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Mon 21/08/06 at 18:07
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Posts: 5,848
Innocence of Life

Two things are certain in life,
you were born and you will die,
gone in the blink of an eye,

The man who can truly understand,
to life he is nothing more than a strand,
a dot on a dot,
that he will not,
be remembered,
is the man who rules the world,

Death is the next step we all must take,
another step on the path,
from the cradle to the grave,
it may end the walk,
yet not the journey,

Does the journey ever end,
is the question no mortal man will ever comprehend,
for he cannot see,
the reality,
that is he

Yeah not very good, but a quick effort and an attempt to add something new to the forum


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Mon 28/08/06 at 18:44
Regular
"Mooching around"
Posts: 4,248
Thought I'd help you out...

Never again will I be dishonored
And never again will I be reminded
Of living within the world of the jaded
They kill inspiration
It's my obligation
To never again, allow this to happen
Where do I begin?
The choices are endless
Denying the sin
My art, my redemption
I carry the torch of my fathers before me

The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive

Change again, cannot be considered
I rage again, dispelling my anger
Where do I begin?
The choices are endless
My art, my redemption, my only salvation
I carry the gift that I have been blessed with
My soul is adrift in oceans of madness
Repairing the rift that you have created
I am not alone, brothers, give me your arms now

The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive

I'm no slave
Are you feeling brave?
Or have you gone out of your mind?
No more games
It won't feel the same
If I hold my anger inside
There's no meaning
My soul is bleeding
I've had enough of your kind
One suggestion, use your discretion
Before you label me blind

The thing I treasure most in life cannot be taken away
There will never be a reason why I will surrender to your advice
To change myself, I'd rather die
Though they will not understand
I won't make the greatest sacrifice
You can't predict where the outcome lies
You'll never take me alive
Mon 21/08/06 at 18:07
Regular
Posts: 5,848
Innocence of Life

Two things are certain in life,
you were born and you will die,
gone in the blink of an eye,

The man who can truly understand,
to life he is nothing more than a strand,
a dot on a dot,
that he will not,
be remembered,
is the man who rules the world,

Death is the next step we all must take,
another step on the path,
from the cradle to the grave,
it may end the walk,
yet not the journey,

Does the journey ever end,
is the question no mortal man will ever comprehend,
for he cannot see,
the reality,
that is he

Yeah not very good, but a quick effort and an attempt to add something new to the forum


Discuss, contemplate and above all, add your own

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