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------------------The Palace of darkness--------------------
Somewhere, in a dark and dingy castle throne room, stood three figures, one badly battered. They stood around a crystal orb, peering into it.
‘You may have failed ½ pint, but we will get those pests, we need that crystal if we’re going to take over the world.’ One of them muttered at ½ pint.
‘But, Edgy, that Lord Badger is far more powerful than you think,’ he picked up the remains of his Swiss cheese, ‘look at what he did to my cheese!’
‘You can always make more cheese.’ The other one said to him.
‘But Homerus Beerus Solidus, you do not know what that man is capable of. His attacks smart like hell!’ ½ pint replied in a child-like voice.
‘Quiet, we need to sort out what we’re going to do to get the other two chosen ones.’ Edgy hissed at his companions. They all gathered around the crystal again.
‘Let’s see who the other two are then.’ Homerus Beerus Solidus laughed.
‘I just hope they’re weaker than that Badger boy!’ ½ pint muttered to himself.
Edgy burst out laughing and looked at his friend,
‘These two are just mere children, look at the fire child.’
‘Ah, fresh blood, he looks like he does not know much.’ ½ pint said whilst looking at the Boys’ image in the orb, ‘He’ll be a pushover, lets see the other one then.’
They looked into the crystal again and a girls’ image appeared, Homerus Beerus Solidus smirked and said,
‘I have an idea, lets capture the other two, they seem weaker then Shaneo and Lord badger. We could keep them in here and trick the others into coming to save these two youths.’
Edgy grinned at his friends wonderful idea and replied,
‘Good idea, how shall we capture them then?’ He challenged Homerus Beerus Solidus.
‘Easy, the girl looks weaker. I suggest ½ pint go and get her, you’ll need to get her away from any other beings and then grab her. If she fights back, hit her, you knocked Shaneo out, you’ll make her unconscious easily, but don’t kill her.’ He turned to Edgy ‘Edgy, seeming I’m the more powerful out of us two, I’ll stay here and keep guard of our palace. You can go get the boy, he’ll be more powerful but do the same thing as ½ pint will do with the girl and it’ll be a breeze.’
The two nodded at Homerus Beerus Solidus’ idea and left in a quick, bright flash
-------------------------½ pint-----------------------------
½ pint cruised through the plain and then came across the sign pointing to the Lake. It started to turn dark but ½ pint carried on through the plain, it started to rain, he still carried on. It turned to light again, he was tired but he remained persistent.
He finally made it to the Lake, he collapsed onto the floor from sheer exhaustion. He soon awoke to see a girl’s face peering over him. She was pretty with Dark brown hair tied back, grey eyes and a soothing look to her. Then she spoke in a sweet voice,
‘Are you alright?’
‘Yeah yeah, I’m fine.’ ½ pint said waving his hand at her to get her away, then, he noticed that this was the girl he had been sent for. He smiled slyly and said,
‘Say, are you on your own?’
She nodded. He smiled and got up. He walked towards her and her grabbed her by her arm. She had a scared look in her face,
‘What are you doing to me? Get off me!’ she shrieked.
He just smiled a pulled her along,
‘No, leave me alone!’ she pleaded, he carried on.
‘HHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!’ she cried out for help, nobody came, then,
‘Leave her alone, ½ pint.’ Came a shout.
½ pint turned around and saw Shaneo, Allardini, Lord Badger, The Exterminator and Tony Blair.
‘What are you pests doing here?’ ½ pint hissed at them.
‘Here for the girl.’ Lord badger replied, ‘Now leave her alone before I sort you out again, and Shaneo knows how to control his powers now.’
½ pint dropped her and ran off.
The girl looked up at the group that had helped her. She ran away scared of them.
‘What did we do?’ Tony Blair said.
‘Nothing, just leave her for a bit,’ Allardini said, ‘actually,’ he turned to Shaneo, ‘Shaneo, you’ve only just gotten used to people.’
‘Yes, Iguana was the first person I’ve ever met. She must have never seen other people before.’ Shaneo replied.
‘Well, then you must have a lot in common with this girl, go find her and talk to her.’ Allardini pushed Shaneo away.
Shaneo walked off in search of her. The Lake was lovely, calm and sunny. Shaneo bent down to the water to drink it, it was cool and icy, just right. He saw the girl practicing with a staff, there was something on the end of it, it was shining in the sun. It was too far away for Shaneo to see so he got up and walked up behind her, slowly, quietly so he wouldn’t scare her again.
‘Hello.’ He said in a chirpy voice. She turned around fear struck her face again.
‘Who are you and what do you want?’ she said in a protective voice.
Shaneo laughed quietly and replied ‘I am Shaneo, I came from your clan that was wipe out when we were young. I believe that you are called Little Hedgehog.’
‘Alright, what do you want then?’ Little Hedgehog sounded calmer.
‘You know that man who was trying to hurt you,’
‘Yes.’
‘Well I’m here because of that, he wants to kill us and 2 others because we have powers that can overthrow some evil power-mad people. He was one of them. We need you to join us to get rid of this evil that they want out of a crystal. You understand?’
Little Hedgehog nodded.
‘Good, then you’ll join us.’
She nodded again.
‘Well get your stuff and we’ll go then.’ His eyes were fixed on the crystal on her staff, ‘What is that?’
‘That,’ she said pointing her staff at him ‘is a staff that the guardian of the lake gave to me. It gives me my powers.’
Shaneo led her to the others who were now sitting down getting bored and playing with Tony Blair’s lock picks.
‘Everyone, we’re ready to go.’ Shaneo told them.
‘About time too.’ The Exterminator grunted as they got up.
‘So you finally convinced her then.’ Allardini looked at Little Hedgehog, ‘She better have the magic.’
‘I do.’ Little Hedgehog retorted waving her staff at him. ‘This contains all of the power of the Lake, the guardian gave it to me.’
‘Can we please leave, we need to find Toni before they get him.’ The Exterminator said.
They left and were greeted by Ant as they left,
‘Shaneo, you look a bit different now, you have grown stronger and you have a fine troop with you. I bring news of more people to help and more to attack you. I hear there is a musician called Dead Wonder that bashes people around the head with a banjo, he will be incredibly helpful to you. But there are two more evil minions of Edgy and Homerus Beerus Solidus, they are a palace servant in the Mountain palace, he’s called TomUK and is amazingly intelligent, and the other one is Grix Thraves the betting Jester in the Mountain Palace. Go quickly, I don’t think Toni will stand a chance seeming Edgy is after him. I will see you again.’ Ant left them in a slow, doddery walk.
Lord Badger looked at the others and said,
‘You heard him, let’s go.’
They walked off onto the path leading to FOG Mountain.
-----------------------------Edgy---------------------------
As Edgy walked up the mountain path, he looked in to the bright hot sun. The heat was beating down on him, he didn’t care if it was hot or cold, he was getting this boy.
‘I can do this, I know I can.’ He sounded determined, he wanted to show Homerus Beerus Solidus that he could do something useful to his companion’s needs. Then it started to rain, like ½ pint, Edgy remained determined. As he ascended the mountain, the air got thinner and the fog got thicker and thicker.
‘I can’t see through this, I need to cast a light spell.’ He made the sun come back out and the fog disappear the air got thicker again so Edgy could breathe a bit better. He felt stronger so he decided to run. He ran so fast he feet barely touched the ground, and then he ran into a rock, knocking him out.
When he woke up again, he sat up, looked around the red rocky mountain. He saw a boy drawing a picture into a wall of rock. He smiled and walked over to the boy. Then he raised a hand and tapped the boy on the shoulder. The boy turned around surprised then said,
‘Hello, I’m Toni Cabbarini, who are you?’
‘I am Edgy, I’m here to get you young man. Now come with me.’ Edgy said, grabbing Toni’s arm.
