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This is the first ever Hardcore match I've done so I'm not too sure about it. How do you think it is?
A bit of background, Syth is an experienced hardcore wrestler like Raven and is fighting his first match in he new FCW. Syth is also an unestablished heel. BBR is an alround wrestler with a few highflying moves, and is an established face. BBR has never wrestled a hardcore match before. The Hardcore title is currently vacant.
FCW Slaughter
Hardcore Title Match
BBR V. Syth
Shawn Finkle: The following match is scheduled for 1 fall and is for the FCW Hardcore title. Introducing first, from Cameron North Carolina, weighing in at 310 lbs... Syth!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits. The crowd boos Syth as he walks out onto the stage with a shopping trolley full of weapons. He poses and then walks down the ramp to the ring while talking trash to the fans. Syth slides into the ring.)
Shawn Finkle: And weighing in at 215lbs, from Detroit Michigan... Bad Boy Red!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits the arena pa as BBR sprints to ringside. He slides into the ring but gets knocked down by a stiff right hand from Syth. Syth stomps away on BBR a good 5 times. He lifts Red to his feet and throws him outside towards the trolley of weapons. Red holds onto the ropes and regains his footing on the apron. The two exchange shots to the head. Syth tries a running clothesline but finds himself on the arena floor after some clever work by Red, pulling down the top rope.)
Matthew Boon: Some good awareness from Red turns this match around.
(Red poses to the crowd and gets cheers. He attempts an Asai moonsault but Syth rolls out of the way. Syth rises to his feet and pulls something out of his trolley of weapons, A barbed wire wrapped 2X4. As Red stands Syth Swings the 2X4 at him but Red ducks the weapon and delivers a Mule Kick to the chin of Syth.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: What a kick!
(Syth is lying battered on the floor as Bad Boy Red takes a walk around the ring to regain his breath. Syth stands, and gets out a Trash Can. As Red walks near Syth Pounces and smacks the Trash Can over Red’s head. Syth arrogantly covers.)
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Kick Out
(Syth picks up Red and applies a Bearhug. After 5 seconds of pain Syth Drives the back of Red into the turnbuckle. Red collapses to the floor holding his back in agony. Syth, now working on the back of Red lifts him up and delivers a Spinebuster. Syth goes under the ring and pulls out chair and hits BBR’s back with it.)
Matthew Boon: Smart wrestling from Syth, Red is in trouble.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Imagine the pain on that Bad to the Bone back of his!
(Syth drops the chair, goes under the apron and pulls out a table. He slides it into the ring and sends Red following it. Syth slides into the ring and sets up the table. Red finally gets to his feet, as Syth tries for a right but he blocks it. Syth receives some quick punches to his head but counters with a Low Blow kick and a DDT. The crowd boos which is replied by a Finger taunt to the crowd. Syth lifts BBR to his feet and sets him up for a Powerbomb. The crowd start a “Syth sucks” chant.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: These fans don’t know what there thinking right now.
(Syth lifts Bad Boy up on his shoulders but Red counters flipping through his legs and pinning Syth.)
Matthew Boon: We got a new Hardcore champ! No. Kickout on two!
(Syth powerfully kicks out sending Red rolling backwards under the table.)
BBR: Come get me Syth!
(Syth chases after BBR and grabs him leaning over the table. Red clubs his neck a few times and climbs the top rope. He leaps with an elbow drop sending himself through the table. Syth poses to the crowd then covers.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: This has gotta be it!
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Kick Out
Matthew Boon: How did he do that!
(Syth squares up to the ref, trash talking him. As BBR sneaks in with the roll up.)
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Matthew Boon: Yes, Bad Boy Red has done it!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits and BBR rolls out of the ring, grabs his belt, and runs backstage leaving Syth fuming in the ring. The crowd cheer the upset victory of BBR.)
Shawn Finkle: And the winner, and new hardcore champion, Bad Boy urghh.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Bad Boy urghh, is he new?
(Syth Low Blows Finkle and an elbow smash to the announcer’s head. He then hits Finkle with Episode One, leaving Finkle battered on the mat.)
Matthew Boon: What a bad looser Syth is!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits and Syth walks backstage with boos from the crowd.)
A bit of background, Syth is an experienced hardcore wrestler like Raven and is fighting his first match in he new FCW. Syth is also an unestablished heel. BBR is an alround wrestler with a few highflying moves, and is an established face. BBR has never wrestled a hardcore match before. The Hardcore title is currently vacant.
