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"Release"

Inside of me I percieve no body, no flesh, no blood
All I see is rage, anger, the pain of knowing
All I see is the beatiful images I want, the hate I don't
All I see is a soul without barriers, an ever expanding emotion
All I see is something that needs unlocking, a casket of raw feeling
All I see is love and hate, locked together in a symbitoic circle
All I want is to expel this creature inside of me
All I need is release

All I get is is the feeling of what will release me.

That is you.

All I get is an impossible emptiness - How is it I feel full and empty?
All I get is the single point of light that is my hope for us
All I get is you, a bright feather in a dark place
All I need is you. All I get is my mind.



Saying no. All I need is yes. All I get is no.



All I need is release, to break out, to become stronger - With you.

:0)

Lovely. Not really sure what more to say, if anything, so that'll do nicely. :0)

Cheers!





I saw 'Her' again today. It was weird thinking about what I wrote about her on this site. In a way I want to give her the address to this site and let her find it!

Superb. You write well.

I love the style of this. the introduction to the emotion then the comma and an image expresing it. Excellent.

Inside of me I percieve no body, no flesh, no blood
All I see is rage, anger, the pain of knowing
All I see is the beatiful images I want, the hate I don't
All I see is a soul without barriers, an ever expanding emotion
All I see is something that needs unlocking, a casket of raw feeling
All I see is love and hate, locked together in a symbitoic circle
All I want is to expel this creature inside of me
All I need is release

All I get is is the feeling of what will release me.

That is you.