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Tue 10/07/01 at 19:46
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The Mario brothers looked on each other and looked down on the letter again
“I kidnapped all your friends, if you want to rescue them come to Peach’s castle”. The Mario brothers looked on each other again and decided to go. When they saw what Bowser had done with the castle they got very depressed. All that was left was a burned down building. Luigi could hear someone sulking from inside the castle and told Mario. They decided to go inside and check whom it was. After a long time they could hear that the sulking was very close. Luigi crawled under the stairs and grabbed a tail. He pushed the person out and Mario saw that it was their old friend Yoshi. He said that Peach and Toad was kidnapped and that he hided just in time. He tried to stop the flames but didn’t success so he hide in safety. He wasn’t hurt so the Mario brothers asked him to join them. Yoshi said that Bowser was talking about going to DK Island so the Mario brothers decided to go there. When they got there they could see that it was a big hole right in DK´s face. Mario, Luigi and Yoshi went inside the island and climbed up to DK´s hut. It was a totally mess there but Mario tried to find a trace while Luigi and Yoshi thought of what could have happened there. Mario couldn’t find anything so they climbed down. They were heading over to Cranky’s hut but just when Mario should open the door they heard voices. Yoshi and Luigi peeked inside the hut from the window. They were shocked. Bowser and King K.Rool talked about how they should get rid of Link in Hyrule. Then Bowser said that they could think about that on the way. And then they got over to Kink K.Rool’s ship to head for Hyrule. Mario, Luigi and Yoshi were quick to get on the ship and hided just in time so the crocs didn’t see them. They thought of what Bowser and King K.Rool´s plan was and if they would let Ganondorf join them. Then Mario thought of something, maybe Donkey Kong if locked inside in this ship. They decided to go looking for them and after a while they heard two crocs talking about how dirty the prison was. The crocs decided to make it cleaner so the Mario, Luigi and Yoshi followed them. They could see Donkey Kong locked inside a cell in the corner. Mario grabbed one of the crocs keys while Luigi distracted them. Luigi ran out and got the crocs to fell overboard. He turned around and went happy back to Mario and Yoshi. Mario opened Donkey Kong’s cell and gave him a big hug. Mario asked where the rest off the Kong’s was but Donkey Kong didn’t know. The four friends got back to the hideout and rested. After a few hours the ship stopped. Mario waked up and saw Lake hylia’s laboratory. When Bowser and King K.Rool got out of the ship Mario & Co started to move out. They thought that Bowser and King K.Rool would attack the castle so they run the fastest they could too warn Link and Zelda. When they reached the castle they knocked on the door and got in. They ran to Link’s room and warned him. Link took his sword and shield and decided to join Mario, Luigi, Yoshi and Donkey Kong to defeat the evil. Suddenly they heard a big noise. Bowser and King K.Rool blowed up the gate and started to look for Link and Zelda. They went straight to Zelda’s room and putted her in their bag. Then they searched for Link. They couldn’t find him so they went straight to the temple of time too release Ganondorf. They broke the seal with their strong magic and helped Ganondorf up. Ganondorf heard what Bowser and King K.Rool had planned and decided to join them. Then he asked where they should go next. Mario & Co listened well when Bowser said Spiral Mountain. They planned to kidnap Banjo and Kazooie and get Gruntilda to join them. Mario, Luigi, Yoshi, Donkey Kong and Link ran back to the ship and hided. When the ship reached Jolly Rogers Lagoon the five friends jumped in the silo and warped to Wooded Hollow. They ran trough bottles house and Jinjo village until they reached Banjo’s house. They opened the door and discovered that Banjo wasn’t home. They ran out and hided behind the house before Bowser, King K.Rool and Ganondorf came. A few minuets later Link could hear footsteps inside the house. Mumbo looked after Banjo too. Mario warned him just in time before Bowser & Co came. Ganondorf got really mad when he saw that the house was empty. Bowser, King K.Rool and Ganondorf walked out again and said they should talk to Gruntilda. Mario & Co thought of where Banjo and Kazooie could be when Mumbo thought of something. “I think they are visiting King Jingaling,” he said. The six friends hurried to King Jingaling’s throne chamber and discovered that the chamber was empty. Suddenly someone said: “Great idea birdbrain”. It came from the roof. Jamjars, Banjo and Kazooie were tided up there. Mario thought how they should get them down when Link takes his bow out and