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Chapter 1
The meeting!
It is now 2006, fours year since the Xbox came out, Touraments were big in Britain, people came all over the world just to take parts, in the Gamer of the year, each the prize money just kept getting bigger, Until that day is now.
A little village, in the middle of Great Britain called Tuxford, a cold breeze blew around a house, a house with a young boy, with great skills on computer games woke up. " Ahhh another boring day" the boy got out of bed went to the bathroom, to have a wash, then went downstairs for breakfest. "Oh man nothing again! I know I make something up" the boy raided the fridge, dug out a half bitten sandwich. " Ok now I lost my app.." the letterbox was heard "ahh the postman" the boy picked up the letters "bill bill bill, Free pants erm.. bill, huh what this?". A letter posted only to master Grant Nicholas Raymond Swietonowski, "Huh"
as the boy grunted "a letter to me, better read it" as Grant carefully opened the letter, and unfold the paper inside in and began to read it! "Dear Grant N R Swietonowski We invite you to a Tourament, The new conlse Tourament that will begin in 50 days from the 6th july, we will bring a transport for you to come on that day, in return You have a room to stay during the 50 days that you can prastice on the New Conlse, if you will agree then ring this number, 15478 XXXXX we hope to see you". Suddenly the phone rings Beep! Beep! Beep!"Yellow" then a voice said "hey Grant, it Luke" "Hey Luke wassup" "did you get a letter today about a new conlse Tourament" "yeah I kind of glad I ain't the only one.... are you going to ring up the number" "that depends if you are going" "We better call out the others" "Ok I tell them to come to the Village hall at Half 10 " "see you then". Grant hang the phone to get dress, and get to the Village as soon as possible.
In the centre of the village, Grant ran as fast as he can to get there, meanwhile as the Village hall there were a crowd of 7 people, waiting for him "Where is he" said Valkyie" "he be here" replied Pro Evo " What is this all about?" Amy asked " something about a letter I got this morning" Twain replied to her, "he right about that, where is Grant, he said he be here" Luke said "this better be importment, I was half way finshing my breakfest" said Grampy B angerliy " there he is" shouted Meister. Grant tired out out running a mile and half to get here "Ok *puff* let *pant* get started on this meeting" "Grant the hell have you been" Luke shouted at him "erm...." Grant trying to answer "he been chatting up Girls again have'nt you" Amy remarked "why the hell is she doing here" grant whispher to Luke "Hey she rang me up about the letter" "fair enough, let get this meeting over" the entrie gang entered the Village hall, as Grant got up on the stage and then "I persummed that all you lot got a letter about a new conlse Tourament, Which is strange though, Normaly we know that there will be a new conlse in about a years time, But I never guess it been made already made without anyone knowing" Grant said to the gang, then Grampy B shouted " Who cares about a new conlse" Valkyie said " well for first things we don't know about the company that made it, don't know what it looks like, and how powerful it is?". Grant look at Valkyie "you know what I gonna say don't ya" " shut up" "you got that right, now be quiet and listen to what we gonna do, how many are there going to enter this Tourament, then all raise hands if going!" the gang shot up hands in front of Grant, "all opposed" "nay" "who keep saying that, bah I don't care, Ok each of us will ring this number, and say ours names" Grant got his moblie phone out and started to dial the number and waited Ring Ring ... "hello this is the help line of the Tourament, if you are ringing to enter the tourament please say your name and your nick name.." the Voice said "The name is Grant N R Swietonowski and the nickname is Vegeta" Grant replied "thank you" "done mine here Luke your turn and then pass it around "Luke Cristain and Nickname is Storm" luke passed it on to Amy "Amy Kichojan and Nickname Angel" and then she passed it on.
After the meeting, Grant and Luke went to the Cyber cafe up the street, and entered "hey Chris, We need some information off the net Luke asked him as Chris was sleeping on his desk "Huh Mommy I did'nt do it" Chris woke up in case the boss was'nt here "Oh it you guys, what do ya want" asked Chris "need some information about a New conlse Tourament" Luke replied "Huh what that" Chris asked a dumb question "we don't know, that why we trying find some information about it" Grant said "huh uh okay" Chris said "thanks" they boths said. As Grant and Luke, seached the internet about it, and found nothing "what is wrong, why is there not a thing about the New conlse, they would as least have something on a website, even the members of Special Reserve don't know a thing, and yet some say they got letters as well" Grant asked Luke "erm... maybe we better just wait until the 6th, it only 5 days" Luke said "Ok then we don't meet up until that Day, oh and we be calling ourselves by our nicknames" then Grant and Luke went back home to rest, "We be ready for what they throw at us" Grant said to himself and waiting for that day to arrive.
