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This is my match to show off my match wreiting skills. It does not affect anything going on in the WWF Forum.
Ladies and Gentleman the next match will be between Chris Benoit and Rhyno.
Chris Benoit comes out to no response from the crowd because there isn't one. Rhyno does the same.
Benoit and Rhyno lock up in the centre of the ring. Benoit turns it into a side head lock but Rhyno counters and pushes him into the ropes. Rhyno goes for the clothesline but Benoit ducks and performs a German suplex, and another one before Rhyno escapes.
This took a lot out of Rhyno. Benoit pulls him to his feet and hits a belly to belly suplex. Rhyno lands awkwardly on his left leg and Benoit spots this and stamps on his left knee. Rhyno slowly gets to his feet and hits Benoit with a rising clothesline.
Benoit gets straigh back to his feet and dropkicks Rhyno's knee. Rhyno clutches his knee in pain. Benoit seizes his oppurtunity with a sharpshooter. Rhyno is screaming in agony. Will he tap?
No he's too near the ropes and Benoit has to break the hold. Rhyno gets to his feet and starts punching Benoit's face before hitting a body slam. Rhyno's still clutching his leg while he allows Benoit to get to his feet. However he still has the strength to whip him into the ropes.
Spinebuster to Benoit. Rhyno backs up and beckons Benoit to get to his feet. When he does he runs at him for the Gore.
Benoit dodges and Rhyno goes flying over the ropes and into the announcers table. He must be out cold. Benoit climbs the turnbuckle. What's he doing?
Diving headbutt! But somehow Rhyno got out of his way. Both are lying on the floor seemingly lifeless.
The referee starts his count. 1..2..3..4..5..6..7 Rhyno starts to get to his feet 8.. he picks up Benoit 9.. and rolls him back into the ring to end the count. He drags Benoit to his feet and whips him into the ropes.
Clothesline. No, Benoit's reversed it into the crippler crossface. Rhyno must tap... and he does.
Ladies and getleman your winner... Chris Benoit.
What do you think?
Ladies and Gentleman the next match will be between Chris Benoit and Rhyno.
Chris Benoit comes out to no response from the crowd because there isn't one. Rhyno does the same.
Benoit and Rhyno lock up in the centre of the ring. Benoit turns it into a side head lock but Rhyno counters and pushes him into the ropes. Rhyno goes for the clothesline but Benoit ducks and performs a German suplex, and another one before Rhyno escapes.
This took a lot out of Rhyno. Benoit pulls him to his feet and hits a belly to belly suplex. Rhyno lands awkwardly on his left leg and Benoit spots this and stamps on his left knee. Rhyno slowly gets to his feet and hits Benoit with a rising clothesline.
Benoit gets straigh back to his feet and dropkicks Rhyno's knee. Rhyno clutches his knee in pain. Benoit seizes his oppurtunity with a sharpshooter. Rhyno is screaming in agony. Will he tap?
No he's too near the ropes and Benoit has to break the hold. Rhyno gets to his feet and starts punching Benoit's face before hitting a body slam. Rhyno's still clutching his leg while he allows Benoit to get to his feet. However he still has the strength to whip him into the ropes.
Spinebuster to Benoit. Rhyno backs up and beckons Benoit to get to his feet. When he does he runs at him for the Gore.
Benoit dodges and Rhyno goes flying over the ropes and into the announcers table. He must be out cold. Benoit climbs the turnbuckle. What's he doing?
Diving headbutt! But somehow Rhyno got out of his way. Both are lying on the floor seemingly lifeless.
The referee starts his count. 1..2..3..4..5..6..7 Rhyno starts to get to his feet 8.. he picks up Benoit 9.. and rolls him back into the ring to end the count. He drags Benoit to his feet and whips him into the ropes.
Clothesline. No, Benoit's reversed it into the crippler crossface. Rhyno must tap... and he does.
Ladies and getleman your winner... Chris Benoit.
What do you think?
Not bad for a first attempt. See what GP said and you could be a great writer.
The in-ring action was good, just take Grandprix's advice and you'll be a great writer.
Not bad, my first match will be written next week, if Scott gets me one, though i have asked him nicely.
