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"none title match:RVD(siefer) vs Big Show(longy)"

The lights go dim and RVD's (siefer) music hits, then RVD runs down to the ring and gets ready for his Hardcore match with, the Big Show.RVD goes under the ring to gets some weapons.Then lays them out out side the ring

"WELLL IT'S THE BIG SHOW!!".Fireworks go off and then a mean looking Big Show (longy) starts to walk down to the ring.

DING, DING, DING! The match begins and RVD goes straight to work on Show's legs with a dropkick, then he bounces off the ropes and hit Show with a huge Vamdaminator!But Show doesn't move!!RVD can't beilieve it!Show then throws RVD into the corner, Show hits him with a huge slap to the the chest of RVD!RVD falls to the floor and roles out of the ring, Show follows him.The two men start to battle it out outside the ring.RVD rams Big Show's head against the ring post and Show hobbles over to the announce a grabs a steel chair, Rvd runs towards Show, BUT SHOW TURNS A WHACKS RVD RIGHT IN THE HEAD!!!Show then goes for the cover.
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BUT RVD GETS HIS SHOULDER UP!!
no-one can believe it!Show picks up RVD by th neck ready for the chokeslam!But RVD kicks his way out of it.RVD get Show in the ring and goes up top, and leaps at Big Show!
But show catches him, but then falls back!Cover by RVD!
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But Show throws RVD off him, RVD waits for Show to get to his knees then, Vamdaminator!Right in the face!cover again by RVD!
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And Show kicks again!RVD goes up top again, and hit Show with a five star frog splash!!But is too tierd to pin Big Show.RVD goes to get a ladder!He brings it into the ring and sets it up, he then climbs it and waits for the Big Show to get up.

But Jericho runs down the ramp without RVD noticing, he then sets up two tables on top of each other!RVD taked his attention away from Shoe to look at at Jerico.Show then gets up as quick as he can and pushes the ladder and RVD, the ladder stops as it hits the ropes but RVD doesn't!CRASH through the tables goes RVD, Jericho spits on RVD and walks off leaving RVD motionless.

Big Show roles out of the ring and walks over to RVD, Show picks him up and carries him into the ring, Show picks hikm up and roles him onto his shoulders and scores with the alley oop!!But Show had already set up a chair and R D's head goes crashing into the chair!!!!!!Big Show pins him.
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AND BIG SHOW'S DONE IT!! He's beatn RVD!
Show's music hits again!"WELLL IT'S THE BIG SHOW!!"


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So, that was the match what does everyone think! Is there anything im still doing Wrong? If so please tell me,
thanx for reading,
BRM!

Okay thanx for the tips guys. :D

I'll write another match soon and I'll see if I can gewt it completly right! (I hope)

Has anyone not had a match for ages cause then I could use your wrestlers and i dont have to pick :D

Seifer wrote:
> Well, it was a pretty good match, and I'll let you off for deciding that I lost
> and you spelt my name incorrectly. But apart from that it was a good match,
> maybe cut down on the special manoeveres, but apart from that I can't
> complain!

Well done Longy on your victory

Sorry sEIfer.

You should read things like that that we do. They are usually quite decent.

I can't be bothered reading it.

It would be better with less finishers but good overall.

Good match. Bit longer and less specials would be better but not bad.

YEAH! thank you and yes i won brilliant match and even better cuz i won

Well, it was a pretty good match, and I'll let you off for deciding that I lost and you spelt my name incorrectly. But apart from that it was a good match, maybe cut down on the special manoeveres, but apart from that I can't complain!

Well done Longy on your victory

Heh, much better BRM.

Just a couple more things-always put spaces after full stops or exclamation marks, makes it a bit easier to read.

Don't use too many specials, also.

But otherwise, pretty good.

That was quite a good match.