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Mon 12/05/03 at 20:07
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Posts: 787
I wrote this last night, without inspiration, it just sort of blurted out via my pen (Eww that sounds filthy *hee hee*)

Your word, the chains that hold me back
Your voice acts as my torture rack
You are the chopping block, executioner and jeering crowd
You are the axe-sharp scream that pierces the cold night air
As the blade of justice is raised up and slammed down.
I am your sacrifice, killed to save the truth
I'm head to toe in black, praying to the roof
I am lined up, cold, and laughed at
Yet I am the only one that knows.
A sharp pain, then nothing, I drift away.
Enlightened.

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Mon 12/05/03 at 20:42
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Posts: 11,875
I think I'll just stick to my guns and say it's crap.


Because it is.
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:31
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"Z will be here soon"
Posts: 7,562
El Blokey wrote:
> I think that you're in the wrong forum.

I love you
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:29
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"no longer El Blokey"
Posts: 4,471
I think that you're in the wrong forum.
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:22
Posts: 4,686
Kyz22 wrote:
> Bizarre is a damn fine word!

Too right. It conveys the feeling of blah blah blah.
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:19
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"He's back"
Posts: 1,411
Blurb wrote:
> Hmm intresting what goes on in your mind

is.
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:15
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"Z will be here soon"
Posts: 7,562
Bizarre is a damn fine word!
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:09
Posts: 4,686
I think I will use my new favourite word.


Bizarre.
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:08
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"Yours or Mine"
Posts: 300
Hmm intresting what goes on in your mind
Mon 12/05/03 at 20:07
Regular
"Z will be here soon"
Posts: 7,562
I wrote this last night, without inspiration, it just sort of blurted out via my pen (Eww that sounds filthy *hee hee*)

Your word, the chains that hold me back
Your voice acts as my torture rack
You are the chopping block, executioner and jeering crowd
You are the axe-sharp scream that pierces the cold night air
As the blade of justice is raised up and slammed down.
I am your sacrifice, killed to save the truth
I'm head to toe in black, praying to the roof
I am lined up, cold, and laughed at
Yet I am the only one that knows.
A sharp pain, then nothing, I drift away.
Enlightened.

What do you think of it?

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