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This is a story using the names of songs from the Feeder albums Polythene [ECD], Swim, Yesterday Went Too Soon and Echo Park. I got the idea from an advertisement on E4 where they did a story using the names of films showing on the channel, enjoy!
Feeder Story – A day of reckoning.
I had woken up one morning feeling rather excited as today was my birthday and I was SWEET 16, it was going to be MY PERFECT DAY as me and some friends were going on a 20TH CENTURY TRIP to the new theme park TINSEL TOWN. Although there was a problem I had woken up feeling a little UNDER THE WEATHER it may have been a slight case of INSOMNIA from the party we had the night before but I wasn’t so sure so despite me feeling unwell I headed off with my friends anyway.
On the way there my throat became DRY and began to SUFFOCATE, I began to CHOKE and I couldn’t get enough OXYGEN into my lungs, quickly I decided that I couldn’t put it off any longer and decided to TURN and head back, my plans for the day took a CRASH.
When I arrived back home even my parents said I didn’t look SO WELL and the laid me down and phoned for help explaining the situation, surprisingly a mysteriously looking man arrived and said he was a RADIOMAN, he assured me he knew what he was doing and calmly he began to speak to me. He asked how I felt but before I could reply he answered for me he said I know how you feel, it’s as though your STANDING ON THE EDGE of the world and your about to fall. It was strange it was as almost as though there was a HOLE IN MY HEAD and he could see my thoughts, this however made me trust the man more and I felt confident around him. DAY IN DAY OUT I see this happening there’s a nasty BUG going around and that I should TELL ALL MY FRIENDS about it and to be careful although if it is not treated it can be serious and should be told to the world through SATELLITE NEWS. With a infection like this there’s no use just WAITING FOR CHANGES and it needs to be treated quickly and with that he gave me an ANEASTHETIC which made me feel immensely better. He told me what I needed now was a break a holiday, SEVEN DAYS IN THE SUN would make me feel right as rain making me a PICTURE OF PERFECT YOUTH yet again. The mysterious man began to leave but before he did I asked were he came from and he looked up gazing and replied STEREO WORLD, this I thought was a strange answer him being a Radioman from Stereo World but I decided to ignore it and decided he wanted it to remain a mystery. Not long after he had left a doctor turned up asking for me, he was the person my parents had telephoned and asked to come see me about my illness, so who was that man just how did he know I was ill? My parents were confused too and explained the situation and although the doctor was bewildered about the whole ordeal he FORGAVE us for calling him out, I don’t think the ha believed us at all.
Later on that day when the sun was HIGH I chose to go and try to clear my head and went for a SWIM with my friend, after a while the heat was getting too much and I hadn’t used any sun block. The RADIATION from the sun had begun to make my skin peel like a TANGERINE, my day wasn’t going too well and it was getting worse. I quickly headed for SHADE but by then it was too late and I had looked like a real life POLYTHENE GIRL with PAPERFACES because of my peeling, flaking skin, PIECE BY PIECE skin would DESCEND from my body and fall like CEMENT it was terrible. My day had been rough and strange so I went to bed early as I wasn’t feeling too good.
The next day I was with my friend and he was talking about the previous day, he said it was weird just like an episode of BUCK ROGERS which he thought was quick and full of WIT. Smirking to myself I said YOU’RE MY EVERGREEN which he didn’t understand whatsoever and confused him which was good because I didn’t want him to realize what it could have meant but it confused him like I planned.
Yesterday was a very exceptional day and despite what had happened it was very special in it’s own kind of way luckily though YESTERDAY WENT TOO SOON and fortunately WE CAN’T REWIND.
Thanks for reading
Andy
Feeder Story – A day of reckoning.
I had woken up one morning feeling rather excited as today was my birthday and I was SWEET 16, it was going to be MY PERFECT DAY as me and some friends were going on a 20TH CENTURY TRIP to the new theme park TINSEL TOWN. Although there was a problem I had woken up feeling a little UNDER THE WEATHER it may have been a slight case of INSOMNIA from the party we had the night before but I wasn’t so sure so despite me feeling unwell I headed off with my friends anyway.