shoot the rope so they felled down on Donkey Kong’s belly. “Who done that” Yoshi asked, very angry. Banjo said that it was Kazooies idea to hide in Jingalings chamber because Gruntilda was after them. But Klungo waited inside and tided us up. Klungo is on his way to Gruntilda now. Mario and his friend thought that they had to talk to Banjo and Kazooie so they brought them to the ship. Mario explained everything to them, about Bowser, King K.Rool and Ganondorf and that they will get Gruntilda to join them. When Banjo heard this he decided to join the gang. Kazooie was forced by Banjo to join too. After a few minutes something happened, a big explosion on the other end of the ship. Mario and Luigi run over and saw that Wario and Waluigi attacked the ship. Since Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda wasn´t there, the crocs gave up at once. Wario and Waluigi ran up to the control room and started the engine. Mario and the others didn’t know what to do so they just went to sleep. After a good nap they woke up. Mario and Luigi recognized the place Wario and Waluigi had take the boat at once. They were now in Wario land. Mario thought that Wario and Waluigi hided in the castle so the friends headed there. The castle was very secured so Mario thought that he had to find the secret passage only he and Luigi knew about. The rest of the team couldn’t see this way so they had to wait outside. Back in Spiral Mountain Bowser & Co just saw that the ship was gone. Gruntilda thought that they could buy a wave racer from the shop. But they didn’t know were the ship was taken. Suddenly King K.Rool races towards and fishes up one of his crocs. He asked where the ship is and the croc said that Wario and Waluigi came and took it. Then Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda headed for Wario land. Mario and Luigi was inside Warios castle at this time and was already ready for a fight. They opened the door and saw Wario and Waluigi sitting with their back to them. They agreed to take one each, Mario takes Wario and Luigi take Waluigi. Then they jumped on them. But…Mario and Luigi discovered that it was only dolls of Wario and Waluigi. They planned to escape but Warios guards blocked the door. Wario and Waluigi open the back door and locks Mario and Luigi inside. Yoshi & Co waits outside when they hear a loud noise. Kazooie started flying to the sound and sees four wave racers on the water. She flies quick back to the others and warn them. Then everyone hides. Bowser & Co knocks on the door a few minutes later. When one of the guards opens, Gruntilda shoot a fireball on him so he dies. They sneak inside the castle with Yoshi, Link, Banjo, Kazooie and DK right after them. When they walked for about five minutes DK thinks he hears something. Banjo and Kazooie goes looking while the other follows Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda. When they walked for another five minutes Bowser and friends stops in front of a door. “This is it” Bowser says and slams the door so it opens. Bowser & Co and Warios guards begin to fight and after five minutes Bowser succeeds. Wario and Waluigi have already escaped but Bowser & Co gets their ship back. Yoshi, Link and DK hurry back to where they left Banjo and Kazooie. They split up and try to find them but can’t find them. They decide to go to the cells to look for them. When they get there they search all the cells. They can hear someone stunning from the one in the corner and decide to look. It’s so dark so they can’t see who it is. They decide to open it after all though. DK punch the cell door so it opens and out comes…Sabreman!!! He says that Wario locked him inside for a long time ago and that he haven’t seen light for ages. Yoshi & Co decide to take him with them on their way to defeat evil… Then they go back to the place they left Banjo and Kazooie. They wait here and after a while Banjo, Kazooie, Mario and Luigi comes. They hurry to King K.Rool´s ship and hides on their usual spot. After a good rest Mario and his friends wake up. They doesn’t see where they are at once but after Pikachu appeared the friends realised that they were in Johto. Mario and his friends hurried to Ash’s house but when they got there…it was empty. Then they hurried over to Professor Oak and asked him if he knew where he was. “I think he’s at Professor Elm’s lab. Mario & Co ran too he’s lab and said that Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda were after taking Ash. Ash joined the gang and hoped that he and he’s Pokemons could be to help. Ash thought that Bowser & Co would go see Giovanni so Ash took out his Charizard and asked Mario & Co to sit on. But…Charizard couldn’t take everyone so Banjo flew with Kazooie. They flew over the sea and straight to Viridian Gym. Ash opened the door and saw Bowser & Co and Giovanni talking. Mario and the others sneaked inside to hear too. “So, what do you say?” “Will you join us to defeat the good?”