The meeting!
It is now 2006, fours year since the Xbox came out, Touraments were big in Britain, people came all over the world just to take parts, in the Gamer of the year, each the prize money just kept getting bigger, Until that day is now.
A little village, in the middle of Great Britain called Tuxford, a cold breeze blew around a house, a house with a young boy, with great skills on computer games woke up. " Ahhh another boring day" the boy got out of bed went to the bathroom, to have a wash, then went downstairs for breakfest. "Oh man nothing again! I know I make something up" the boy raided the fridge, dug out a half bitten sandwich. " Ok now I lost my app.." the letterbox was heard "ahh the postman" the boy picked up the letters "bill bill bill, Free pants erm.. bill, huh what this?". A letter posted only to master Grant Nicholas Raymond Swietonowski, "Huh"
as the boy grunted "a letter to me, better read it" as Grant carefully opened the letter, and unfold the paper inside in and began to read it! "Dear Grant N R Swietonowski We invite you to a Tourament, The new conlse Tourament that will begin in 50 days from the 6th july, we will bring a transport for you to come on that day, in return You have a room to stay during the 50 days that you can prastice on the New Conlse, if you will agree then ring this number, 15478 XXXXX we hope to see you". Suddenly the phone rings Beep! Beep! Beep!"Yellow" then a voice said "hey Grant, it Luke" "Hey Luke wassup" "did you get a letter today about a new conlse Tourament" "yeah I kind of glad I ain't the only one.... are you going to ring up the number" "that depends if you are going" "We better call out the others" "Ok I tell them to come to the Village hall at Half 10 " "see you then". Grant hang the phone to get dress, and get to the Village as soon as possible.
In the centre of the village, Grant ran as fast as he can to get there, meanwhile as the Village hall there were a crowd of 7 people, waiting for him "Where is he" said Valkyie" "he be here" replied Pro Evo " What is this all about?" Amy asked " something about a letter I got this morning" Twain replied to her, "he right about that, where is Grant, he said he be here" Luke said "this better be importment, I was half way finshing my breakfest" said Grampy B angerliy " there he is" shouted Meister. Grant tired out out running a mile and half to get here "Ok *puff* let *pant* get started on this meeting" "Grant the hell have you been" Luke shouted at him "erm...." Grant trying to answer "he been chatting up Girls again have'nt you" Amy remarked "why the hell is she doing here" grant whispher to Luke "Hey she rang me up about the letter" "fair enough, let get this meeting over" the entrie gang entered the Village hall, as Grant got up on the stage and then "I persummed that all you lot got a letter about a new conlse Tourament, Which is strange though, Normaly we know that there will be a new conlse in about a years time, But I never guess it been made already made without anyone knowing" Grant said to the gang, then Grampy B shouted " Who cares about a new conlse" Valkyie said " well for first things we don't know about the company that made it, don't know what it looks like, and how powerful it is?". Grant look at Valkyie "you know what I gonna say don't ya" " shut up" "you got that right, now be quiet and listen to what we gonna do, how many are there going to enter this Tourament, then all raise hands if going!" the gang shot up hands in front of Grant, "all opposed" "nay" "who keep saying that, bah I don't care, Ok each of us will ring this number, and say ours names" Grant got his moblie phone out and started to dial the number and waited Ring Ring ... "hello this is the help line of the Tourament, if you are ringing to enter the tourament please say your name and your nick name.." the Voice said "The name is Grant N R Swietonowski and the nickname is Vegeta" Grant replied "thank you" "done mine here Luke your turn and then pass it around "Luke Cristain and Nickname is Storm" luke passed it on to Amy "Amy Kichojan and Nickname Angel" and then she passed it on.
After the meeting, Grant and Luke went to the Cyber cafe up the street, and entered "hey Chris, We need some information off the net Luke asked him as Chris was sleeping on his desk "Huh Mommy I did'nt do it" Chris woke up in case the boss was'nt here "Oh it you guys, what do ya want" asked Chris "need some information about a New conlse Tourament" Luke replied "Huh what that" Chris asked a dumb question "we don't know, that why we trying find some information about it" Grant said "huh uh okay" Chris said "thanks" they boths said. As Grant and Luke, seached the internet about it, and found nothing "what is wrong, why is there not a thing about the New conlse, they would as least have something on a website, even the members of Special Reserve don't know a thing, and yet some say they got letters as well" Grant asked Luke "erm... maybe we better just wait until the 6th, it only 5 days" Luke said "Ok then we don't meet up until that Day, oh and we be calling ourselves by our nicknames" then Grant and Luke went back home to rest, "We be ready for what they throw at us" Grant said to himself and waiting for that day to arrive.