Perhaps make it longer, make the paragraphs bigger and build the anticipation. It is sort of like a glorified commentary.
Thas was quite a good match for your fist attempt. I htink it could have been a little longer though but well done.
This is my match to show off my match wreiting skills. It does not affect anything going on in the WWF Forum.
Ladies and Gentleman the next match will be between Chris Benoit and Rhyno.
Chris Benoit comes out to no response from the crowd because there isn't one. Rhyno does the same.
Benoit and Rhyno lock up in the centre of the ring. Benoit turns it into a side head lock but Rhyno counters and pushes him into the ropes. Rhyno goes for the clothesline but Benoit ducks and performs a German suplex, and another one before Rhyno escapes.
This took a lot out of Rhyno. Benoit pulls him to his feet and hits a belly to belly suplex. Rhyno lands awkwardly on his left leg and Benoit spots this and stamps on his left knee. Rhyno slowly gets to his feet and hits Benoit with a rising clothesline.
Benoit gets straigh back to his feet and dropkicks Rhyno's knee. Rhyno clutches his knee in pain. Benoit seizes his oppurtunity with a sharpshooter. Rhyno is screaming in agony. Will he tap?
No he's too near the ropes and Benoit has to break the hold. Rhyno gets to his feet and starts punching Benoit's face before hitting a body slam. Rhyno's still clutching his leg while he allows Benoit to get to his feet. However he still has the strength to whip him into the ropes.
Spinebuster to Benoit. Rhyno backs up and beckons Benoit to get to his feet. When he does he runs at him for the Gore.
Benoit dodges and Rhyno goes flying over the ropes and into the announcers table. He must be out cold. Benoit climbs the turnbuckle. What's he doing?
Diving headbutt! But somehow Rhyno got out of his way. Both are lying on the floor seemingly lifeless.
The referee starts his count. 1..2..3..4..5..6..7 Rhyno starts to get to his feet 8.. he picks up Benoit 9.. and rolls him back into the ring to end the count. He drags Benoit to his feet and whips him into the ropes.
Clothesline. No, Benoit's reversed it into the crippler crossface. Rhyno must tap... and he does.
Ladies and getleman your winner... Chris Benoit.
What do you think?
Ladies and Gentleman the next match will be between Chris Benoit and Rhyno.
Chris Benoit comes out to no response from the crowd because there isn't one. Rhyno does the same.
Benoit and Rhyno lock up in the centre of the ring. Benoit turns it into a side head lock but Rhyno counters and pushes him into the ropes. Rhyno goes for the clothesline but Benoit ducks and performs a German suplex, and another one before Rhyno escapes.
This took a lot out of Rhyno. Benoit pulls him to his feet and hits a belly to belly suplex. Rhyno lands awkwardly on his left leg and Benoit spots this and stamps on his left knee. Rhyno slowly gets to his feet and hits Benoit with a rising clothesline.
Benoit gets straigh back to his feet and dropkicks Rhyno's knee. Rhyno clutches his knee in pain. Benoit seizes his oppurtunity with a sharpshooter. Rhyno is screaming in agony. Will he tap?
No he's too near the ropes and Benoit has to break the hold. Rhyno gets to his feet and starts punching Benoit's face before hitting a body slam. Rhyno's still clutching his leg while he allows Benoit to get to his feet. However he still has the strength to whip him into the ropes.
Spinebuster to Benoit. Rhyno backs up and beckons Benoit to get to his feet. When he does he runs at him for the Gore.
Benoit dodges and Rhyno goes flying over the ropes and into the announcers table. He must be out cold. Benoit climbs the turnbuckle. What's he doing?
Diving headbutt! But somehow Rhyno got out of his way. Both are lying on the floor seemingly lifeless.
The referee starts his count. 1..2..3..4..5..6..7 Rhyno starts to get to his feet 8.. he picks up Benoit 9.. and rolls him back into the ring to end the count. He drags Benoit to his feet and whips him into the ropes.
Clothesline. No, Benoit's reversed it into the crippler crossface. Rhyno must tap... and he does.
Ladies and getleman your winner... Chris Benoit.
What do you think?