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Today's KOTR match will be one of the last first round matches. D'Lo Brown (bb) VS Lance Storm (mouldy).
Lance Storm's (mouldy cheese) music hits. He walks down the ramp with a microphone in his hands and climbs into the ring. Oh, no. It looks like he has something to say. "If I could be serious for a minute."
D'lo's (bouncerboy) music hits. He walks down the ramp in his usual strutting way. Lance looks furious. D'lo gets in the ring and goes to the nearest corner he goes up to the second rope and does his celebration. But he is attacked from behind by Storm.
DING DING DING! The match has begun. Lance Storm starts off with punches to the face of D'Lo. Irish whip into the ropes. Lance goes for a clothesline but D'lo ducks under and runs into the other ropes and delivers a clothesline to lance. He goes for a cover. 1, 2 and Lance kicks out right on 2. It's going to take a lot more than that to keep him down.
D'lo starts to try and gain momentum from the crowd but is again attacked from behind by Lance Storm.
Lance is gaining the advantage. He hits D'lo hard in the chest with a knee. D'lo is holding his ribs. Lance goes in for a suplex. He connects. He picks up D'lo and puts him on the second rope. Lance climbs up with him. It looks like he is going for a superplex.
D'lo manages to push Lance off and when he gets up D'lo plants a missile dropkick right in his face. D'lo goes for another cover. 1,2 and kick out near 3 by Storm. D'lo thinks the ref counted too slowly. Lance is behind D'lo. He looks like he is getting ready for the superkick. D'lo turns around. Lance lets fly but D'lo ducks and hits the ref right in the face. He is out cold. Lance hits a powerslam on D'lo and heads for the outside.
He picks up a chair. Climbs into the ring. Storm is taunting D'lo.
D'lo gets up and Storm swings the chair at him. D'lo ducks and when Storm turns around he recieves a spinning wheel kick into the chair into his face.
D'lo Brown heads up to the top rope. Terri of the Alliance is running down the ramp. She holds onto D'lo's foot so he can't jump. Lance Storm is making his way to his feet. Terri pushes D'lo off the top rope and as he is landing in the ring he feels Storm's boot right in his face.
The Ref is coming round from the effect of Lances boot to the face. He sees Storm in a cover. 1,2,3.
DING DING DING!
Here is your winner. Lance Storm (mouldy cheese)
Well done Mouldy Cheese.
Comiserations to Bouncerboy.
Thanks 4 reading. Hope you liked it.
Lance Storm's (mouldy cheese) music hits. He walks down the ramp with a microphone in his hands and climbs into the ring. Oh, no. It looks like he has something to say. "If I could be serious for a minute."
D'lo's (bouncerboy) music hits. He walks down the ramp in his usual strutting way. Lance looks furious. D'lo gets in the ring and goes to the nearest corner he goes up to the second rope and does his celebration. But he is attacked from behind by Storm.
DING DING DING! The match has begun. Lance Storm starts off with punches to the face of D'Lo. Irish whip into the ropes. Lance goes for a clothesline but D'lo ducks under and runs into the other ropes and delivers a clothesline to lance. He goes for a cover. 1, 2 and Lance kicks out right on 2. It's going to take a lot more than that to keep him down.
D'lo starts to try and gain momentum from the crowd but is again attacked from behind by Lance Storm.
Lance is gaining the advantage. He hits D'lo hard in the chest with a knee. D'lo is holding his ribs. Lance goes in for a suplex. He connects. He picks up D'lo and puts him on the second rope. Lance climbs up with him. It looks like he is going for a superplex.
D'lo manages to push Lance off and when he gets up D'lo plants a missile dropkick right in his face. D'lo goes for another cover. 1,2 and kick out near 3 by Storm. D'lo thinks the ref counted too slowly. Lance is behind D'lo. He looks like he is getting ready for the superkick. D'lo turns around. Lance lets fly but D'lo ducks and hits the ref right in the face. He is out cold. Lance hits a powerslam on D'lo and heads for the outside.
He picks up a chair. Climbs into the ring. Storm is taunting D'lo.
D'lo gets up and Storm swings the chair at him. D'lo ducks and when Storm turns around he recieves a spinning wheel kick into the chair into his face.
D'lo Brown heads up to the top rope. Terri of the Alliance is running down the ramp. She holds onto D'lo's foot so he can't jump. Lance Storm is making his way to his feet. Terri pushes D'lo off the top rope and as he is landing in the ring he feels Storm's boot right in his face.
The Ref is coming round from the effect of Lances boot to the face. He sees Storm in a cover. 1,2,3.
DING DING DING!
Here is your winner. Lance Storm (mouldy cheese)
Well done Mouldy Cheese.
Comiserations to Bouncerboy.
Thanks 4 reading. Hope you liked it.
Very promising Afro, just do what everyone else said. {:)
Also, and the same goes for a lot of you, use exclamation marks, and not so many full stops.
Also, and the same goes for a lot of you, use exclamation marks, and not so many full stops.
Just follow what the others have already said and your'e on to a real winner!
Good match dude! :D
Good match dude! :D
ok. i think i know it was a bit short and needs more paragraphing.
I will just agree with everyone in saying that it is a bit short and needs better paragraphing.