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Chapter 1
The meeting!
It is now 2006, fours year since the Xbox came out, Touraments were big in Britain, people came all over the world just to take parts, in the Gamer of the year, each the prize money just kept getting bigger, Until that day is now.
A little village, in the middle of Great Britain called Tuxford, a cold breeze blew around a house, a house with a young boy, with great skills on computer games woke up. " Ahhh another boring day" the boy got out of bed went to the bathroom, to have a wash, then went downstairs for breakfest. "Oh man nothing again! I know I make something up" the boy raided the fridge, dug out a half bitten sandwich. " Ok now I lost my app.." the letterbox was heard "ahh the postman" the boy picked up the letters "bill bill bill, Free pants erm.. bill, huh what this?". A letter posted only to master Grant Nicholas Raymond Swietonowski, "Huh"
as the boy grunted "a letter to me, better read it" as Grant carefully opened the letter, and unfold the paper inside in and began to read it! "Dear Grant N R Swietonowski We invite you to a Tourament, The new conlse Tourament that will begin in 50 days from the 6th july, we will bring a transport for you to come on that day, in return You have a room to stay during the 50 days that you can prastice on the New Conlse, if you will agree then ring this number, 15478 XXXXX we hope to see you". Suddenly the phone rings Beep! Beep! Beep!"Yellow" then a voice said "hey Grant, it Luke" "Hey Luke wassup" "did you get a letter today about a new conlse Tourament" "yeah I kind of glad I ain't the only one.... are you going to ring up the number" "that depends if you are going" "We better call out the others" "Ok I tell them to come to the Village hall at Half 10 " "see you then". Grant hang the phone to get dress, and get to the Village as soon as possible.
In the centre of the village, Grant ran as fast as he can to get there, meanwhile as the Village hall there were a crowd of 7 people, waiting for him "Where is he" said Valkyie" "he be here" replied Pro Evo " What is this all about?" Amy asked " something about a letter I got this morning" Twain replied to her, "he right about that, where is Grant, he said he be here" Luke said "this better be importment, I was half way finshing my breakfest" said Grampy B angerliy " there he is" shouted Meister. Grant tired out out running a mile and half to get here "Ok *puff* let *pant* get started on this meeting" "Grant the hell have you been" Luke shouted at him "erm...." Grant trying to answer "he been chatting up Girls again have'nt you" Amy remarked "why the hell is she doing here" grant whispher to Luke "Hey she rang me up about the letter" "fair enough, let get this meeting over" the entrie gang entered the Village hall, as Grant got up on the stage and then "I persummed that all you lot got a letter about a new conlse Tourament, Which is strange though, Normaly we know that there will be a new conlse in about a years time, But I never guess it been made already made without anyone knowing" Grant said to the gang, then Grampy B shouted " Who cares about a new conlse" Valkyie said " well for first things we don't know about the company that made it, don't know what it looks like, and how powerful it is?". Grant look at Valkyie "you know what I gonna say don't ya" " shut up" "you got that right, now be quiet and listen to what we gonna do, how many are there going to enter this Tourament, then all raise hands if going!" the gang shot up hands in front of Grant, "all opposed" "nay" "who keep saying that, bah I don't care, Ok each of us will ring this number, and say ours names" Grant got his moblie phone out and started to dial the number and waited Ring Ring ... "hello this is the help line of the Tourament, if you are ringing to enter the tourament please say your name and your nick name.." the Voice said "The name is Grant N R Swietonowski and the nickname is Vegeta" Grant replied "thank you" "done mine here Luke your turn and then pass it around "Luke Cristain and Nickname is Storm" luke passed it on to Amy "Amy Kichojan and Nickname Angel" and then she passed it on.
After the meeting, Grant and Luke went to the Cyber cafe up the street, and entered "hey Chris, We need some information off the net Luke asked him as Chris was sleeping on his desk "Huh Mommy I did'nt do it" Chris woke up in case the boss was'nt here "Oh it you guys, what do ya want" asked Chris "need some information about a New conlse Tourament" Luke replied "Huh what that" Chris asked a dumb question "we don't know, that why we trying find some information about it" Grant said "huh uh okay" Chris said "thanks" they boths said. As Grant and Luke, seached the internet about it, and found nothing "what is wrong, why is there not a thing about the New conlse, they would as least have something on a website, even the members of Special Reserve don't know a thing, and yet some say they got letters as well" Grant asked Luke "erm... maybe we better just wait until the 6th, it only 5 days" Luke said "Ok then we don't meet up until that Day, oh and we be calling ourselves by our nicknames" then Grant and Luke went back home to rest, "We be ready for what they throw at us" Grant said to himself and waiting for that day to arrive.