FCW Slaughter
Hardcore Title Match
BBR V. Syth
Shawn Finkle: The following match is scheduled for 1 fall and is for the FCW Hardcore title. Introducing first, from Cameron North Carolina, weighing in at 310 lbs... Syth!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits. The crowd boos Syth as he walks out onto the stage with a shopping trolley full of weapons. He poses and then walks down the ramp to the ring while talking trash to the fans. Syth slides into the ring.)
Shawn Finkle: And weighing in at 215lbs, from Detroit Michigan... Bad Boy Red!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits the arena pa as BBR sprints to ringside. He slides into the ring but gets knocked down by a stiff right hand from Syth. Syth stomps away on BBR a good 5 times. He lifts Red to his feet and throws him outside towards the trolley of weapons. Red holds onto the ropes and regains his footing on the apron. The two exchange shots to the head. Syth tries a running clothesline but finds himself on the arena floor after some clever work by Red, pulling down the top rope.)
Matthew Boon: Some good awareness from Red turns this match around.
(Red poses to the crowd and gets cheers. He attempts an Asai moonsault but Syth rolls out of the way. Syth rises to his feet and pulls something out of his trolley of weapons, A barbed wire wrapped 2X4. As Red stands Syth Swings the 2X4 at him but Red ducks the weapon and delivers a Mule Kick to the chin of Syth.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: What a kick!
(Syth is lying battered on the floor as Bad Boy Red takes a walk around the ring to regain his breath. Syth stands, and gets out a Trash Can. As Red walks near Syth Pounces and smacks the Trash Can over Red’s head. Syth arrogantly covers.)
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Kick Out
(Syth picks up Red and applies a Bearhug. After 5 seconds of pain Syth Drives the back of Red into the turnbuckle. Red collapses to the floor holding his back in agony. Syth, now working on the back of Red lifts him up and delivers a Spinebuster. Syth goes under the ring and pulls out chair and hits BBR’s back with it.)
Matthew Boon: Smart wrestling from Syth, Red is in trouble.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Imagine the pain on that Bad to the Bone back of his!
(Syth drops the chair, goes under the apron and pulls out a table. He slides it into the ring and sends Red following it. Syth slides into the ring and sets up the table. Red finally gets to his feet, as Syth tries for a right but he blocks it. Syth receives some quick punches to his head but counters with a Low Blow kick and a DDT. The crowd boos which is replied by a Finger taunt to the crowd. Syth lifts BBR to his feet and sets him up for a Powerbomb. The crowd start a “Syth sucks” chant.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: These fans don’t know what there thinking right now.
(Syth lifts Bad Boy up on his shoulders but Red counters flipping through his legs and pinning Syth.)
Matthew Boon: We got a new Hardcore champ! No. Kickout on two!
(Syth powerfully kicks out sending Red rolling backwards under the table.)
BBR: Come get me Syth!
(Syth chases after BBR and grabs him leaning over the table. Red clubs his neck a few times and climbs the top rope. He leaps with an elbow drop sending himself through the table. Syth poses to the crowd then covers.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: This has gotta be it!
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Kick Out
Matthew Boon: How did he do that!
(Syth squares up to the ref, trash talking him. As BBR sneaks in with the roll up.)
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Matthew Boon: Yes, Bad Boy Red has done it!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits and BBR rolls out of the ring, grabs his belt, and runs backstage leaving Syth fuming in the ring. The crowd cheer the upset victory of BBR.)
Shawn Finkle: And the winner, and new hardcore champion, Bad Boy urghh.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Bad Boy urghh, is he new?
(Syth Low Blows Finkle and an elbow smash to the announcer’s head. He then hits Finkle with Episode One, leaving Finkle battered on the mat.)
Matthew Boon: What a bad looser Syth is!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits and Syth walks backstage with boos from the crowd.)
Yeah, just what Ant said, and next time you could possibly use guys like Jericho, Rock or Kane, as it helps us to read the match, and I feel it may be a little easier for you to write it.
Well, the actually wrestling and in-ring action was good, all it needs is to be lengthened.
Take a look at some of the other matches, we don't use real commentators, we just say it as though we are the commentator. Occasionally we'll have a quote from King or whatever, but that's just for fun.
