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This is the story based on the game idea I posted a while back, It dosn't stick to the same story of the game but hopefully those who liked the idea will also like this. I decided the game will be called "For Truth and Revenge"
It was a cold dark morning, a dark figure stood by the bus shelter waiting for the rain to ease, suddenly a tall man apeared from the shadows and removed a gun from his pocket and began to demand money from the figure, after he had took money he struck the figure with the handle of his gun and began to run towards the bridge.
Chris Jenkins was sitting in his patrol car, it was his first day and this was just the begining. Along with his partner Sam he headed of in pursuit, Chris sneaked slowly behind the man while Sam attended the victim, The man was busy counting money and was taken totally by surprise. "You are under arrest" Chris said as he slammed the man against the wall, he cuffed him and then threw him to the ground.
They arrived back at the station and went through all the pointless paperwork that lets them lock the man up and wait for a trial date. Chris sat back down and stared at the photo, the only item in his locker. It was a picture of a man and a woman and a young boy. He began to dream, back to that night, back to when Chris was seven and the night that started all this off.
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It was a warm summer night, Chris and his father had just put the finishing touches on a tree house and while Chris played his father went inside to help his mother prepare the meal.As he sat playing he noticed three men in suits walk up the drive and enter the house, from where he sat he could see clearly into the kitchen. He watched in horror as one of the men opened fire and emptied a full clip into both of his parents.
He lay there in the tree house mortified by what he had witnessed, it took him a few hours to finally pluck up the courage to climb down the ladder and run down the street. He arrived at a large house, the house belonged to Doug Benedict. Doug was his fathers old partner and a very close family friend who had recently retired from the C.I.A. Chris told Doug the story and going on Dougs advice Chris promises to keep quiet as these aren't the people to cross, they are powerful and can make your life very very difficult.
Life after this was hard for Chris, Doug became very ill and passed away. His last words to Chris were "I always treated you as a son but follow your dream and take revenge. Give them one from me......."
With these words Chris knew the only way to get revenge was to find out the truth, he joined the force at the earliest chance and this is where we join him.
************************
"Jenkins, time to get back on the streets." Sam shouted. Chris picked up his gun and gently placed it in his holster. They hit the streets in the car looking for more law breakers.
Things continued along these lines for a few years then one day Chris and Sam were responding to an anrmed robery, Sam got caught in the cross fire and was killed instantly, after this incident the Police Chief suggested to Chris to go for promotion and branch out into another area of the force.
Chris put in various applications and was accepted for them all so he now faced the decision, the decision he had waited some time for, to finally be that one step closer to getting his revenge.
He finally decided on choosing to join the FBI as a field agent and attempt to work his way up the ladder, it took him four years to gain promotion high enough up to find out top secret information required in his fight for the truth and revenge. As he searched through the records looking for something, anything about his family he began to find out things he had never bargained on finding.
Doug Benedict had a file in the box, It was a large folder filled with pictures and information about his past from a young age. The last article was the one which caught his eye, it was a memo from a Mr Joe Thompson it read.
Tomorrow will be the day, You and another agent Mr Stevens will enter the house and proceed with the injection as planned.
It was dated the day before his death, Why Doug? he thought he couldn't piece it all together, first his parents then Doug, what was going on? As he searched deeper into the box more records and files caught his attention. It appears Doug and his father were onto something big at one point in their careers, something to do with Joe Thompson and the death of White house official. It appears this is why his father and mother were killed and also why Doug was killed, they knew too much and paid the ultimate price,life.
Chris needed more, more proof as to who or what was behind it all, why the white house official and why things were becoming so strange. He needed to get into Thompsons office and find out the truth, he hit the fire alarm and hid down low, he waited a while and then made his way up the west stairs and into Thompsons office. He searched high and low but couldn't find anything that even ressembled what he was looking for, it was then that he noticed a small safe key in the back of the desk, it was for the safe in the evidence room he pressumed and he was right, he took the contents and made his way out the rear entrance of the building and went home.
