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The following match is a No1 Contenders battle for the WWF Hardcore Title!!
First up Rhyno’s (Jetster) music hits to a low mixed reaction from the crowd, the man from Detroit Michigan walks down the aisle with a deadly look on his face, the man beast looks pumped up for this one as he enters the ring and psyches him self up for his opponent.
Suddenly Crash’s (Grandprix) music hits and little Elroy comes out to a nice pop and he boldly walks arms a swinging to the ring, the man who allegedly weighs in at over 400 pounds climbs into the squared circle and poses for the crowd, Crash doesn’t seem to be showing any fear here, go Crash!
Rhyno stalks behind Crash as he poses and attacks the younger Holly cousin from behind with fore arm shots to the back of the head which knocks Crash into the ropes, the ropes are the only thing holding Crash up as the merciless Rhyno continues to attack with hard swinging right and lefts dazing young Elroy! The bell rings and the referee finally intervenes breaking up the attack but the damage has been done and Crash falls to the floor, Rhyno gives Crash no time to recuperate and quickly stomps away on him, Rhyno grabs Crash by the neck with both hands and wit great power hoists him up to his feet and leans him against the ropes.
The man beast takes a few steps back staring at his helpless opponent and turns to celebrate to the crowd with his arms in the air, as Rhyno celebrates Crash takes this opportunity to recover and almost instantly darts for the man beast, Crash uses the best strategy he can against someone of Rhyno’s calibre and applies a strong sleeper hold! Rhyno tries to fight back and swings is arms around trying to shake Crash but to no avail, soon Rhyno falls to one knee and the referee raises 1 hand to count a KO, the referee raises another hand and it falls, one more and this is over! The referee raises the hand and in true WWF style it doesn’t go down and Rhyno climbs to his feet with Crash still on his back! He stumbles from the extra weight, (400 pounds don’t ya know) backwards into the ropes and leans against them.
This is dangerous because Crash is now hanging over the edge of the ring, he grips Rhyno tightly but this is weakening him and is causing him to loose consciousness. Slowly Rhyno fades away and Crash is falling ever so more over the ropes and he’s loosing grip! Crash’s feet are over the ropes yet Crash is not, Elroy can’t hold on ay more and his fingers leave red marks on Rhyno’s neck as he slowly slips away, screams of agony are heard as Crash falls!! Crashes feet position cause him to flip right over and land torso first into the ring apron!! Rhyno falls down in the ring his face turned a cold blue as Crash writhers about on the outside in tremendous pain!
The referee reaches an eight count and Crash (Grandprix) rolls back into the ring, Rhyno (Jetster) has also had time to recover but the damage has surely been done to both men, Crash picks Rhyno up by the head and quickly nails some right hand shots to the forehead, Irish whip by Crash, Rhyno bounces vigorously off the ropes and crash swings into another sleeper hold, the arena is suddenly filled with a chorus of booing as the crowd taunt Crash’s un-entertaining style of finishing off Rhyno. This time however Rhyno reverses and sends Crash plummeting into the canvas by lifting him over his head and throwing him down into the canvas back first! Rhyno falls to his knees next to the smallest of the Holly Cousin’s and unleashes a fury of right and left hands, the referee quickly interrupts claiming that they wasn’t open handed.
Rhyno gets in the fact of the ref and Crash staggers to his feet holding his head, maybe those punches weren’t legit, Crash school Boy’s Rhyno 1-2………..Kick out by Rhyno, both men are to their feet and Rhyno attempts a close line which Crash ducks and goes behind and off the ropes, Rhyno turns around and is met by a flying cross body into the cover, 1-2……Kick out by Rhyno who quickly gets to his feet and quickly wraps Crash up and nail a beautiful T-Bone suplex!! Crash is dazed and his eyes are glazed over.
Rhyno doesn’t attempt the cover but instead powers Crash to his feet and throws him into the nearby turnbuckle back first and storm at him and knees his gut! He follows up with some shots to the mid section and then whips him across the ring to the other corner, Crash however is able to automatically try to fight back and uses the acceleration jump top rope, before he is able to turn around though Rhyno is o his case and simply pushes crash off the turnbuckle and sends him all the way down to the outside CRASHING INTO THE CROWD BARRIERS!! Little Elroy landed stomach first, his ribs must be in serious damage now!!
