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You left me that day,
Standing on my road,
In the pouring rain,
Which hid my tears,
I suddenly was lost,
Confused,
Something that had always been there was gone,
I didn’t feel whole without you,
I still don’t,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish it all away,
Just push it to one side,
So I can be left alone,
In my sanctuary,
To pour my soul out through my eyes,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish you back,
For one last hug,
One last word,
One last glance,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish myself away,
To where?
I didn’t mind,
Just away,
Gone,
Forgotten for a short time,
So I could breakdown,
Away from caring eyes,
And only partially comforting arms,
I wanted to go and be myself
Only for a moment or two,
I didn’t want to be strong just then,
Not for me or anyone else,
I just wanted to cry,
For you,
In this moment,
I wish I could not have to hide myself,
Just go and be me for once,
Cry without caring if I’m seen,
Sing without caring if I’m heard,
Love without caring if I’m caught,
In the next moment however,
I’ll realise that wishing doesn’t work,
And that reality is still happening,
You’re still gone,
And the pain you left me with is still here,
Oh well,
Time again to go outside,
And hide these tears one more time.
Standing on my road,
In the pouring rain,
Which hid my tears,
I suddenly was lost,
Confused,
Something that had always been there was gone,
I didn’t feel whole without you,
I still don’t,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish it all away,
Just push it to one side,
So I can be left alone,
In my sanctuary,
To pour my soul out through my eyes,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish you back,
For one last hug,
One last word,
One last glance,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish myself away,
To where?
I didn’t mind,
Just away,
Gone,
Forgotten for a short time,
So I could breakdown,
Away from caring eyes,
And only partially comforting arms,
I wanted to go and be myself
Only for a moment or two,
I didn’t want to be strong just then,
Not for me or anyone else,
I just wanted to cry,
For you,
In this moment,
I wish I could not have to hide myself,
Just go and be me for once,
Cry without caring if I’m seen,
Sing without caring if I’m heard,
Love without caring if I’m caught,
In the next moment however,
I’ll realise that wishing doesn’t work,
And that reality is still happening,
You’re still gone,
And the pain you left me with is still here,
Oh well,
Time again to go outside,
And hide these tears one more time.
Excellent.
Ant wrote:
> I've probably completely misunderstood,
Heheh, I would tell you but I don't want to shatter anything if you are wrong :-)
but it was still great. {:)
Cheers :-D
> I've probably completely misunderstood,
Heheh, I would tell you but I don't want to shatter anything if you are wrong :-)
but it was still great. {:)
Cheers :-D
Brilliant Rasta. Really good.
I have had one personal experience which is a lot like the feelings you described in that...I loved the bit about singing without being heard and loving without being caught. It''s like there's so many people around that you can't reveal what you truly think...if you sing then people might laugh at you, if people find out you're in love it could be the same. Sometimes you just need time alone, but in life today you don't really get any.
I've probably completely misunderstood, but it was still great. {:)
I have had one personal experience which is a lot like the feelings you described in that...I loved the bit about singing without being heard and loving without being caught. It''s like there's so many people around that you can't reveal what you truly think...if you sing then people might laugh at you, if people find out you're in love it could be the same. Sometimes you just need time alone, but in life today you don't really get any.
I've probably completely misunderstood, but it was still great. {:)
You left me that day,
Standing on my road,
In the pouring rain,
Which hid my tears,
I suddenly was lost,
Confused,
Something that had always been there was gone,
I didn’t feel whole without you,
I still don’t,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish it all away,
Just push it to one side,
So I can be left alone,
In my sanctuary,
To pour my soul out through my eyes,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish you back,
For one last hug,
One last word,
One last glance,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish myself away,
To where?
I didn’t mind,
Just away,
Gone,
Forgotten for a short time,
So I could breakdown,
Away from caring eyes,
And only partially comforting arms,
I wanted to go and be myself
Only for a moment or two,
I didn’t want to be strong just then,
Not for me or anyone else,
I just wanted to cry,
For you,
In this moment,
I wish I could not have to hide myself,
Just go and be me for once,
Cry without caring if I’m seen,
Sing without caring if I’m heard,
Love without caring if I’m caught,
In the next moment however,
I’ll realise that wishing doesn’t work,
And that reality is still happening,
You’re still gone,
And the pain you left me with is still here,
Oh well,
Time again to go outside,
And hide these tears one more time.
Standing on my road,
In the pouring rain,
Which hid my tears,
I suddenly was lost,
Confused,
Something that had always been there was gone,
I didn’t feel whole without you,
I still don’t,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish it all away,
Just push it to one side,
So I can be left alone,
In my sanctuary,
To pour my soul out through my eyes,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish you back,
For one last hug,
One last word,
One last glance,
In that moment,
I wished that I could wish myself away,
To where?
I didn’t mind,
Just away,
Gone,
Forgotten for a short time,
So I could breakdown,
Away from caring eyes,
And only partially comforting arms,
I wanted to go and be myself
Only for a moment or two,
I didn’t want to be strong just then,
Not for me or anyone else,
I just wanted to cry,
For you,
In this moment,
I wish I could not have to hide myself,
Just go and be me for once,
Cry without caring if I’m seen,
Sing without caring if I’m heard,
Love without caring if I’m caught,
In the next moment however,
I’ll realise that wishing doesn’t work,
And that reality is still happening,
You’re still gone,
And the pain you left me with is still here,
Oh well,
Time again to go outside,
And hide these tears one more time.