At home he found out the truth. Mr Thompson was planning to run for President in an election but had a past which could haunt him, he made the CIA delete his past and give him a new identity, he was born Steven, Steven Jenkins. It was his uncle, he killed his own brother and nobody knew, nobody except Doug. One of the White house officials caught Doug looking through confidential files and accepted a bribe to keep hush, but he didn't keep silent and he had to be taken out of the equation as his proof to what happened cost Thompson his chance to become the President. It appears his father was giving out the truth to CIA officials as to what exactly happened, this is why he was killed.
Sweat poured down his face, Chris couldn't take much more of the pain, the pain which had cost him his family and closest friend. He needed revenge, He picked up the folder and his Beretta and slotted it into his holster and made his way to his car. He arrived at the building and made his way to Thompsons office, he threw the door open and tossed the folder onto the table just as Thompson went to pick it up Chris aimed at his head and discharged three bullets killing him instantly. Chris put his badge on the table and left with a calm look apon his face.
It was over for now, he had taken revenge and no longer had to live with the fear of not knowing what had happened and for what reasons. He started the engine of his car and sped of down the road. This chapter in his life was over but the book isn't closed, it is far from the end.
It was a cold dark morning, a dark figure stood by the bus shelter waiting for the rain to ease, suddenly a tall man apeared from the shadows and removed a gun from his pocket and began to demand money from the figure, after he had took money he struck the figure with the handle of his gun and began to run towards the bridge.
Chris Jenkins was sitting in his patrol car, it was his first day and this was just the begining. Along with his partner Sam he headed of in pursuit, Chris sneaked slowly behind the man while Sam attended the victim, The man was busy counting money and was taken totally by surprise. "You are under arrest" Chris said as he slammed the man against the wall, he cuffed him and then threw him to the ground.
They arrived back at the station and went through all the pointless paperwork that lets them lock the man up and wait for a trial date. Chris sat back down and stared at the photo, the only item in his locker. It was a picture of a man and a woman and a young boy. He began to dream, back to that night, back to when Chris was seven and the night that started all this off.
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It was a warm summer night, Chris and his father had just put the finishing touches on a tree house and while Chris played his father went inside to help his mother prepare the meal.As he sat playing he noticed three men in suits walk up the drive and enter the house, from where he sat he could see clearly into the kitchen. He watched in horror as one of the men opened fire and emptied a full clip into both of his parents.
He lay there in the tree house mortified by what he had witnessed, it took him a few hours to finally pluck up the courage to climb down the ladder and run down the street. He arrived at a large house, the house belonged to Doug Benedict. Doug was his fathers old partner and a very close family friend who had recently retired from the C.I.A. Chris told Doug the story and going on Dougs advice Chris promises to keep quiet as these aren't the people to cross, they are powerful and can make your life very very difficult.
Life after this was hard for Chris, Doug became very ill and passed away. His last words to Chris were "I always treated you as a son but follow your dream and take revenge. Give them one from me......."
With these words Chris knew the only way to get revenge was to find out the truth, he joined the force at the earliest chance and this is where we join him.
************************
"Jenkins, time to get back on the streets." Sam shouted. Chris picked up his gun and gently placed it in his holster. They hit the streets in the car looking for more law breakers.
Things continued along these lines for a few years then one day Chris and Sam were responding to an anrmed robery, Sam got caught in the cross fire and was killed instantly, after this incident the Police Chief suggested to Chris to go for promotion and branch out into another area of the force.
Chris put in various applications and was accepted for them all so he now faced the decision, the decision he had waited some time for, to finally be that one step closer to getting his revenge.
He finally decided on choosing to join the FBI as a field agent and attempt to work his way up the ladder, it took him four years to gain promotion high enough up to find out top secret information required in his fight for the truth and revenge. As he searched through the records looking for something, anything about his family he began to find out things he had never bargained on finding.
Doug Benedict had a file in the box, It was a large folder filled with pictures and information about his past from a young age. The last article was the one which caught his eye, it was a memo from a Mr Joe Thompson it read.
Tomorrow will be the day, You and another agent Mr Stevens will enter the house and proceed with the injection as planned.
