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It's very dark here I wonder where I am. There is a faint oder in the air all around me and I seem to be laying on a hard surface. I can feel something cold and metallic around me, it’s a strange sensation. What ever it was it’s gone now and I am being moved, I’m on something else, it’s cold on my back.
I can feel a pressure on my head, what ever that was has stopped and now I can see but I can't look around me only straight up. I appear to be in a large room. Something has picked up what I am on and moved it, I’m now in a much smaller room, and it’s very hot in here.
It’s getting hotter, far to hot, I can see large metal pipes on the ceiling glowing red with heat.
I can feel that there are others like me in the room, but they are not moving or trying to escape, I can’t seem to move either I can’t make a sound.
I can feel my body tightening and going harder due to the heat, it hurts so much and yet I can’t yell out I just want to scream in pain.
It seemed like it was forever in that heat and the object we are on has been placed back in the room we were first in, I still can’t seem to move around to see the others around me.
Something has picked me up and I think I am now stacked on another body, what ever it was that picked me up was very large and warm.
I’m inside a clear material bag inside a huge see-through case.
Whatever it was that moved me before there seems to be more of them, smaller and bigger they are peering at me, one of the smaller ones seems to be pointing straight at me i can't help but wonder why.
The bag we are in has been picked up and a smaller one of them is holding us, we seem to be outside I can see through the material the bright blue sky, if only I could move.
It’s opened the bag and is holding one of us maybe they are letting us go, no wait it’s taken a chunk out of his head, OH MY GOD it’s eating him, why didn’t he struggle, why didn’t he try to get away? It’s pulled off his leg and started eating it.
Oh no, one of them has picked me up I can feel their huge teeth on my arm breaking it off in one.
It’s hurts so much, why are they doing this to us.
(Please think what the gingerbread men go through)
I can feel a pressure on my head, what ever that was has stopped and now I can see but I can't look around me only straight up. I appear to be in a large room. Something has picked up what I am on and moved it, I’m now in a much smaller room, and it’s very hot in here.
It’s getting hotter, far to hot, I can see large metal pipes on the ceiling glowing red with heat.
I can feel that there are others like me in the room, but they are not moving or trying to escape, I can’t seem to move either I can’t make a sound.
I can feel my body tightening and going harder due to the heat, it hurts so much and yet I can’t yell out I just want to scream in pain.
It seemed like it was forever in that heat and the object we are on has been placed back in the room we were first in, I still can’t seem to move around to see the others around me.
Something has picked me up and I think I am now stacked on another body, what ever it was that picked me up was very large and warm.
I’m inside a clear material bag inside a huge see-through case.
Whatever it was that moved me before there seems to be more of them, smaller and bigger they are peering at me, one of the smaller ones seems to be pointing straight at me i can't help but wonder why.
The bag we are in has been picked up and a smaller one of them is holding us, we seem to be outside I can see through the material the bright blue sky, if only I could move.
It’s opened the bag and is holding one of us maybe they are letting us go, no wait it’s taken a chunk out of his head, OH MY GOD it’s eating him, why didn’t he struggle, why didn’t he try to get away? It’s pulled off his leg and started eating it.
Oh no, one of them has picked me up I can feel their huge teeth on my arm breaking it off in one.
It’s hurts so much, why are they doing this to us.
(Please think what the gingerbread men go through)
Yeah,I wonder what it would be like to be one, and have your limbs off one by one?
Good story.
Good story.
It's very dark here I wonder where I am. There is a faint oder in the air all around me and I seem to be laying on a hard surface. I can feel something cold and metallic around me, it’s a strange sensation. What ever it was it’s gone now and I am being moved, I’m on something else, it’s cold on my back.
I can feel a pressure on my head, what ever that was has stopped and now I can see but I can't look around me only straight up. I appear to be in a large room. Something has picked up what I am on and moved it, I’m now in a much smaller room, and it’s very hot in here.
It’s getting hotter, far to hot, I can see large metal pipes on the ceiling glowing red with heat.
I can feel that there are others like me in the room, but they are not moving or trying to escape, I can’t seem to move either I can’t make a sound.
I can feel my body tightening and going harder due to the heat, it hurts so much and yet I can’t yell out I just want to scream in pain.
It seemed like it was forever in that heat and the object we are on has been placed back in the room we were first in, I still can’t seem to move around to see the others around me.
Something has picked me up and I think I am now stacked on another body, what ever it was that picked me up was very large and warm.
I’m inside a clear material bag inside a huge see-through case.
Whatever it was that moved me before there seems to be more of them, smaller and bigger they are peering at me, one of the smaller ones seems to be pointing straight at me i can't help but wonder why.
The bag we are in has been picked up and a smaller one of them is holding us, we seem to be outside I can see through the material the bright blue sky, if only I could move.
It’s opened the bag and is holding one of us maybe they are letting us go, no wait it’s taken a chunk out of his head, OH MY GOD it’s eating him, why didn’t he struggle, why didn’t he try to get away? It’s pulled off his leg and started eating it.
Oh no, one of them has picked me up I can feel their huge teeth on my arm breaking it off in one.
It’s hurts so much, why are they doing this to us.
(Please think what the gingerbread men go through)
I can feel a pressure on my head, what ever that was has stopped and now I can see but I can't look around me only straight up. I appear to be in a large room. Something has picked up what I am on and moved it, I’m now in a much smaller room, and it’s very hot in here.
It’s getting hotter, far to hot, I can see large metal pipes on the ceiling glowing red with heat.
I can feel that there are others like me in the room, but they are not moving or trying to escape, I can’t seem to move either I can’t make a sound.
I can feel my body tightening and going harder due to the heat, it hurts so much and yet I can’t yell out I just want to scream in pain.
It seemed like it was forever in that heat and the object we are on has been placed back in the room we were first in, I still can’t seem to move around to see the others around me.
Something has picked me up and I think I am now stacked on another body, what ever it was that picked me up was very large and warm.
I’m inside a clear material bag inside a huge see-through case.
Whatever it was that moved me before there seems to be more of them, smaller and bigger they are peering at me, one of the smaller ones seems to be pointing straight at me i can't help but wonder why.
The bag we are in has been picked up and a smaller one of them is holding us, we seem to be outside I can see through the material the bright blue sky, if only I could move.
It’s opened the bag and is holding one of us maybe they are letting us go, no wait it’s taken a chunk out of his head, OH MY GOD it’s eating him, why didn’t he struggle, why didn’t he try to get away? It’s pulled off his leg and started eating it.
Oh no, one of them has picked me up I can feel their huge teeth on my arm breaking it off in one.
It’s hurts so much, why are they doing this to us.
(Please think what the gingerbread men go through)