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Cheers in advance, ty.

Wow, pb! Thats well good :D

Yeah using a search engine on a possible winning entry must be very trying. Especially in a paid job.

"Oh hi, we're incompetent so we need some user help with finding plagarism"

Uh, no.

How many posts do you submit to the team as GAD worthy? I mean, they've given us a way to show whose work we think is worthy of a GAD, so if we use that it'll make their job easier and no copied reviews are going to get awarded prizes, are they?

I'm sure picking GADs is not a full time job and they don't have time to go through all the potential winners to check for plagerism. I try to help out where I see a good post that deserves GAD (there was one in the Games forum the other day, in fact and plenty of stories). Do you?

I can't even be arsed to play Bingo. Oh noes!

Guess what? I don't need GAD but nor do I want to see them given away to whatever poster has the best copied review of the day.

See if I wanted to win GAD, I'd post something like the Bond films thing I did a few months back.

I'll quite happily poke fun though. But GAD? Why bother when there's too many unplayed and unwatched DVDs and games lying around already?

Well, I guess you could always change it in to a poem:

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Oi, Hedifx, look what I found you wrote this back on Special Resevre, now here's a real GAD candidate:



We were working as staffies on SR
When we met you,
You showed us GAD, we sent it off, then we played around
With BB guns and Notables too
Now five years later on you've bogged off to freeola
Success has been so easy for you
But don't forget it's me who put you where you are now
So we've pinched copys of Halo 2

Chorus :

Don't, don't you want us?
You know I can't believe it when I hear that you won't see us
Don't, don't you want us?
You know I don't believe you when you say that you don't need us
It's much too late to find
You think you'd change your mind
You'd better change it back or we will all be sorry

Don't you want us Tonty? Don't you want us oh
Don't you want us Tonty? Don't you want us oh

I was working as the big dude at SR
That much is true
But even then I knew I'd find a much better place
Either with or without you
The five years we have had have been such good times
I'll bill you for those Halo 2's
But now I think it's time I jumped ship on my own
Cos SR's really in the poo.

(Chorus)

Don't you want us Tonty? Don't you want us oh
Don't you want us Tonty? Don't you want us oh

(Repeat four times and fade)

I didn't even get that far :( However I did spot my name at the top of the list so woo!

DoomBaboon1982 wrote:
> sooooo anyone actually read all that

Sadly, I read up to the part of the Freeola meet :)

* Any similarity to persons living or dead is completely coikidinkyadental we are all floaty farts on the edge of Oblivion.

Bethesda has a lot to answer for.

I thought it was a great twist making me the star of your poem Heddy :D