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Here is my GTA story so far.
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Chapter 1: Say ‘ello
The sun was shining down onto Liberty City as the life of innocents went on without a change.
A red Cheetah drove through the low lights of China Town, skidding around a corner, fast and loud, turned by Luigi’s Place. A dark new figure stepped out, and with a curios look and a loaded Uzi in his hand he scanned the sex bars poster and chuckled. An ugly woman bumped into him and angrily yelled “Move it, slow mover!” in a typical Liberty accent. The dark figure looked at her flashed his knife with strong grip and a fierce look on his face, she ran along the littered street and turned at the paint and spray yelling, “These shoes are new!”
The dark figure looked down at his feat to pick up a discarded newspaper,
He read the front page, ‘Zombie Elvis Found’ was the headline and the dark figure realised in his hidden mysterious mind that this was no ordinary city.
He heard a bang, it came from around the back of the bar, and the dark figure stepped around the corner and caught sight of the incident. There was a smartly dressed man (AbsoluT Neo) struggling with a recently dead, half-dressed hooker (Asher D) and the guy had a black bin bag in his left hand. This brought no emotion to the dark figures face as he became curios of what was happening.
He walked up to the smartly dressed man, the man slowly looked up and started to speak, “What are u looking at!?”, the smartly dressed man continued with great anger, “Help or Die! If this leaks the boss will kill me” as he held a USP to the dark figures head he whispered devilishly, “Say ‘ello to my lil friend”
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Chapter 2: GoodWork
The dark figure was calm as if he knew his way around this sort of buissness, he was quick to help, and the two managed to put the wounded corps in to the black bag. “Put it in that bin” the smart man stressed and the dark figure did as he said with great ease and strength.
“Goodwork” said the man who seemed to have a different attitude now that the problem was solved, “I am Dan but you can call me AbsoluT, I work for Luigi, maybe we can have some work for ya”, “but..um..well maybe you’ll have to wait abit, we only just got a new handy man the other day, and he’s sort of doing a good job”.
The dark figure with white skin, short dreads, wearing denim Jeans and a black top, turned his head and started walking away. AbsoluT shouted “ Go and get your self some ammunition, get to know your way around the city and come back here soon”, The dark figure seemed to agree with just his body gestures and walked back to his red cheetah.
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just say if u want to be in it.
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Chapter 1: Say ‘ello
The sun was shining down onto Liberty City as the life of innocents went on without a change.
A red Cheetah drove through the low lights of China Town, skidding around a corner, fast and loud, turned by Luigi’s Place. A dark new figure stepped out, and with a curios look and a loaded Uzi in his hand he scanned the sex bars poster and chuckled. An ugly woman bumped into him and angrily yelled “Move it, slow mover!” in a typical Liberty accent. The dark figure looked at her flashed his knife with strong grip and a fierce look on his face, she ran along the littered street and turned at the paint and spray yelling, “These shoes are new!”
The dark figure looked down at his feat to pick up a discarded newspaper,
He read the front page, ‘Zombie Elvis Found’ was the headline and the dark figure realised in his hidden mysterious mind that this was no ordinary city.
He heard a bang, it came from around the back of the bar, and the dark figure stepped around the corner and caught sight of the incident. There was a smartly dressed man (AbsoluT Neo) struggling with a recently dead, half-dressed hooker (Asher D) and the guy had a black bin bag in his left hand. This brought no emotion to the dark figures face as he became curios of what was happening.
He walked up to the smartly dressed man, the man slowly looked up and started to speak, “What are u looking at!?”, the smartly dressed man continued with great anger, “Help or Die! If this leaks the boss will kill me” as he held a USP to the dark figures head he whispered devilishly, “Say ‘ello to my lil friend”
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Chapter 2: GoodWork
The dark figure was calm as if he knew his way around this sort of buissness, he was quick to help, and the two managed to put the wounded corps in to the black bag. “Put it in that bin” the smart man stressed and the dark figure did as he said with great ease and strength.
“Goodwork” said the man who seemed to have a different attitude now that the problem was solved, “I am Dan but you can call me AbsoluT, I work for Luigi, maybe we can have some work for ya”, “but..um..well maybe you’ll have to wait abit, we only just got a new handy man the other day, and he’s sort of doing a good job”.
The dark figure with white skin, short dreads, wearing denim Jeans and a black top, turned his head and started walking away. AbsoluT shouted “ Go and get your self some ammunition, get to know your way around the city and come back here soon”, The dark figure seemed to agree with just his body gestures and walked back to his red cheetah.
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just say if u want to be in it.
grumpyboyquinton wrote:
> you wont want me in it but stick me in if you are short of people.
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I might just use made up names and stick the actual persons name in brackets, ie. Mike (grumpyboyquinton) sat up and with that evil moment in time, shot a whole through he innecents head.
> you wont want me in it but stick me in if you are short of people.