It was dated the day before his death, Why Doug? he thought he couldn't piece it all together, first his parents then Doug, what was going on? As he searched deeper into the box more records and files caught his attention. It appears Doug and his father were onto something big at one point in their careers, something to do with Joe Thompson and the death of White house official. It appears this is why his father and mother were killed and also why Doug was killed, they knew too much and paid the ultimate price,life.
Chris needed more, more proof as to who or what was behind it all, why the white house official and why things were becoming so strange. He needed to get into Thompsons office and find out the truth, he hit the fire alarm and hid down low, he waited a while and then made his way up the west stairs and into Thompsons office. He searched high and low but couldn't find anything that even ressembled what he was looking for, it was then that he noticed a small safe key in the back of the desk, it was for the safe in the evidence room he pressumed and he was right, he took the contents and made his way out the rear entrance of the building and went home.
At home he found out the truth. Mr Thompson was planning to run for President in an election but had a past which could haunt him, he made the CIA delete his past and give him a new identity, he was born Steven, Steven Jenkins. It was his uncle, he killed his own brother and nobody knew, nobody except Doug. One of the White house officials caught Doug looking through confidential files and accepted a bribe to keep hush, but he didn't keep silent and he had to be taken out of the equation as his proof to what happened cost Thompson his chance to become the President. It appears his father was giving out the truth to CIA officials as to what exactly happened, this is why he was killed.
Sweat poured down his face, Chris couldn't take much more of the pain, the pain which had cost him his family and closest friend. He needed revenge, He picked up the folder and his Beretta and slotted it into his holster and made his way to his car. He arrived at the building and made his way to Thompsons office, he threw the door open and tossed the folder onto the table just as Thompson went to pick it up Chris aimed at his head and discharged three bullets killing him instantly. Chris put his badge on the table and left with a calm look apon his face.
It was over for now, he had taken revenge and no longer had to live with the fear of not knowing what had happened and for what reasons. He started the engine of his car and sped of down the road. This chapter in his life was over but the book isn't closed, it is far from the end.
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This is the story based on the game idea I posted a while back, It dosn't stick to the same story of the game but hopefully those who liked the idea will also like this. I decided the game will be called "For Truth and Revenge"
It was a cold dark morning, a dark figure stood by the bus shelter waiting for the rain to ease, suddenly a tall man apeared from the shadows and removed a gun from his pocket and began to demand money from the figure, after he had took money he struck the figure with the handle of his gun and began to run towards the bridge.
Chris Jenkins was sitting in his patrol car, it was his first day and this was just the begining. Along with his partner Sam he headed of in pursuit, Chris sneaked slowly behind the man while Sam attended the victim, The man was busy counting money and was taken totally by surprise. "You are under arrest" Chris said as he slammed the man against the wall, he cuffed him and then threw him to the ground.
They arrived back at the station and went through all the pointless paperwork that lets them lock the man up and wait for a trial date. Chris sat back down and stared at the photo, the only item in his locker. It was a picture of a man and a woman and a young boy. He began to dream, back to that night, back to when Chris was seven and the night that started all this off.
*************************
It was a warm summer night, Chris and his father had just put the finishing touches on a tree house and while Chris played his father went inside to help his mother prepare the meal.As he sat playing he noticed three men in suits walk up the drive and enter the house, from where he sat he could see clearly into the kitchen. He watched in horror as one of the men opened fire and emptied a full clip into both of his parents.
He lay there in the tree house mortified by what he had witnessed, it took him a few hours to finally pluck up the courage to climb down the ladder and run down the street. He arrived at a large house, the house belonged to Doug Benedict. Doug was his fathers old partner and a very close family friend who had recently retired from the C.I.A. Chris told Doug the story and going on Dougs advice Chris promises to keep quiet as these aren't the people to cross, they are powerful and can make your life very very difficult.
Life after this was hard for Chris, Doug became very ill and passed away. His last words to Chris were "I always treated you as a son but follow your dream and take revenge. Give them one from me......."
With these words Chris knew the only way to get revenge was to find out the truth, he joined the force at the earliest chance and this is where we join him.
