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11th August 1999
Claire. Look what you made me do.
It was all perfect, what went wrong? We were great together, always happy, holding hands and sharing each others lives with joy. Those were the best moments of my life, how can you turn your back on them?
I guess it might have been when I told you about my powers. You never really could accept that I could move planets. I showed you, you saw me move the moon to part the waves. You said I was delusional, that I should get help. You were scared, I understood that, but then you started making excuses to be away from me.
At first you would tell me you were working extra hours. I admit I was suspicious. Perhaps I shouldn’t have followed you, but I did and you lied to me. I saw you in that building, through the window. You were with someone else. How could you? Every time I tried to ask you about it you would shout at me, you still thought I needed help, but it was you that needed it. You eclipsed my heart, you made my world dark.
So that’s why I’m showing you one last time. You gave me darkness, so now I give it back to you and to everyone else. Now your world will be in darkness too.
And it’s all your fault, Claire.
Claire. Look what you made me do.
It was all perfect, what went wrong? We were great together, always happy, holding hands and sharing each others lives with joy. Those were the best moments of my life, how can you turn your back on them?
I guess it might have been when I told you about my powers. You never really could accept that I could move planets. I showed you, you saw me move the moon to part the waves. You said I was delusional, that I should get help. You were scared, I understood that, but then you started making excuses to be away from me.
At first you would tell me you were working extra hours. I admit I was suspicious. Perhaps I shouldn’t have followed you, but I did and you lied to me. I saw you in that building, through the window. You were with someone else. How could you? Every time I tried to ask you about it you would shout at me, you still thought I needed help, but it was you that needed it. You eclipsed my heart, you made my world dark.
So that’s why I’m showing you one last time. You gave me darkness, so now I give it back to you and to everyone else. Now your world will be in darkness too.
And it’s all your fault, Claire.
Ladybird wrote:
> Did he, like, kill her? I keep imagining he pulled an OJ Simpson
> on her.
>
> Intriguing... :)
Surely he simply assumed that he pulled the moon to eclipse the sun, yet in reality he killed the one he loved, creating his demented illusion that the world had become a dark, twisted nightmare. (Maybe jail?)
... Or OJ Simpson works too.
> Did he, like, kill her? I keep imagining he pulled an OJ Simpson
> on her.
>
> Intriguing... :)
Surely he simply assumed that he pulled the moon to eclipse the sun, yet in reality he killed the one he loved, creating his demented illusion that the world had become a dark, twisted nightmare. (Maybe jail?)
... Or OJ Simpson works too.
pb wrote:
> Heh, no. Just a story.
Good story then.
> Heh, no. Just a story.
Good story then.
Heh, no. Just a story.
Thats quite worrying. I take it that not a true story?
Did he, like, kill her? I keep imagining he pulled an OJ Simpson on her.
Intriguing... :)
Intriguing... :)
11th August 1999
Claire. Look what you made me do.
It was all perfect, what went wrong? We were great together, always happy, holding hands and sharing each others lives with joy. Those were the best moments of my life, how can you turn your back on them?
I guess it might have been when I told you about my powers. You never really could accept that I could move planets. I showed you, you saw me move the moon to part the waves. You said I was delusional, that I should get help. You were scared, I understood that, but then you started making excuses to be away from me.
At first you would tell me you were working extra hours. I admit I was suspicious. Perhaps I shouldn’t have followed you, but I did and you lied to me. I saw you in that building, through the window. You were with someone else. How could you? Every time I tried to ask you about it you would shout at me, you still thought I needed help, but it was you that needed it. You eclipsed my heart, you made my world dark.
So that’s why I’m showing you one last time. You gave me darkness, so now I give it back to you and to everyone else. Now your world will be in darkness too.
And it’s all your fault, Claire.
Claire. Look what you made me do.
It was all perfect, what went wrong? We were great together, always happy, holding hands and sharing each others lives with joy. Those were the best moments of my life, how can you turn your back on them?
I guess it might have been when I told you about my powers. You never really could accept that I could move planets. I showed you, you saw me move the moon to part the waves. You said I was delusional, that I should get help. You were scared, I understood that, but then you started making excuses to be away from me.
At first you would tell me you were working extra hours. I admit I was suspicious. Perhaps I shouldn’t have followed you, but I did and you lied to me. I saw you in that building, through the window. You were with someone else. How could you? Every time I tried to ask you about it you would shout at me, you still thought I needed help, but it was you that needed it. You eclipsed my heart, you made my world dark.
So that’s why I’m showing you one last time. You gave me darkness, so now I give it back to you and to everyone else. Now your world will be in darkness too.
And it’s all your fault, Claire.