On the way there my throat became DRY and began to SUFFOCATE, I began to CHOKE and I couldn’t get enough OXYGEN into my lungs, quickly I decided that I couldn’t put it off any longer and decided to TURN and head back, my plans for the day took a CRASH.
When I arrived back home even my parents said I didn’t look SO WELL and the laid me down and phoned for help explaining the situation, surprisingly a mysteriously looking man arrived and said he was a RADIOMAN, he assured me he knew what he was doing and calmly he began to speak to me. He asked how I felt but before I could reply he answered for me he said I know how you feel, it’s as though your STANDING ON THE EDGE of the world and your about to fall. It was strange it was as almost as though there was a HOLE IN MY HEAD and he could see my thoughts, this however made me trust the man more and I felt confident around him. DAY IN DAY OUT I see this happening there’s a nasty BUG going around and that I should TELL ALL MY FRIENDS about it and to be careful although if it is not treated it can be serious and should be told to the world through SATELLITE NEWS. With a infection like this there’s no use just WAITING FOR CHANGES and it needs to be treated quickly and with that he gave me an ANEASTHETIC which made me feel immensely better. He told me what I needed now was a break a holiday, SEVEN DAYS IN THE SUN would make me feel right as rain making me a PICTURE OF PERFECT YOUTH yet again. The mysterious man began to leave but before he did I asked were he came from and he looked up gazing and replied STEREO WORLD, this I thought was a strange answer him being a Radioman from Stereo World but I decided to ignore it and decided he wanted it to remain a mystery. Not long after he had left a doctor turned up asking for me, he was the person my parents had telephoned and asked to come see me about my illness, so who was that man just how did he know I was ill? My parents were confused too and explained the situation and although the doctor was bewildered about the whole ordeal he FORGAVE us for calling him out, I don’t think the ha believed us at all.
Later on that day when the sun was HIGH I chose to go and try to clear my head and went for a SWIM with my friend, after a while the heat was getting too much and I hadn’t used any sun block. The RADIATION from the sun had begun to make my skin peel like a TANGERINE, my day wasn’t going too well and it was getting worse. I quickly headed for SHADE but by then it was too late and I had looked like a real life POLYTHENE GIRL with PAPERFACES because of my peeling, flaking skin, PIECE BY PIECE skin would DESCEND from my body and fall like CEMENT it was terrible. My day had been rough and strange so I went to bed early as I wasn’t feeling too good.
The next day I was with my friend and he was talking about the previous day, he said it was weird just like an episode of BUCK ROGERS which he thought was quick and full of WIT. Smirking to myself I said YOU’RE MY EVERGREEN which he didn’t understand whatsoever and confused him which was good because I didn’t want him to realize what it could have meant but it confused him like I planned.
Yesterday was a very exceptional day and despite what had happened it was very special in it’s own kind of way luckily though YESTERDAY WENT TOO SOON and fortunately WE CAN’T REWIND.
Thanks for reading
Andy
that was quite good well done andy
RawisAndy wrote:
> SHEEPY wrote:
> You mean you got the idea from me :-)
*Cough* your
> Radiohead story *cough*
:D
I read it but the advert kinda of reminded me
> and that when I did it so, I guess you was an insperation :D
Whooo! I won FAD
> with this!
Hmmmmmmmmm I have no DVD player
Gah!
Well you can donate it to a dear mate:D
> SHEEPY wrote:
> You mean you got the idea from me :-)
*Cough* your
> Radiohead story *cough*
:D
I read it but the advert kinda of reminded me
> and that when I did it so, I guess you was an insperation :D
Whooo! I won FAD
> with this!
Hmmmmmmmmm I have no DVD player
Gah!
Well you can donate it to a dear mate:D
:-D
Only joking mate.
