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Tue 21/05/02 at 22:05
Regular
Posts: 787
Dunno what to call it.

Falling down,
On my knees,
What am I?
Tired and lonely,
Scared and depressed,
Small,
Insignificant,
Lost,
Like a teardrop in the rain,

Left, right?
Forward, back?
Up, down?
Right, wrong?
What’s the difference between them all?
You always end up in the same place anyway,
Lost,
Like a spark among the stars,

I don’t know the proper ways,
And life’s short,
I’m dying as I speak,
You’re dying as you listen,
I’m dying before I’ve grown,
Lost,
Like tree in the forest,

Responsibilty?
I’m not responsible enough for that yet,
It makes me cry,
When I think how I’m,
A flake in the snow,
A blade in the in the field,
A bird among the flocks,

That’s all I am,

But still,
I need my guidance,
I need my help,
I need my love,
I need all this,
Despite only being,

A match on the sun,
A stone in the quarry,
A cloud in the sky,

Sometimes my sun goes cold,
Sometimes my laughter is hollow,

But there’s always someone there,
To heat my sun,
To fill the void of my laughter,
And to love me,
Always.
Thu 23/05/02 at 19:10
Regular
Posts: 23,216
Ditto Rasta. You're so bloody in touch for your age. :0D

Love this forum. Always something great to read.
Thu 23/05/02 at 19:03
Regular
"You've upset me"
Posts: 21,152
Gangsta Hamsta wrote:
>
> Now I changed my mind - the quality of the post demands a reply even
> if its just to let you know I read and appreciated it. Means something
> to me....although I haven't figured out what yet.

:-D

> Write more

I will. Without question :-)
Thu 23/05/02 at 00:59
Regular
"Not your monkey"
Posts: 2,104
Read it....and had one of those moments.

One of those "should I reply and pretend to know what he's feeling" moments. So I wasn't going to.

Now I changed my mind - the quality of the post demands a reply even if its just to let you know I read and appreciated it. Means something to me....although I haven't figured out what yet.

Write more
Wed 22/05/02 at 21:07
Regular
"You've upset me"
Posts: 21,152
Undead wrote:
> Great poem RBS

Cheers, Stubo :)

we need to think of a name for it. Hmmm, how about
> "My Sincere Insignificance"? Something like that, but use
> that if you wish :D

Err...no. ;-D
Wed 22/05/02 at 03:01
Regular
"5 European Cups!!!"
Posts: 5,795
Great poem RBS, we need to think of a name for it. Hmmm, how about "My Sincere Insignificance"? Something like that, but use that if you wish :D
Tue 21/05/02 at 22:05
Regular
"You've upset me"
Posts: 21,152
Dunno what to call it.

Falling down,
On my knees,
What am I?
Tired and lonely,
Scared and depressed,
Small,
Insignificant,
Lost,
Like a teardrop in the rain,

Left, right?
Forward, back?
Up, down?
Right, wrong?
What’s the difference between them all?
You always end up in the same place anyway,
Lost,
Like a spark among the stars,

I don’t know the proper ways,
And life’s short,
I’m dying as I speak,
You’re dying as you listen,
I’m dying before I’ve grown,
Lost,
Like tree in the forest,

Responsibilty?
I’m not responsible enough for that yet,
It makes me cry,
When I think how I’m,
A flake in the snow,
A blade in the in the field,
A bird among the flocks,

That’s all I am,

But still,
I need my guidance,
I need my help,
I need my love,
I need all this,
Despite only being,

A match on the sun,
A stone in the quarry,
A cloud in the sky,

Sometimes my sun goes cold,
Sometimes my laughter is hollow,

But there’s always someone there,
To heat my sun,
To fill the void of my laughter,
And to love me,
Always.

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