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playstation is my life- a short story by cdouch
i woke up saturday morning laying half on the floor and half on the sofa.the tv was on, the bright, flashing lights flashed before by eyes.i must have fallen alsep whilst watching the gran turismo a spec cup on tv late last night.i slowly brought my self to my feet and switched off the tv.i started to walk up stairs, when the phone rang.i hesertated then desided to go back and answer it. it was sargent red faction of the police.he explained to me that last night my mate japanese mate, onimusha had taken my car out for a drive but he wasnt alown,a local gang called the warloads had gone with him.they had gone to a bar called eternaty.one of the memebers of the gang didnt look 18 so he wasnt alowed in.this angered the warloads, in their rage they beat and stabbed the bouncer.the police were called in and justice was restored.the police took my car and impounded it as evidence, so then i had to go get it.i was locking my door when a guy tapped me on the shoulder.i jumped in surprise,then turned around and said hello.the man said hi, im the extermination guy.oh yeah i replied i had forgot you were coming.i opened the door and told the guy to go write in,and il be back later.i got out my phone and called for a taxi.seconds later a cab came along,i said to the driver take me the the police impound lot and hurry.i wasnt completly in the car when it started to go, it was weaving all over the road,cutting corners even jumping bridges this is when i realised that it was a crazy taxi.the cab pulled to a hault, i paid the driver and crossed the road.out side the car lot was a local resident who was looking kinda evil.i just walked on passed and into the impound.i went up to the help desk, i had to give my security code to veronica, this really nice police lady who was helping me out.when i had finished my business i drove on out in my car, the extream g3.i wanted to get home asap as i didnt want to miss my favourite wrestler's big match in the tekken tag tournement.i got home,and founder the exterminator gone along with the rats and my dvd player.i didnt care though,i will sort it out on sunday,all i wanted was to watch the wrestling.i switched on my tv,and turned the channel to 5.only to find international superstar soccor had taken the place of the match.what a day,i couldnt take anymore i just went to bed and started to snore.the next moring, i woke about 10am, i had some breakfast then picked up the phone.i called the exterination company and told them what happened.i found out that they guy who robbed me was former bmx raider mat hoffman.they guy on the phone told me he was wanted all over even right up in digimon world.he has been posing as an exterinator then stealing customers prossesions.i should have known really, a real exterinator would be at least a week late.i switched on my tv and was shocked to see the guy being chased on the worlds scariest police chases look strangely fermilia to me,it was matt hoffman.the police couldnt catch him so they got out the fire gun.it shot 4 breaths of fire to bring mat down.the police man looked at the man and said now its time to see who you really are, he pulled off the mask,it was tony hawlk the pro skater.why did you do it he was asked tony looked into the camera,he yeld i have had enough of mat hoffman stealing my gaming glory,so i desided to uliminate the competition, and i would have got away with it to, if it want for the pesky kid.