‘Leave me alone, you’re that evil man aren’t you!’ Toni replied, he yanked out his arm and kicked Edgy, he ran off but Edgy caught him again.
‘I know I’m evil but I need to kill you if I want to take over the world.’ He hissed at the struggling Toni.
‘No, no, I don’t want to die!’ he screamed at Edgy.
‘Oh but you must little boy. I need you.’ Edgy sounded more taunting.
Toni pulled away and started to shout for help.
‘You can scream but no one will hear you.’ Edgy started to pull him. Toni saw this as an opportunity to harm Edgy again. He raised his foot, and brought it down hard onto Edgy’s foot.
‘YYYYYYYEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!’ Edgy screamed, dropping Toni and grabbing his foot. Toni got up and ran off before Edgy could notice that he was gone. He hid behind the rock he had been drawing upon and started to chant a spell, he chanted and chanted until a wall of fire surrounded Edgy. Toni walked back out and smiled at Edgy. He chanted another spell, this time it made Edgy disappear in a ball of fire.
-----------Back at the palace of darkness throne room-------
Edgy returned to the throne room in the ball next to a puffing and panting ½ pint. Homerus Beerus Solidus just looked at the two in disgust and said,
‘You two look pitiful,’
‘But he came again…’ ½ pint said in a terrified voice.
‘I don’t care if Lord Badger appeared again, you should have kept her, but no….you had to run away didn’t you.’ He turned to Edgy, ‘You, you let a pathetic boy beat you,’
‘He stamped on my foot, it hurt like he….’
‘Well, your meant to be undead, a vampire, you not meant to feel pain.’
Edgy suddenly jumped up and shouted,
‘Well seeming you’re so powerful, why didn’t you do it?’
‘SILENCE!’ screamed Homerus Beerus Soldius, ‘You may have failed, but I have another plan. Seeming they have got the girl now and are making their way up the mountain, we will get our minions in the mountain palace to hold them up, then we will attack them. It will be easy I can guarantee you as you will have me there.’
‘I am warning you, that Lord Badger’s moves hurt!’ ½ pint said as a warning.
‘So what if they do hurt you, they wouldn’t hurt me and they can’t kill us can they. We will get that crystal and we will be able to use King Stryke’s power for our own purposes. Then we can rule the world and kill those pests.’
Somewhere, in a dark and dingy castle throne room, stood three figures, one badly battered. They stood around a crystal orb, peering into it.
‘You may have failed ½ pint, but we will get those pests, we need that crystal if we’re going to take over the world.’ One of them muttered at ½ pint.
‘But, Edgy, that Lord Badger is far more powerful than you think,’ he picked up the remains of his Swiss cheese, ‘look at what he did to my cheese!’
‘You can always make more cheese.’ The other one said to him.
‘But Homerus Beerus Solidus, you do not know what that man is capable of. His attacks smart like hell!’ ½ pint replied in a child-like voice.
‘Quiet, we need to sort out what we’re going to do to get the other two chosen ones.’ Edgy hissed at his companions. They all gathered around the crystal again.
‘Let’s see who the other two are then.’ Homerus Beerus Solidus laughed.
‘I just hope they’re weaker than that Badger boy!’ ½ pint muttered to himself.
Edgy burst out laughing and looked at his friend,
‘These two are just mere children, look at the fire child.’
‘Ah, fresh blood, he looks like he does not know much.’ ½ pint said whilst looking at the Boys’ image in the orb, ‘He’ll be a pushover, lets see the other one then.’
They looked into the crystal again and a girls’ image appeared, Homerus Beerus Solidus smirked and said,
‘I have an idea, lets capture the other two, they seem weaker then Shaneo and Lord badger. We could keep them in here and trick the others into coming to save these two youths.’
Edgy grinned at his friends wonderful idea and replied,
‘Good idea, how shall we capture them then?’ He challenged Homerus Beerus Solidus.
‘Easy, the girl looks weaker. I suggest ½ pint go and get her, you’ll need to get her away from any other beings and then grab her. If she fights back, hit her, you knocked Shaneo out, you’ll make her unconscious easily, but don’t kill her.’ He turned to Edgy ‘Edgy, seeming I’m the more powerful out of us two, I’ll stay here and keep guard of our palace. You can go get the boy, he’ll be more powerful but do the same thing as ½ pint will do with the girl and it’ll be a breeze.’
The two nodded at Homerus Beerus Solidus’ idea and left in a quick, bright flash
-------------------------½ pint-----------------------------
½ pint cruised through the plain and then came across the sign pointing to the Lake. It started to turn dark but ½ pint carried on through the plain, it started to rain, he still carried on. It turned to light again, he was tired but he remained persistent.
He finally made it to the Lake, he collapsed onto the floor from sheer exhaustion. He soon awoke to see a girl’s face peering over him. She was pretty with Dark brown hair tied back, grey eyes and a soothing look to her. Then she spoke in a sweet voice,
‘Are you alright?’
‘Yeah yeah, I’m fine.’ ½ pint said waving his hand at her to get her away, then, he noticed that this was the girl he had been sent for. He smiled slyly and said,
‘Say, are you on your own?’
She nodded. He smiled and got up. He walked towards her and her grabbed her by her arm. She had a scared look in her face,
‘What are you doing to me? Get off me!’ she shrieked.
He just smiled a pulled her along,
‘No, leave me alone!’ she pleaded, he carried on.
‘HHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!’ she cried out for help, nobody came, then,
‘Leave her alone, ½ pint.’ Came a shout.
½ pint turned around and saw Shaneo, Allardini, Lord Badger, The Exterminator and Tony Blair.
‘What are you pests doing here?’ ½ pint hissed at them.
‘Here for the girl.’ Lord badger replied, ‘Now leave her alone before I sort you out again, and Shaneo knows how to control his powers now.’
½ pint dropped her and ran off.
The girl looked up at the group that had helped her. She ran away scared of them.
‘What did we do?’ Tony Blair said.
‘Nothing, just leave her for a bit,’ Allardini said, ‘actually,’ he turned to Shaneo, ‘Shaneo, you’ve only just gotten used to people.’
‘Yes, Iguana was the first person I’ve ever met. She must have never seen other people before.’ Shaneo replied.
‘Well, then you must have a lot in common with this girl, go find her and talk to her.’ Allardini pushed Shaneo away.
Shaneo walked off in search of her. The Lake was lovely, calm and sunny. Shaneo bent down to the water to drink it, it was cool and icy, just right. He saw the girl practicing with a staff, there was something on the end of it, it was shining in the sun. It was too far away for Shaneo to see so he got up and walked up behind her, slowly, quietly so he wouldn’t scare her again.
‘Hello.’ He said in a chirpy voice. She turned around fear struck her face again.
‘Who are you and what do you want?’ she said in a protective voice.
Shaneo laughed quietly and replied ‘I am Shaneo, I came from your clan that was wipe out when we were young. I believe that you are called Little Hedgehog.’
‘Alright, what do you want then?’ Little Hedgehog sounded calmer.
‘You know that man who was trying to hurt you,’
‘Yes.’
‘Well I’m here because of that, he wants to kill us and 2 others because we have powers that can overthrow some evil power-mad people. He was one of them. We need you to join us to get rid of this evil that they want out of a crystal. You understand?’
Little Hedgehog nodded.
‘Good, then you’ll join us.’
She nodded again.
‘Well get your stuff and we’ll go then.’ His eyes were fixed on the crystal on her staff, ‘What is that?’
‘That,’ she said pointing her staff at him ‘is a staff that the guardian of the lake gave to me. It gives me my powers.’
Shaneo led her to the others who were now sitting down getting bored and playing with Tony Blair’s lock picks.
