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Dringo watched quietly as pb and Wookiee set up stage, this play would be awesome claimed the 8ft Wookiee, pb a lot quieter and short nodded and went out back to retrieve some extra props. Whilst fiddling around with and fake knives he heard a noise.
“Wookiee” called pb nervously, no response he didn’t need to call again he knew who it was, Dringo he thought to himself and he hid behind some boxes as Dringo who had broken in through the store room window appeared, Dringo glanced around but he didn’t spot pb as he left the store room and entered the stage.
Wookiee was busy fixing a prop when he spotted Dringo, Dringo scowled this wasn’t pb, Wookiee stammered “D…D…ringo!”
“That’s right its me Dringo the evil notable hunter” Dringo said pathetically, Wookiee didn’t care he dropped the prop and ran. Dringo smiled, he had this power to make people run.
“Hello Dringo” pb said clearly. Dringo turned around and there stood a small thin boy wearing glasses resembling Harry Potter. Dringo was confused why had pb revealed himself but before he could answer pb ran at him, Dringo placed his hand on pb’s head grabbed his head and flung him across the room smashing him into a load of wires, speakers fell on his head. Dringo smiled his first kill since Sniper.
Dringo glared at Wookiee as he walked away and Wookiee dived beneath from sheets scared of Dringo’s super human strength. Dringo continued to walk when he heard a noise that originated beneath the ruble where pb had crashed. Dringo turned around, a speaker moved aside, Dringo moved closer when all of a sudden the rubble got cast aside and ou emerged a 12 ft pb, his eyes where bright red, his arms had been replaced by a cannon and a large machine gun, he looked robotic.
“HELLO DRINGO” pb bellowed, Dringo stood speechless, as pb fired one of his cannon rounds, he dived into some boxes as the explosion ripped down the stage curtains, Dringo dashed under a table when pb started firing his machine gun, Dringo flipped the table over and pb ripped the table to shreds with Dringo on the other side.
Dringo peered over the shattered table to see pb look at him with a massive grin on his face, Dringo towards the door but it was locked, Dringo tried again but as he spun around pb was almost upon him.
“GOODBYE DRINGO” pb bellowed pointing his cannon at Dringo’s head. Dringo closed his eyes when a smashing window broke the silence. Pb turned around to see a smashed window but no one there. Dringo smiled he knew who it was, pb turned back before getting rammed over.
“Missed me?” yelled Edgy
“About time” Dringo said delighted to see his old partner who was put in prison for the killing of Turbonutter.
Pb rolled up again before Edgy removed his axe, his eyes set alight, psycho Edgy was back and he smashed off pb’s cannon, pb yelled out in pain before Edgy smashed his machine gun off. Pb laid on his back as Edgy prepared to place the final blow. Edgy raised his axe when it got snatched out of his hand, Wookiee stood grinning Edgy scowled but Wookiee plunged the axe into Edgy’s side.
“EDGY” screamed Dringo as Edgy collapsed to the floor, Wookiee smiled but it was short lived as Dringo charged at him, Wookiee was caught by surprise and Dringo kicked him across the room and he smashed into the wall and was knocked out cold. Dringo picked Edgy up leaving the wounded pb and Wookiee.
“You haven’t heard the last of me,” Dringo vowed trying to stop Edgy bleeding and carrying him out of the room.
Next: A Notable Hunter Story: The Ant Army.
“Wookiee” called pb nervously, no response he didn’t need to call again he knew who it was, Dringo he thought to himself and he hid behind some boxes as Dringo who had broken in through the store room window appeared, Dringo glanced around but he didn’t spot pb as he left the store room and entered the stage.
Wookiee was busy fixing a prop when he spotted Dringo, Dringo scowled this wasn’t pb, Wookiee stammered “D…D…ringo!”
“That’s right its me Dringo the evil notable hunter” Dringo said pathetically, Wookiee didn’t care he dropped the prop and ran. Dringo smiled, he had this power to make people run.
“Hello Dringo” pb said clearly. Dringo turned around and there stood a small thin boy wearing glasses resembling Harry Potter. Dringo was confused why had pb revealed himself but before he could answer pb ran at him, Dringo placed his hand on pb’s head grabbed his head and flung him across the room smashing him into a load of wires, speakers fell on his head. Dringo smiled his first kill since Sniper.