Before Crash is counted out Rhyno descends from the ring and brings him back in, Crash is still holding his stomach from the impact and beating on it throughout this match up, Rhyno whips Crash off the ropes and lifts him up for a spine buster but amazingly Crash uses Rhyno push to flip right over him and nail the most excellent neck breaker!! What a move!! The crowd loved that and cheers the match on, Crash slowly makes a sluggish cover 1-2….kick out at the last possible second by Rhyno. Both men to their feet and begin trading hard knife edge chops which really gets the fans pumped but Crash takes advantage by delivering a hard stiff kick to the stomach and then grabs Rhyno’s head and jumps, he’s going for the TORNADO DDT!! Somehow though Rhyno throws Crash from him and drives him into the mat Rhyno quickly backs up and stalks Crash, we know what’s coming now!
Crash scampers to his feet and Rhyno charges across the ring but Crash scouts it and simply runs out of the way, Rhyno halts and turns to where Crash is now and again makes a feline for him and WHAM GORE, GORE!!! BEAUTIFUL!! Crash flips backwards and onto his head from the impact 1-2……..3!!!!!!!! That’s it, it’s over, Rhyno kicks Crash from the ring and celebrates with the crowd for a hard fought battle of an almost David Vs Goliath encounter.
Congratulations Rhyno (Jetster) Unlucky there Crash (Grandprix) mybe next time, Ryno is now the number one contender for Grandmaster Sexays (Ant) hardcore title.
You can tell that I have wrote this one differently, more detailed so to speak and I did it just to try something new, so tell me does it work better this way? Should I go back to the old, more action orientated matches or should I make it even more detailed with long words that no one will understand? I think maybe the action style is better?
Tell me and be honest, honesty is the best policy.
;-)
Thanks for reading
Andy
First up Rhyno’s (Jetster) music hits to a low mixed reaction from the crowd, the man from Detroit Michigan walks down the aisle with a deadly look on his face, the man beast looks pumped up for this one as he enters the ring and psyches him self up for his opponent.
Suddenly Crash’s (Grandprix) music hits and little Elroy comes out to a nice pop and he boldly walks arms a swinging to the ring, the man who allegedly weighs in at over 400 pounds climbs into the squared circle and poses for the crowd, Crash doesn’t seem to be showing any fear here, go Crash!
Rhyno stalks behind Crash as he poses and attacks the younger Holly cousin from behind with fore arm shots to the back of the head which knocks Crash into the ropes, the ropes are the only thing holding Crash up as the merciless Rhyno continues to attack with hard swinging right and lefts dazing young Elroy! The bell rings and the referee finally intervenes breaking up the attack but the damage has been done and Crash falls to the floor, Rhyno gives Crash no time to recuperate and quickly stomps away on him, Rhyno grabs Crash by the neck with both hands and wit great power hoists him up to his feet and leans him against the ropes.
The man beast takes a few steps back staring at his helpless opponent and turns to celebrate to the crowd with his arms in the air, as Rhyno celebrates Crash takes this opportunity to recover and almost instantly darts for the man beast, Crash uses the best strategy he can against someone of Rhyno’s calibre and applies a strong sleeper hold! Rhyno tries to fight back and swings is arms around trying to shake Crash but to no avail, soon Rhyno falls to one knee and the referee raises 1 hand to count a KO, the referee raises another hand and it falls, one more and this is over! The referee raises the hand and in true WWF style it doesn’t go down and Rhyno climbs to his feet with Crash still on his back! He stumbles from the extra weight, (400 pounds don’t ya know) backwards into the ropes and leans against them.
This is dangerous because Crash is now hanging over the edge of the ring, he grips Rhyno tightly but this is weakening him and is causing him to loose consciousness. Slowly Rhyno fades away and Crash is falling ever so more over the ropes and he’s loosing grip! Crash’s feet are over the ropes yet Crash is not, Elroy can’t hold on ay more and his fingers leave red marks on Rhyno’s neck as he slowly slips away, screams of agony are heard as Crash falls!! Crashes feet position cause him to flip right over and land torso first into the ring apron!! Rhyno falls down in the ring his face turned a cold blue as Crash writhers about on the outside in tremendous pain!