‘Everyone, we’re ready to go.’ Shaneo told them.
‘About time too.’ The Exterminator grunted as they got up.
‘So you finally convinced her then.’ Allardini looked at Little Hedgehog, ‘She better have the magic.’
‘I do.’ Little Hedgehog retorted waving her staff at him. ‘This contains all of the power of the Lake, the guardian gave it to me.’
‘Can we please leave, we need to find Toni before they get him.’ The Exterminator said.
They left and were greeted by Ant as they left,
‘Shaneo, you look a bit different now, you have grown stronger and you have a fine troop with you. I bring news of more people to help and more to attack you. I hear there is a musician called Dead Wonder that bashes people around the head with a banjo, he will be incredibly helpful to you. But there are two more evil minions of Edgy and Homerus Beerus Solidus, they are a palace servant in the Mountain palace, he’s called TomUK and is amazingly intelligent, and the other one is Grix Thraves the betting Jester in the Mountain Palace. Go quickly, I don’t think Toni will stand a chance seeming Edgy is after him. I will see you again.’ Ant left them in a slow, doddery walk.
Lord Badger looked at the others and said,
‘You heard him, let’s go.’
They walked off onto the path leading to FOG Mountain.
-----------------------------Edgy---------------------------
As Edgy walked up the mountain path, he looked in to the bright hot sun. The heat was beating down on him, he didn’t care if it was hot or cold, he was getting this boy.
‘I can do this, I know I can.’ He sounded determined, he wanted to show Homerus Beerus Solidus that he could do something useful to his companion’s needs. Then it started to rain, like ½ pint, Edgy remained determined. As he ascended the mountain, the air got thinner and the fog got thicker and thicker.
‘I can’t see through this, I need to cast a light spell.’ He made the sun come back out and the fog disappear the air got thicker again so Edgy could breathe a bit better. He felt stronger so he decided to run. He ran so fast he feet barely touched the ground, and then he ran into a rock, knocking him out.
When he woke up again, he sat up, looked around the red rocky mountain. He saw a boy drawing a picture into a wall of rock. He smiled and walked over to the boy. Then he raised a hand and tapped the boy on the shoulder. The boy turned around surprised then said,
‘Hello, I’m Toni Cabbarini, who are you?’
‘I am Edgy, I’m here to get you young man. Now come with me.’ Edgy said, grabbing Toni’s arm.
‘Leave me alone, you’re that evil man aren’t you!’ Toni replied, he yanked out his arm and kicked Edgy, he ran off but Edgy caught him again.
‘I know I’m evil but I need to kill you if I want to take over the world.’ He hissed at the struggling Toni.
‘No, no, I don’t want to die!’ he screamed at Edgy.
‘Oh but you must little boy. I need you.’ Edgy sounded more taunting.
Toni pulled away and started to shout for help.
‘You can scream but no one will hear you.’ Edgy started to pull him. Toni saw this as an opportunity to harm Edgy again. He raised his foot, and brought it down hard onto Edgy’s foot.
‘YYYYYYYEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!’ Edgy screamed, dropping Toni and grabbing his foot. Toni got up and ran off before Edgy could notice that he was gone. He hid behind the rock he had been drawing upon and started to chant a spell, he chanted and chanted until a wall of fire surrounded Edgy. Toni walked back out and smiled at Edgy. He chanted another spell, this time it made Edgy disappear in a ball of fire.
-----------Back at the palace of darkness throne room-------
Edgy returned to the throne room in the ball next to a puffing and panting ½ pint. Homerus Beerus Solidus just looked at the two in disgust and said,
‘You two look pitiful,’
‘But he came again…’ ½ pint said in a terrified voice.
‘I don’t care if Lord Badger appeared again, you should have kept her, but no….you had to run away didn’t you.’ He turned to Edgy, ‘You, you let a pathetic boy beat you,’
‘He stamped on my foot, it hurt like he….’
‘Well, your meant to be undead, a vampire, you not meant to feel pain.’
Edgy suddenly jumped up and shouted,
‘Well seeming you’re so powerful, why didn’t you do it?’
‘SILENCE!’ screamed Homerus Beerus Soldius, ‘You may have failed, but I have another plan. Seeming they have got the girl now and are making their way up the mountain, we will get our minions in the mountain palace to hold them up, then we will attack them. It will be easy I can guarantee you as you will have me there.’
‘I am warning you, that Lord Badger’s moves hurt!’ ½ pint said as a warning.
‘So what if they do hurt you, they wouldn’t hurt me and they can’t kill us can they. We will get that crystal and we will be able to use King Stryke’s power for our own purposes. Then we can rule the world and kill those pests.’
Little Hedgehog wrote:
> ------------------The Palace of darkness--------------------
Somewhere, in a
> dark and dingy castle throne room, stood three figures, one badly battered. They
> stood around a crystal orb, peering into it.
‘You may have failed ½
> pint, but we will get those pests, we need that crystal if we’re going to take
> over the world.’ One of them muttered at ½ pint.
‘But, Edgy, that Lord
> Badger is far more powerful than you think,’ he picked up the remains of his
> Swiss cheese, ‘look at what he did to my cheese!’
‘You can always make more
> cheese.’ The other one said to him.
‘But Homerus Beerus Solidus, you do not
> know what that man is capable of. His attacks smart like hell!’ ½ pint
> replied in a child-like voice.
‘Quiet, we need to sort out what we’re going
> to do to get the other two chosen ones.’ Edgy hissed at his companions. They all
> gathered around the crystal again.
‘Let’s see who the other two are then.’
> Homerus Beerus Solidus laughed.
‘I just hope they’re weaker than that Badger
> boy!’ ½ pint muttered to himself.
Edgy burst out laughing and looked
> at his friend,
‘These two are just mere children, look at the fire child.’
> ‘Ah, fresh blood, he looks like he does not know much.’ ½ pint said
> whilst looking at the Boys’ image in the orb, ‘He’ll be a pushover, lets see the
> other one then.’
They looked into the crystal again and a girls’ image
> appeared, Homerus Beerus Solidus smirked and said,
‘I have an idea, lets
> capture the other two, they seem weaker then Shaneo and Lord badger. We could
> keep them in here and trick the others into coming to save these two youths.’
> Edgy grinned at his friends wonderful idea and replied,
‘Good idea, how
> shall we capture them then?’ He challenged Homerus Beerus Solidus.
‘Easy, the
> girl looks weaker. I suggest ½ pint go and get her, you’ll need to get
> her away from any other beings and then grab her. If she fights back, hit her,
> you knocked Shaneo out, you’ll make her unconscious easily, but don’t kill her.’
> He turned to Edgy ‘Edgy, seeming I’m the more powerful out of us two, I’ll stay
> here and keep guard of our palace. You can go get the boy, he’ll be more
> powerful but do the same thing as ½ pint will do with the girl and it’ll
> be a breeze.’
The two nodded at Homerus Beerus Solidus’ idea and left in a
> quick, bright flash
-------------------------½
> pint-----------------------------
½ pint cruised through the plain
> and then came across the sign pointing to the Lake. It started to turn dark but
> ½ pint carried on through the plain, it started to rain, he still carried
> on. It turned to light again, he was tired but he remained persistent.
He
> finally made it to the Lake, he collapsed onto the floor from sheer exhaustion.
> He soon awoke to see a girl’s face peering over him. She was pretty with Dark
> brown hair tied back, grey eyes and a soothing look to her. Then she spoke in a
> sweet voice,
‘Are you alright?’
‘Yeah yeah, I’m fine.’ ½ pint said
> waving his hand at her to get her away, then, he noticed that this was the girl
> he had been sent for. He smiled slyly and said,
‘Say, are you on your own?’