scooby doobie doo
the end
i woke up saturday morning laying half on the floor and half on the sofa.the tv was on, the bright, flashing lights flashed before by eyes.i must have fallen alsep whilst watching the gran turismo a spec cup on tv late last night.i slowly brought my self to my feet and switched off the tv.i started to walk up stairs, when the phone rang.i hesertated then desided to go back and answer it. it was sargent red faction of the police.he explained to me that last night my mate japanese mate, onimusha had taken my car out for a drive but he wasnt alown,a local gang called the warloads had gone with him.they had gone to a bar called eternaty.one of the memebers of the gang didnt look 18 so he wasnt alowed in.this angered the warloads, in their rage they beat and stabbed the bouncer.the police were called in and justice was restored.the police took my car and impounded it as evidence, so then i had to go get it.i was locking my door when a guy tapped me on the shoulder.i jumped in surprise,then turned around and said hello.the man said hi, im the extermination guy.oh yeah i replied i had forgot you were coming.i opened the door and told the guy to go write in,and il be back later.i got out my phone and called for a taxi.seconds later a cab came along,i said to the driver take me the the police impound lot and hurry.i wasnt completly in the car when it started to go, it was weaving all over the road,cutting corners even jumping bridges this is when i realised that it was a crazy taxi.the cab pulled to a hault, i paid the driver and crossed the road.out side the car lot was a local resident who was looking kinda evil.i just walked on passed and into the impound.i went up to the help desk, i had to give my security code to veronica, this really nice police lady who was helping me out.when i had finished my business i drove on out in my car, the extream g3.i wanted to get home asap as i didnt want to miss my favourite wrestler's big match in the tekken tag tournement.i got home,and founder the exterminator gone along with the rats and my dvd player.i didnt care though,i will sort it out on sunday,all i wanted was to watch the wrestling.i switched on my tv,and turned the channel to 5.only to find international superstar soccor had taken the place of the match.what a day,i couldnt take anymore i just went to bed and started to snore.the next moring, i woke about 10am, i had some breakfast then picked up the phone.i called the exterination company and told them what happened.i found out that they guy who robbed me was former bmx raider mat hoffman.they guy on the phone told me he was wanted all over even right up in digimon world.he has been posing as an exterinator then stealing customers prossesions.i should have known really, a real exterinator would be at least a week late.i switched on my tv and was shocked to see the guy being chased on the worlds scariest police chases look strangely fermilia to me,it was matt hoffman.the police couldnt catch him so they got out the fire gun.it shot 4 breaths of fire to bring mat down.the police man looked at the man and said now its time to see who you really are, he pulled off the mask,it was tony hawlk the pro skater.why did you do it he was asked tony looked into the camera,he yeld i have had enough of mat hoffman stealing my gaming glory,so i desided to uliminate the competition, and i would have got away with it to, if it want for the pesky kid.
scooby doobie doo
the end
Think of paragraphs as bubbles in the sea of words.
People need to breath every now and then...
People need to breath every now and then...
yeah, as Logan (sonicRav...nights..whatever) said. You really should have put paragraphs in somthin that long.
ive spent a lot of time on this post,someone please read it,and post what you think about it.
thanks
thanks
OK OK, heres your post!! sorry i have not read it yet as i have to go and watch the match.
ok i no i made some spelling and puntuation mistakes in the story,i have only just noticed them.
playstation is my life- a short story by cdouch
i woke up saturday morning laying half on the floor and half on the sofa.the tv was on, the bright, flashing lights flashed before by eyes.i must have fallen alsep whilst watching the gran turismo a spec cup on tv late last night.i slowly brought my self to my feet and switched off the tv.i started to walk up stairs, when the phone rang.i hesertated then desided to go back and answer it. it was sargent red faction of the police.he explained to me that last night my mate japanese mate, onimusha had taken my car out for a drive but he wasnt alown,a local gang called the warloads had gone with him.they had gone to a bar called eternaty.one of the memebers of the gang didnt look 18 so he wasnt alowed in.this angered the warloads, in their rage they beat and stabbed the bouncer.the police were called in and justice was restored.the police took my car and impounded it as evidence, so then i had to go get it.i was locking my door when a guy tapped me on the shoulder.i jumped in surprise,then turned around and said hello.the man said hi, im the extermination guy.oh yeah i replied i had forgot you were coming.i opened the door and told the guy to go write in,and il be back later.i got out my phone and called for a taxi.seconds later a cab came along,i said to the driver take me the the police impound lot and hurry.i wasnt completly in the car when it started to go, it was weaving all over the road,cutting corners even jumping bridges this is when i realised that it was a crazy taxi.the cab pulled to a hault, i paid the driver and crossed the road.out side the car lot was a local resident who was looking kinda evil.i just walked on passed and into the impound.i went up to the help desk, i had to give my security code to veronica, this really nice police lady who was helping me out.when i had finished my business i drove on out in my car, the extream g3.i wanted to get home asap as i didnt want to miss my favourite wrestler's big match in the tekken tag tournement.i got home,and founder the exterminator gone along with the rats and my dvd player.i didnt care though,i will sort it out on sunday,all i wanted was to watch the wrestling.i switched on my tv,and turned the channel to 5.only to find international superstar soccor had taken the place of the match.what a day,i couldnt take anymore i just went to bed and started to snore.the next moring, i woke about 10am, i had some breakfast then picked up the phone.i called the exterination company and told them what happened.i found out that they guy who robbed me was former bmx raider mat hoffman.they guy on the phone told me he was wanted all over even right up in digimon world.he has been posing as an exterinator then stealing customers prossesions.i should have known really, a real exterinator would be at least a week late.i switched on my tv and was shocked to see the guy being chased on the worlds scariest police chases look strangely fermilia to me,it was matt hoffman.the police couldnt catch him so they got out the fire gun.it shot 4 breaths of fire to bring mat down.the police man looked at the man and said now its time to see who you really are, he pulled off the mask,it was tony hawlk the pro skater.why did you do it he was asked tony looked into the camera,he yeld i have had enough of mat hoffman stealing my gaming glory,so i desided to uliminate the competition, and i would have got away with it to, if it want for the pesky kid.