The referee reaches an eight count and Crash (Grandprix) rolls back into the ring, Rhyno (Jetster) has also had time to recover but the damage has surely been done to both men, Crash picks Rhyno up by the head and quickly nails some right hand shots to the forehead, Irish whip by Crash, Rhyno bounces vigorously off the ropes and crash swings into another sleeper hold, the arena is suddenly filled with a chorus of booing as the crowd taunt Crash’s un-entertaining style of finishing off Rhyno. This time however Rhyno reverses and sends Crash plummeting into the canvas by lifting him over his head and throwing him down into the canvas back first! Rhyno falls to his knees next to the smallest of the Holly Cousin’s and unleashes a fury of right and left hands, the referee quickly interrupts claiming that they wasn’t open handed.
Rhyno gets in the fact of the ref and Crash staggers to his feet holding his head, maybe those punches weren’t legit, Crash school Boy’s Rhyno 1-2………..Kick out by Rhyno, both men are to their feet and Rhyno attempts a close line which Crash ducks and goes behind and off the ropes, Rhyno turns around and is met by a flying cross body into the cover, 1-2……Kick out by Rhyno who quickly gets to his feet and quickly wraps Crash up and nail a beautiful T-Bone suplex!! Crash is dazed and his eyes are glazed over.
Rhyno doesn’t attempt the cover but instead powers Crash to his feet and throws him into the nearby turnbuckle back first and storm at him and knees his gut! He follows up with some shots to the mid section and then whips him across the ring to the other corner, Crash however is able to automatically try to fight back and uses the acceleration jump top rope, before he is able to turn around though Rhyno is o his case and simply pushes crash off the turnbuckle and sends him all the way down to the outside CRASHING INTO THE CROWD BARRIERS!! Little Elroy landed stomach first, his ribs must be in serious damage now!!
Before Crash is counted out Rhyno descends from the ring and brings him back in, Crash is still holding his stomach from the impact and beating on it throughout this match up, Rhyno whips Crash off the ropes and lifts him up for a spine buster but amazingly Crash uses Rhyno push to flip right over him and nail the most excellent neck breaker!! What a move!! The crowd loved that and cheers the match on, Crash slowly makes a sluggish cover 1-2….kick out at the last possible second by Rhyno. Both men to their feet and begin trading hard knife edge chops which really gets the fans pumped but Crash takes advantage by delivering a hard stiff kick to the stomach and then grabs Rhyno’s head and jumps, he’s going for the TORNADO DDT!! Somehow though Rhyno throws Crash from him and drives him into the mat Rhyno quickly backs up and stalks Crash, we know what’s coming now!
Crash scampers to his feet and Rhyno charges across the ring but Crash scouts it and simply runs out of the way, Rhyno halts and turns to where Crash is now and again makes a feline for him and WHAM GORE, GORE!!! BEAUTIFUL!! Crash flips backwards and onto his head from the impact 1-2……..3!!!!!!!! That’s it, it’s over, Rhyno kicks Crash from the ring and celebrates with the crowd for a hard fought battle of an almost David Vs Goliath encounter.
Congratulations Rhyno (Jetster) Unlucky there Crash (Grandprix) mybe next time, Ryno is now the number one contender for Grandmaster Sexays (Ant) hardcore title.
You can tell that I have wrote this one differently, more detailed so to speak and I did it just to try something new, so tell me does it work better this way? Should I go back to the old, more action orientated matches or should I make it even more detailed with long words that no one will understand? I think maybe the action style is better?
Tell me and be honest, honesty is the best policy.
;-)
Thanks for reading
Andy
I think I may've told Andy not to make it a hardcore match...
But anyway, another top class match from Starlight there, and he still has a 100% on great matches.
I prefer this style Andy, as Matt said, I can visualise it more. And if you combine some of the action in as well, then you'll have the perfect match.
WWF Forum Wrestling is back on track, well done to Jetster!
Will he beat me to become the first ever triple champion?? No!! :D
But anyway, another top class match from Starlight there, and he still has a 100% on great matches.
I prefer this style Andy, as Matt said, I can visualise it more. And if you combine some of the action in as well, then you'll have the perfect match.
WWF Forum Wrestling is back on track, well done to Jetster!
Will he beat me to become the first ever triple champion?? No!! :D
Thanks people!
For some reason I didn't do it hardcore, not sure why, spur of the moment I suppose, maybe I was saving all the good hardcore action for the Title match, yeah! I'm saving all the good hardcore action for the Title match, my match my rules, nah nah.
:-P
For some reason I didn't do it hardcore, not sure why, spur of the moment I suppose, maybe I was saving all the good hardcore action for the Title match, yeah! I'm saving all the good hardcore action for the Title match, my match my rules, nah nah.