> She nodded. He smiled and got up. He walked towards her and her grabbed her by
> her arm. She had a scared look in her face,
‘What are you doing to me? Get
> off me!’ she shrieked.
He just smiled a pulled her along,
‘No, leave me
> alone!’ she pleaded, he carried on.
‘HHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!’ she cried
> out for help, nobody came, then,
‘Leave her alone, ½ pint.’ Came a
> shout.
½ pint turned around and saw Shaneo, Allardini, Lord Badger,
> The Exterminator and Tony Blair.
‘What are you pests doing here?’ ½
> pint hissed at them.
‘Here for the girl.’ Lord badger replied, ‘Now leave her
> alone before I sort you out again, and Shaneo knows how to control his powers
> now.’
½ pint dropped her and ran off.
The girl looked up at the
> group that had helped her. She ran away scared of them.
‘What did we do?’
> Tony Blair said.
‘Nothing, just leave her for a bit,’ Allardini said,
> ‘actually,’ he turned to Shaneo, ‘Shaneo, you’ve only just gotten used to
> people.’
‘Yes, Iguana was the first person I’ve ever met. She must have never
> seen other people before.’ Shaneo replied.
‘Well, then you must have a lot in
> common with this girl, go find her and talk to her.’ Allardini pushed Shaneo
> away.
Shaneo walked off in search of her. The Lake was lovely, calm and
> sunny. Shaneo bent down to the water to drink it, it was cool and icy, just
> right. He saw the girl practicing with a staff, there was something on the end
> of it, it was shining in the sun. It was too far away for Shaneo to see so he
> got up and walked up behind her, slowly, quietly so he wouldn’t scare her
> again.
‘Hello.’ He said in a chirpy voice. She turned around fear struck her
> face again.
‘Who are you and what do you want?’ she said in a protective
> voice.
Shaneo laughed quietly and replied ‘I am Shaneo, I came from your clan
> that was wipe out when we were young. I believe that you are called Little
> Hedgehog.’
‘Alright, what do you want then?’ Little Hedgehog sounded
> calmer.
‘You know that man who was trying to hurt you,’
‘Yes.’
‘Well
> I’m here because of that, he wants to kill us and 2 others because we have
> powers that can overthrow some evil power-mad people. He was one of them. We
> need you to join us to get rid of this evil that they want out of a crystal. You
> understand?’
Little Hedgehog nodded.
‘Good, then you’ll join us.’
> She nodded again.
‘Well get your stuff and we’ll go then.’ His eyes were
> fixed on the crystal on her staff, ‘What is that?’
‘That,’ she said pointing
> her staff at him ‘is a staff that the guardian of the lake gave to me. It gives
> me my powers.’
Shaneo led her to the others who were now sitting down
> getting bored and playing with Tony Blair’s lock picks.
‘Everyone, we’re
> ready to go.’ Shaneo told them.
‘About time too.’ The Exterminator grunted as
> they got up.
‘So you finally convinced her then.’ Allardini looked at Little
> Hedgehog, ‘She better have the magic.’
‘I do.’ Little Hedgehog retorted
> waving her staff at him. ‘This contains all of the power of the Lake, the
> guardian gave it to me.’
‘Can we please leave, we need to find Toni before
> they get him.’ The Exterminator said.
They left and were greeted by Ant
> as they left,
‘Shaneo, you look a bit different now, you have grown stronger
> and you have a fine troop with you. I bring news of more people to help and more
> to attack you. I hear there is a musician called Dead Wonder that bashes people
> around the head with a banjo, he will be incredibly helpful to you. But there
> are two more evil minions of Edgy and Homerus Beerus Solidus, they are a palace
> servant in the Mountain palace, he’s called TomUK and is amazingly intelligent,
> and the other one is Grix Thraves the betting Jester in the Mountain Palace. Go
> quickly, I don’t think Toni will stand a chance seeming Edgy is after him. I
> will see you again.’ Ant left them in a slow, doddery walk.
Lord Badger
> looked at the others and said,
‘You heard him, let’s go.’
They walked
> off onto the path leading to FOG
> Mountain.
-----------------------------Edgy---------------------------
> As Edgy walked up the mountain path, he looked in to the bright hot sun. The
> heat was beating down on him, he didn’t care if it was hot or cold, he was
> getting this boy.
‘I can do this, I know I can.’ He sounded determined, he
> wanted to show Homerus Beerus Solidus that he could do something useful to his
> companion’s needs. Then it started to rain, like ½ pint, Edgy remained
> determined. As he ascended the mountain, the air got thinner and the fog got
> thicker and thicker.
‘I can’t see through this, I need to cast a light
> spell.’ He made the sun come back out and the fog disappear the air got thicker
> again so Edgy could breathe a bit better. He felt stronger so he decided to run.
> He ran so fast he feet barely touched the ground, and then he ran into a rock,
> knocking him out.
When he woke up again, he sat up, looked around the red
> rocky mountain. He saw a boy drawing a picture into a wall of rock. He smiled
> and walked over to the boy. Then he raised a hand and tapped the boy on the
> shoulder. The boy turned around surprised then said,
‘Hello, I’m Toni
> Cabbarini, who are you?’
‘I am Edgy, I’m here to get you young man. Now come
> with me.’ Edgy said, grabbing Toni’s arm.
‘Leave me alone, you’re that evil
> man aren’t you!’ Toni replied, he yanked out his arm and kicked Edgy, he ran off
> but Edgy caught him again.
‘I know I’m evil but I need to kill you if I want
> to take over the world.’ He hissed at the struggling Toni.
‘No, no, I don’t
> want to die!’ he screamed at Edgy.
‘Oh but you must little boy. I need you.’
> Edgy sounded more taunting.
Toni pulled away and started to shout for help.
> ‘You can scream but no one will hear you.’ Edgy started to pull him. Toni saw
> this as an opportunity to harm Edgy again. He raised his foot, and brought it
> down hard onto Edgy’s foot.
‘YYYYYYYEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!’ Edgy
> screamed, dropping Toni and grabbing his foot. Toni got up and ran off before
> Edgy could notice that he was gone. He hid behind the rock he had been drawing
> upon and started to chant a spell, he chanted and chanted until a wall of fire
> surrounded Edgy. Toni walked back out and smiled at Edgy. He chanted another
> spell, this time it made Edgy disappear in a ball of fire.
-----------Back at
> the palace of darkness throne room-------
Edgy returned to the throne
> room in the ball next to a puffing and panting ½ pint. Homerus Beerus
> Solidus just looked at the two in disgust and said,
‘You two look pitiful,’
> ‘But he came again…’ ½ pint said in a terrified voice.
‘I don’t care
> if Lord Badger appeared again, you should have kept her, but no….you had to run
> away didn’t you.’ He turned to Edgy, ‘You, you let a pathetic boy beat you,’
> ‘He stamped on my foot, it hurt like he….’
‘Well, your meant to be undead, a
> vampire, you not meant to feel pain.’
Edgy suddenly jumped up and shouted,
> ‘Well seeming you’re so powerful, why didn’t you do it?’
‘SILENCE!’ screamed
> Homerus Beerus Soldius, ‘You may have failed, but I have another plan. Seeming
> they have got the girl now and are making their way up the mountain, we will get
> our minions in the mountain palace to hold them up, then we will attack them. It
> will be easy I can guarantee you as you will have me there.’
‘I am warning
> you, that Lord Badger’s moves hurt!’ ½ pint said as a warning.
‘So
> what if they do hurt you, they wouldn’t hurt me and they can’t kill us can they.
> We will get that crystal and we will be able to use King Stryke’s power for our
> own purposes. Then we can rule the world and kill those pests.’
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Are you just trying to get your word count up? Man you have a lot of time on your hands he he!! Keep it up, tis very entertaining!
