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Sorry I did it in word and then copied it, I didnt think it would be so long.
Here's the rest
“It’s ok,” Big Sally said comforting her, “It’s just, you’re scared because you’ve come here for the first time after finding Goatboy. It’s ok we’re all here for you,” Emmalou stopped crying and felt her inner strength come back, “Anyway we’re all going now, are you going to come?” Emmalou stood for a second, realising now was the time, it was now or never,
“I think so, I’m going to see what Er-no’s doing.” They both walked up to the stage together, Emmalou noticed that the broken glass had been cleaned up. Once up on the stage, Emmalou looked round but couldn’t see Er-no.
“Grand Prix do you know where Er-no is?” she asked, looking round still.
“Yes he’s practicing some of his lines with Lady Sniper,” He said they were going to stop back, “Are you going to come now?”
“No,” she answered, “There’s something I need to do. Where are they?” she asked.
“Over there,” he pointed behind the curtain, Everyone was now leaving. Grix Thraves came over and gave her the keys and said to pass them on to Er-no. The stage was empty. She took three deep breaths and walked to the curtain.
Chapter 14
Emmalou opened the curtain to find Er-no sat with Lady Sniper, practicing the final scene. Emmalou looked at Er-no, he nodded at her, so she started,
“Lady Sniper,” she asked, “Did you love Goatboy?”
“Of course I did,” answered Lady Sniper.
“Why didn’t you ever tell me about what happened to you when you were young?” she was being very cautious because she did not know how Lady Sniper would react. Lady Sniper tried to act innocently,
“I don’t know what you mean!” Lady Sniper said.
“Lady Sniper I’m talking about when you were abducted when you were eight. Please, I understand how you must be feeling. You need to talk about it.”
Lady Sniper was shocked, “Know how I must be feeling. How can you say that? You weren’t there you didn’t go through what I went through. You can’t say you know what it is like to be there.”
“Was he ever caught?” Emmalou asked.
“Yes he denied it and got let off. He never went to prison.”
“Is that why he still haunts you to this day? Why you’ve never been able to put it behind you?”
“Yes.” Emmalou went in for the kill.
“Did you have a flashback on the night that Goatboy died? Lady Sniper I want to know what happened,” Er-no said, “Did he make love to you?”
“After everyone left,” Lady Sniper began, her voice wavering, “He took me to the stage and sat me down on the bed. Then he whispered in my ear, ‘I have a surprise for you.’ He stood back from me and went into his pocket to get something. Then... then... then he changed. He wasn’t Goatboy anymore...”
“He was the paedophile,” finished off Emmalou. Lady Sniper nodded and continued.
“I didn’t want him to attack me again so I had to get away from him. I got tangled up in the covers and only just got free, and I threw the chair at him and it missed him. He was trying to get me. He kept getting nearer. He kept shouting out my name. I was trying to get away but I kept falling. Then he grabbed me,” she was crying, “I managed to break myself free and then I found a stage weight. When I turned round he was right in front of me so I hurled it at him and it knocked him out.
“I didn’t know what to do, I was so scared and then he woke up. He started to move and I saw a rope hanging above him so I grabbed it and tied a knot. I knew how to do it...”
“Because you were in the girls scouts. Yes I know,” finished Emmalou.
Lady Sniper continued, “I put his head in it and I put more and more stage weights on the rope so he would die. I had to kill him, he would have hurt me. Then his robe fell of and the box hit me on the head. I think it knocked me out of the flashback and I looked in the box and saw the ring. I read what it said and then... and then I looked up and saw it was Goatboy.”
As Lady Sniper said Goatboy’s name she suddenly went white as a ghost, his name haunted her Emmalou realised. Lady Sniper started to scream, like something was taking her over. She got up and in a flash grabbed hold of Er-no, and dragged him by his hair over to the ballroom stairs from the production. He struggled with all his might to break free from her psychotic grip, but it was in vain, he yelled and screamed but now Lady Sniper was beyond the power of reason.
Emmalou looked on helplessly as she watched the one man she loved being dragged by the insane girl. Er-no and his captor went behind the 4 meter high staircase which was counter balanced by stage weights. Emma lou started to scream and cry out is hopeless agony as they went out of view behind the prop. Emmalou cryed out with all her might, “Lady Sniper... Please... Don’t...” then collapsed in shock and horror as she heard Er-no scream out, “NOOOOO....” His voice deadened as she heard his rib cage be crushed by a stage weight that Lady Sniper hurled down with all her might.
