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Tajiris(Wildlight) music BOOMS around the arena the japenese buzzsaw coming to the ring accompanied by the William Regal the commissioner tajiri then climbs into the ring while regal stands on the outside looking on.
Then the opera music starts signaling the arrival of christian(granprix) as the haunting sounds of CHRISTIAN CHRISTIAN fills the arena as he walks to ring in his big fluffy hat while all the fans boo him.
The bell rings and then match starts off, Christian gets the upper hand at first getting tajiri into a headlock but tajiri reverses it in a whip to the ropes and does a drop toe hold onto the canvas. Christian gets up in a daze and ducks a tajiri clothes line but is caught square in the face by the second attempt at one.
Christian gets up and tajiri gets into his martial arts stance, He is going for the kick to the head but christian spins him around and hits a reverse neck and back breaker with keeps tajiri on the floor.CHristian gets into the crounching position and waits for tajiri to get up, Tajiri gets up and Christian HITS THE SPEAR HE HAS HIT THE SPEAR its all over this match is all over. He spits at regal and then mocks him as regal pulls that digusted look on his face and swears revenge.
But wait what is christian doing, He aint going for the pin he crawls out the ring and grabs two charis this means one thing he is going for the one man CON-CHAIR-TO, Christian rolls back into the ring but the referee Earl Hebner grabs one chair of him and throws it to the side of the ring but Christian still has a chair in his hand He turns around but doesnt see tajiri standing behind him RED MIST RED MIST Tajiri has just spurted the red stuff from his mouth but it only hit the chair that Christian was shielding his face with, but it makes Christian drop the chair.
And now Tajiri is going at Christian with a barrage of blows using them educated feet that he has and Christian drops to his knees and Tajir KICK TO THE HEAD tajiris finishing move Christian rolls out the ring and picks up another chair and tajiri celebrates but while the ref is busy putting the chair that christian just picked up back Chrostian jumps in the ring and Waits for tajiri to turn around WHACK!!! straight into the skull of Tajiri and thats going to be all the ref jumps into the ring Christians going to win 1,2....
wait a minute the ref just got pulled out the ring by William regal(grangprix) the commisioner just pulled out senior official earl hebner and then regal crawls into the ring and picks up the chair that is still stained from tajiris red Mist earlier, He lays the chair on the floor and Christian turns around then regal hits the regal NECKBREAKER onto the chair Christian must be broken in half. It has busted him wide open, there is blood splattered all over christian
Regal lays tajiris body over christian and throws the ref in is it all over 1,2,3
ITs all over Tajiri has beaten Christian and the japenese buzzsaw has overcome the odds to win these match but he dont look like a winner at the moment
YES IT IS TAJIRI HAS BEATEN Christian
and as william regal and tajiri celebrate
Christian walks to the back with blood dripping down his face, he looks around and regal gives him a cheerful wave goodbye.
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well that was my first match
what did you think
thanxs 4 reading
KR
Then the opera music starts signaling the arrival of christian(granprix) as the haunting sounds of CHRISTIAN CHRISTIAN fills the arena as he walks to ring in his big fluffy hat while all the fans boo him.
The bell rings and then match starts off, Christian gets the upper hand at first getting tajiri into a headlock but tajiri reverses it in a whip to the ropes and does a drop toe hold onto the canvas. Christian gets up in a daze and ducks a tajiri clothes line but is caught square in the face by the second attempt at one.
Christian gets up and tajiri gets into his martial arts stance, He is going for the kick to the head but christian spins him around and hits a reverse neck and back breaker with keeps tajiri on the floor.CHristian gets into the crounching position and waits for tajiri to get up, Tajiri gets up and Christian HITS THE SPEAR HE HAS HIT THE SPEAR its all over this match is all over. He spits at regal and then mocks him as regal pulls that digusted look on his face and swears revenge.
But wait what is christian doing, He aint going for the pin he crawls out the ring and grabs two charis this means one thing he is going for the one man CON-CHAIR-TO, Christian rolls back into the ring but the referee Earl Hebner grabs one chair of him and throws it to the side of the ring but Christian still has a chair in his hand He turns around but doesnt see tajiri standing behind him RED MIST RED MIST Tajiri has just spurted the red stuff from his mouth but it only hit the chair that Christian was shielding his face with, but it makes Christian drop the chair.