Dringo glared at Wookiee as he walked away and Wookiee dived beneath from sheets scared of Dringo’s super human strength. Dringo continued to walk when he heard a noise that originated beneath the ruble where pb had crashed. Dringo turned around, a speaker moved aside, Dringo moved closer when all of a sudden the rubble got cast aside and ou emerged a 12 ft pb, his eyes where bright red, his arms had been replaced by a cannon and a large machine gun, he looked robotic.
“HELLO DRINGO” pb bellowed, Dringo stood speechless, as pb fired one of his cannon rounds, he dived into some boxes as the explosion ripped down the stage curtains, Dringo dashed under a table when pb started firing his machine gun, Dringo flipped the table over and pb ripped the table to shreds with Dringo on the other side.
Dringo peered over the shattered table to see pb look at him with a massive grin on his face, Dringo towards the door but it was locked, Dringo tried again but as he spun around pb was almost upon him.
“GOODBYE DRINGO” pb bellowed pointing his cannon at Dringo’s head. Dringo closed his eyes when a smashing window broke the silence. Pb turned around to see a smashed window but no one there. Dringo smiled he knew who it was, pb turned back before getting rammed over.
“Missed me?” yelled Edgy
“About time” Dringo said delighted to see his old partner who was put in prison for the killing of Turbonutter.
Pb rolled up again before Edgy removed his axe, his eyes set alight, psycho Edgy was back and he smashed off pb’s cannon, pb yelled out in pain before Edgy smashed his machine gun off. Pb laid on his back as Edgy prepared to place the final blow. Edgy raised his axe when it got snatched out of his hand, Wookiee stood grinning Edgy scowled but Wookiee plunged the axe into Edgy’s side.
“EDGY” screamed Dringo as Edgy collapsed to the floor, Wookiee smiled but it was short lived as Dringo charged at him, Wookiee was caught by surprise and Dringo kicked him across the room and he smashed into the wall and was knocked out cold. Dringo picked Edgy up leaving the wounded pb and Wookiee.
“You haven’t heard the last of me,” Dringo vowed trying to stop Edgy bleeding and carrying him out of the room.
Next: A Notable Hunter Story: The Ant Army.
Right now who wants to read the other 2?
Heh, injured, but alive.
but....harry potter? hm....
but....harry potter? hm....
A great start... don't rush it though... it could be VERY good.
A great start... don't rush it though... it could be VERY good.
Dringo watched quietly as pb and Wookiee set up stage, this play would be awesome claimed the 8ft Wookiee, pb a lot quieter and short nodded and went out back to retrieve some extra props. Whilst fiddling around with and fake knives he heard a noise.
“Wookiee” called pb nervously, no response he didn’t need to call again he knew who it was, Dringo he thought to himself and he hid behind some boxes as Dringo who had broken in through the store room window appeared, Dringo glanced around but he didn’t spot pb as he left the store room and entered the stage.
Wookiee was busy fixing a prop when he spotted Dringo, Dringo scowled this wasn’t pb, Wookiee stammered “D…D…ringo!”
“That’s right its me Dringo the evil notable hunter” Dringo said pathetically, Wookiee didn’t care he dropped the prop and ran. Dringo smiled, he had this power to make people run.
“Hello Dringo” pb said clearly. Dringo turned around and there stood a small thin boy wearing glasses resembling Harry Potter. Dringo was confused why had pb revealed himself but before he could answer pb ran at him, Dringo placed his hand on pb’s head grabbed his head and flung him across the room smashing him into a load of wires, speakers fell on his head. Dringo smiled his first kill since Sniper.
Dringo glared at Wookiee as he walked away and Wookiee dived beneath from sheets scared of Dringo’s super human strength. Dringo continued to walk when he heard a noise that originated beneath the ruble where pb had crashed. Dringo turned around, a speaker moved aside, Dringo moved closer when all of a sudden the rubble got cast aside and ou emerged a 12 ft pb, his eyes where bright red, his arms had been replaced by a cannon and a large machine gun, he looked robotic.
“HELLO DRINGO” pb bellowed, Dringo stood speechless, as pb fired one of his cannon rounds, he dived into some boxes as the explosion ripped down the stage curtains, Dringo dashed under a table when pb started firing his machine gun, Dringo flipped the table over and pb ripped the table to shreds with Dringo on the other side.
Dringo peered over the shattered table to see pb look at him with a massive grin on his face, Dringo towards the door but it was locked, Dringo tried again but as he spun around pb was almost upon him.
