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It all starts when you play as a mentally disturbed man, in New York, in his room watching action movies. He has sat through four films already, and is on one last one. The movie finishes. He turns off his television and stands up. It is 10 o'clock at night, so all shops in the city are shut as it is Sunday.
He walks downstairs, gets his trainers on and goes outside with a sports bag. He gets into his car, and sets off down the road, to the city. He parks his car outside a shop. He laughs as he reads the sign "Gordons gun's and ammo".
He walks towards the shop window, gets out his crowbar and wacks at the glass five times. "Hmm, its bullet proof" He says to himself. He goes to the door. He gets out a paper clip. He bends it to form a hook shape and inserts it into the lock. He twists it and the door swings open, revealing a dark room. He leaves the light off. He walks towards the wall, where several shotguns and rifles are strung to the wall. He grabs them all and puts them into his bag. Next its over to the counter. He hits an infra red sensor and the alarms go off.
He quickly smashes the glass counter, grabs four pistols and picks up a box of shotgun shells and bullets. He loads a shotgun.
The shop owner comes from upstairs and pulls out a gun. The mentally disturbed man rolls on the floor and shoots the shop owner twice. He dies. The man sees a grenade, picks it up and keeps it. "For later" He says to himself.
The police sirons are coming closer, so the man legs it to his car and jumps in, with his bag. He drives off, without relising the security cameras caught him.
The man drives to the police station, armed to the max with all his stolen guns. He walks in with his shotgun aimed at the policeman behind a counter.
From here the first level starts. You have to steal body armour, lay down the grenade, and run.
This game would be called terrorist winback. The next level will be the police jail, you were not arrested but you want to rescue a few 'friends'.
Does this sound any good for a game?
He walks downstairs, gets his trainers on and goes outside with a sports bag. He gets into his car, and sets off down the road, to the city. He parks his car outside a shop. He laughs as he reads the sign "Gordons gun's and ammo".
He walks towards the shop window, gets out his crowbar and wacks at the glass five times. "Hmm, its bullet proof" He says to himself. He goes to the door. He gets out a paper clip. He bends it to form a hook shape and inserts it into the lock. He twists it and the door swings open, revealing a dark room. He leaves the light off. He walks towards the wall, where several shotguns and rifles are strung to the wall. He grabs them all and puts them into his bag. Next its over to the counter. He hits an infra red sensor and the alarms go off.
He quickly smashes the glass counter, grabs four pistols and picks up a box of shotgun shells and bullets. He loads a shotgun.
The shop owner comes from upstairs and pulls out a gun. The mentally disturbed man rolls on the floor and shoots the shop owner twice. He dies. The man sees a grenade, picks it up and keeps it. "For later" He says to himself.
The police sirons are coming closer, so the man legs it to his car and jumps in, with his bag. He drives off, without relising the security cameras caught him.
The man drives to the police station, armed to the max with all his stolen guns. He walks in with his shotgun aimed at the policeman behind a counter.
From here the first level starts. You have to steal body armour, lay down the grenade, and run.
This game would be called terrorist winback. The next level will be the police jail, you were not arrested but you want to rescue a few 'friends'.
Does this sound any good for a game?
I wanted it to carry on like this:
After a long, deathful battle, all the prisoners in the jail are now free. They have agreed to be cooperative with you.
You all head down to another police station, the main headquarters for New York police. You find out where the weapons stroage is an fight your way there. Everyone in your terrorist army gets at least one gun and one grenade.
Next, you want money - lots of it! You need to take over the radio station and t.v broadcasting centre. But first you know their will be huge amounts of S.W.A.T police. You get past this by finding a phone. You phone up the president. "We will be in control of what New York watches, what they listen to and when. If any S.W.A.T police or any kind of threat come to attack, there will be a penealty".
The president agrees.
You broadcast that $300,000 must be deposited by the city fountains. If it is not there by 3o'clock the next day, a massive penealty will begin. A massacre on the city streets!
Civilians panic and all run home.
Next, you broadcast a lie, "Anyone staying at home will be killed slower. An oderless gas will be used, causing serious pain to the victim, until after a day, they die.
Soon civilians are crowding the streets.
It is now ten past three, and the money was stolen. You go up to the radio and t.v station, "The money is not there. We warned you of a penalty"!