> ------------------The Palace of darkness--------------------
Somewhere, in a
> dark and dingy castle throne room, stood three figures, one badly battered. They
> stood around a crystal orb, peering into it.
‘You may have failed ½
> pint, but we will get those pests, we need that crystal if we’re going to take
> over the world.’ One of them muttered at ½ pint.
‘But, Edgy, that Lord
> Badger is far more powerful than you think,’ he picked up the remains of his
> Swiss cheese, ‘look at what he did to my cheese!’
‘You can always make more
> cheese.’ The other one said to him.
‘But Homerus Beerus Solidus, you do not
> know what that man is capable of. His attacks smart like hell!’ ½ pint
> replied in a child-like voice.
‘Quiet, we need to sort out what we’re going
> to do to get the other two chosen ones.’ Edgy hissed at his companions. They all
> gathered around the crystal again.
‘Let’s see who the other two are then.’
> Homerus Beerus Solidus laughed.
‘I just hope they’re weaker than that Badger
> boy!’ ½ pint muttered to himself.
Edgy burst out laughing and looked
> at his friend,
‘These two are just mere children, look at the fire child.’
> ‘Ah, fresh blood, he looks like he does not know much.’ ½ pint said
> whilst looking at the Boys’ image in the orb, ‘He’ll be a pushover, lets see the
> other one then.’
They looked into the crystal again and a girls’ image
> appeared, Homerus Beerus Solidus smirked and said,
‘I have an idea, lets
> capture the other two, they seem weaker then Shaneo and Lord badger. We could
> keep them in here and trick the others into coming to save these two youths.’
> Edgy grinned at his friends wonderful idea and replied,
‘Good idea, how
> shall we capture them then?’ He challenged Homerus Beerus Solidus.
‘Easy, the
> girl looks weaker. I suggest ½ pint go and get her, you’ll need to get
> her away from any other beings and then grab her. If she fights back, hit her,
> you knocked Shaneo out, you’ll make her unconscious easily, but don’t kill her.’
> He turned to Edgy ‘Edgy, seeming I’m the more powerful out of us two, I’ll stay
> here and keep guard of our palace. You can go get the boy, he’ll be more
> powerful but do the same thing as ½ pint will do with the girl and it’ll
> be a breeze.’
The two nodded at Homerus Beerus Solidus’ idea and left in a
> quick, bright flash
-------------------------½
> pint-----------------------------
½ pint cruised through the plain
> and then came across the sign pointing to the Lake. It started to turn dark but
> ½ pint carried on through the plain, it started to rain, he still carried
> on. It turned to light again, he was tired but he remained persistent.
He
> finally made it to the Lake, he collapsed onto the floor from sheer exhaustion.
> He soon awoke to see a girl’s face peering over him. She was pretty with Dark
> brown hair tied back, grey eyes and a soothing look to her. Then she spoke in a
> sweet voice,
‘Are you alright?’
‘Yeah yeah, I’m fine.’ ½ pint said
> waving his hand at her to get her away, then, he noticed that this was the girl
> he had been sent for. He smiled slyly and said,
‘Say, are you on your own?’
> She nodded. He smiled and got up. He walked towards her and her grabbed her by
> her arm. She had a scared look in her face,
‘What are you doing to me? Get
> off me!’ she shrieked.
He just smiled a pulled her along,
‘No, leave me
> alone!’ she pleaded, he carried on.
‘HHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!’ she cried
> out for help, nobody came, then,
‘Leave her alone, ½ pint.’ Came a
> shout.
½ pint turned around and saw Shaneo, Allardini, Lord Badger,
> The Exterminator and Tony Blair.
‘What are you pests doing here?’ ½
> pint hissed at them.
‘Here for the girl.’ Lord badger replied, ‘Now leave her
> alone before I sort you out again, and Shaneo knows how to control his powers
> now.’
½ pint dropped her and ran off.
The girl looked up at the
> group that had helped her. She ran away scared of them.
‘What did we do?’
> Tony Blair said.
‘Nothing, just leave her for a bit,’ Allardini said,
> ‘actually,’ he turned to Shaneo, ‘Shaneo, you’ve only just gotten used to
> people.’
‘Yes, Iguana was the first person I’ve ever met. She must have never
> seen other people before.’ Shaneo replied.
‘Well, then you must have a lot in
> common with this girl, go find her and talk to her.’ Allardini pushed Shaneo
> away.
Shaneo walked off in search of her. The Lake was lovely, calm and
> sunny. Shaneo bent down to the water to drink it, it was cool and icy, just
> right. He saw the girl practicing with a staff, there was something on the end
> of it, it was shining in the sun. It was too far away for Shaneo to see so he
> got up and walked up behind her, slowly, quietly so he wouldn’t scare her
> again.
‘Hello.’ He said in a chirpy voice. She turned around fear struck her
> face again.
‘Who are you and what do you want?’ she said in a protective
> voice.
Shaneo laughed quietly and replied ‘I am Shaneo, I came from your clan
> that was wipe out when we were young. I believe that you are called Little
> Hedgehog.’
‘Alright, what do you want then?’ Little Hedgehog sounded
> calmer.
‘You know that man who was trying to hurt you,’
‘Yes.’
‘Well
> I’m here because of that, he wants to kill us and 2 others because we have
> powers that can overthrow some evil power-mad people. He was one of them. We
> need you to join us to get rid of this evil that they want out of a crystal. You
> understand?’
Little Hedgehog nodded.
‘Good, then you’ll join us.’
> She nodded again.
‘Well get your stuff and we’ll go then.’ His eyes were
> fixed on the crystal on her staff, ‘What is that?’
‘That,’ she said pointing
> her staff at him ‘is a staff that the guardian of the lake gave to me. It gives
> me my powers.’
Shaneo led her to the others who were now sitting down
> getting bored and playing with Tony Blair’s lock picks.
‘Everyone, we’re
> ready to go.’ Shaneo told them.
‘About time too.’ The Exterminator grunted as
> they got up.
‘So you finally convinced her then.’ Allardini looked at Little
> Hedgehog, ‘She better have the magic.’
‘I do.’ Little Hedgehog retorted
> waving her staff at him. ‘This contains all of the power of the Lake, the
> guardian gave it to me.’
‘Can we please leave, we need to find Toni before
> they get him.’ The Exterminator said.
They left and were greeted by Ant
> as they left,
‘Shaneo, you look a bit different now, you have grown stronger
> and you have a fine troop with you. I bring news of more people to help and more
> to attack you. I hear there is a musician called Dead Wonder that bashes people
> around the head with a banjo, he will be incredibly helpful to you. But there
> are two more evil minions of Edgy and Homerus Beerus Solidus, they are a palace
> servant in the Mountain palace, he’s called TomUK and is amazingly intelligent,
> and the other one is Grix Thraves the betting Jester in the Mountain Palace. Go
> quickly, I don’t think Toni will stand a chance seeming Edgy is after him. I
> will see you again.’ Ant left them in a slow, doddery walk.
Lord Badger
> looked at the others and said,
‘You heard him, let’s go.’
They walked
> off onto the path leading to FOG
> Mountain.
-----------------------------Edgy---------------------------
> As Edgy walked up the mountain path, he looked in to the bright hot sun. The
> heat was beating down on him, he didn’t care if it was hot or cold, he was
> getting this boy.
‘I can do this, I know I can.’ He sounded determined, he
> wanted to show Homerus Beerus Solidus that he could do something useful to his
> companion’s needs. Then it started to rain, like ½ pint, Edgy remained
> determined. As he ascended the mountain, the air got thinner and the fog got
> thicker and thicker.
‘I can’t see through this, I need to cast a light
> spell.’ He made the sun come back out and the fog disappear the air got thicker
> again so Edgy could breathe a bit better. He felt stronger so he decided to run.