Overall good, but leave out the commentator's and make it a little longer.
Take a look at some of the other matches, we don't use real commentators, we just say it as though we are the commentator. Occasionally we'll have a quote from King or whatever, but that's just for fun.
Overall good, but leave out the commentator's and make it a little longer.
A bit short. I'm no expert but it needs a bit of work.
This is the first ever Hardcore match I've done so I'm not too sure about it. How do you think it is?
A bit of background, Syth is an experienced hardcore wrestler like Raven and is fighting his first match in he new FCW. Syth is also an unestablished heel. BBR is an alround wrestler with a few highflying moves, and is an established face. BBR has never wrestled a hardcore match before. The Hardcore title is currently vacant.
FCW Slaughter
Hardcore Title Match
BBR V. Syth
Shawn Finkle: The following match is scheduled for 1 fall and is for the FCW Hardcore title. Introducing first, from Cameron North Carolina, weighing in at 310 lbs... Syth!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits. The crowd boos Syth as he walks out onto the stage with a shopping trolley full of weapons. He poses and then walks down the ramp to the ring while talking trash to the fans. Syth slides into the ring.)
Shawn Finkle: And weighing in at 215lbs, from Detroit Michigan... Bad Boy Red!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits the arena pa as BBR sprints to ringside. He slides into the ring but gets knocked down by a stiff right hand from Syth. Syth stomps away on BBR a good 5 times. He lifts Red to his feet and throws him outside towards the trolley of weapons. Red holds onto the ropes and regains his footing on the apron. The two exchange shots to the head. Syth tries a running clothesline but finds himself on the arena floor after some clever work by Red, pulling down the top rope.)
Matthew Boon: Some good awareness from Red turns this match around.
(Red poses to the crowd and gets cheers. He attempts an Asai moonsault but Syth rolls out of the way. Syth rises to his feet and pulls something out of his trolley of weapons, A barbed wire wrapped 2X4. As Red stands Syth Swings the 2X4 at him but Red ducks the weapon and delivers a Mule Kick to the chin of Syth.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: What a kick!
(Syth is lying battered on the floor as Bad Boy Red takes a walk around the ring to regain his breath. Syth stands, and gets out a Trash Can. As Red walks near Syth Pounces and smacks the Trash Can over Red’s head. Syth arrogantly covers.)
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Kick Out
(Syth picks up Red and applies a Bearhug. After 5 seconds of pain Syth Drives the back of Red into the turnbuckle. Red collapses to the floor holding his back in agony. Syth, now working on the back of Red lifts him up and delivers a Spinebuster. Syth goes under the ring and pulls out chair and hits BBR’s back with it.)
Matthew Boon: Smart wrestling from Syth, Red is in trouble.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Imagine the pain on that Bad to the Bone back of his!
(Syth drops the chair, goes under the apron and pulls out a table. He slides it into the ring and sends Red following it. Syth slides into the ring and sets up the table. Red finally gets to his feet, as Syth tries for a right but he blocks it. Syth receives some quick punches to his head but counters with a Low Blow kick and a DDT. The crowd boos which is replied by a Finger taunt to the crowd. Syth lifts BBR to his feet and sets him up for a Powerbomb. The crowd start a “Syth sucks” chant.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: These fans don’t know what there thinking right now.
(Syth lifts Bad Boy up on his shoulders but Red counters flipping through his legs and pinning Syth.)
Matthew Boon: We got a new Hardcore champ! No. Kickout on two!
(Syth powerfully kicks out sending Red rolling backwards under the table.)
BBR: Come get me Syth!
(Syth chases after BBR and grabs him leaning over the table. Red clubs his neck a few times and climbs the top rope. He leaps with an elbow drop sending himself through the table. Syth poses to the crowd then covers.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: This has gotta be it!
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Kick Out
Matthew Boon: How did he do that!
(Syth squares up to the ref, trash talking him. As BBR sneaks in with the roll up.)
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Matthew Boon: Yes, Bad Boy Red has done it!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits and BBR rolls out of the ring, grabs his belt, and runs backstage leaving Syth fuming in the ring. The crowd cheer the upset victory of BBR.)
Shawn Finkle: And the winner, and new hardcore champion, Bad Boy urghh.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Bad Boy urghh, is he new?
(Syth Low Blows Finkle and an elbow smash to the announcer’s head. He then hits Finkle with Episode One, leaving Finkle battered on the mat.)