************************
"Jenkins, time to get back on the streets." Sam shouted. Chris picked up his gun and gently placed it in his holster. They hit the streets in the car looking for more law breakers.
Things continued along these lines for a few years then one day Chris and Sam were responding to an anrmed robery, Sam got caught in the cross fire and was killed instantly, after this incident the Police Chief suggested to Chris to go for promotion and branch out into another area of the force.
Chris put in various applications and was accepted for them all so he now faced the decision, the decision he had waited some time for, to finally be that one step closer to getting his revenge.
He finally decided on choosing to join the FBI as a field agent and attempt to work his way up the ladder, it took him four years to gain promotion high enough up to find out top secret information required in his fight for the truth and revenge. As he searched through the records looking for something, anything about his family he began to find out things he had never bargained on finding.
Doug Benedict had a file in the box, It was a large folder filled with pictures and information about his past from a young age. The last article was the one which caught his eye, it was a memo from a Mr Joe Thompson it read.
Tomorrow will be the day, You and another agent Mr Stevens will enter the house and proceed with the injection as planned.
It was dated the day before his death, Why Doug? he thought he couldn't piece it all together, first his parents then Doug, what was going on? As he searched deeper into the box more records and files caught his attention. It appears Doug and his father were onto something big at one point in their careers, something to do with Joe Thompson and the death of White house official. It appears this is why his father and mother were killed and also why Doug was killed, they knew too much and paid the ultimate price,life.
Chris needed more, more proof as to who or what was behind it all, why the white house official and why things were becoming so strange. He needed to get into Thompsons office and find out the truth, he hit the fire alarm and hid down low, he waited a while and then made his way up the west stairs and into Thompsons office. He searched high and low but couldn't find anything that even ressembled what he was looking for, it was then that he noticed a small safe key in the back of the desk, it was for the safe in the evidence room he pressumed and he was right, he took the contents and made his way out the rear entrance of the building and went home.
At home he found out the truth. Mr Thompson was planning to run for President in an election but had a past which could haunt him, he made the CIA delete his past and give him a new identity, he was born Steven, Steven Jenkins. It was his uncle, he killed his own brother and nobody knew, nobody except Doug. One of the White house officials caught Doug looking through confidential files and accepted a bribe to keep hush, but he didn't keep silent and he had to be taken out of the equation as his proof to what happened cost Thompson his chance to become the President. It appears his father was giving out the truth to CIA officials as to what exactly happened, this is why he was killed.
Sweat poured down his face, Chris couldn't take much more of the pain, the pain which had cost him his family and closest friend. He needed revenge, He picked up the folder and his Beretta and slotted it into his holster and made his way to his car. He arrived at the building and made his way to Thompsons office, he threw the door open and tossed the folder onto the table just as Thompson went to pick it up Chris aimed at his head and discharged three bullets killing him instantly. Chris put his badge on the table and left with a calm look apon his face.
It was over for now, he had taken revenge and no longer had to live with the fear of not knowing what had happened and for what reasons. He started the engine of his car and sped of down the road. This chapter in his life was over but the book isn't closed, it is far from the end.
It was a cold dark morning, a dark figure stood by the bus shelter waiting for the rain to ease, suddenly a tall man apeared from the shadows and removed a gun from his pocket and began to demand money from the figure, after he had took money he struck the figure with the handle of his gun and began to run towards the bridge.
Chris Jenkins was sitting in his patrol car, it was his first day and this was just the begining. Along with his partner Sam he headed of in pursuit, Chris sneaked slowly behind the man while Sam attended the victim, The man was busy counting money and was taken totally by surprise. "You are under arrest" Chris said as he slammed the man against the wall, he cuffed him and then threw him to the ground.
They arrived back at the station and went through all the pointless paperwork that lets them lock the man up and wait for a trial date. Chris sat back down and stared at the photo, the only item in his locker. It was a picture of a man and a woman and a young boy. He began to dream, back to that night, back to when Chris was seven and the night that started all this off.