Hate Feeder as well.
I oringally got idea from a Radiohead site :-)
Only joking mate.
Hate Feeder as well.
I oringally got idea from a Radiohead site :-)
SHEEPY wrote:
> You mean you got the idea from me :-)
*Cough* your Radiohead story *cough*
:D
I read it but the advert kinda of reminded me and that when I did it so, I guess you was an insperation :D
Whooo! I won FAD with this!
Hmmmmmmmmm I have no DVD player
Gah!
> You mean you got the idea from me :-)
*Cough* your Radiohead story *cough*
:D
I read it but the advert kinda of reminded me and that when I did it so, I guess you was an insperation :D
Whooo! I won FAD with this!
Hmmmmmmmmm I have no DVD player
Gah!
You mean you got the idea from me :-)
This is a story using the names of songs from the Feeder albums Polythene [ECD], Swim, Yesterday Went Too Soon and Echo Park. I got the idea from an advertisement on E4 where they did a story using the names of films showing on the channel, enjoy!
Feeder Story – A day of reckoning.
I had woken up one morning feeling rather excited as today was my birthday and I was SWEET 16, it was going to be MY PERFECT DAY as me and some friends were going on a 20TH CENTURY TRIP to the new theme park TINSEL TOWN. Although there was a problem I had woken up feeling a little UNDER THE WEATHER it may have been a slight case of INSOMNIA from the party we had the night before but I wasn’t so sure so despite me feeling unwell I headed off with my friends anyway.
On the way there my throat became DRY and began to SUFFOCATE, I began to CHOKE and I couldn’t get enough OXYGEN into my lungs, quickly I decided that I couldn’t put it off any longer and decided to TURN and head back, my plans for the day took a CRASH.
When I arrived back home even my parents said I didn’t look SO WELL and the laid me down and phoned for help explaining the situation, surprisingly a mysteriously looking man arrived and said he was a RADIOMAN, he assured me he knew what he was doing and calmly he began to speak to me. He asked how I felt but before I could reply he answered for me he said I know how you feel, it’s as though your STANDING ON THE EDGE of the world and your about to fall. It was strange it was as almost as though there was a HOLE IN MY HEAD and he could see my thoughts, this however made me trust the man more and I felt confident around him. DAY IN DAY OUT I see this happening there’s a nasty BUG going around and that I should TELL ALL MY FRIENDS about it and to be careful although if it is not treated it can be serious and should be told to the world through SATELLITE NEWS. With a infection like this there’s no use just WAITING FOR CHANGES and it needs to be treated quickly and with that he gave me an ANEASTHETIC which made me feel immensely better. He told me what I needed now was a break a holiday, SEVEN DAYS IN THE SUN would make me feel right as rain making me a PICTURE OF PERFECT YOUTH yet again. The mysterious man began to leave but before he did I asked were he came from and he looked up gazing and replied STEREO WORLD, this I thought was a strange answer him being a Radioman from Stereo World but I decided to ignore it and decided he wanted it to remain a mystery. Not long after he had left a doctor turned up asking for me, he was the person my parents had telephoned and asked to come see me about my illness, so who was that man just how did he know I was ill? My parents were confused too and explained the situation and although the doctor was bewildered about the whole ordeal he FORGAVE us for calling him out, I don’t think the ha believed us at all.
Later on that day when the sun was HIGH I chose to go and try to clear my head and went for a SWIM with my friend, after a while the heat was getting too much and I hadn’t used any sun block. The RADIATION from the sun had begun to make my skin peel like a TANGERINE, my day wasn’t going too well and it was getting worse. I quickly headed for SHADE but by then it was too late and I had looked like a real life POLYTHENE GIRL with PAPERFACES because of my peeling, flaking skin, PIECE BY PIECE skin would DESCEND from my body and fall like CEMENT it was terrible. My day had been rough and strange so I went to bed early as I wasn’t feeling too good.
