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I entered this in a poetry contest ang I'm in the semi-finals. Yeah! You're welcome to mock or criticise, but it'd be nice if you didn't! :)
A Blackened Heart, By Paul Holmes
Sky of ash, sea of stone
Place of misery, all alone
Sun has gone, moon has died
Earth is shattered, hopes, fried
Given up, eternal despair
All that was is now not there
All because of search for power
That now has come the midnight hour
Lives shattered, humans frozen
But this is thy path that they have chosen
Chances taken, losses made
Yet all this needn't be, Im afraid
The truth is twisted
Lies are told
And the full story has to unfold
The man of hope
Has had to cope
With all those tortured
by their blackened hearts
Thank you for reading
A Blackened Heart, By Paul Holmes
Sky of ash, sea of stone
Place of misery, all alone
Sun has gone, moon has died
Earth is shattered, hopes, fried
Given up, eternal despair
All that was is now not there
All because of search for power
That now has come the midnight hour
Lives shattered, humans frozen
But this is thy path that they have chosen
Chances taken, losses made
Yet all this needn't be, Im afraid
The truth is twisted
Lies are told
And the full story has to unfold
The man of hope
Has had to cope
With all those tortured
by their blackened hearts
Thank you for reading
Good work there fuzzy ! You'll have to let us know how you get on.
Congrats again.
Congrats again.
I entered this in a poetry contest ang I'm in the semi-finals. Yeah! You're welcome to mock or criticise, but it'd be nice if you didn't! :)
A Blackened Heart, By Paul Holmes
Sky of ash, sea of stone
Place of misery, all alone
Sun has gone, moon has died
Earth is shattered, hopes, fried
Given up, eternal despair
All that was is now not there
All because of search for power
That now has come the midnight hour
Lives shattered, humans frozen
But this is thy path that they have chosen
Chances taken, losses made
Yet all this needn't be, Im afraid
The truth is twisted
Lies are told
And the full story has to unfold
The man of hope
Has had to cope
With all those tortured
by their blackened hearts
Thank you for reading
A Blackened Heart, By Paul Holmes
Sky of ash, sea of stone
Place of misery, all alone
Sun has gone, moon has died
Earth is shattered, hopes, fried
Given up, eternal despair
All that was is now not there
All because of search for power
That now has come the midnight hour
Lives shattered, humans frozen
But this is thy path that they have chosen
Chances taken, losses made
Yet all this needn't be, Im afraid
The truth is twisted
Lies are told
And the full story has to unfold
The man of hope
Has had to cope
With all those tortured
by their blackened hearts
Thank you for reading