Your intire terrorist squad surround the most populated streets. Shortly after, ten choppers appear in the sky. A load voice from a speaker is heard clearly, "Surrender or die fugitives"! The choppers come closer. "Surrender your weapons or we will gun you all down! You have been warned"!
"What shall we do brain shot". Says one of the terrorists.
"Get out the rocket launchers" You reply.
The ten remaining terrorists at the tv station get out their rocket launchers. They set the guided missiles and fire. Here your job is the same as all the terrorist squads. Gun down all the civilians. The ten in the broadcasting station start firing missiles into crowds of people. One of your terrorists go to the top of the empire state building with a grenade launcher and sniper rifle.
He speaks into a communicator back to you. "There is the amarican army coming towards us! I repeat there is the..."
He dies. Your intire squad get to a place where they can surprise the army. Here your job is to kill off all the enemy soldiers.
You and your squad get into five chinook's and get out of the city. There are ten of your squad in each chinook. You mave onto Chicago. There you are fired at by panicing civilians, who had a licence to own a gun. Here your job is to sniper all the armed civilians around the city in a fixed time limit before the police arrive to stop you.
The chinooks stop to land. You fuel them all up. You take to the skies. Your destination, a remote army base in the Navada desert. Here, you must kill off the army and keep the base to yourself. With this base, you can control satalites, launch small nukes which are only enough to take out one city, control whats on t.v, whether it is you or whatever, and control everything in the world basically.
I think I will stop here for a bit, the message is getting rather long dont you think. The game is an FPS (First person shoot em up). I got the base idea from myself and the model army base I have made at home.
After a long, deathful battle, all the prisoners in the jail are now free. They have agreed to be cooperative with you.
You all head down to another police station, the main headquarters for New York police. You find out where the weapons stroage is an fight your way there. Everyone in your terrorist army gets at least one gun and one grenade.
Next, you want money - lots of it! You need to take over the radio station and t.v broadcasting centre. But first you know their will be huge amounts of S.W.A.T police. You get past this by finding a phone. You phone up the president. "We will be in control of what New York watches, what they listen to and when. If any S.W.A.T police or any kind of threat come to attack, there will be a penealty".
The president agrees.
You broadcast that $300,000 must be deposited by the city fountains. If it is not there by 3o'clock the next day, a massive penealty will begin. A massacre on the city streets!
Civilians panic and all run home.
Next, you broadcast a lie, "Anyone staying at home will be killed slower. An oderless gas will be used, causing serious pain to the victim, until after a day, they die.
Soon civilians are crowding the streets.
It is now ten past three, and the money was stolen. You go up to the radio and t.v station, "The money is not there. We warned you of a penalty"!
Your intire terrorist squad surround the most populated streets. Shortly after, ten choppers appear in the sky. A load voice from a speaker is heard clearly, "Surrender or die fugitives"! The choppers come closer. "Surrender your weapons or we will gun you all down! You have been warned"!
"What shall we do brain shot". Says one of the terrorists.
"Get out the rocket launchers" You reply.
The ten remaining terrorists at the tv station get out their rocket launchers. They set the guided missiles and fire. Here your job is the same as all the terrorist squads. Gun down all the civilians. The ten in the broadcasting station start firing missiles into crowds of people. One of your terrorists go to the top of the empire state building with a grenade launcher and sniper rifle.
He speaks into a communicator back to you. "There is the amarican army coming towards us! I repeat there is the..."
He dies. Your intire squad get to a place where they can surprise the army. Here your job is to kill off all the enemy soldiers.
You and your squad get into five chinook's and get out of the city. There are ten of your squad in each chinook. You mave onto Chicago. There you are fired at by panicing civilians, who had a licence to own a gun. Here your job is to sniper all the armed civilians around the city in a fixed time limit before the police arrive to stop you.
The chinooks stop to land. You fuel them all up. You take to the skies. Your destination, a remote army base in the Navada desert. Here, you must kill off the army and keep the base to yourself. With this base, you can control satalites, launch small nukes which are only enough to take out one city, control whats on t.v, whether it is you or whatever, and control everything in the world basically.
I think I will stop here for a bit, the message is getting rather long dont you think. The game is an FPS (First person shoot em up). I got the base idea from myself and the model army base I have made at home.
You only mentioned the intro and first level....
Expanding on your ideas would be better.