Emmalou wailed as she saw a trickle of blood come from behind the stairs. “Er-no,” she cried out in desperation, “Don’t leave me come back.” but it was too late.
Lady Sniper came round, her face screwed up in disgust and anger, her hands covered in the bright red blood of Er-no and she carried a metal bar.
It did not take long for Emmalou to join Er-no
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it
Here's the rest
“It’s ok,” Big Sally said comforting her, “It’s just, you’re scared because you’ve come here for the first time after finding Goatboy. It’s ok we’re all here for you,” Emmalou stopped crying and felt her inner strength come back, “Anyway we’re all going now, are you going to come?” Emmalou stood for a second, realising now was the time, it was now or never,
“I think so, I’m going to see what Er-no’s doing.” They both walked up to the stage together, Emmalou noticed that the broken glass had been cleaned up. Once up on the stage, Emmalou looked round but couldn’t see Er-no.
“Grand Prix do you know where Er-no is?” she asked, looking round still.
“Yes he’s practicing some of his lines with Lady Sniper,” He said they were going to stop back, “Are you going to come now?”
“No,” she answered, “There’s something I need to do. Where are they?” she asked.
“Over there,” he pointed behind the curtain, Everyone was now leaving. Grix Thraves came over and gave her the keys and said to pass them on to Er-no. The stage was empty. She took three deep breaths and walked to the curtain.
Chapter 14
Emmalou opened the curtain to find Er-no sat with Lady Sniper, practicing the final scene. Emmalou looked at Er-no, he nodded at her, so she started,
“Lady Sniper,” she asked, “Did you love Goatboy?”
“Of course I did,” answered Lady Sniper.
“Why didn’t you ever tell me about what happened to you when you were young?” she was being very cautious because she did not know how Lady Sniper would react. Lady Sniper tried to act innocently,
“I don’t know what you mean!” Lady Sniper said.
“Lady Sniper I’m talking about when you were abducted when you were eight. Please, I understand how you must be feeling. You need to talk about it.”
Lady Sniper was shocked, “Know how I must be feeling. How can you say that? You weren’t there you didn’t go through what I went through. You can’t say you know what it is like to be there.”
“Was he ever caught?” Emmalou asked.
“Yes he denied it and got let off. He never went to prison.”
“Is that why he still haunts you to this day? Why you’ve never been able to put it behind you?”
“Yes.” Emmalou went in for the kill.
“Did you have a flashback on the night that Goatboy died? Lady Sniper I want to know what happened,” Er-no said, “Did he make love to you?”
“After everyone left,” Lady Sniper began, her voice wavering, “He took me to the stage and sat me down on the bed. Then he whispered in my ear, ‘I have a surprise for you.’ He stood back from me and went into his pocket to get something. Then... then... then he changed. He wasn’t Goatboy anymore...”
“He was the paedophile,” finished off Emmalou. Lady Sniper nodded and continued.
“I didn’t want him to attack me again so I had to get away from him. I got tangled up in the covers and only just got free, and I threw the chair at him and it missed him. He was trying to get me. He kept getting nearer. He kept shouting out my name. I was trying to get away but I kept falling. Then he grabbed me,” she was crying, “I managed to break myself free and then I found a stage weight. When I turned round he was right in front of me so I hurled it at him and it knocked him out.
“I didn’t know what to do, I was so scared and then he woke up. He started to move and I saw a rope hanging above him so I grabbed it and tied a knot. I knew how to do it...”
“Because you were in the girls scouts. Yes I know,” finished Emmalou.
Lady Sniper continued, “I put his head in it and I put more and more stage weights on the rope so he would die. I had to kill him, he would have hurt me. Then his robe fell of and the box hit me on the head. I think it knocked me out of the flashback and I looked in the box and saw the ring. I read what it said and then... and then I looked up and saw it was Goatboy.”
As Lady Sniper said Goatboy’s name she suddenly went white as a ghost, his name haunted her Emmalou realised. Lady Sniper started to scream, like something was taking her over. She got up and in a flash grabbed hold of Er-no, and dragged him by his hair over to the ballroom stairs from the production. He struggled with all his might to break free from her psychotic grip, but it was in vain, he yelled and screamed but now Lady Sniper was beyond the power of reason.