Matthew Boon: What a bad looser Syth is!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits and Syth walks backstage with boos from the crowd.)
A bit of background, Syth is an experienced hardcore wrestler like Raven and is fighting his first match in he new FCW. Syth is also an unestablished heel. BBR is an alround wrestler with a few highflying moves, and is an established face. BBR has never wrestled a hardcore match before. The Hardcore title is currently vacant.
FCW Slaughter
Hardcore Title Match
BBR V. Syth
Shawn Finkle: The following match is scheduled for 1 fall and is for the FCW Hardcore title. Introducing first, from Cameron North Carolina, weighing in at 310 lbs... Syth!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits. The crowd boos Syth as he walks out onto the stage with a shopping trolley full of weapons. He poses and then walks down the ramp to the ring while talking trash to the fans. Syth slides into the ring.)
Shawn Finkle: And weighing in at 215lbs, from Detroit Michigan... Bad Boy Red!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits the arena pa as BBR sprints to ringside. He slides into the ring but gets knocked down by a stiff right hand from Syth. Syth stomps away on BBR a good 5 times. He lifts Red to his feet and throws him outside towards the trolley of weapons. Red holds onto the ropes and regains his footing on the apron. The two exchange shots to the head. Syth tries a running clothesline but finds himself on the arena floor after some clever work by Red, pulling down the top rope.)
Matthew Boon: Some good awareness from Red turns this match around.
(Red poses to the crowd and gets cheers. He attempts an Asai moonsault but Syth rolls out of the way. Syth rises to his feet and pulls something out of his trolley of weapons, A barbed wire wrapped 2X4. As Red stands Syth Swings the 2X4 at him but Red ducks the weapon and delivers a Mule Kick to the chin of Syth.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: What a kick!
(Syth is lying battered on the floor as Bad Boy Red takes a walk around the ring to regain his breath. Syth stands, and gets out a Trash Can. As Red walks near Syth Pounces and smacks the Trash Can over Red’s head. Syth arrogantly covers.)
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Kick Out
(Syth picks up Red and applies a Bearhug. After 5 seconds of pain Syth Drives the back of Red into the turnbuckle. Red collapses to the floor holding his back in agony. Syth, now working on the back of Red lifts him up and delivers a Spinebuster. Syth goes under the ring and pulls out chair and hits BBR’s back with it.)
Matthew Boon: Smart wrestling from Syth, Red is in trouble.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Imagine the pain on that Bad to the Bone back of his!
(Syth drops the chair, goes under the apron and pulls out a table. He slides it into the ring and sends Red following it. Syth slides into the ring and sets up the table. Red finally gets to his feet, as Syth tries for a right but he blocks it. Syth receives some quick punches to his head but counters with a Low Blow kick and a DDT. The crowd boos which is replied by a Finger taunt to the crowd. Syth lifts BBR to his feet and sets him up for a Powerbomb. The crowd start a “Syth sucks” chant.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: These fans don’t know what there thinking right now.
(Syth lifts Bad Boy up on his shoulders but Red counters flipping through his legs and pinning Syth.)
Matthew Boon: We got a new Hardcore champ! No. Kickout on two!
(Syth powerfully kicks out sending Red rolling backwards under the table.)
BBR: Come get me Syth!
(Syth chases after BBR and grabs him leaning over the table. Red clubs his neck a few times and climbs the top rope. He leaps with an elbow drop sending himself through the table. Syth poses to the crowd then covers.)
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: This has gotta be it!
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2...
Kick Out
Matthew Boon: How did he do that!
(Syth squares up to the ref, trash talking him. As BBR sneaks in with the roll up.)
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3...
Matthew Boon: Yes, Bad Boy Red has done it!
(Never Gonna Stop me hits and BBR rolls out of the ring, grabs his belt, and runs backstage leaving Syth fuming in the ring. The crowd cheer the upset victory of BBR.)
Shawn Finkle: And the winner, and new hardcore champion, Bad Boy urghh.
Chris ‘Killer’ Newton: Bad Boy urghh, is he new?
(Syth Low Blows Finkle and an elbow smash to the announcer’s head. He then hits Finkle with Episode One, leaving Finkle battered on the mat.)
Matthew Boon: What a bad looser Syth is!
(Dead Bodies Everywhere hits and Syth walks backstage with boos from the crowd.)