:-P
WHOOOO!!!! I need the hardcore title to become the first ever triple champ. Nice match Andy apart from the lack of hardcore :D
Little Jet wins with big 'ol Rhyno agains big 'ol Grandprix with little Crash... hmmm. Well done on a good match Andy.
Great match. Nice length. Not too short but not too long either. Grandprix did point out it should have been a hardcore match so no counts outs but great anyway. Congrats to Jetster.
Damn, Goliath won this round but Crash will win the war! :D
Just one slight problem. It's a hardcore title No.1 Con match so wouldn't it be a hardcore match? In that case, there would be no countouts.
I like the style. The more descriptive, the more you can visualise what is going on.
Well done Jetster. The victory will be short lived when Crash becomes the greatest Hardcore Champ ever! :D
Just one slight problem. It's a hardcore title No.1 Con match so wouldn't it be a hardcore match? In that case, there would be no countouts.
I like the style. The more descriptive, the more you can visualise what is going on.
Well done Jetster. The victory will be short lived when Crash becomes the greatest Hardcore Champ ever! :D
The following match is a No1 Contenders battle for the WWF Hardcore Title!!
First up Rhyno’s (Jetster) music hits to a low mixed reaction from the crowd, the man from Detroit Michigan walks down the aisle with a deadly look on his face, the man beast looks pumped up for this one as he enters the ring and psyches him self up for his opponent.
Suddenly Crash’s (Grandprix) music hits and little Elroy comes out to a nice pop and he boldly walks arms a swinging to the ring, the man who allegedly weighs in at over 400 pounds climbs into the squared circle and poses for the crowd, Crash doesn’t seem to be showing any fear here, go Crash!
Rhyno stalks behind Crash as he poses and attacks the younger Holly cousin from behind with fore arm shots to the back of the head which knocks Crash into the ropes, the ropes are the only thing holding Crash up as the merciless Rhyno continues to attack with hard swinging right and lefts dazing young Elroy! The bell rings and the referee finally intervenes breaking up the attack but the damage has been done and Crash falls to the floor, Rhyno gives Crash no time to recuperate and quickly stomps away on him, Rhyno grabs Crash by the neck with both hands and wit great power hoists him up to his feet and leans him against the ropes.
The man beast takes a few steps back staring at his helpless opponent and turns to celebrate to the crowd with his arms in the air, as Rhyno celebrates Crash takes this opportunity to recover and almost instantly darts for the man beast, Crash uses the best strategy he can against someone of Rhyno’s calibre and applies a strong sleeper hold! Rhyno tries to fight back and swings is arms around trying to shake Crash but to no avail, soon Rhyno falls to one knee and the referee raises 1 hand to count a KO, the referee raises another hand and it falls, one more and this is over! The referee raises the hand and in true WWF style it doesn’t go down and Rhyno climbs to his feet with Crash still on his back! He stumbles from the extra weight, (400 pounds don’t ya know) backwards into the ropes and leans against them.
This is dangerous because Crash is now hanging over the edge of the ring, he grips Rhyno tightly but this is weakening him and is causing him to loose consciousness. Slowly Rhyno fades away and Crash is falling ever so more over the ropes and he’s loosing grip! Crash’s feet are over the ropes yet Crash is not, Elroy can’t hold on ay more and his fingers leave red marks on Rhyno’s neck as he slowly slips away, screams of agony are heard as Crash falls!! Crashes feet position cause him to flip right over and land torso first into the ring apron!! Rhyno falls down in the ring his face turned a cold blue as Crash writhers about on the outside in tremendous pain!
The referee reaches an eight count and Crash (Grandprix) rolls back into the ring, Rhyno (Jetster) has also had time to recover but the damage has surely been done to both men, Crash picks Rhyno up by the head and quickly nails some right hand shots to the forehead, Irish whip by Crash, Rhyno bounces vigorously off the ropes and crash swings into another sleeper hold, the arena is suddenly filled with a chorus of booing as the crowd taunt Crash’s un-entertaining style of finishing off Rhyno. This time however Rhyno reverses and sends Crash plummeting into the canvas by lifting him over his head and throwing him down into the canvas back first! Rhyno falls to his knees next to the smallest of the Holly Cousin’s and unleashes a fury of right and left hands, the referee quickly interrupts claiming that they wasn’t open handed.