“GOODBYE DRINGO” pb bellowed pointing his cannon at Dringo’s head. Dringo closed his eyes when a smashing window broke the silence. Pb turned around to see a smashed window but no one there. Dringo smiled he knew who it was, pb turned back before getting rammed over.
“Missed me?” yelled Edgy
“About time” Dringo said delighted to see his old partner who was put in prison for the killing of Turbonutter.
Pb rolled up again before Edgy removed his axe, his eyes set alight, psycho Edgy was back and he smashed off pb’s cannon, pb yelled out in pain before Edgy smashed his machine gun off. Pb laid on his back as Edgy prepared to place the final blow. Edgy raised his axe when it got snatched out of his hand, Wookiee stood grinning Edgy scowled but Wookiee plunged the axe into Edgy’s side.
“EDGY” screamed Dringo as Edgy collapsed to the floor, Wookiee smiled but it was short lived as Dringo charged at him, Wookiee was caught by surprise and Dringo kicked him across the room and he smashed into the wall and was knocked out cold. Dringo picked Edgy up leaving the wounded pb and Wookiee.
“You haven’t heard the last of me,” Dringo vowed trying to stop Edgy bleeding and carrying him out of the room.
Next: A Notable Hunter Story: The Ant Army.
“Wookiee” called pb nervously, no response he didn’t need to call again he knew who it was, Dringo he thought to himself and he hid behind some boxes as Dringo who had broken in through the store room window appeared, Dringo glanced around but he didn’t spot pb as he left the store room and entered the stage.
Wookiee was busy fixing a prop when he spotted Dringo, Dringo scowled this wasn’t pb, Wookiee stammered “D…D…ringo!”
“That’s right its me Dringo the evil notable hunter” Dringo said pathetically, Wookiee didn’t care he dropped the prop and ran. Dringo smiled, he had this power to make people run.
“Hello Dringo” pb said clearly. Dringo turned around and there stood a small thin boy wearing glasses resembling Harry Potter. Dringo was confused why had pb revealed himself but before he could answer pb ran at him, Dringo placed his hand on pb’s head grabbed his head and flung him across the room smashing him into a load of wires, speakers fell on his head. Dringo smiled his first kill since Sniper.
Dringo glared at Wookiee as he walked away and Wookiee dived beneath from sheets scared of Dringo’s super human strength. Dringo continued to walk when he heard a noise that originated beneath the ruble where pb had crashed. Dringo turned around, a speaker moved aside, Dringo moved closer when all of a sudden the rubble got cast aside and ou emerged a 12 ft pb, his eyes where bright red, his arms had been replaced by a cannon and a large machine gun, he looked robotic.
“HELLO DRINGO” pb bellowed, Dringo stood speechless, as pb fired one of his cannon rounds, he dived into some boxes as the explosion ripped down the stage curtains, Dringo dashed under a table when pb started firing his machine gun, Dringo flipped the table over and pb ripped the table to shreds with Dringo on the other side.
Dringo peered over the shattered table to see pb look at him with a massive grin on his face, Dringo towards the door but it was locked, Dringo tried again but as he spun around pb was almost upon him.
“GOODBYE DRINGO” pb bellowed pointing his cannon at Dringo’s head. Dringo closed his eyes when a smashing window broke the silence. Pb turned around to see a smashed window but no one there. Dringo smiled he knew who it was, pb turned back before getting rammed over.
“Missed me?” yelled Edgy
“About time” Dringo said delighted to see his old partner who was put in prison for the killing of Turbonutter.
Pb rolled up again before Edgy removed his axe, his eyes set alight, psycho Edgy was back and he smashed off pb’s cannon, pb yelled out in pain before Edgy smashed his machine gun off. Pb laid on his back as Edgy prepared to place the final blow. Edgy raised his axe when it got snatched out of his hand, Wookiee stood grinning Edgy scowled but Wookiee plunged the axe into Edgy’s side.
“EDGY” screamed Dringo as Edgy collapsed to the floor, Wookiee smiled but it was short lived as Dringo charged at him, Wookiee was caught by surprise and Dringo kicked him across the room and he smashed into the wall and was knocked out cold. Dringo picked Edgy up leaving the wounded pb and Wookiee.
“You haven’t heard the last of me,” Dringo vowed trying to stop Edgy bleeding and carrying him out of the room.
Next: A Notable Hunter Story: The Ant Army.