The next day I was with my friend and he was talking about the previous day, he said it was weird just like an episode of BUCK ROGERS which he thought was quick and full of WIT. Smirking to myself I said YOU’RE MY EVERGREEN which he didn’t understand whatsoever and confused him which was good because I didn’t want him to realize what it could have meant but it confused him like I planned.
Yesterday was a very exceptional day and despite what had happened it was very special in it’s own kind of way luckily though YESTERDAY WENT TOO SOON and fortunately WE CAN’T REWIND.
Thanks for reading
Andy
Feeder Story – A day of reckoning.
I had woken up one morning feeling rather excited as today was my birthday and I was SWEET 16, it was going to be MY PERFECT DAY as me and some friends were going on a 20TH CENTURY TRIP to the new theme park TINSEL TOWN. Although there was a problem I had woken up feeling a little UNDER THE WEATHER it may have been a slight case of INSOMNIA from the party we had the night before but I wasn’t so sure so despite me feeling unwell I headed off with my friends anyway.
On the way there my throat became DRY and began to SUFFOCATE, I began to CHOKE and I couldn’t get enough OXYGEN into my lungs, quickly I decided that I couldn’t put it off any longer and decided to TURN and head back, my plans for the day took a CRASH.
When I arrived back home even my parents said I didn’t look SO WELL and the laid me down and phoned for help explaining the situation, surprisingly a mysteriously looking man arrived and said he was a RADIOMAN, he assured me he knew what he was doing and calmly he began to speak to me. He asked how I felt but before I could reply he answered for me he said I know how you feel, it’s as though your STANDING ON THE EDGE of the world and your about to fall. It was strange it was as almost as though there was a HOLE IN MY HEAD and he could see my thoughts, this however made me trust the man more and I felt confident around him. DAY IN DAY OUT I see this happening there’s a nasty BUG going around and that I should TELL ALL MY FRIENDS about it and to be careful although if it is not treated it can be serious and should be told to the world through SATELLITE NEWS. With a infection like this there’s no use just WAITING FOR CHANGES and it needs to be treated quickly and with that he gave me an ANEASTHETIC which made me feel immensely better. He told me what I needed now was a break a holiday, SEVEN DAYS IN THE SUN would make me feel right as rain making me a PICTURE OF PERFECT YOUTH yet again. The mysterious man began to leave but before he did I asked were he came from and he looked up gazing and replied STEREO WORLD, this I thought was a strange answer him being a Radioman from Stereo World but I decided to ignore it and decided he wanted it to remain a mystery. Not long after he had left a doctor turned up asking for me, he was the person my parents had telephoned and asked to come see me about my illness, so who was that man just how did he know I was ill? My parents were confused too and explained the situation and although the doctor was bewildered about the whole ordeal he FORGAVE us for calling him out, I don’t think the ha believed us at all.
Later on that day when the sun was HIGH I chose to go and try to clear my head and went for a SWIM with my friend, after a while the heat was getting too much and I hadn’t used any sun block. The RADIATION from the sun had begun to make my skin peel like a TANGERINE, my day wasn’t going too well and it was getting worse. I quickly headed for SHADE but by then it was too late and I had looked like a real life POLYTHENE GIRL with PAPERFACES because of my peeling, flaking skin, PIECE BY PIECE skin would DESCEND from my body and fall like CEMENT it was terrible. My day had been rough and strange so I went to bed early as I wasn’t feeling too good.
The next day I was with my friend and he was talking about the previous day, he said it was weird just like an episode of BUCK ROGERS which he thought was quick and full of WIT. Smirking to myself I said YOU’RE MY EVERGREEN which he didn’t understand whatsoever and confused him which was good because I didn’t want him to realize what it could have meant but it confused him like I planned.
Yesterday was a very exceptional day and despite what had happened it was very special in it’s own kind of way luckily though YESTERDAY WENT TOO SOON and fortunately WE CAN’T REWIND.
Thanks for reading
Andy