> He ran so fast he feet barely touched the ground, and then he ran into a rock,
> knocking him out.
When he woke up again, he sat up, looked around the red
> rocky mountain. He saw a boy drawing a picture into a wall of rock. He smiled
> and walked over to the boy. Then he raised a hand and tapped the boy on the
> shoulder. The boy turned around surprised then said,
‘Hello, I’m Toni
> Cabbarini, who are you?’
‘I am Edgy, I’m here to get you young man. Now come
> with me.’ Edgy said, grabbing Toni’s arm.
‘Leave me alone, you’re that evil
> man aren’t you!’ Toni replied, he yanked out his arm and kicked Edgy, he ran off
> but Edgy caught him again.
‘I know I’m evil but I need to kill you if I want
> to take over the world.’ He hissed at the struggling Toni.
‘No, no, I don’t
> want to die!’ he screamed at Edgy.
‘Oh but you must little boy. I need you.’
> Edgy sounded more taunting.
Toni pulled away and started to shout for help.
> ‘You can scream but no one will hear you.’ Edgy started to pull him. Toni saw
> this as an opportunity to harm Edgy again. He raised his foot, and brought it
> down hard onto Edgy’s foot.
‘YYYYYYYEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!’ Edgy
> screamed, dropping Toni and grabbing his foot. Toni got up and ran off before
> Edgy could notice that he was gone. He hid behind the rock he had been drawing
> upon and started to chant a spell, he chanted and chanted until a wall of fire
> surrounded Edgy. Toni walked back out and smiled at Edgy. He chanted another
> spell, this time it made Edgy disappear in a ball of fire.
-----------Back at
> the palace of darkness throne room-------
Edgy returned to the throne
> room in the ball next to a puffing and panting ½ pint. Homerus Beerus
> Solidus just looked at the two in disgust and said,
‘You two look pitiful,’
> ‘But he came again…’ ½ pint said in a terrified voice.
‘I don’t care
> if Lord Badger appeared again, you should have kept her, but no….you had to run
> away didn’t you.’ He turned to Edgy, ‘You, you let a pathetic boy beat you,’
> ‘He stamped on my foot, it hurt like he….’
‘Well, your meant to be undead, a
> vampire, you not meant to feel pain.’
Edgy suddenly jumped up and shouted,
> ‘Well seeming you’re so powerful, why didn’t you do it?’
‘SILENCE!’ screamed
> Homerus Beerus Soldius, ‘You may have failed, but I have another plan. Seeming
> they have got the girl now and are making their way up the mountain, we will get
> our minions in the mountain palace to hold them up, then we will attack them. It
> will be easy I can guarantee you as you will have me there.’
‘I am warning
> you, that Lord Badger’s moves hurt!’ ½ pint said as a warning.
‘So
> what if they do hurt you, they wouldn’t hurt me and they can’t kill us can they.
> We will get that crystal and we will be able to use King Stryke’s power for our
> own purposes. Then we can rule the world and kill those pests.’
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Are you just trying to get your word count up? Man you have a lot of time on your hands he he!! Keep it up, tis very entertaining!
------------------The Palace of darkness--------------------
Somewhere, in a dark and dingy castle throne room, stood three figures, one badly battered. They stood around a crystal orb, peering into it.
‘You may have failed ½ pint, but we will get those pests, we need that crystal if we’re going to take over the world.’ One of them muttered at ½ pint.
‘But, Edgy, that Lord Badger is far more powerful than you think,’ he picked up the remains of his Swiss cheese, ‘look at what he did to my cheese!’
‘You can always make more cheese.’ The other one said to him.
‘But Homerus Beerus Solidus, you do not know what that man is capable of. His attacks smart like hell!’ ½ pint replied in a child-like voice.
‘Quiet, we need to sort out what we’re going to do to get the other two chosen ones.’ Edgy hissed at his companions. They all gathered around the crystal again.
‘Let’s see who the other two are then.’ Homerus Beerus Solidus laughed.
‘I just hope they’re weaker than that Badger boy!’ ½ pint muttered to himself.
Edgy burst out laughing and looked at his friend,
‘These two are just mere children, look at the fire child.’
‘Ah, fresh blood, he looks like he does not know much.’ ½ pint said whilst looking at the Boys’ image in the orb, ‘He’ll be a pushover, lets see the other one then.’
They looked into the crystal again and a girls’ image appeared, Homerus Beerus Solidus smirked and said,
‘I have an idea, lets capture the other two, they seem weaker then Shaneo and Lord badger. We could keep them in here and trick the others into coming to save these two youths.’
Edgy grinned at his friends wonderful idea and replied,
‘Good idea, how shall we capture them then?’ He challenged Homerus Beerus Solidus.
‘Easy, the girl looks weaker. I suggest ½ pint go and get her, you’ll need to get her away from any other beings and then grab her. If she fights back, hit her, you knocked Shaneo out, you’ll make her unconscious easily, but don’t kill her.’ He turned to Edgy ‘Edgy, seeming I’m the more powerful out of us two, I’ll stay here and keep guard of our palace. You can go get the boy, he’ll be more powerful but do the same thing as ½ pint will do with the girl and it’ll be a breeze.’
The two nodded at Homerus Beerus Solidus’ idea and left in a quick, bright flash
-------------------------½ pint-----------------------------
½ pint cruised through the plain and then came across the sign pointing to the Lake. It started to turn dark but ½ pint carried on through the plain, it started to rain, he still carried on. It turned to light again, he was tired but he remained persistent.
He finally made it to the Lake, he collapsed onto the floor from sheer exhaustion. He soon awoke to see a girl’s face peering over him. She was pretty with Dark brown hair tied back, grey eyes and a soothing look to her. Then she spoke in a sweet voice,
‘Are you alright?’
‘Yeah yeah, I’m fine.’ ½ pint said waving his hand at her to get her away, then, he noticed that this was the girl he had been sent for. He smiled slyly and said,
‘Say, are you on your own?’
She nodded. He smiled and got up. He walked towards her and her grabbed her by her arm. She had a scared look in her face,
‘What are you doing to me? Get off me!’ she shrieked.
He just smiled a pulled her along,
‘No, leave me alone!’ she pleaded, he carried on.
‘HHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!’ she cried out for help, nobody came, then,
‘Leave her alone, ½ pint.’ Came a shout.
½ pint turned around and saw Shaneo, Allardini, Lord Badger, The Exterminator and Tony Blair.
‘What are you pests doing here?’ ½ pint hissed at them.
‘Here for the girl.’ Lord badger replied, ‘Now leave her alone before I sort you out again, and Shaneo knows how to control his powers now.’
½ pint dropped her and ran off.
The girl looked up at the group that had helped her. She ran away scared of them.
‘What did we do?’ Tony Blair said.
‘Nothing, just leave her for a bit,’ Allardini said, ‘actually,’ he turned to Shaneo, ‘Shaneo, you’ve only just gotten used to people.’
‘Yes, Iguana was the first person I’ve ever met. She must have never seen other people before.’ Shaneo replied.
‘Well, then you must have a lot in common with this girl, go find her and talk to her.’ Allardini pushed Shaneo away.
Shaneo walked off in search of her. The Lake was lovely, calm and sunny. Shaneo bent down to the water to drink it, it was cool and icy, just right. He saw the girl practicing with a staff, there was something on the end of it, it was shining in the sun. It was too far away for Shaneo to see so he got up and walked up behind her, slowly, quietly so he wouldn’t scare her again.
‘Hello.’ He said in a chirpy voice. She turned around fear struck her face again.
‘Who are you and what do you want?’ she said in a protective voice.
Shaneo laughed quietly and replied ‘I am Shaneo, I came from your clan that was wipe out when we were young. I believe that you are called Little Hedgehog.’
