they glisten like a tropical rain forest after the rains.
When I see your cute little nose like a button
Its like a tiny mushroom so warm and so fair.
When I see you tiny fingers so delicate in hand
they are like tiny twigs swaying in the wind
When i see thoughs long legs like two stems from a petal
they are so pink and so pure.
When I see all theese things I smile
and know your mine.
Hey davyboy would you mind reading my post called 'the elephant man' please, by the way your poem is good, Cheers :)
The Iron Monkey wrote:
> davyboy wrote:
> The Iron Monkey wrote:
> davyboy wrote:
>
> When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
>
> eh? she's got cats in her eyes? :P
>
> the rest of your poem's very nice though. :)
>
> Was meant "Like a cats" lolol
>
> Oh right. Still cats eyes are still a wee bit freaky though!
> :P
for some but two of my bestest femail friends have green eyes.
> davyboy wrote:
> The Iron Monkey wrote:
> davyboy wrote:
>
> When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
>
> eh? she's got cats in her eyes? :P
>
> the rest of your poem's very nice though. :)
>
> Was meant "Like a cats" lolol
>
> Oh right. Still cats eyes are still a wee bit freaky though!
> :P
for some but two of my bestest femail friends have green eyes.
davyboy wrote:
> The Iron Monkey wrote:
> davyboy wrote:
>
> When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
>
> eh? she's got cats in her eyes? :P
>
> the rest of your poem's very nice though. :)
>
> Was meant "Like a cats" lolol
Oh right. Still cats eyes are still a wee bit freaky though!
:P
> The Iron Monkey wrote:
> davyboy wrote:
>
> When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
>
> eh? she's got cats in her eyes? :P
>
> the rest of your poem's very nice though. :)
>
> Was meant "Like a cats" lolol
Oh right. Still cats eyes are still a wee bit freaky though!
:P
*runs away really scared!*
When i see your golden hair glinting in the the sun,
It reminds me of and orchid so delicate and pure.
When I see you your smiling face so warm and fresh,
Its like bathing in the still calm waters of the Deep blue sea.
When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
they glisten like a tropical rain forest after the rains.
When I see your cute little nose like a button
Its like a tiny mushroom so warm and so fair.
When I see you tiny fingers so delicate in hand
they are like tiny twigs swaying in the wind
When i see thoughs long legs like two stems from a petal
they are so pink and so pure.
When I see all theese things I smile
and know your mine.
It reminds me of and orchid so delicate and pure.
When I see you your smiling face so warm and fresh,
Its like bathing in the still calm waters of the Deep blue sea.
When I see your deep green eyes like at cats,
they glisten like a tropical rain forest after the rains.
When I see your cute little nose like a button
Its like a tiny mushroom so warm and so fair.
When I see you tiny fingers so delicate in hand
they are like tiny twigs swaying in the wind
When i see thoughs long legs like two stems from a petal
they are so pink and so pure.
When I see all theese things I smile
and know your mine.