*************************
It was a warm summer night, Chris and his father had just put the finishing touches on a tree house and while Chris played his father went inside to help his mother prepare the meal.As he sat playing he noticed three men in suits walk up the drive and enter the house, from where he sat he could see clearly into the kitchen. He watched in horror as one of the men opened fire and emptied a full clip into both of his parents.
He lay there in the tree house mortified by what he had witnessed, it took him a few hours to finally pluck up the courage to climb down the ladder and run down the street. He arrived at a large house, the house belonged to Doug Benedict. Doug was his fathers old partner and a very close family friend who had recently retired from the C.I.A. Chris told Doug the story and going on Dougs advice Chris promises to keep quiet as these aren't the people to cross, they are powerful and can make your life very very difficult.
Life after this was hard for Chris, Doug became very ill and passed away. His last words to Chris were "I always treated you as a son but follow your dream and take revenge. Give them one from me......."
With these words Chris knew the only way to get revenge was to find out the truth, he joined the force at the earliest chance and this is where we join him.
************************
"Jenkins, time to get back on the streets." Sam shouted. Chris picked up his gun and gently placed it in his holster. They hit the streets in the car looking for more law breakers.
Things continued along these lines for a few years then one day Chris and Sam were responding to an anrmed robery, Sam got caught in the cross fire and was killed instantly, after this incident the Police Chief suggested to Chris to go for promotion and branch out into another area of the force.
Chris put in various applications and was accepted for them all so he now faced the decision, the decision he had waited some time for, to finally be that one step closer to getting his revenge.
He finally decided on choosing to join the FBI as a field agent and attempt to work his way up the ladder, it took him four years to gain promotion high enough up to find out top secret information required in his fight for the truth and revenge. As he searched through the records looking for something, anything about his family he began to find out things he had never bargained on finding.
Doug Benedict had a file in the box, It was a large folder filled with pictures and information about his past from a young age. The last article was the one which caught his eye, it was a memo from a Mr Joe Thompson it read.
Tomorrow will be the day, You and another agent Mr Stevens will enter the house and proceed with the injection as planned.
It was dated the day before his death, Why Doug? he thought he couldn't piece it all together, first his parents then Doug, what was going on? As he searched deeper into the box more records and files caught his attention. It appears Doug and his father were onto something big at one point in their careers, something to do with Joe Thompson and the death of White house official. It appears this is why his father and mother were killed and also why Doug was killed, they knew too much and paid the ultimate price,life.
Chris needed more, more proof as to who or what was behind it all, why the white house official and why things were becoming so strange. He needed to get into Thompsons office and find out the truth, he hit the fire alarm and hid down low, he waited a while and then made his way up the west stairs and into Thompsons office. He searched high and low but couldn't find anything that even ressembled what he was looking for, it was then that he noticed a small safe key in the back of the desk, it was for the safe in the evidence room he pressumed and he was right, he took the contents and made his way out the rear entrance of the building and went home.
At home he found out the truth. Mr Thompson was planning to run for President in an election but had a past which could haunt him, he made the CIA delete his past and give him a new identity, he was born Steven, Steven Jenkins. It was his uncle, he killed his own brother and nobody knew, nobody except Doug. One of the White house officials caught Doug looking through confidential files and accepted a bribe to keep hush, but he didn't keep silent and he had to be taken out of the equation as his proof to what happened cost Thompson his chance to become the President. It appears his father was giving out the truth to CIA officials as to what exactly happened, this is why he was killed.
Sweat poured down his face, Chris couldn't take much more of the pain, the pain which had cost him his family and closest friend. He needed revenge, He picked up the folder and his Beretta and slotted it into his holster and made his way to his car. He arrived at the building and made his way to Thompsons office, he threw the door open and tossed the folder onto the table just as Thompson went to pick it up Chris aimed at his head and discharged three bullets killing him instantly. Chris put his badge on the table and left with a calm look apon his face.
It was over for now, he had taken revenge and no longer had to live with the fear of not knowing what had happened and for what reasons. He started the engine of his car and sped of down the road. This chapter in his life was over but the book isn't closed, it is far from the end.