‘Alright, what do you want then?’ Little Hedgehog sounded calmer.
‘You know that man who was trying to hurt you,’
‘Yes.’
‘Well I’m here because of that, he wants to kill us and 2 others because we have powers that can overthrow some evil power-mad people. He was one of them. We need you to join us to get rid of this evil that they want out of a crystal. You understand?’
Little Hedgehog nodded.
‘Good, then you’ll join us.’
She nodded again.
‘Well get your stuff and we’ll go then.’ His eyes were fixed on the crystal on her staff, ‘What is that?’
‘That,’ she said pointing her staff at him ‘is a staff that the guardian of the lake gave to me. It gives me my powers.’
Shaneo led her to the others who were now sitting down getting bored and playing with Tony Blair’s lock picks.
‘Everyone, we’re ready to go.’ Shaneo told them.
‘About time too.’ The Exterminator grunted as they got up.
‘So you finally convinced her then.’ Allardini looked at Little Hedgehog, ‘She better have the magic.’
‘I do.’ Little Hedgehog retorted waving her staff at him. ‘This contains all of the power of the Lake, the guardian gave it to me.’
‘Can we please leave, we need to find Toni before they get him.’ The Exterminator said.
They left and were greeted by Ant as they left,
‘Shaneo, you look a bit different now, you have grown stronger and you have a fine troop with you. I bring news of more people to help and more to attack you. I hear there is a musician called Dead Wonder that bashes people around the head with a banjo, he will be incredibly helpful to you. But there are two more evil minions of Edgy and Homerus Beerus Solidus, they are a palace servant in the Mountain palace, he’s called TomUK and is amazingly intelligent, and the other one is Grix Thraves the betting Jester in the Mountain Palace. Go quickly, I don’t think Toni will stand a chance seeming Edgy is after him. I will see you again.’ Ant left them in a slow, doddery walk.
Lord Badger looked at the others and said,
‘You heard him, let’s go.’
They walked off onto the path leading to FOG Mountain.
-----------------------------Edgy---------------------------
As Edgy walked up the mountain path, he looked in to the bright hot sun. The heat was beating down on him, he didn’t care if it was hot or cold, he was getting this boy.
‘I can do this, I know I can.’ He sounded determined, he wanted to show Homerus Beerus Solidus that he could do something useful to his companion’s needs. Then it started to rain, like ½ pint, Edgy remained determined. As he ascended the mountain, the air got thinner and the fog got thicker and thicker.
‘I can’t see through this, I need to cast a light spell.’ He made the sun come back out and the fog disappear the air got thicker again so Edgy could breathe a bit better. He felt stronger so he decided to run. He ran so fast he feet barely touched the ground, and then he ran into a rock, knocking him out.
When he woke up again, he sat up, looked around the red rocky mountain. He saw a boy drawing a picture into a wall of rock. He smiled and walked over to the boy. Then he raised a hand and tapped the boy on the shoulder. The boy turned around surprised then said,
‘Hello, I’m Toni Cabbarini, who are you?’
‘I am Edgy, I’m here to get you young man. Now come with me.’ Edgy said, grabbing Toni’s arm.
‘Leave me alone, you’re that evil man aren’t you!’ Toni replied, he yanked out his arm and kicked Edgy, he ran off but Edgy caught him again.
‘I know I’m evil but I need to kill you if I want to take over the world.’ He hissed at the struggling Toni.
‘No, no, I don’t want to die!’ he screamed at Edgy.
‘Oh but you must little boy. I need you.’ Edgy sounded more taunting.
Toni pulled away and started to shout for help.
‘You can scream but no one will hear you.’ Edgy started to pull him. Toni saw this as an opportunity to harm Edgy again. He raised his foot, and brought it down hard onto Edgy’s foot.
‘YYYYYYYEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!’ Edgy screamed, dropping Toni and grabbing his foot. Toni got up and ran off before Edgy could notice that he was gone. He hid behind the rock he had been drawing upon and started to chant a spell, he chanted and chanted until a wall of fire surrounded Edgy. Toni walked back out and smiled at Edgy. He chanted another spell, this time it made Edgy disappear in a ball of fire.
-----------Back at the palace of darkness throne room-------
Edgy returned to the throne room in the ball next to a puffing and panting ½ pint. Homerus Beerus Solidus just looked at the two in disgust and said,
‘You two look pitiful,’
‘But he came again…’ ½ pint said in a terrified voice.
‘I don’t care if Lord Badger appeared again, you should have kept her, but no….you had to run away didn’t you.’ He turned to Edgy, ‘You, you let a pathetic boy beat you,’
‘He stamped on my foot, it hurt like he….’
‘Well, your meant to be undead, a vampire, you not meant to feel pain.’
Edgy suddenly jumped up and shouted,
‘Well seeming you’re so powerful, why didn’t you do it?’
‘SILENCE!’ screamed Homerus Beerus Soldius, ‘You may have failed, but I have another plan. Seeming they have got the girl now and are making their way up the mountain, we will get our minions in the mountain palace to hold them up, then we will attack them. It will be easy I can guarantee you as you will have me there.’
‘I am warning you, that Lord Badger’s moves hurt!’ ½ pint said as a warning.
‘So what if they do hurt you, they wouldn’t hurt me and they can’t kill us can they. We will get that crystal and we will be able to use King Stryke’s power for our own purposes. Then we can rule the world and kill those pests.’
Somewhere, in a dark and dingy castle throne room, stood three figures, one badly battered. They stood around a crystal orb, peering into it.
‘You may have failed ½ pint, but we will get those pests, we need that crystal if we’re going to take over the world.’ One of them muttered at ½ pint.
‘But, Edgy, that Lord Badger is far more powerful than you think,’ he picked up the remains of his Swiss cheese, ‘look at what he did to my cheese!’
‘You can always make more cheese.’ The other one said to him.
‘But Homerus Beerus Solidus, you do not know what that man is capable of. His attacks smart like hell!’ ½ pint replied in a child-like voice.
‘Quiet, we need to sort out what we’re going to do to get the other two chosen ones.’ Edgy hissed at his companions. They all gathered around the crystal again.
‘Let’s see who the other two are then.’ Homerus Beerus Solidus laughed.
‘I just hope they’re weaker than that Badger boy!’ ½ pint muttered to himself.
Edgy burst out laughing and looked at his friend,
‘These two are just mere children, look at the fire child.’
‘Ah, fresh blood, he looks like he does not know much.’ ½ pint said whilst looking at the Boys’ image in the orb, ‘He’ll be a pushover, lets see the other one then.’
They looked into the crystal again and a girls’ image appeared, Homerus Beerus Solidus smirked and said,
‘I have an idea, lets capture the other two, they seem weaker then Shaneo and Lord badger. We could keep them in here and trick the others into coming to save these two youths.’
Edgy grinned at his friends wonderful idea and replied,
‘Good idea, how shall we capture them then?’ He challenged Homerus Beerus Solidus.
‘Easy, the girl looks weaker. I suggest ½ pint go and get her, you’ll need to get her away from any other beings and then grab her. If she fights back, hit her, you knocked Shaneo out, you’ll make her unconscious easily, but don’t kill her.’ He turned to Edgy ‘Edgy, seeming I’m the more powerful out of us two, I’ll stay here and keep guard of our palace. You can go get the boy, he’ll be more powerful but do the same thing as ½ pint will do with the girl and it’ll be a breeze.’
The two nodded at Homerus Beerus Solidus’ idea and left in a quick, bright flash
-------------------------½ pint-----------------------------
½ pint cruised through the plain and then came across the sign pointing to the Lake. It started to turn dark but ½ pint carried on through the plain, it started to rain, he still carried on. It turned to light again, he was tired but he remained persistent.
