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"The camera is facing the door from inside the house as it suddenly bursts open and only a large machete is visible to the camera. The camera shot changes to a first person own-eye view of the mysterious machete carrier as he walks up the stairs, only arms, machete and what's in front of him is visible. The machete holder walks into the bathroom and the shots changes to within the shower, the mans shadow visible. The curtain is ripped off and close up of the machete takes place. The next shot is in an instant as you see the woman’s back and machete piercing straight through it. Keeping the same shot the victim falls to the floor and the camera swerves to the floor, to the victims face and zooms in. The shot changes to the killers back who disappears into the dark corridor."
Hopefully that has showed in detail what I’m on about.
Thanks for reading
RiCkOsS
Saying that though, I do a lot of storyboarding. I don't try and make it atmospheric, I think... I'm not really sure what I'm trying to do, but it just works anyway, so I'm fine with it. As long as it doesn't take itself too seriously.
Only one thing though, in films you rarely see a zoom shot. Usually the camera is moved closer to the object instead, either on tracks or using a steady-cam. Some directors make great use of camera movement, turning it into an artform. Nice post though, you're entirely right.
Nicely done. :D
"The camera is facing the door from inside the house as it suddenly bursts open and only a large machete is visible to the camera. The camera shot changes to a first person own-eye view of the mysterious machete carrier as he walks up the stairs, only arms, machete and what's in front of him is visible. The machete holder walks into the bathroom and the shots changes to within the shower, the mans shadow visible. The curtain is ripped off and close up of the machete takes place. The next shot is in an instant as you see the woman’s back and machete piercing straight through it. Keeping the same shot the victim falls to the floor and the camera swerves to the floor, to the victims face and zooms in. The shot changes to the killers back who disappears into the dark corridor."
Hopefully that has showed in detail what I’m on about.
Thanks for reading
RiCkOsS