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The world is such a large place
Yet is so small
Distance can be such a large thing
Yet can be bridged
You are so close
Yet you are so far away
Time will always be against us
Yet will always be with us
Thoughts will come and go
Yet you remain constant
People will pass through our lives
Yet I hope you stay
Words can be spoken
Yet cannot be heard
Words can be written
Yet not read
You are not really here
Yet you have never been as close as you are now
I have never heard your real voice, the one inside you
Yet I sense what you think, and feel, and want
Dreams I have can mean so many things
Yet only have one purpose
Actions I take can have so many outcomes
Yet I work to only one purpose
The words I write for you may be understood
Yet never really taken in
Love is an easy thing to give
Yet is a hard thing to mean
Love is an easy thing to take
Yet is hard to accept
Love is an easy thing to believe in
Yet is hard to trust
I can say one thing and then say another
Yet they mean the same
I do love you
Yet how much do you know?
> Stryke - Yeah, i get what your saying, maybe i just have a bit more
> confidence in what i write now so i can try writing the stuff i wanted
> to. In all honesty though i have been looking around this forum for a
> long time, i just wanted to start adding something to it. Thanks for
> the comment too.
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Thats cool, if being notable gives you more confidence then excellent. You only get idiots like blahpro occasionally. Everyone else takes this forum seriously. Sometimes. :-)
> Yet is a hard thing to mean
> Love is an easy thing to take
> Yet is hard to accept
> Love is an easy thing to believe in
> Yet is hard to trust
Brilliant. Not much else needs to be said there. Absolutely brilliant.
How much do you know?
Ahhhh. If only I knew what they did know.
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More importantly another great piece of creative writing Dame, you have really found another side to your usual great discussion topics.
The art of expressing yourself in words is something that I could never do and it is difficult to put something like this together, believe me. I have tried and failed. In our conversations you have always told me that you would like to post this type of writing in the life forum because you were not sure what type of feedback you would get but im sure I speak for everyone when I say youve got great potential, keep it up mate and take no notice of any silly feedback you get because its not applicable by any means.
Stryke - Yeah, i get what your saying, maybe i just have a bit more confidence in what i write now so i can try writing the stuff i wanted to. In all honesty though i have been looking around this forum for a long time, i just wanted to start adding something to it. Thanks for the comment too.
Pro Evo, just wondering. Do you feel that just because you've become a notable you've got to post more serious stuff in other forums than Sony? No offense, because it's superb writing, it's just you never posted in here before notability.
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The world is such a large place
Yet is so small
Distance can be such a large thing
Yet can be bridged
You are so close
Yet you are so far away
Time will always be against us
Yet will always be with us
Thoughts will come and go
Yet you remain constant
People will pass through our lives
Yet I hope you stay
Words can be spoken
Yet cannot be heard
Words can be written
Yet not read
You are not really here
Yet you have never been as close as you are now
I have never heard your real voice, the one inside you
Yet I sense what you think, and feel, and want
Dreams I have can mean so many things
Yet only have one purpose
Actions I take can have so many outcomes
Yet I work to only one purpose
The words I write for you may be understood
Yet never really taken in
Love is an easy thing to give
Yet is a hard thing to mean
Love is an easy thing to take
Yet is hard to accept
Love is an easy thing to believe in
Yet is hard to trust
I can say one thing and then say another
Yet they mean the same
I do love you
Yet how much do you know?