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I posted a message of a new game idea, but I keep ending up writing it as a story. So I decided to write one about a ready made group of terrorists.(I split the story into sections so its a bit easier to read).
The date is 2035. A group of terrorists wanted some fun. They wanted to see less people crowding the streets. They wanted to see the end of cruelty to other animals. They wanted other creatures to dominate the planet. They wanted to mess up peoples lives, well in a way they did.
They got what they wanted. The government of America found a way of making a spacecraft capable of getting into space without using rocket fuel and boosters. The craft just shoots up into the air by a hover engine.
The terrorists liked the idea of this.
The group of terrorists were small. Only fifteen in total but they new they were all good enough to get through all situations.
Soon after, they booked a plane to America. They were headed to N.A.S.A, where the craft was. When they arrived, they saw that the craft was ready to launch. They needed no space suits, or any helmets but just a uniform to show they worked at N.A.S.A. They worked their way into the building.
A guard stoped them. "Halt. This is for Authorised personell only!"
"We work here" The terrorist group leader replied. "We are the pilots who will fly this craft."
"You dont look like the pilots". Replied the guard.
The leader punched the guard across the face. They guard falls to the ground. Another guard who saw the guard get punched set of an alarm.
The terrorists ran to the craft, all firing their rifles at guards as they approached. They all climed in.
The craft was silver and egg shaped, and was enough for every one of the fifteen terrorists to get in.There was a gun on the botton of the craft. They shut the main door of the craft and drove the craft through the wall of the building, crashing through without even denting the craft.
"Is this craft alien?" Said one of the terrorists to the leader.
"No." He replied. "In fact the British made this craft".
They were airborne and were in space in a small amount of time . They made the craft go at the fastest possible speed. They were heading for another Galaxy. Soon, they were there...
End of part one
The date is 2035. A group of terrorists wanted some fun. They wanted to see less people crowding the streets. They wanted to see the end of cruelty to other animals. They wanted other creatures to dominate the planet. They wanted to mess up peoples lives, well in a way they did.
They got what they wanted. The government of America found a way of making a spacecraft capable of getting into space without using rocket fuel and boosters. The craft just shoots up into the air by a hover engine.
The terrorists liked the idea of this.
The group of terrorists were small. Only fifteen in total but they new they were all good enough to get through all situations.
Soon after, they booked a plane to America. They were headed to N.A.S.A, where the craft was. When they arrived, they saw that the craft was ready to launch. They needed no space suits, or any helmets but just a uniform to show they worked at N.A.S.A. They worked their way into the building.
A guard stoped them. "Halt. This is for Authorised personell only!"
"We work here" The terrorist group leader replied. "We are the pilots who will fly this craft."
"You dont look like the pilots". Replied the guard.
The leader punched the guard across the face. They guard falls to the ground. Another guard who saw the guard get punched set of an alarm.
The terrorists ran to the craft, all firing their rifles at guards as they approached. They all climed in.
The craft was silver and egg shaped, and was enough for every one of the fifteen terrorists to get in.There was a gun on the botton of the craft. They shut the main door of the craft and drove the craft through the wall of the building, crashing through without even denting the craft.
"Is this craft alien?" Said one of the terrorists to the leader.
"No." He replied. "In fact the British made this craft".
They were airborne and were in space in a small amount of time . They made the craft go at the fastest possible speed. They were heading for another Galaxy. Soon, they were there...
End of part one
Start of part two
The group saw this as an oppertunity to test the crafts weapon. They fired down at the brown coloured, muddy planet they saw. Soon after, there was a massive explosion on the planets surface.
"Was that the weapon?" Said a shocked terrorist.
"I bet it was" replied the leader."
"Pete. There's something flying towards us at blinding speed!" Said a terrorist watching over a big screen at the front of the craft.
Pete was the name of the terrorist leader. He was named this by the other terrorists as a nickname.
"Get us out of here! Now!" Replied Pete, who was panicing.
The craft turned round and headed back to earth. They entered Earth's surface not too long after they were in the other galaxy.
"Er, sir, we are being watched." Said a terrorist. Outside, they saw hundreds of guards aiming rifles and rocket launchers at the craft. Behind them, they saw the strange object which came off the planets surface. The object stopped. It was round, and the same colour as the planet. It started glowing bright red. Sonn, they could see light bending to form a point. Next, the point shot a ray of heat and light. The craft with the terrorists dodged. It hit earth and an explosion followed. It was the same size damage that the craft did back on the muddy planet. All over earth was a blinding white light lasting no longer than two seconds. People on the other side of the world never knew what happened.
