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You'll probably be thinking that this is about my shyness and my willingness to keep my head down and stay out of the way. It's not. I'll be surprised if anyone actually does get what this is about, but you can take it in any way you want. (that sounds dodgy :-D)
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Drifting in and out of existence,
And consciousness,
I知 here,
But only on auto-pilot,
For, At the moment,
I exist solely in borrowed clothes,
I hide in my shell,
Safely in my comforting womb,
Shying from the daylight,
I look better in darkness anyway,
But when the night comes,
When the busy day is washed away with a tsunami of twilight
I eventually appear,
And go about my business,
Not getting in anyone痴 way,
Keeping my head down,
I知 ambivalent,
Not angry, nor happy, nor sad,
I just am,
In these loaned threads,
And,
Although I知 here,
You値l never spot me,
For I hide,
Within the umbra.
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Drifting in and out of existence,
And consciousness,
I知 here,
But only on auto-pilot,
For, At the moment,
I exist solely in borrowed clothes,
I hide in my shell,
Safely in my comforting womb,
Shying from the daylight,
I look better in darkness anyway,
But when the night comes,
When the busy day is washed away with a tsunami of twilight
I eventually appear,
And go about my business,
Not getting in anyone痴 way,
Keeping my head down,
I知 ambivalent,
Not angry, nor happy, nor sad,
I just am,
In these loaned threads,
And,
Although I知 here,
You値l never spot me,
For I hide,
Within the umbra.
Three perceptions:
1) Is it about life in general and your outlook?
2) (this is gonna sound silly) Is it about when your're asleep/awake and the difference you feel?
3) Are you fearful of something new? The first stanza could be your current situation etc and after you could be talking about your apprehension of going to this new place and being scared?
Just my opinion. I was impressed with the poem though...
1) Is it about life in general and your outlook?
2) (this is gonna sound silly) Is it about when your're asleep/awake and the difference you feel?
3) Are you fearful of something new? The first stanza could be your current situation etc and after you could be talking about your apprehension of going to this new place and being scared?
Just my opinion. I was impressed with the poem though...
You'll probably be thinking that this is about my shyness and my willingness to keep my head down and stay out of the way. It's not. I'll be surprised if anyone actually does get what this is about, but you can take it in any way you want. (that sounds dodgy :-D)
_________________________________
Drifting in and out of existence,
And consciousness,
I知 here,
But only on auto-pilot,
For, At the moment,
I exist solely in borrowed clothes,
I hide in my shell,
Safely in my comforting womb,
Shying from the daylight,
I look better in darkness anyway,
But when the night comes,
When the busy day is washed away with a tsunami of twilight
I eventually appear,
And go about my business,
Not getting in anyone痴 way,
Keeping my head down,
I知 ambivalent,
Not angry, nor happy, nor sad,
I just am,
In these loaned threads,
And,
Although I知 here,
You値l never spot me,
For I hide,
Within the umbra.
_________________________________
Drifting in and out of existence,
And consciousness,
I知 here,
But only on auto-pilot,
For, At the moment,
I exist solely in borrowed clothes,
I hide in my shell,
Safely in my comforting womb,
Shying from the daylight,
I look better in darkness anyway,
But when the night comes,
When the busy day is washed away with a tsunami of twilight
I eventually appear,
And go about my business,
Not getting in anyone痴 way,
Keeping my head down,
I知 ambivalent,
Not angry, nor happy, nor sad,
I just am,
In these loaned threads,
And,
Although I知 here,
You値l never spot me,
For I hide,
Within the umbra.