Nice match anyway and well done to Mouldy Cheese. Bad luck Bouncerboy Scott.
Nice match anyway and well done to Mouldy Cheese. Bad luck Bouncerboy Scott.
i thought that paragraphing it without lines in between was ok but i'll do it that way next time.
Paragraph it- it will look better, but not to bad Afro.
Yeah - second man through
Nice match but too short Afro, I know what ya mean they look big when ya writing them.
i've noticed that that was a bit short after reading the full version and i will try to make it longer next time.
Today's KOTR match will be one of the last first round matches. D'Lo Brown (bb) VS Lance Storm (mouldy).
Lance Storm's (mouldy cheese) music hits. He walks down the ramp with a microphone in his hands and climbs into the ring. Oh, no. It looks like he has something to say. "If I could be serious for a minute."
D'lo's (bouncerboy) music hits. He walks down the ramp in his usual strutting way. Lance looks furious. D'lo gets in the ring and goes to the nearest corner he goes up to the second rope and does his celebration. But he is attacked from behind by Storm.
DING DING DING! The match has begun. Lance Storm starts off with punches to the face of D'Lo. Irish whip into the ropes. Lance goes for a clothesline but D'lo ducks under and runs into the other ropes and delivers a clothesline to lance. He goes for a cover. 1, 2 and Lance kicks out right on 2. It's going to take a lot more than that to keep him down.
D'lo starts to try and gain momentum from the crowd but is again attacked from behind by Lance Storm.
Lance is gaining the advantage. He hits D'lo hard in the chest with a knee. D'lo is holding his ribs. Lance goes in for a suplex. He connects. He picks up D'lo and puts him on the second rope. Lance climbs up with him. It looks like he is going for a superplex.
D'lo manages to push Lance off and when he gets up D'lo plants a missile dropkick right in his face. D'lo goes for another cover. 1,2 and kick out near 3 by Storm. D'lo thinks the ref counted too slowly. Lance is behind D'lo. He looks like he is getting ready for the superkick. D'lo turns around. Lance lets fly but D'lo ducks and hits the ref right in the face. He is out cold. Lance hits a powerslam on D'lo and heads for the outside.
He picks up a chair. Climbs into the ring. Storm is taunting D'lo.
D'lo gets up and Storm swings the chair at him. D'lo ducks and when Storm turns around he recieves a spinning wheel kick into the chair into his face.
D'lo Brown heads up to the top rope. Terri of the Alliance is running down the ramp. She holds onto D'lo's foot so he can't jump. Lance Storm is making his way to his feet. Terri pushes D'lo off the top rope and as he is landing in the ring he feels Storm's boot right in his face.
The Ref is coming round from the effect of Lances boot to the face. He sees Storm in a cover. 1,2,3.
DING DING DING!
Here is your winner. Lance Storm (mouldy cheese)
Well done Mouldy Cheese.
Comiserations to Bouncerboy.
Thanks 4 reading. Hope you liked it.
Lance Storm's (mouldy cheese) music hits. He walks down the ramp with a microphone in his hands and climbs into the ring. Oh, no. It looks like he has something to say. "If I could be serious for a minute."
D'lo's (bouncerboy) music hits. He walks down the ramp in his usual strutting way. Lance looks furious. D'lo gets in the ring and goes to the nearest corner he goes up to the second rope and does his celebration. But he is attacked from behind by Storm.
DING DING DING! The match has begun. Lance Storm starts off with punches to the face of D'Lo. Irish whip into the ropes. Lance goes for a clothesline but D'lo ducks under and runs into the other ropes and delivers a clothesline to lance. He goes for a cover. 1, 2 and Lance kicks out right on 2. It's going to take a lot more than that to keep him down.
D'lo starts to try and gain momentum from the crowd but is again attacked from behind by Lance Storm.
Lance is gaining the advantage. He hits D'lo hard in the chest with a knee. D'lo is holding his ribs. Lance goes in for a suplex. He connects. He picks up D'lo and puts him on the second rope. Lance climbs up with him. It looks like he is going for a superplex.
D'lo manages to push Lance off and when he gets up D'lo plants a missile dropkick right in his face. D'lo goes for another cover. 1,2 and kick out near 3 by Storm. D'lo thinks the ref counted too slowly. Lance is behind D'lo. He looks like he is getting ready for the superkick. D'lo turns around. Lance lets fly but D'lo ducks and hits the ref right in the face. He is out cold. Lance hits a powerslam on D'lo and heads for the outside.
He picks up a chair. Climbs into the ring. Storm is taunting D'lo.
D'lo gets up and Storm swings the chair at him. D'lo ducks and when Storm turns around he recieves a spinning wheel kick into the chair into his face.
D'lo Brown heads up to the top rope. Terri of the Alliance is running down the ramp. She holds onto D'lo's foot so he can't jump. Lance Storm is making his way to his feet. Terri pushes D'lo off the top rope and as he is landing in the ring he feels Storm's boot right in his face.
The Ref is coming round from the effect of Lances boot to the face. He sees Storm in a cover. 1,2,3.
DING DING DING!
Here is your winner. Lance Storm (mouldy cheese)
Well done Mouldy Cheese.
Comiserations to Bouncerboy.
Thanks 4 reading. Hope you liked it.