The craft however was not damaged at all. The group flew to Britain to report the news. They went to the local BBC centre. "Get us on air! We know what the flash was!" Said Pete.
"We will need to interrupt all shows which are on now." Replied a worker at the BBC.
"Do it! Do it now. You can put the other shows on another time. This wont take long!"
The worker cut off all shows.
"We interrupt all shows with a special broadcast. This is from a person who knew what the bright light was all about." Said the worker who started the message for T.V.
"The whole thing started ehen we took a craft from N.A.S.A. We flew it at over 100,000 miles an hour to the next galaxy. We wanted to test the crafts weapon. We fired it and it hit a planet causing a huge explosion. An object then flew towards us so we escaped back to earth. Shortly after, the object was in the sky. It shot a ray of heat and light at earth, totaly destroying the N.A.S.A complex and other things around in a certain radius of the explosion. The explosion was exactly the same size as the one the craft shot. Then followed the ray of light. You may not believe this message but as proof that the craft exists, it is floating outside this BBC centre right now." A picture is shown on T.V with the craft. The message ends.
"Wow man, is that what happened?" Asked the worker.
"Yes it is, and dont interrupt me again." Replied Pete.
"Why? Who are you anyway?" Asked the worker curiously.
"Call me Pete, and I said dont interrupt me!" Pete and the rest of the terrorists exited the building and was met by huge numbers of police.
"You are under arrest for the death of hundreds of innocent people and for stealing the craft. you may have started a war between us and that object." Said a police inspector to Pete. Before Pete could reply, he was bieng drove to the police station and was put in a prison cell.
"Take your mate with you" the inspector said to Pete, as he flung another terrorist into the cell.
"I hate prisons" said the terrorist angrily to Pete. "This is the fourth time I've been in here"
Pete replied, "Yes but we got what we wanted didnt we? To play around with peoples lives"
"Yeah, but we messed up our own lives by ending up in this stinking cell!" Replied the terrorist to Pete's reply.
End of story
The group saw this as an oppertunity to test the crafts weapon. They fired down at the brown coloured, muddy planet they saw. Soon after, there was a massive explosion on the planets surface.
"Was that the weapon?" Said a shocked terrorist.
"I bet it was" replied the leader."
"Pete. There's something flying towards us at blinding speed!" Said a terrorist watching over a big screen at the front of the craft.
Pete was the name of the terrorist leader. He was named this by the other terrorists as a nickname.
"Get us out of here! Now!" Replied Pete, who was panicing.
The craft turned round and headed back to earth. They entered Earth's surface not too long after they were in the other galaxy.
"Er, sir, we are being watched." Said a terrorist. Outside, they saw hundreds of guards aiming rifles and rocket launchers at the craft. Behind them, they saw the strange object which came off the planets surface. The object stopped. It was round, and the same colour as the planet. It started glowing bright red. Sonn, they could see light bending to form a point. Next, the point shot a ray of heat and light. The craft with the terrorists dodged. It hit earth and an explosion followed. It was the same size damage that the craft did back on the muddy planet. All over earth was a blinding white light lasting no longer than two seconds. People on the other side of the world never knew what happened.
The craft however was not damaged at all. The group flew to Britain to report the news. They went to the local BBC centre. "Get us on air! We know what the flash was!" Said Pete.
"We will need to interrupt all shows which are on now." Replied a worker at the BBC.
"Do it! Do it now. You can put the other shows on another time. This wont take long!"
The worker cut off all shows.
"We interrupt all shows with a special broadcast. This is from a person who knew what the bright light was all about." Said the worker who started the message for T.V.
"The whole thing started ehen we took a craft from N.A.S.A. We flew it at over 100,000 miles an hour to the next galaxy. We wanted to test the crafts weapon. We fired it and it hit a planet causing a huge explosion. An object then flew towards us so we escaped back to earth. Shortly after, the object was in the sky. It shot a ray of heat and light at earth, totaly destroying the N.A.S.A complex and other things around in a certain radius of the explosion. The explosion was exactly the same size as the one the craft shot. Then followed the ray of light. You may not believe this message but as proof that the craft exists, it is floating outside this BBC centre right now." A picture is shown on T.V with the craft. The message ends.