“Yes, of course” Giovanni answered and went out to the ship with Bowser and the others.
Mario and his gang hurried back to the ship and hided on the usual place. After another good nap Mario woke up and smelled the smell of blood. He looked around and saw that he was in Port Of Adia. Mario thought that Bowser would join up with Primagen and if he did Turok would be in big danger. He wakes up the others and followed Bowser & Co too hear what they would say to Primagen. As they got closer too Primagens hideout they could smell more blood and hear more screams. Bowser killed Primagens guards as he moved on too the Primagen. When Bowser explained everything to him the Primagen got more and more interested. The Primagen was so interested after Bowser was done that he decided to join them. Mario and his friends hurried to Turok and told him all about it. Turok thought that they should make a trap for them but Mario didn’t thought that it was a good idea. But everyone was tired of all the running so Mario gave up and said that they could make a trap. Turok should distract them with an arrow while Luigi should make some shadows. Then Mario should drop a net over them. When Bowser, King. K.Rool, Ganondorf, Gruntilda, Giovanni and Primagen came to take Turok they set the plan on. Turok grabbed his Tek Bow and fired a shot right behind them so they had to turn around. Luigi made some shadows on the wall so they had to go look. Then Mario dropped the net over them. Mario jumped down and tided the net so they couln´t come out. Then he said that everyone could come. When everyone had gathered in front of Bowser & Co Mario asked where Peach and the rest was. Bowser said that he would never say it and that none other than he knew it. Mario asked again but Bowser didn’t say anything this time either. Mario didn’t know what to do so he asked Turok to shoot an arrow on the net when they was far away. Mario & Co headed back to King K.Rool´s ship. After a few minutes the ship moved again. Mario thought of where they were going but couldn’t think of anywhere. All the others was asleep so he started to sleep too. When he woke up the whole ship was empty. Mario saw that it had crashed and that none of his friends were there. He searched the cost but all he could find was Pikachu. They went further in the jungle and heard someone singing. They looked what it was and saw Luigi and Yoshi tided up for a sacrifice ceremony. Mario thought a way to rescue Luigi and Yoshi and threw a coconut behind the trees. Pikachu zapped them there so Mario could tide them up. Then they repeated this until the village was empty. Then they ran in and released Luigi and Yoshi. They started to look for the others but couldn’t find anyone. Then Pikachu suddenly started to run. Mario, Luigi and Yoshi followed until Pikachu stopped. Then he pointed on some leaves on the ground. Mario picked them up and saw that Ash was lying under. Mario tried to wake him but didn’t succeed. Then he carried him down to the water and almost drowned him. But without success. Pikachu zapped him many times but he was still asleep. Mario took all his Pokemons out and flew over the island on Charizard. The only one he could find was Donkey Kong that was looking for the others. Then suddenly, Banjo and Kazooie came flying from the other island. They decided to fly in the air and look for the rest and after a lot of danger; human eating crocodiles and other dangerous stuff all the friends was together again. Then they decided to fly over the sea to the nearest coast and rest there. The nearest coast was one of the coast too Dinosaur Planet and too the place where Fox McCloud is. After a day the friends started to see the coast and when they landed they fall asleep. When they woke up they saw a beautiful woman. Mario asked her where he was and if she had seen Bowser. She said that she was on Dinosaur planet and that she saw Bowser running into the forest for ten minutes ago. Mario & Co hurried outside and followed Bowsers path. They could see a village at the end of the way. Mario thought that Bowser was still there so he dressed up too a woman. He looked inside every tent but coulnd´t find Bowser. Suddenly someone touched his arm. He turned around and saw a familiar face…………………………………………..