He finally made it to the Lake, he collapsed onto the floor from sheer exhaustion. He soon awoke to see a girl’s face peering over him. She was pretty with Dark brown hair tied back, grey eyes and a soothing look to her. Then she spoke in a sweet voice,
‘Are you alright?’
‘Yeah yeah, I’m fine.’ ½ pint said waving his hand at her to get her away, then, he noticed that this was the girl he had been sent for. He smiled slyly and said,
‘Say, are you on your own?’
She nodded. He smiled and got up. He walked towards her and her grabbed her by her arm. She had a scared look in her face,
‘What are you doing to me? Get off me!’ she shrieked.
He just smiled a pulled her along,
‘No, leave me alone!’ she pleaded, he carried on.
‘HHHHEEEEEEELLLLLLLPPPPPPPPP!’ she cried out for help, nobody came, then,
‘Leave her alone, ½ pint.’ Came a shout.
½ pint turned around and saw Shaneo, Allardini, Lord Badger, The Exterminator and Tony Blair.
‘What are you pests doing here?’ ½ pint hissed at them.
‘Here for the girl.’ Lord badger replied, ‘Now leave her alone before I sort you out again, and Shaneo knows how to control his powers now.’
½ pint dropped her and ran off.
The girl looked up at the group that had helped her. She ran away scared of them.
‘What did we do?’ Tony Blair said.
‘Nothing, just leave her for a bit,’ Allardini said, ‘actually,’ he turned to Shaneo, ‘Shaneo, you’ve only just gotten used to people.’
‘Yes, Iguana was the first person I’ve ever met. She must have never seen other people before.’ Shaneo replied.
‘Well, then you must have a lot in common with this girl, go find her and talk to her.’ Allardini pushed Shaneo away.
Shaneo walked off in search of her. The Lake was lovely, calm and sunny. Shaneo bent down to the water to drink it, it was cool and icy, just right. He saw the girl practicing with a staff, there was something on the end of it, it was shining in the sun. It was too far away for Shaneo to see so he got up and walked up behind her, slowly, quietly so he wouldn’t scare her again.
‘Hello.’ He said in a chirpy voice. She turned around fear struck her face again.
‘Who are you and what do you want?’ she said in a protective voice.
Shaneo laughed quietly and replied ‘I am Shaneo, I came from your clan that was wipe out when we were young. I believe that you are called Little Hedgehog.’
‘Alright, what do you want then?’ Little Hedgehog sounded calmer.
‘You know that man who was trying to hurt you,’
‘Yes.’
‘Well I’m here because of that, he wants to kill us and 2 others because we have powers that can overthrow some evil power-mad people. He was one of them. We need you to join us to get rid of this evil that they want out of a crystal. You understand?’
Little Hedgehog nodded.
‘Good, then you’ll join us.’
She nodded again.
‘Well get your stuff and we’ll go then.’ His eyes were fixed on the crystal on her staff, ‘What is that?’
‘That,’ she said pointing her staff at him ‘is a staff that the guardian of the lake gave to me. It gives me my powers.’
Shaneo led her to the others who were now sitting down getting bored and playing with Tony Blair’s lock picks.
‘Everyone, we’re ready to go.’ Shaneo told them.
‘About time too.’ The Exterminator grunted as they got up.
‘So you finally convinced her then.’ Allardini looked at Little Hedgehog, ‘She better have the magic.’
‘I do.’ Little Hedgehog retorted waving her staff at him. ‘This contains all of the power of the Lake, the guardian gave it to me.’
‘Can we please leave, we need to find Toni before they get him.’ The Exterminator said.
They left and were greeted by Ant as they left,
‘Shaneo, you look a bit different now, you have grown stronger and you have a fine troop with you. I bring news of more people to help and more to attack you. I hear there is a musician called Dead Wonder that bashes people around the head with a banjo, he will be incredibly helpful to you. But there are two more evil minions of Edgy and Homerus Beerus Solidus, they are a palace servant in the Mountain palace, he’s called TomUK and is amazingly intelligent, and the other one is Grix Thraves the betting Jester in the Mountain Palace. Go quickly, I don’t think Toni will stand a chance seeming Edgy is after him. I will see you again.’ Ant left them in a slow, doddery walk.
Lord Badger looked at the others and said,
‘You heard him, let’s go.’
They walked off onto the path leading to FOG Mountain.
-----------------------------Edgy---------------------------
As Edgy walked up the mountain path, he looked in to the bright hot sun. The heat was beating down on him, he didn’t care if it was hot or cold, he was getting this boy.
‘I can do this, I know I can.’ He sounded determined, he wanted to show Homerus Beerus Solidus that he could do something useful to his companion’s needs. Then it started to rain, like ½ pint, Edgy remained determined. As he ascended the mountain, the air got thinner and the fog got thicker and thicker.
‘I can’t see through this, I need to cast a light spell.’ He made the sun come back out and the fog disappear the air got thicker again so Edgy could breathe a bit better. He felt stronger so he decided to run. He ran so fast he feet barely touched the ground, and then he ran into a rock, knocking him out.
When he woke up again, he sat up, looked around the red rocky mountain. He saw a boy drawing a picture into a wall of rock. He smiled and walked over to the boy. Then he raised a hand and tapped the boy on the shoulder. The boy turned around surprised then said,
‘Hello, I’m Toni Cabbarini, who are you?’
‘I am Edgy, I’m here to get you young man. Now come with me.’ Edgy said, grabbing Toni’s arm.
‘Leave me alone, you’re that evil man aren’t you!’ Toni replied, he yanked out his arm and kicked Edgy, he ran off but Edgy caught him again.
‘I know I’m evil but I need to kill you if I want to take over the world.’ He hissed at the struggling Toni.
‘No, no, I don’t want to die!’ he screamed at Edgy.
‘Oh but you must little boy. I need you.’ Edgy sounded more taunting.
Toni pulled away and started to shout for help.
‘You can scream but no one will hear you.’ Edgy started to pull him. Toni saw this as an opportunity to harm Edgy again. He raised his foot, and brought it down hard onto Edgy’s foot.
‘YYYYYYYEEEEEOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!’ Edgy screamed, dropping Toni and grabbing his foot. Toni got up and ran off before Edgy could notice that he was gone. He hid behind the rock he had been drawing upon and started to chant a spell, he chanted and chanted until a wall of fire surrounded Edgy. Toni walked back out and smiled at Edgy. He chanted another spell, this time it made Edgy disappear in a ball of fire.
-----------Back at the palace of darkness throne room-------
Edgy returned to the throne room in the ball next to a puffing and panting ½ pint. Homerus Beerus Solidus just looked at the two in disgust and said,
‘You two look pitiful,’
‘But he came again…’ ½ pint said in a terrified voice.
‘I don’t care if Lord Badger appeared again, you should have kept her, but no….you had to run away didn’t you.’ He turned to Edgy, ‘You, you let a pathetic boy beat you,’
‘He stamped on my foot, it hurt like he….’
‘Well, your meant to be undead, a vampire, you not meant to feel pain.’
Edgy suddenly jumped up and shouted,
‘Well seeming you’re so powerful, why didn’t you do it?’
‘SILENCE!’ screamed Homerus Beerus Soldius, ‘You may have failed, but I have another plan. Seeming they have got the girl now and are making their way up the mountain, we will get our minions in the mountain palace to hold them up, then we will attack them. It will be easy I can guarantee you as you will have me there.’
‘I am warning you, that Lord Badger’s moves hurt!’ ½ pint said as a warning.
‘So what if they do hurt you, they wouldn’t hurt me and they can’t kill us can they. We will get that crystal and we will be able to use King Stryke’s power for our own purposes. Then we can rule the world and kill those pests.’