The meeting!
It is now 2006, fours year since the Xbox came out, Touraments were big in Britain, people came all over the world just to take parts, in the Gamer of the year, each the prize money just kept getting bigger, Until that day is now.
A little village, in the middle of Great Britain called Tuxford, a cold breeze blew around a house, a house with a young boy, with great skills on computer games woke up. " Ahhh another boring day" the boy got out of bed went to the bathroom, to have a wash, then went downstairs for breakfest. "Oh man nothing again! I know I make something up" the boy raided the fridge, dug out a half bitten sandwich. " Ok now I lost my app.." the letterbox was heard "ahh the postman" the boy picked up the letters "bill bill bill, Free pants erm.. bill, huh what this?". A letter posted only to master Grant Nicholas Raymond Swietonowski, "Huh"
as the boy grunted "a letter to me, better read it" as Grant carefully opened the letter, and unfold the paper inside in and began to read it! "Dear Grant N R Swietonowski We invite you to a Tourament, The new conlse Tourament that will begin in 50 days from the 6th july, we will bring a transport for you to come on that day, in return You have a room to stay during the 50 days that you can prastice on the New Conlse, if you will agree then ring this number, 15478 XXXXX we hope to see you". Suddenly the phone rings Beep! Beep! Beep!"Yellow" then a voice said "hey Grant, it Luke" "Hey Luke wassup" "did you get a letter today about a new conlse Tourament" "yeah I kind of glad I ain't the only one.... are you going to ring up the number" "that depends if you are going" "We better call out the others" "Ok I tell them to come to the Village hall at Half 10 " "see you then". Grant hang the phone to get dress, and get to the Village as soon as possible.
In the centre of the village, Grant ran as fast as he can to get there, meanwhile as the Village hall there were a crowd of 7 people, waiting for him "Where is he" said Valkyie" "he be here" replied Pro Evo " What is this all about?" Amy asked " something about a letter I got this morning" Twain replied to her, "he right about that, where is Grant, he said he be here" Luke said "this better be importment, I was half way finshing my breakfest" said Grampy B angerliy " there he is" shouted Meister. Grant tired out out running a mile and half to get here "Ok *puff* let *pant* get started on this meeting" "Grant the hell have you been" Luke shouted at him "erm...." Grant trying to answer "he been chatting up Girls again have'nt you" Amy remarked "why the hell is she doing here" grant whispher to Luke "Hey she rang me up about the letter" "fair enough, let get this meeting over" the entrie gang entered the Village hall, as Grant got up on the stage and then "I persummed that all you lot got a letter about a new conlse Tourament, Which is strange though, Normaly we know that there will be a new conlse in about a years time, But I never guess it been made already made without anyone knowing" Grant said to the gang, then Grampy B shouted " Who cares about a new conlse" Valkyie said " well for first things we don't know about the company that made it, don't know what it looks like, and how powerful it is?". Grant look at Valkyie "you know what I gonna say don't ya" " shut up" "you got that right, now be quiet and listen to what we gonna do, how many are there going to enter this Tourament, then all raise hands if going!" the gang shot up hands in front of Grant, "all opposed" "nay" "who keep saying that, bah I don't care, Ok each of us will ring this number, and say ours names" Grant got his moblie phone out and started to dial the number and waited Ring Ring ... "hello this is the help line of the Tourament, if you are ringing to enter the tourament please say your name and your nick name.." the Voice said "The name is Grant N R Swietonowski and the nickname is Vegeta" Grant replied "thank you" "done mine here Luke your turn and then pass it around "Luke Cristain and Nickname is Storm" luke passed it on to Amy "Amy Kichojan and Nickname Angel" and then she passed it on.
After the meeting, Grant and Luke went to the Cyber cafe up the street, and entered "hey Chris, We need some information off the net Luke asked him as Chris was sleeping on his desk "Huh Mommy I did'nt do it" Chris woke up in case the boss was'nt here "Oh it you guys, what do ya want" asked Chris "need some information about a New conlse Tourament" Luke replied "Huh what that" Chris asked a dumb question "we don't know, that why we trying find some information about it" Grant said "huh uh okay" Chris said "thanks" they boths said. As Grant and Luke, seached the internet about it, and found nothing "what is wrong, why is there not a thing about the New conlse, they would as least have something on a website, even the members of Special Reserve don't know a thing, and yet some say they got letters as well" Grant asked Luke "erm... maybe we better just wait until the 6th, it only 5 days" Luke said "Ok then we don't meet up until that Day, oh and we be calling ourselves by our nicknames" then Grant and Luke went back home to rest, "We be ready for what they throw at us" Grant said to himself and waiting for that day to arrive.