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Imagine...
Imagine being the last one alive
The last one to survive
Only you, you and your mind
There is no light you are now blind.
Only thoughts will guide you through
To find the answers that you seek
Questions arise when, why, who?
The darkness is so bleak
You are trapped in a world of no living
Only the souls of them now past
Was it you that couldn't be forgiving
To see the light you must now fast
The search continues to find the key
Joy and wisdom try to appear
But there is no one, no one but me
Still trapped hiding from Fear
With no light my thoughts suppress
No future to hope for
No subject to address
My soul is now empty almost raw
I cannot continue deeper into the unknown
No guidance to show only to mislead
No visions of colour not a single tone
I am now lost, never to be freed
Imagine being the last one alive
The last one to survive
Only you, you and your mind
There is no light you are now blind.
Only thoughts will guide you through
To find the answers that you seek
Questions arise when, why, who?
The darkness is so bleak
You are trapped in a world of no living
Only the souls of them now past
Was it you that couldn't be forgiving
To see the light you must now fast
The search continues to find the key
Joy and wisdom try to appear
But there is no one, no one but me
Still trapped hiding from Fear
With no light my thoughts suppress
No future to hope for
No subject to address
My soul is now empty almost raw
I cannot continue deeper into the unknown
No guidance to show only to mislead
No visions of colour not a single tone
I am now lost, never to be freed
Sounds like an appropriate poem for I Am Legend.
Well that is a negative poem,but I think you put a lot of effort into it so I think it's pretty good.
Imagine...
Imagine being the last one alive
The last one to survive
Only you, you and your mind
There is no light you are now blind.
Only thoughts will guide you through
To find the answers that you seek
Questions arise when, why, who?
The darkness is so bleak
You are trapped in a world of no living
Only the souls of them now past
Was it you that couldn't be forgiving
To see the light you must now fast
The search continues to find the key
Joy and wisdom try to appear
But there is no one, no one but me
Still trapped hiding from Fear
With no light my thoughts suppress
No future to hope for
No subject to address
My soul is now empty almost raw
I cannot continue deeper into the unknown
No guidance to show only to mislead
No visions of colour not a single tone
I am now lost, never to be freed
Imagine being the last one alive
The last one to survive
Only you, you and your mind
There is no light you are now blind.
Only thoughts will guide you through
To find the answers that you seek
Questions arise when, why, who?
The darkness is so bleak
You are trapped in a world of no living
Only the souls of them now past
Was it you that couldn't be forgiving
To see the light you must now fast
The search continues to find the key
Joy and wisdom try to appear
But there is no one, no one but me
Still trapped hiding from Fear
With no light my thoughts suppress
No future to hope for
No subject to address
My soul is now empty almost raw
I cannot continue deeper into the unknown
No guidance to show only to mislead
No visions of colour not a single tone
I am now lost, never to be freed