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I thought that this would be a good idea when I was sitting watching the Vicar Of Dibley.
The film would be a comedie. Well, let's get satrted.
A Vicar living out in the country side becomes short of money as his ordinary little parish church job isn't paying him well enough. He moves into town after saying his farewells to all the old ladies that loved him dearly in thier little viliage.
At the travel agents, he sees a beatiful girl working at the desk. He walks in and is all shy when he is greeted by this lovely young lady. She shows him through all the houses in the brochure, but none of the houses are in his price range. She takes pity on the vicars financial difficulties and gives him a house for half price in a peaceful residential area.
A few weeks into living in his new house, the neighbours begin to notice a lot of movement about the house. Anyway, he gets found out that he has been having a bit too much fun with all the ladies in the town when his ex-girlfriend hangs his knickers on the church roof. He is humiliated and moves back to the country villiage that he used to live in. About a year later, when he was outside performing a wedding, his ex-girlfriend that had hung his knickers on the church roof, drove past. She screached on the breaks, got out of the car and told the whole villiage what he really was like. Everone is in disgust with him and hardly anyone else comes to his Sunday morning prayers ever again/
THE END.
The film would be a comedie. Well, let's get satrted.
A Vicar living out in the country side becomes short of money as his ordinary little parish church job isn't paying him well enough. He moves into town after saying his farewells to all the old ladies that loved him dearly in thier little viliage.
At the travel agents, he sees a beatiful girl working at the desk. He walks in and is all shy when he is greeted by this lovely young lady. She shows him through all the houses in the brochure, but none of the houses are in his price range. She takes pity on the vicars financial difficulties and gives him a house for half price in a peaceful residential area.
A few weeks into living in his new house, the neighbours begin to notice a lot of movement about the house. Anyway, he gets found out that he has been having a bit too much fun with all the ladies in the town when his ex-girlfriend hangs his knickers on the church roof. He is humiliated and moves back to the country villiage that he used to live in. About a year later, when he was outside performing a wedding, his ex-girlfriend that had hung his knickers on the church roof, drove past. She screached on the breaks, got out of the car and told the whole villiage what he really was like. Everone is in disgust with him and hardly anyone else comes to his Sunday morning prayers ever again/
THE END.
As in giving opinions on it - it is FAR to sketchy. You could condence almost any film into a brief that long and make it sound okay. It's taking that and converting it into a 90 page script that will decide how good it is.
It needs to be expanded. What you've just written would convert to 5 minutes on film. Is it a short film you're trying to make? It all sounds like a typical episode of Ballykissangel as well. Maybe you could cast Stephen Tomkinson and the other one with the funny name. You're not an art student are you? I'm fed up with art students and their god-awful ideas.
I thought that this would be a good idea when I was sitting watching the Vicar Of Dibley.
The film would be a comedie. Well, let's get satrted.
A Vicar living out in the country side becomes short of money as his ordinary little parish church job isn't paying him well enough. He moves into town after saying his farewells to all the old ladies that loved him dearly in thier little viliage.
At the travel agents, he sees a beatiful girl working at the desk. He walks in and is all shy when he is greeted by this lovely young lady. She shows him through all the houses in the brochure, but none of the houses are in his price range. She takes pity on the vicars financial difficulties and gives him a house for half price in a peaceful residential area.
A few weeks into living in his new house, the neighbours begin to notice a lot of movement about the house. Anyway, he gets found out that he has been having a bit too much fun with all the ladies in the town when his ex-girlfriend hangs his knickers on the church roof. He is humiliated and moves back to the country villiage that he used to live in. About a year later, when he was outside performing a wedding, his ex-girlfriend that had hung his knickers on the church roof, drove past. She screached on the breaks, got out of the car and told the whole villiage what he really was like. Everone is in disgust with him and hardly anyone else comes to his Sunday morning prayers ever again/
THE END.
The film would be a comedie. Well, let's get satrted.
A Vicar living out in the country side becomes short of money as his ordinary little parish church job isn't paying him well enough. He moves into town after saying his farewells to all the old ladies that loved him dearly in thier little viliage.
At the travel agents, he sees a beatiful girl working at the desk. He walks in and is all shy when he is greeted by this lovely young lady. She shows him through all the houses in the brochure, but none of the houses are in his price range. She takes pity on the vicars financial difficulties and gives him a house for half price in a peaceful residential area.
A few weeks into living in his new house, the neighbours begin to notice a lot of movement about the house. Anyway, he gets found out that he has been having a bit too much fun with all the ladies in the town when his ex-girlfriend hangs his knickers on the church roof. He is humiliated and moves back to the country villiage that he used to live in. About a year later, when he was outside performing a wedding, his ex-girlfriend that had hung his knickers on the church roof, drove past. She screached on the breaks, got out of the car and told the whole villiage what he really was like. Everone is in disgust with him and hardly anyone else comes to his Sunday morning prayers ever again/
THE END.