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Thu 05/07/01 at 22:31
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“THIS ISN’T TRUE!” Sheepy stood up, pointing the gun at the mirror… “You’re just trying to convince me that I’m the killer so you can walk away…

“LOOK AT THE MIRROR, SHEEPY.”

Sheepy looked deep into the mirror.

“You are the killer.” Sheepy watched the mirror as he spoke the words to himself. “You are no more than a demon, wishing to be an angel.”

The thoughts of the dead.

Escaping.

No longer haunting.

Freedom had it’s price.

It was worth it.

The balance had tipped.

And so it ended.
Fri 13/07/01 at 03:08
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"How Handy."
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Right,

I hereby purchase the rights to all of Grix's writings for 31p and half an ice white

Don't worry mate, i pay well.

Andi
Fri 13/07/01 at 03:00
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"How Handy."
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Go for it mate. If that dont win GAD there's something wrong here. Tony?

Andi
Thu 12/07/01 at 22:14
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WHSmith. On the shelf: "SE7EN" by Grix Thraves.

Possibility.
Thu 12/07/01 at 22:07
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:D
Fri 06/07/01 at 19:15
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"Too Orangy For Crow"
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Brilliant! It is almost as if it actually happened.....
Fri 06/07/01 at 18:05
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Wow!! I've already said this on part one, but what an amazing story!!

I'm gonna have to improve my sequel to have any tiny chance of living up to this!!
Fri 06/07/01 at 14:46
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Grix Thraves wrote:
If we started a
> new story FM, would you be interested in writing with... err...
> would you be interesting in reading it, and then possibly writing in
> it?

At 50p a word I'll write cookery books.
Pukka.
Fri 06/07/01 at 14:22
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Thanks Pb.
Fri 06/07/01 at 14:21
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:0)

Just another way of writing, I suppose. You could use tea this time... but it doesn't smell as distinct.

If we started a new story FM, would you be interested in writing with... err... would you be interesting in reading it, and then possibly writing in it?

;0)
Fri 06/07/01 at 14:20
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And the sequel to that can be called 6 of one and half a dozen of the other....

Good story Grix. A mix of cultural references placed together with a hint of originality.

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