scooby doobie doo
the end
i woke up saturday morning laying half on the floor and half on the sofa.the tv was on, the bright, flashing lights flashed before by eyes.i must have fallen alsep whilst watching the gran turismo a spec cup on tv late last night.i slowly brought my self to my feet and switched off the tv.i started to walk up stairs, when the phone rang.i hesertated then desided to go back and answer it. it was sargent red faction of the police.he explained to me that last night my mate japanese mate, onimusha had taken my car out for a drive but he wasnt alown,a local gang called the warloads had gone with him.they had gone to a bar called eternaty.one of the memebers of the gang didnt look 18 so he wasnt alowed in.this angered the warloads, in their rage they beat and stabbed the bouncer.the police were called in and justice was restored.the police took my car and impounded it as evidence, so then i had to go get it.i was locking my door when a guy tapped me on the shoulder.i jumped in surprise,then turned around and said hello.the man said hi, im the extermination guy.oh yeah i replied i had forgot you were coming.i opened the door and told the guy to go write in,and il be back later.i got out my phone and called for a taxi.seconds later a cab came along,i said to the driver take me the the police impound lot and hurry.i wasnt completly in the car when it started to go, it was weaving all over the road,cutting corners even jumping bridges this is when i realised that it was a crazy taxi.the cab pulled to a hault, i paid the driver and crossed the road.out side the car lot was a local resident who was looking kinda evil.i just walked on passed and into the impound.i went up to the help desk, i had to give my security code to veronica, this really nice police lady who was helping me out.when i had finished my business i drove on out in my car, the extream g3.i wanted to get home asap as i didnt want to miss my favourite wrestler's big match in the tekken tag tournement.i got home,and founder the exterminator gone along with the rats and my dvd player.i didnt care though,i will sort it out on sunday,all i wanted was to watch the wrestling.i switched on my tv,and turned the channel to 5.only to find international superstar soccor had taken the place of the match.what a day,i couldnt take anymore i just went to bed and started to snore.the next moring, i woke about 10am, i had some breakfast then picked up the phone.i called the exterination company and told them what happened.i found out that they guy who robbed me was former bmx raider mat hoffman.they guy on the phone told me he was wanted all over even right up in digimon world.he has been posing as an exterinator then stealing customers prossesions.i should have known really, a real exterinator would be at least a week late.i switched on my tv and was shocked to see the guy being chased on the worlds scariest police chases look strangely fermilia to me,it was matt hoffman.the police couldnt catch him so they got out the fire gun.it shot 4 breaths of fire to bring mat down.the police man looked at the man and said now its time to see who you really are, he pulled off the mask,it was tony hawlk the pro skater.why did you do it he was asked tony looked into the camera,he yeld i have had enough of mat hoffman stealing my gaming glory,so i desided to uliminate the competition, and i would have got away with it to, if it want for the pesky kid.
scooby doobie doo
the end