(Who could it be, Bowser or the village boss)………it was Fox McCloud, his old friend. Mario took him to the bushes outside and told him about Bowsers plan. Fox McCloud got so angry that he decided to join them. He also told them that a suspicious character was in the town for a time ago and that he took one of the plans to get away. Then all of them ran too the other plane to hunt Bowser. Fox McCloud droved after Bowser and after ten minutes he could see him. He fired of a rocket at his plane and Bowser crashed. Fox landed and looked how Bowser was. Then he turned around and said that he was dead. When they was on their way back to the village Luigi could see something on the coast. Fox landed and Mario & Co saw that it was King.K. Rool’s ship. They went in and heard a voice, K.Rool´s. They followed the voice until they could see King K.Rool. Turok fired of an arrow and tided him up. Then they left the ship with King K.Rool in a bag. They headed back to the village and put him in the prison where they could find Bowser too. The police said that he came running back here after a big bang and that they arrested him. Suddenly a fireball came from the air and the whole forests started too burn. Mario grabbed Ash’s Squirtle and said that he should stop the fire. When the fire stopped Gruntilda came down and fired of many fireballs on Banjo and Kazooie. DK walked over to her and punched her so she almost died. Then they put her too in the prison. Then they went over too the plane and started looking for the rest. All the other had gathered together on a distant beach planning a way to get away. Fox landed on the other side of the island and then Mario & Co started too walk… Mario thought that they had to get them to the forest so he threw a coconut in one of the trees. All of them went to check and before they even knew it they was caught. Fox flied back to village and putted the rest in prison. And then the evil was defeated and the good team could head back to their homes. All of the evil guys escaped the day after they were putted in though. And the Princess and Toad was found in Mario’s basement. The end.

Thanks for reading.
Hope you enjoyed it.
Sorry for the bad english.
Tue 10/07/01 at 19:46
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The Mario brothers looked on each other and looked down on the letter again
“I kidnapped all your friends, if you want to rescue them come to Peach’s castle”. The Mario brothers looked on each other again and decided to go. When they saw what Bowser had done with the castle they got very depressed. All that was left was a burned down building. Luigi could hear someone sulking from inside the castle and told Mario. They decided to go inside and check whom it was. After a long time they could hear that the sulking was very close. Luigi crawled under the stairs and grabbed a tail. He pushed the person out and Mario saw that it was their old friend Yoshi. He said that Peach and Toad was kidnapped and that he hided just in time. He tried to stop the flames but didn’t success so he hide in safety. He wasn’t hurt so the Mario brothers asked him to join them. Yoshi said that Bowser was talking about going to DK Island so the Mario brothers decided to go there. When they got there they could see that it was a big hole right in DK´s face. Mario, Luigi and Yoshi went inside the island and climbed up to DK´s hut. It was a totally mess there but Mario tried to find a trace while Luigi and Yoshi thought of what could have happened there. Mario couldn’t find anything so they climbed down. They were heading over to Cranky’s hut but just when Mario should open the door they heard voices. Yoshi and Luigi peeked inside the hut from the window. They were shocked. Bowser and King K.Rool talked about how they should get rid of Link in Hyrule. Then Bowser said that they could think about that on the way. And then they got over to Kink K.Rool’s ship to head for Hyrule. Mario, Luigi and Yoshi were quick to get on the ship and hided just in time so the crocs didn’t see them. They thought of what Bowser and King K.Rool´s plan was and if they would let Ganondorf join them. Then Mario thought of something, maybe Donkey Kong if locked inside in this ship. They decided to go looking for them and after a while they heard two crocs talking about how dirty the prison was. The crocs decided to make it cleaner so the Mario, Luigi and Yoshi followed them. They could see Donkey Kong locked inside a cell in the corner. Mario grabbed one of the crocs keys while Luigi distracted them. Luigi ran out and got the crocs to fell overboard. He turned around and went happy back to Mario and Yoshi. Mario opened Donkey Kong’s cell and gave him a big hug. Mario asked where the rest off the Kong’s was but Donkey Kong didn’t know. The four friends got back to the hideout and rested. After a few hours the ship stopped. Mario waked up and saw Lake hylia’s laboratory. When Bowser and King K.Rool got out of the ship Mario & Co started to move out. They thought that Bowser and King K.Rool would attack the castle so they run the fastest they could too warn Link and Zelda. When they reached the castle