Rhyno gets in the fact of the ref and Crash staggers to his feet holding his head, maybe those punches weren’t legit, Crash school Boy’s Rhyno 1-2………..Kick out by Rhyno, both men are to their feet and Rhyno attempts a close line which Crash ducks and goes behind and off the ropes, Rhyno turns around and is met by a flying cross body into the cover, 1-2……Kick out by Rhyno who quickly gets to his feet and quickly wraps Crash up and nail a beautiful T-Bone suplex!! Crash is dazed and his eyes are glazed over.
Rhyno doesn’t attempt the cover but instead powers Crash to his feet and throws him into the nearby turnbuckle back first and storm at him and knees his gut! He follows up with some shots to the mid section and then whips him across the ring to the other corner, Crash however is able to automatically try to fight back and uses the acceleration jump top rope, before he is able to turn around though Rhyno is o his case and simply pushes crash off the turnbuckle and sends him all the way down to the outside CRASHING INTO THE CROWD BARRIERS!! Little Elroy landed stomach first, his ribs must be in serious damage now!!
Before Crash is counted out Rhyno descends from the ring and brings him back in, Crash is still holding his stomach from the impact and beating on it throughout this match up, Rhyno whips Crash off the ropes and lifts him up for a spine buster but amazingly Crash uses Rhyno push to flip right over him and nail the most excellent neck breaker!! What a move!! The crowd loved that and cheers the match on, Crash slowly makes a sluggish cover 1-2….kick out at the last possible second by Rhyno. Both men to their feet and begin trading hard knife edge chops which really gets the fans pumped but Crash takes advantage by delivering a hard stiff kick to the stomach and then grabs Rhyno’s head and jumps, he’s going for the TORNADO DDT!! Somehow though Rhyno throws Crash from him and drives him into the mat Rhyno quickly backs up and stalks Crash, we know what’s coming now!
Crash scampers to his feet and Rhyno charges across the ring but Crash scouts it and simply runs out of the way, Rhyno halts and turns to where Crash is now and again makes a feline for him and WHAM GORE, GORE!!! BEAUTIFUL!! Crash flips backwards and onto his head from the impact 1-2……..3!!!!!!!! That’s it, it’s over, Rhyno kicks Crash from the ring and celebrates with the crowd for a hard fought battle of an almost David Vs Goliath encounter.
Congratulations Rhyno (Jetster) Unlucky there Crash (Grandprix) mybe next time, Ryno is now the number one contender for Grandmaster Sexays (Ant) hardcore title.
You can tell that I have wrote this one differently, more detailed so to speak and I did it just to try something new, so tell me does it work better this way? Should I go back to the old, more action orientated matches or should I make it even more detailed with long words that no one will understand? I think maybe the action style is better?
Tell me and be honest, honesty is the best policy.
;-)
Thanks for reading
Andy
First up Rhyno’s (Jetster) music hits to a low mixed reaction from the crowd, the man from Detroit Michigan walks down the aisle with a deadly look on his face, the man beast looks pumped up for this one as he enters the ring and psyches him self up for his opponent.
Suddenly Crash’s (Grandprix) music hits and little Elroy comes out to a nice pop and he boldly walks arms a swinging to the ring, the man who allegedly weighs in at over 400 pounds climbs into the squared circle and poses for the crowd, Crash doesn’t seem to be showing any fear here, go Crash!
Rhyno stalks behind Crash as he poses and attacks the younger Holly cousin from behind with fore arm shots to the back of the head which knocks Crash into the ropes, the ropes are the only thing holding Crash up as the merciless Rhyno continues to attack with hard swinging right and lefts dazing young Elroy! The bell rings and the referee finally intervenes breaking up the attack but the damage has been done and Crash falls to the floor, Rhyno gives Crash no time to recuperate and quickly stomps away on him, Rhyno grabs Crash by the neck with both hands and wit great power hoists him up to his feet and leans him against the ropes.
The man beast takes a few steps back staring at his helpless opponent and turns to celebrate to the crowd with his arms in the air, as Rhyno celebrates Crash takes this opportunity to recover and almost instantly darts for the man beast, Crash uses the best strategy he can against someone of Rhyno’s calibre and applies a strong sleeper hold! Rhyno tries to fight back and swings is arms around trying to shake Crash but to no avail, soon Rhyno falls to one knee and the referee raises 1 hand to count a KO, the referee raises another hand and it falls, one more and this is over! The referee raises the hand and in true WWF style it doesn’t go down and Rhyno climbs to his feet with Crash still on his back! He stumbles from the extra weight, (400 pounds don’t ya know) backwards into the ropes and leans against them.