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I might just use made up names and stick the actual persons name in brackets, ie. Mike (grumpyboyquinton) sat up and with that evil moment in time, shot a whole through he innecents head.
My story is gonna be based around the happenings of the game, the handy man Absolut was talking about is the guy you controll in GTA3, so, as salvator u will die.
you wont want me in it but stick me in if you are short of people.
Here is my GTA story so far.
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Chapter 1: Say ‘ello
The sun was shining down onto Liberty City as the life of innocents went on without a change.
A red Cheetah drove through the low lights of China Town, skidding around a corner, fast and loud, turned by Luigi’s Place. A dark new figure stepped out, and with a curios look and a loaded Uzi in his hand he scanned the sex bars poster and chuckled. An ugly woman bumped into him and angrily yelled “Move it, slow mover!” in a typical Liberty accent. The dark figure looked at her flashed his knife with strong grip and a fierce look on his face, she ran along the littered street and turned at the paint and spray yelling, “These shoes are new!”
The dark figure looked down at his feat to pick up a discarded newspaper,
He read the front page, ‘Zombie Elvis Found’ was the headline and the dark figure realised in his hidden mysterious mind that this was no ordinary city.
He heard a bang, it came from around the back of the bar, and the dark figure stepped around the corner and caught sight of the incident. There was a smartly dressed man (AbsoluT Neo) struggling with a recently dead, half-dressed hooker (Asher D) and the guy had a black bin bag in his left hand. This brought no emotion to the dark figures face as he became curios of what was happening.
He walked up to the smartly dressed man, the man slowly looked up and started to speak, “What are u looking at!?”, the smartly dressed man continued with great anger, “Help or Die! If this leaks the boss will kill me” as he held a USP to the dark figures head he whispered devilishly, “Say ‘ello to my lil friend”
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Chapter 2: GoodWork
The dark figure was calm as if he knew his way around this sort of buissness, he was quick to help, and the two managed to put the wounded corps in to the black bag. “Put it in that bin” the smart man stressed and the dark figure did as he said with great ease and strength.
“Goodwork” said the man who seemed to have a different attitude now that the problem was solved, “I am Dan but you can call me AbsoluT, I work for Luigi, maybe we can have some work for ya”, “but..um..well maybe you’ll have to wait abit, we only just got a new handy man the other day, and he’s sort of doing a good job”.
The dark figure with white skin, short dreads, wearing denim Jeans and a black top, turned his head and started walking away. AbsoluT shouted “ Go and get your self some ammunition, get to know your way around the city and come back here soon”, The dark figure seemed to agree with just his body gestures and walked back to his red cheetah.
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just say if u want to be in it.
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Chapter 1: Say ‘ello
The sun was shining down onto Liberty City as the life of innocents went on without a change.
A red Cheetah drove through the low lights of China Town, skidding around a corner, fast and loud, turned by Luigi’s Place. A dark new figure stepped out, and with a curios look and a loaded Uzi in his hand he scanned the sex bars poster and chuckled. An ugly woman bumped into him and angrily yelled “Move it, slow mover!” in a typical Liberty accent. The dark figure looked at her flashed his knife with strong grip and a fierce look on his face, she ran along the littered street and turned at the paint and spray yelling, “These shoes are new!”
The dark figure looked down at his feat to pick up a discarded newspaper,
He read the front page, ‘Zombie Elvis Found’ was the headline and the dark figure realised in his hidden mysterious mind that this was no ordinary city.
He heard a bang, it came from around the back of the bar, and the dark figure stepped around the corner and caught sight of the incident. There was a smartly dressed man (AbsoluT Neo) struggling with a recently dead, half-dressed hooker (Asher D) and the guy had a black bin bag in his left hand. This brought no emotion to the dark figures face as he became curios of what was happening.
He walked up to the smartly dressed man, the man slowly looked up and started to speak, “What are u looking at!?”, the smartly dressed man continued with great anger, “Help or Die! If this leaks the boss will kill me” as he held a USP to the dark figures head he whispered devilishly, “Say ‘ello to my lil friend”
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Chapter 2: GoodWork
The dark figure was calm as if he knew his way around this sort of buissness, he was quick to help, and the two managed to put the wounded corps in to the black bag. “Put it in that bin” the smart man stressed and the dark figure did as he said with great ease and strength.
“Goodwork” said the man who seemed to have a different attitude now that the problem was solved, “I am Dan but you can call me AbsoluT, I work for Luigi, maybe we can have some work for ya”, “but..um..well maybe you’ll have to wait abit, we only just got a new handy man the other day, and he’s sort of doing a good job”.
The dark figure with white skin, short dreads, wearing denim Jeans and a black top, turned his head and started walking away. AbsoluT shouted “ Go and get your self some ammunition, get to know your way around the city and come back here soon”, The dark figure seemed to agree with just his body gestures and walked back to his red cheetah.
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just say if u want to be in it.