they knocked on the door and got in. They ran to Link’s room and warned him. Link took his sword and shield and decided to join Mario, Luigi, Yoshi and Donkey Kong to defeat the evil. Suddenly they heard a big noise. Bowser and King K.Rool blowed up the gate and started to look for Link and Zelda. They went straight to Zelda’s room and putted her in their bag. Then they searched for Link. They couldn’t find him so they went straight to the temple of time too release Ganondorf. They broke the seal with their strong magic and helped Ganondorf up. Ganondorf heard what Bowser and King K.Rool had planned and decided to join them. Then he asked where they should go next. Mario & Co listened well when Bowser said Spiral Mountain. They planned to kidnap Banjo and Kazooie and get Gruntilda to join them. Mario, Luigi, Yoshi, Donkey Kong and Link ran back to the ship and hided. When the ship reached Jolly Rogers Lagoon the five friends jumped in the silo and warped to Wooded Hollow. They ran trough bottles house and Jinjo village until they reached Banjo’s house. They opened the door and discovered that Banjo wasn’t home. They ran out and hided behind the house before Bowser, King K.Rool and Ganondorf came. A few minuets later Link could hear footsteps inside the house. Mumbo looked after Banjo too. Mario warned him just in time before Bowser & Co came. Ganondorf got really mad when he saw that the house was empty. Bowser, King K.Rool and Ganondorf walked out again and said they should talk to Gruntilda. Mario & Co thought of where Banjo and Kazooie could be when Mumbo thought of something. “I think they are visiting King Jingaling,” he said. The six friends hurried to King Jingaling’s throne chamber and discovered that the chamber was empty. Suddenly someone said: “Great idea birdbrain”. It came from the roof. Jamjars, Banjo and Kazooie were tided up there. Mario thought how they should get them down when Link takes his bow out and shoot the rope so they felled down on Donkey Kong’s belly. “Who done that” Yoshi asked, very angry. Banjo said that it was Kazooies idea to hide in Jingalings chamber because Gruntilda was after them. But Klungo waited inside and tided us up. Klungo is on his way to Gruntilda now. Mario and his friend thought that they had to talk to Banjo and Kazooie so they brought them to the ship. Mario explained everything to them, about Bowser, King K.Rool and Ganondorf and that they will get Gruntilda to join them. When Banjo heard this he decided to join the gang. Kazooie was forced by Banjo to join too. After a few minutes something happened, a big explosion on the other end of the ship. Mario and Luigi run over and saw that Wario and Waluigi attacked the ship. Since Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda wasn´t there, the crocs gave up at once. Wario and Waluigi ran up to the control room and started the engine. Mario and the others didn’t know what to do so they just went to sleep. After a good nap they woke up. Mario and Luigi recognized the place Wario and Waluigi had take the boat at once. They were now in Wario land. Mario thought that Wario and Waluigi hided in the castle so the friends headed there. The castle was very secured so Mario thought that he had to find the secret passage only he and Luigi knew about. The rest of the team couldn’t see this way so they had to wait outside. Back in Spiral Mountain Bowser & Co just saw that the ship was gone. Gruntilda thought that they could buy a wave racer from the shop. But they didn’t know were the ship was taken. Suddenly King K.Rool races towards and fishes up one of his crocs. He asked where the ship is and the croc said that Wario and Waluigi came and took it. Then Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda headed for Wario land. Mario and Luigi was inside Warios castle at this time and was already ready for a fight. They opened the door and saw Wario and Waluigi sitting with their back to them. They agreed to take one each, Mario takes Wario and Luigi take Waluigi. Then they jumped on them. But…Mario and Luigi discovered that it was only dolls of Wario and Waluigi. They planned to escape but Warios guards blocked the door. Wario and Waluigi open the back door and locks Mario and Luigi inside. Yoshi & Co waits outside when they hear a loud noise. Kazooie started flying to the sound and sees four wave racers on the water. She flies quick back to the others and warn them. Then everyone hides. Bowser & Co knocks on the door a few minutes later. When one of the guards opens, Gruntilda shoot a fireball on him so he dies. They sneak inside the castle with Yoshi, Link, Banjo, Kazooie and DK right after them. When they walked for about five minutes DK thinks