This is dangerous because Crash is now hanging over the edge of the ring, he grips Rhyno tightly but this is weakening him and is causing him to loose consciousness. Slowly Rhyno fades away and Crash is falling ever so more over the ropes and he’s loosing grip! Crash’s feet are over the ropes yet Crash is not, Elroy can’t hold on ay more and his fingers leave red marks on Rhyno’s neck as he slowly slips away, screams of agony are heard as Crash falls!! Crashes feet position cause him to flip right over and land torso first into the ring apron!! Rhyno falls down in the ring his face turned a cold blue as Crash writhers about on the outside in tremendous pain!
The referee reaches an eight count and Crash (Grandprix) rolls back into the ring, Rhyno (Jetster) has also had time to recover but the damage has surely been done to both men, Crash picks Rhyno up by the head and quickly nails some right hand shots to the forehead, Irish whip by Crash, Rhyno bounces vigorously off the ropes and crash swings into another sleeper hold, the arena is suddenly filled with a chorus of booing as the crowd taunt Crash’s un-entertaining style of finishing off Rhyno. This time however Rhyno reverses and sends Crash plummeting into the canvas by lifting him over his head and throwing him down into the canvas back first! Rhyno falls to his knees next to the smallest of the Holly Cousin’s and unleashes a fury of right and left hands, the referee quickly interrupts claiming that they wasn’t open handed.
Rhyno gets in the fact of the ref and Crash staggers to his feet holding his head, maybe those punches weren’t legit, Crash school Boy’s Rhyno 1-2………..Kick out by Rhyno, both men are to their feet and Rhyno attempts a close line which Crash ducks and goes behind and off the ropes, Rhyno turns around and is met by a flying cross body into the cover, 1-2……Kick out by Rhyno who quickly gets to his feet and quickly wraps Crash up and nail a beautiful T-Bone suplex!! Crash is dazed and his eyes are glazed over.
Rhyno doesn’t attempt the cover but instead powers Crash to his feet and throws him into the nearby turnbuckle back first and storm at him and knees his gut! He follows up with some shots to the mid section and then whips him across the ring to the other corner, Crash however is able to automatically try to fight back and uses the acceleration jump top rope, before he is able to turn around though Rhyno is o his case and simply pushes crash off the turnbuckle and sends him all the way down to the outside CRASHING INTO THE CROWD BARRIERS!! Little Elroy landed stomach first, his ribs must be in serious damage now!!
Before Crash is counted out Rhyno descends from the ring and brings him back in, Crash is still holding his stomach from the impact and beating on it throughout this match up, Rhyno whips Crash off the ropes and lifts him up for a spine buster but amazingly Crash uses Rhyno push to flip right over him and nail the most excellent neck breaker!! What a move!! The crowd loved that and cheers the match on, Crash slowly makes a sluggish cover 1-2….kick out at the last possible second by Rhyno. Both men to their feet and begin trading hard knife edge chops which really gets the fans pumped but Crash takes advantage by delivering a hard stiff kick to the stomach and then grabs Rhyno’s head and jumps, he’s going for the TORNADO DDT!! Somehow though Rhyno throws Crash from him and drives him into the mat Rhyno quickly backs up and stalks Crash, we know what’s coming now!
Crash scampers to his feet and Rhyno charges across the ring but Crash scouts it and simply runs out of the way, Rhyno halts and turns to where Crash is now and again makes a feline for him and WHAM GORE, GORE!!! BEAUTIFUL!! Crash flips backwards and onto his head from the impact 1-2……..3!!!!!!!! That’s it, it’s over, Rhyno kicks Crash from the ring and celebrates with the crowd for a hard fought battle of an almost David Vs Goliath encounter.
Congratulations Rhyno (Jetster) Unlucky there Crash (Grandprix) mybe next time, Ryno is now the number one contender for Grandmaster Sexays (Ant) hardcore title.
You can tell that I have wrote this one differently, more detailed so to speak and I did it just to try something new, so tell me does it work better this way? Should I go back to the old, more action orientated matches or should I make it even more detailed with long words that no one will understand? I think maybe the action style is better?
Tell me and be honest, honesty is the best policy.
;-)
Thanks for reading
Andy