And now Tajiri is going at Christian with a barrage of blows using them educated feet that he has and Christian drops to his knees and Tajir KICK TO THE HEAD tajiris finishing move Christian rolls out the ring and picks up another chair and tajiri celebrates but while the ref is busy putting the chair that christian just picked up back Chrostian jumps in the ring and Waits for tajiri to turn around WHACK!!! straight into the skull of Tajiri and thats going to be all the ref jumps into the ring Christians going to win 1,2....
wait a minute the ref just got pulled out the ring by William regal(grangprix) the commisioner just pulled out senior official earl hebner and then regal crawls into the ring and picks up the chair that is still stained from tajiris red Mist earlier, He lays the chair on the floor and Christian turns around then regal hits the regal NECKBREAKER onto the chair Christian must be broken in half. It has busted him wide open, there is blood splattered all over christian
Regal lays tajiris body over christian and throws the ref in is it all over 1,2,3
ITs all over Tajiri has beaten Christian and the japenese buzzsaw has overcome the odds to win these match but he dont look like a winner at the moment
YES IT IS TAJIRI HAS BEATEN Christian
and as william regal and tajiri celebrate
Christian walks to the back with blood dripping down his face, he looks around and regal gives him a cheerful wave goodbye.
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well that was my first match
what did you think
thanxs 4 reading
KR
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Cheers guys i will be writing another match next saturday so it will inprove
And all of those mistakes were made by me before as well. You'll become a better writer very soon KR.
Ant wrote:
> That's an excellent first match, KR.
The in-ring action was good, just lay
> off the weapons, interferences and specials. Have bit of wrestling before any of
> those. In fact, try not to use much interference at all. And one more thing, use
> more commas and full stops, just to break it up a little more.
Apart from
> that, it was really good.
Yeh good match KR, but you made the same mistakes i did in my first match. I did all the things ant said
> That's an excellent first match, KR.
The in-ring action was good, just lay
> off the weapons, interferences and specials. Have bit of wrestling before any of
> those. In fact, try not to use much interference at all. And one more thing, use
> more commas and full stops, just to break it up a little more.
Apart from
> that, it was really good.
Yeh good match KR, but you made the same mistakes i did in my first match. I did all the things ant said
it was onto a chair
it his finisher move i think the thing where he wraps their habds around their necks and then jumps up and then lands onto the floor
i can write a match every saturday if you want
it his finisher move i think the thing where he wraps their habds around their necks and then jumps up and then lands onto the floor
i can write a match every saturday if you want
yeh i wrote Wildlight a few times so i knew i wouldnt get it wrong
normal match?
yeh thats fine no interference next time no chairs (tone them down a bit)
normal match?
yeh thats fine no interference next time no chairs (tone them down a bit)
How exactly would a Regal neckbreaker make anyone bleed?
Tajiri won!!!!!!
I won!!!!!
You got my new name right!!!!!
WAHOOOOOOOO!!
Follow what Ant said and you'll be writing with the best of them
Good match KR!!
I won!!!!!
You got my new name right!!!!!
WAHOOOOOOOO!!
Follow what Ant said and you'll be writing with the best of them
Good match KR!!
Kid Rock wrote:
> if you every need a writer then i can write any matches if i get a bit more
> Practice in i might be able to do what BRM can do
has longy wrote a match
> yet?
Yeah, he's written a couple, and he has one this week.
Yeah, next week I'll give you a normal match just for a bit of practise.
> if you every need a writer then i can write any matches if i get a bit more
> Practice in i might be able to do what BRM can do
has longy wrote a match
> yet?
Yeah, he's written a couple, and he has one this week.
Yeah, next week I'll give you a normal match just for a bit of practise.
i owe a bit of it to Linkin Park-in the end
i had it full blast while writing it so i got the ideas from there somehow
i had it full blast while writing it so i got the ideas from there somehow
if you every need a writer then i can write any matches if i get a bit more Practice in i might be able to do what BRM can do
has longy wrote a match yet?
has longy wrote a match yet?
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