he hears something. Banjo and Kazooie goes looking while the other follows Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda. When they walked for another five minutes Bowser and friends stops in front of a door. “This is it” Bowser says and slams the door so it opens. Bowser & Co and Warios guards begin to fight and after five minutes Bowser succeeds. Wario and Waluigi have already escaped but Bowser & Co gets their ship back. Yoshi, Link and DK hurry back to where they left Banjo and Kazooie. They split up and try to find them but can’t find them. They decide to go to the cells to look for them. When they get there they search all the cells. They can hear someone stunning from the one in the corner and decide to look. It’s so dark so they can’t see who it is. They decide to open it after all though. DK punch the cell door so it opens and out comes…Sabreman!!! He says that Wario locked him inside for a long time ago and that he haven’t seen light for ages. Yoshi & Co decide to take him with them on their way to defeat evil… Then they go back to the place they left Banjo and Kazooie. They wait here and after a while Banjo, Kazooie, Mario and Luigi comes. They hurry to King K.Rool´s ship and hides on their usual spot. After a good rest Mario and his friends wake up. They doesn’t see where they are at once but after Pikachu appeared the friends realised that they were in Johto. Mario and his friends hurried to Ash’s house but when they got there…it was empty. Then they hurried over to Professor Oak and asked him if he knew where he was. “I think he’s at Professor Elm’s lab. Mario & Co ran too he’s lab and said that Bowser, King K.Rool, Ganondorf and Gruntilda were after taking Ash. Ash joined the gang and hoped that he and he’s Pokemons could be to help. Ash thought that Bowser & Co would go see Giovanni so Ash took out his Charizard and asked Mario & Co to sit on. But…Charizard couldn’t take everyone so Banjo flew with Kazooie. They flew over the sea and straight to Viridian Gym. Ash opened the door and saw Bowser & Co and Giovanni talking. Mario and the others sneaked inside to hear too. “So, what do you say?” “Will you join us to defeat the good?”
“Yes, of course” Giovanni answered and went out to the ship with Bowser and the others.
Mario and his gang hurried back to the ship and hided on the usual place. After another good nap Mario woke up and smelled the smell of blood. He looked around and saw that he was in Port Of Adia. Mario thought that Bowser would join up with Primagen and if he did Turok would be in big danger. He wakes up the others and followed Bowser & Co too hear what they would say to Primagen. As they got closer too Primagens hideout they could smell more blood and hear more screams. Bowser killed Primagens guards as he moved on too the Primagen. When Bowser explained everything to him the Primagen got more and more interested. The Primagen was so interested after Bowser was done that he decided to join them. Mario and his friends hurried to Turok and told him all about it. Turok thought that they should make a trap for them but Mario didn’t thought that it was a good idea. But everyone was tired of all the running so Mario gave up and said that they could make a trap. Turok should distract them with an arrow while Luigi should make some shadows. Then Mario should drop a net over them. When Bowser, King. K.Rool, Ganondorf, Gruntilda, Giovanni and Primagen came to take Turok they set the plan on. Turok grabbed his Tek Bow and fired a shot right behind them so they had to turn around. Luigi made some shadows on the wall so they had to go look. Then Mario dropped the net over them. Mario jumped down and tided the net so they couln´t come out. Then he said that everyone could come. When everyone had gathered in front of Bowser & Co Mario asked where Peach and the rest was. Bowser said that he would never say it and that none other than he knew it. Mario asked again but Bowser didn’t say anything this time either. Mario didn’t know what to do so he asked Turok to shoot an arrow on the net when they was far away. Mario & Co headed back to King K.Rool´s ship. After a few minutes the ship moved again. Mario thought of where they were going but couldn’t think of anywhere. All the others was asleep so he started to sleep too. When he woke up the whole ship was empty. Mario saw that it had crashed and that none of his friends were there. He searched the cost but all he could find was Pikachu. They went further in the jungle and heard someone singing. They looked what it was and saw Luigi and Yoshi tided up for a sacrifice ceremony. Mario thought a way to rescue Luigi and Yoshi and threw a coconut behind the trees. Pikachu zapped them