Howabout this:
After releasing the prisoners you have to try and escape the country. You are no.1 on America's Most Wanted and the only way to stay alive and free is to escape from the country.
You steal a car and head down to a weapons stack you've got hidden under the sand near Mexico. You check your weaponry and head for the nearest Airport. As long as you're careful, no one suspects a thing. You've got to lead the fugatives to a large jet and hyjack it. However, if you make the wrong move, one of the passengers might try to stop you.
The full aim of the game is to try and stay alive, with as many ex-prisoners as possible, whilst making money and attempting to find safe haven!
Expanding on your ideas would be better.
Howabout this:
After releasing the prisoners you have to try and escape the country. You are no.1 on America's Most Wanted and the only way to stay alive and free is to escape from the country.
You steal a car and head down to a weapons stack you've got hidden under the sand near Mexico. You check your weaponry and head for the nearest Airport. As long as you're careful, no one suspects a thing. You've got to lead the fugatives to a large jet and hyjack it. However, if you make the wrong move, one of the passengers might try to stop you.
The full aim of the game is to try and stay alive, with as many ex-prisoners as possible, whilst making money and attempting to find safe haven!
It all starts when you play as a mentally disturbed man, in New York, in his room watching action movies. He has sat through four films already, and is on one last one. The movie finishes. He turns off his television and stands up. It is 10 o'clock at night, so all shops in the city are shut as it is Sunday.
He walks downstairs, gets his trainers on and goes outside with a sports bag. He gets into his car, and sets off down the road, to the city. He parks his car outside a shop. He laughs as he reads the sign "Gordons gun's and ammo".
He walks towards the shop window, gets out his crowbar and wacks at the glass five times. "Hmm, its bullet proof" He says to himself. He goes to the door. He gets out a paper clip. He bends it to form a hook shape and inserts it into the lock. He twists it and the door swings open, revealing a dark room. He leaves the light off. He walks towards the wall, where several shotguns and rifles are strung to the wall. He grabs them all and puts them into his bag. Next its over to the counter. He hits an infra red sensor and the alarms go off.
He quickly smashes the glass counter, grabs four pistols and picks up a box of shotgun shells and bullets. He loads a shotgun.
The shop owner comes from upstairs and pulls out a gun. The mentally disturbed man rolls on the floor and shoots the shop owner twice. He dies. The man sees a grenade, picks it up and keeps it. "For later" He says to himself.
The police sirons are coming closer, so the man legs it to his car and jumps in, with his bag. He drives off, without relising the security cameras caught him.
The man drives to the police station, armed to the max with all his stolen guns. He walks in with his shotgun aimed at the policeman behind a counter.
From here the first level starts. You have to steal body armour, lay down the grenade, and run.
This game would be called terrorist winback. The next level will be the police jail, you were not arrested but you want to rescue a few 'friends'.
Does this sound any good for a game?
He walks downstairs, gets his trainers on and goes outside with a sports bag. He gets into his car, and sets off down the road, to the city. He parks his car outside a shop. He laughs as he reads the sign "Gordons gun's and ammo".
He walks towards the shop window, gets out his crowbar and wacks at the glass five times. "Hmm, its bullet proof" He says to himself. He goes to the door. He gets out a paper clip. He bends it to form a hook shape and inserts it into the lock. He twists it and the door swings open, revealing a dark room. He leaves the light off. He walks towards the wall, where several shotguns and rifles are strung to the wall. He grabs them all and puts them into his bag. Next its over to the counter. He hits an infra red sensor and the alarms go off.
He quickly smashes the glass counter, grabs four pistols and picks up a box of shotgun shells and bullets. He loads a shotgun.
The shop owner comes from upstairs and pulls out a gun. The mentally disturbed man rolls on the floor and shoots the shop owner twice. He dies. The man sees a grenade, picks it up and keeps it. "For later" He says to himself.
The police sirons are coming closer, so the man legs it to his car and jumps in, with his bag. He drives off, without relising the security cameras caught him.
The man drives to the police station, armed to the max with all his stolen guns. He walks in with his shotgun aimed at the policeman behind a counter.
From here the first level starts. You have to steal body armour, lay down the grenade, and run.
This game would be called terrorist winback. The next level will be the police jail, you were not arrested but you want to rescue a few 'friends'.
Does this sound any good for a game?