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Thu 25/01/07 at 20:25
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"@optometrytweet"
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Got bored and wrote some poems one night before I slept. Can't remember my motivation, but think they kinda speak for themselves.

Familiar Words

I知 sorry if you like me,
I知 sorry if you care,
But I知 not meant to be with you,
We池e not supposed to pair.

I知 sorry you trust in me,
I知 sorry that you tried,
I wouldn稚 be seen dead with you,
That would dent my pride.

I知 sorry you were moved by me,
I知 sorry I led you on,
Although we had a laugh,
It was always going to be a con.

I知 sorry for the days spent with me,
I知 sorry I made you broke,
Those gifts you bought me were lovely,
You really are a nice bloke.

I知 sorry if you池e upset by me,
I知 sorry I called you a gnome,
I give words to encourage you,
But you値l always be alone.

I know you致e heard these words before,
哲o and 渡o again,
But look at your reflection in the mirror,
You know you can稚 complain.

Jason Searle


One Day It Will Happen

One day it will happen,
Things are soon to be,
I値l pick the right six numbers
And win the lottery.

One day it will happen,
After the things I detest,
I値l learn to relax at the wheel
And pass my driving test.

One day it will happen,
By the laws of prob,
I値l take the right opportunity
And get a fulfilling job.

One day it will happen,
Later on in life,
I値l meet the most perfect girl
And she値l become my wife.

One day it will happen,
As long as you avoid the skids,
I値l become a great father,
And have several healthy kids.

One day it will happen, Jason,
Just you wait and see,
Take your time and enjoy your life,
You値l be as happy as you could be

Jason Searle



A sad one for being rejected for the umpteenth time and an optimistic one, looking forward to the future. See, I'm not all down and out!
Thu 16/09/10 at 09:45
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"AkaSeraphim"
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Love the poems Jason.

Yes i know they have been here but i have to be honest. I have only just noticed the creative forum. I think its because i just automatically open up on General Chat. Oh well :P
Tue 11/05/10 at 08:27
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"@optometrytweet"
Posts: 4,686
Thanks drean.

Not sure if I have the time (or effort) to be able to write any more soon, but if I do I'll post them here. I'd need lots to do a book, but thank-you for the suggestion. Do you ahve any poemes you wish to share?
Mon 10/05/10 at 13:54
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Posts: 1
I think youre poems are great, funny and understandable, you should do more and make a little book.
Wed 12/08/09 at 08:13
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"@optometrytweet"
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Makes me smile when I stumble across these poems...especially the last one...each time it crops up on a search result, life gives me one more from the wishlist.

Only the lottery and kids now (plus the marriage I guess)... Lottery win next please?
Mon 12/05/08 at 20:32
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"@optometrytweet"
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Wow, just googled my name and it came up with this thread. Age old.

In response to Ladybird, she didn't call me a gnome, but it was the closest I could get to "get away from me you hideous beast before I mace you"* that would fit in nicely with the poem.

*Of course that was made up

Actually, I think she may have called me a gnome.


EDIT: Haha, good to be optimistic - Passed my driving test now and not only that, I took the opportunity and hope to have a fulfilling job :p Just leaves, winning the lottery, getting married and having kids. Ah well 2/5 isn't too bad
Sat 10/02/07 at 06:39
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Aw, she called you a gnome? :(
Thu 25/01/07 at 20:25
Regular
"@optometrytweet"
Posts: 4,686
Got bored and wrote some poems one night before I slept. Can't remember my motivation, but think they kinda speak for themselves.

Familiar Words

I知 sorry if you like me,
I知 sorry if you care,
But I知 not meant to be with you,
We池e not supposed to pair.

I知 sorry you trust in me,
I知 sorry that you tried,
I wouldn稚 be seen dead with you,
That would dent my pride.

I知 sorry you were moved by me,
I知 sorry I led you on,
Although we had a laugh,
It was always going to be a con.

I知 sorry for the days spent with me,
I知 sorry I made you broke,
Those gifts you bought me were lovely,
You really are a nice bloke.

I知 sorry if you池e upset by me,
I知 sorry I called you a gnome,
I give words to encourage you,
But you値l always be alone.

I know you致e heard these words before,
哲o and 渡o again,
But look at your reflection in the mirror,
You know you can稚 complain.

Jason Searle


One Day It Will Happen

One day it will happen,
Things are soon to be,
I値l pick the right six numbers
And win the lottery.

One day it will happen,
After the things I detest,
I値l learn to relax at the wheel
And pass my driving test.

One day it will happen,
By the laws of prob,
I値l take the right opportunity
And get a fulfilling job.

One day it will happen,
Later on in life,
I値l meet the most perfect girl
And she値l become my wife.

One day it will happen,
As long as you avoid the skids,
I値l become a great father,
And have several healthy kids.

One day it will happen, Jason,
Just you wait and see,
Take your time and enjoy your life,
You値l be as happy as you could be

Jason Searle



A sad one for being rejected for the umpteenth time and an optimistic one, looking forward to the future. See, I'm not all down and out!

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