there so Mario could tide them up. Then they repeated this until the village was empty. Then they ran in and released Luigi and Yoshi. They started to look for the others but couldn’t find anyone. Then Pikachu suddenly started to run. Mario, Luigi and Yoshi followed until Pikachu stopped. Then he pointed on some leaves on the ground. Mario picked them up and saw that Ash was lying under. Mario tried to wake him but didn’t succeed. Then he carried him down to the water and almost drowned him. But without success. Pikachu zapped him many times but he was still asleep. Mario took all his Pokemons out and flew over the island on Charizard. The only one he could find was Donkey Kong that was looking for the others. Then suddenly, Banjo and Kazooie came flying from the other island. They decided to fly in the air and look for the rest and after a lot of danger; human eating crocodiles and other dangerous stuff all the friends was together again. Then they decided to fly over the sea to the nearest coast and rest there. The nearest coast was one of the coast too Dinosaur Planet and too the place where Fox McCloud is. After a day the friends started to see the coast and when they landed they fall asleep. When they woke up they saw a beautiful woman. Mario asked her where he was and if she had seen Bowser. She said that she was on Dinosaur planet and that she saw Bowser running into the forest for ten minutes ago. Mario & Co hurried outside and followed Bowsers path. They could see a village at the end of the way. Mario thought that Bowser was still there so he dressed up too a woman. He looked inside every tent but coulnd´t find Bowser. Suddenly someone touched his arm. He turned around and saw a familiar face…………………………………………..(Who could it be, Bowser or the village boss)………it was Fox McCloud, his old friend. Mario took him to the bushes outside and told him about Bowsers plan. Fox McCloud got so angry that he decided to join them. He also told them that a suspicious character was in the town for a time ago and that he took one of the plans to get away. Then all of them ran too the other plane to hunt Bowser. Fox McCloud droved after Bowser and after ten minutes he could see him. He fired of a rocket at his plane and Bowser crashed. Fox landed and looked how Bowser was. Then he turned around and said that he was dead. When they was on their way back to the village Luigi could see something on the coast. Fox landed and Mario & Co saw that it was King.K. Rool’s ship. They went in and heard a voice, K.Rool´s. They followed the voice until they could see King K.Rool. Turok fired of an arrow and tided him up. Then they left the ship with King K.Rool in a bag. They headed back to the village and put him in the prison where they could find Bowser too. The police said that he came running back here after a big bang and that they arrested him. Suddenly a fireball came from the air and the whole forests started too burn. Mario grabbed Ash’s Squirtle and said that he should stop the fire. When the fire stopped Gruntilda came down and fired of many fireballs on Banjo and Kazooie. DK walked over to her and punched her so she almost died. Then they put her too in the prison. Then they went over too the plane and started looking for the rest. All the other had gathered together on a distant beach planning a way to get away. Fox landed on the other side of the island and then Mario & Co started too walk… Mario thought that they had to get them to the forest so he threw a coconut in one of the trees. All of them went to check and before they even knew it they was caught. Fox flied back to village and putted the rest in prison. And then the evil was defeated and the good team could head back to their homes. All of the evil guys escaped the day after they were putted in though. And the Princess and Toad was found in Mario’s basement. The end.

Thanks for reading.
Hope you enjoyed it.
Sorry for the bad english.
Tue 10/07/01 at 22:10
Posts: 0
That was soooooooooooo long! I tried to read it all, but you used no spacing or paragraphs to make it readable!

The bits I read were very good though!
Thu 12/07/01 at 20:23
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No one who has something to say?
Thu 12/07/01 at 20:36
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It's a good story. Use sapces and the like next time though.
Thu 12/07/01 at 21:02
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Good story, next time use spaces between paragraphs I kept getting lost.
Fri 13/07/01 at 10:25
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"DS..."
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good story...
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