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"New story by me!"

New story by me in the Story forum.

All comments greatly received.


Thanks.

Second part is just up.

vigilante9 wrote:
critiscisms
> welcome


Are you sure you wouldn't prefer 'constructive criticisms'? ;)

its called ......


Bluetooth, the wireless future

cheers again

nice start to a story mate!

I see theres some notables in here, mind reading my thread and adding an opinion? critiscisms welcome

cheers

Hmm...

Do you think that my poems would be welcome in the stories forum?

Your Honour wrote:
but I'm sure I can really "teach" it to someone
> else.


Sorry, should be:

but I'm NOT sure I can really "teach" it.. etc etc

Ant wrote:
But
> anyway, YH, your descriptive writing is amazing! Teach me how to do
> that, please!!


I'm glad you like it, but I'm sure I can really "teach" it to someone else.

I'm not about this weekend, but next time you see me on MSN, give me a shout and we'll have a chat.

Meka_Dragon wrote:
> Ant wrote:
> Yep, I already replied to it in the topic...wait a
> minute, am I
> allowed to do that, YH??

Anyway, just on the
> topic of stories, is
> it okay if I do what I've always done and
> post my story in here or
> FOG Prime??

I'd say so. But I'm
> not the authority on such things!

Humm...now I'm stuck. I've always posted my stories on FOG Chat, but it is also 'Prime.'

I guess I'll post it on Prime, and then a few days later on Chat.

But anyway, YH, your descriptive writing is amazing! Teach me how to do that, please!!

Ant wrote:
> Yep, I already replied to it in the topic...wait a minute, am I
> allowed to do that, YH??

Anyway, just on the topic of stories, is
> it okay if I do what I've always done and post my story in here or
> FOG Prime??

I'd say so. But I'm not the authority on such things!

Yep, I already replied to it in the topic...wait a minute, am I allowed to do that, YH??

Anyway, just on the topic of stories, is it okay if I do what I've always done and post my story in here or FOG Prime??