"Wow man, is that what happened?" Asked the worker.
"Yes it is, and dont interrupt me again." Replied Pete.
"Why? Who are you anyway?" Asked the worker curiously.
"Call me Pete, and I said dont interrupt me!" Pete and the rest of the terrorists exited the building and was met by huge numbers of police.
"You are under arrest for the death of hundreds of innocent people and for stealing the craft. you may have started a war between us and that object." Said a police inspector to Pete. Before Pete could reply, he was bieng drove to the police station and was put in a prison cell.
"Take your mate with you" the inspector said to Pete, as he flung another terrorist into the cell.
"I hate prisons" said the terrorist angrily to Pete. "This is the fourth time I've been in here"
Pete replied, "Yes but we got what we wanted didnt we? To play around with peoples lives"
"Yeah, but we messed up our own lives by ending up in this stinking cell!" Replied the terrorist to Pete's reply.
End of story
I posted a message of a new game idea, but I keep ending up writing it as a story. So I decided to write one about a ready made group of terrorists.(I split the story into sections so its a bit easier to read).
The date is 2035. A group of terrorists wanted some fun. They wanted to see less people crowding the streets. They wanted to see the end of cruelty to other animals. They wanted other creatures to dominate the planet. They wanted to mess up peoples lives, well in a way they did.
They got what they wanted. The government of America found a way of making a spacecraft capable of getting into space without using rocket fuel and boosters. The craft just shoots up into the air by a hover engine.
The terrorists liked the idea of this.
The group of terrorists were small. Only fifteen in total but they new they were all good enough to get through all situations.
Soon after, they booked a plane to America. They were headed to N.A.S.A, where the craft was. When they arrived, they saw that the craft was ready to launch. They needed no space suits, or any helmets but just a uniform to show they worked at N.A.S.A. They worked their way into the building.
A guard stoped them. "Halt. This is for Authorised personell only!"
"We work here" The terrorist group leader replied. "We are the pilots who will fly this craft."
"You dont look like the pilots". Replied the guard.
The leader punched the guard across the face. They guard falls to the ground. Another guard who saw the guard get punched set of an alarm.
The terrorists ran to the craft, all firing their rifles at guards as they approached. They all climed in.
The craft was silver and egg shaped, and was enough for every one of the fifteen terrorists to get in.There was a gun on the botton of the craft. They shut the main door of the craft and drove the craft through the wall of the building, crashing through without even denting the craft.
"Is this craft alien?" Said one of the terrorists to the leader.
"No." He replied. "In fact the British made this craft".
They were airborne and were in space in a small amount of time . They made the craft go at the fastest possible speed. They were heading for another Galaxy. Soon, they were there...
End of part one
The date is 2035. A group of terrorists wanted some fun. They wanted to see less people crowding the streets. They wanted to see the end of cruelty to other animals. They wanted other creatures to dominate the planet. They wanted to mess up peoples lives, well in a way they did.
They got what they wanted. The government of America found a way of making a spacecraft capable of getting into space without using rocket fuel and boosters. The craft just shoots up into the air by a hover engine.
The terrorists liked the idea of this.
The group of terrorists were small. Only fifteen in total but they new they were all good enough to get through all situations.
Soon after, they booked a plane to America. They were headed to N.A.S.A, where the craft was. When they arrived, they saw that the craft was ready to launch. They needed no space suits, or any helmets but just a uniform to show they worked at N.A.S.A. They worked their way into the building.
A guard stoped them. "Halt. This is for Authorised personell only!"
"We work here" The terrorist group leader replied. "We are the pilots who will fly this craft."
"You dont look like the pilots". Replied the guard.
The leader punched the guard across the face. They guard falls to the ground. Another guard who saw the guard get punched set of an alarm.
The terrorists ran to the craft, all firing their rifles at guards as they approached. They all climed in.
The craft was silver and egg shaped, and was enough for every one of the fifteen terrorists to get in.There was a gun on the botton of the craft. They shut the main door of the craft and drove the craft through the wall of the building, crashing through without even denting the craft.
"Is this craft alien?" Said one of the terrorists to the leader.
"No." He replied. "In fact the British made this craft".
They were airborne and were in space in a small amount of time . They made the craft go at the fastest possible speed. They were heading for another Galaxy. Soon, they were there...
End of part one