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Falling down,
On my knees,
What am I?
Tired and lonely,
Scared and depressed,
Small,
Insignificant,
Lost,
Like a teardrop in the rain,
Left, right?
Forward, back?
Up, down?
Right, wrong?
What’s the difference between them all?
You always end up in the same place anyway,
Lost,
Like a spark among the stars,
I don’t know the proper ways,
And life’s short,
I’m dying as I speak,
You’re dying as you listen,
I’m dying before I’ve grown,
Lost,
Like tree in the forest,
Responsibilty?
I’m not responsible enough for that yet,
It makes me cry,
When I think how I’m,
A flake in the snow,
A blade in the in the field,
A bird among the flocks,
That’s all I am,
But still,
I need my guidance,
I need my help,
I need my love,
I need all this,
Despite only being,
A match on the sun,
A stone in the quarry,
A cloud in the sky,
Sometimes my sun goes cold,
Sometimes my laughter is hollow,
But there’s always someone there,
To heat my sun,
To fill the void of my laughter,
And to love me,
Always.
Love this forum. Always something great to read.
>
> Now I changed my mind - the quality of the post demands a reply even
> if its just to let you know I read and appreciated it. Means something
> to me....although I haven't figured out what yet.
:-D
> Write more
I will. Without question :-)
One of those "should I reply and pretend to know what he's feeling" moments. So I wasn't going to.
Now I changed my mind - the quality of the post demands a reply even if its just to let you know I read and appreciated it. Means something to me....although I haven't figured out what yet.
Write more
> Great poem RBS
Cheers, Stubo :)
we need to think of a name for it. Hmmm, how about
> "My Sincere Insignificance"? Something like that, but use
> that if you wish :D
Err...no. ;-D
Falling down,
On my knees,
What am I?
Tired and lonely,
Scared and depressed,
Small,
Insignificant,
Lost,
Like a teardrop in the rain,
Left, right?
Forward, back?
Up, down?
Right, wrong?
What’s the difference between them all?
You always end up in the same place anyway,
Lost,
Like a spark among the stars,
I don’t know the proper ways,
And life’s short,
I’m dying as I speak,
You’re dying as you listen,
I’m dying before I’ve grown,
Lost,
Like tree in the forest,
Responsibilty?
I’m not responsible enough for that yet,
It makes me cry,
When I think how I’m,
A flake in the snow,
A blade in the in the field,
A bird among the flocks,
That’s all I am,
But still,
I need my guidance,
I need my help,
I need my love,
I need all this,
Despite only being,
A match on the sun,
A stone in the quarry,
A cloud in the sky,
Sometimes my sun goes cold,
Sometimes my laughter is hollow,
But there’s always someone there,
To heat my sun,
To fill the void of my laughter,
And to love me,
Always.