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Thu 22/06/06 at 17:55
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Roses are red,
School I dread,
Violets are blue,
The school loos smell like poo,
After school i go fishing,
and catch a pike,
then i carry it home on my bike.

The next day,
I feel smiley and gay,
Do you know why,
because the school week has passed by,





I will finish later, but leave your comments on this starting. I dont think i should give up the day job! lol
Sun 23/07/06 at 22:01
"nitrogoat.co.uk"
Posts: 76
schummi wrote:
> Roses are red,
> School I dread,
> Violets are blue,
> The school loos smell like poo,
> After school i go fishing,
> and catch a pike,
> then i carry it home on my bike.
>
> The next day,
> I feel smiley and gay,
> Do you know why,
> because the school week has passed by,
>
>
>
>
>
> I will finish later, but leave your comments on this starting. I
> dont think i should give up the day job! lol

Poems aren't all about rhyming words
Sun 02/07/06 at 09:13
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"WhaleOilBeefHooked"
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PC I think.
Sat 01/07/06 at 12:13
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"Tornado Of Souls"
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I wonder if that's still in the archive... :p
Was in in the PC WLT or the classic games?
Sat 01/07/06 at 09:13
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"WhaleOilBeefHooked"
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Hehe, they were pure 'quality'.
Fri 30/06/06 at 23:24
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"Tornado Of Souls"
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The quality reminds me of the day me and ST started speaking in poems.
Fri 30/06/06 at 22:54
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haha gay.. Bravo! :P
Thu 22/06/06 at 19:15
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Posts: 465
It's rubbish isnt it! lol oh well bit of humour for you guys!
Thu 22/06/06 at 18:00
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"Mooching around"
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Well... I, er...
Thu 22/06/06 at 17:55
Regular
Posts: 465
Roses are red,
School I dread,
Violets are blue,
The school loos smell like poo,
After school i go fishing,
and catch a pike,
then i carry it home on my bike.

The next day,
I feel smiley and gay,
Do you know why,
because the school week has passed by,





I will finish later, but leave your comments on this starting. I dont think i should give up the day job! lol

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