Emmalou looked on helplessly as she watched the one man she loved being dragged by the insane girl. Er-no and his captor went behind the 4 meter high staircase which was counter balanced by stage weights. Emma lou started to scream and cry out is hopeless agony as they went out of view behind the prop. Emmalou cryed out with all her might, “Lady Sniper... Please... Don’t...” then collapsed in shock and horror as she heard Er-no scream out, “NOOOOO....” His voice deadened as she heard his rib cage be crushed by a stage weight that Lady Sniper hurled down with all her might.
Emmalou wailed as she saw a trickle of blood come from behind the stairs. “Er-no,” she cried out in desperation, “Don’t leave me come back.” but it was too late.
Lady Sniper came round, her face screwed up in disgust and anger, her hands covered in the bright red blood of Er-no and she carried a metal bar.
It did not take long for Emmalou to join Er-no
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it
Sorry I did it in word and then copied it, I didnt think it would be so long.
Here's the rest
“It’s ok,” Big Sally said comforting her, “It’s just, you’re scared because you’ve come here for the first time after finding Goatboy. It’s ok we’re all here for you,” Emmalou stopped crying and felt her inner strength come back, “Anyway we’re all going now, are you going to come?” Emmalou stood for a second, realising now was the time, it was now or never,
“I think so, I’m going to see what Er-no’s doing.” They both walked up to the stage together, Emmalou noticed that the broken glass had been cleaned up. Once up on the stage, Emmalou looked round but couldn’t see Er-no.
“Grand Prix do you know where Er-no is?” she asked, looking round still.
“Yes he’s practicing some of his lines with Lady Sniper,” He said they were going to stop back, “Are you going to come now?”
“No,” she answered, “There’s something I need to do. Where are they?” she asked.
“Over there,” he pointed behind the curtain, Everyone was now leaving. Grix Thraves came over and gave her the keys and said to pass them on to Er-no. The stage was empty. She took three deep breaths and walked to the curtain.
Chapter 14
Emmalou opened the curtain to find Er-no sat with Lady Sniper, practicing the final scene. Emmalou looked at Er-no, he nodded at her, so she started,
“Lady Sniper,” she asked, “Did you love Goatboy?”
“Of course I did,” answered Lady Sniper.
“Why didn’t you ever tell me about what happened to you when you were young?” she was being very cautious because she did not know how Lady Sniper would react. Lady Sniper tried to act innocently,
“I don’t know what you mean!” Lady Sniper said.
“Lady Sniper I’m talking about when you were abducted when you were eight. Please, I understand how you must be feeling. You need to talk about it.”
Lady Sniper was shocked, “Know how I must be feeling. How can you say that? You weren’t there you didn’t go through what I went through. You can’t say you know what it is like to be there.”
“Was he ever caught?” Emmalou asked.
“Yes he denied it and got let off. He never went to prison.”
“Is that why he still haunts you to this day? Why you’ve never been able to put it behind you?”
“Yes.” Emmalou went in for the kill.
“Did you have a flashback on the night that Goatboy died? Lady Sniper I want to know what happened,” Er-no said, “Did he make love to you?”
“After everyone left,” Lady Sniper began, her voice wavering, “He took me to the stage and sat me down on the bed. Then he whispered in my ear, ‘I have a surprise for you.’ He stood back from me and went into his pocket to get something. Then... then... then he changed. He wasn’t Goatboy anymore...”
“He was the paedophile,” finished off Emmalou. Lady Sniper nodded and continued.
“I didn’t want him to attack me again so I had to get away from him. I got tangled up in the covers and only just got free, and I threw the chair at him and it missed him. He was trying to get me. He kept getting nearer. He kept shouting out my name. I was trying to get away but I kept falling. Then he grabbed me,” she was crying, “I managed to break myself free and then I found a stage weight. When I turned round he was right in front of me so I hurled it at him and it knocked him out.
“I didn’t know what to do, I was so scared and then he woke up. He started to move and I saw a rope hanging above him so I grabbed it and tied a knot. I knew how to do it...”
“Because you were in the girls scouts. Yes I know,” finished Emmalou.
Lady Sniper continued, “I put his head in it and I put more and more stage weights on the rope so he would die. I had to kill him, he would have hurt me. Then his robe fell of and the box hit me on the head. I think it knocked me out of the flashback and I looked in the box and saw the ring. I read what it said and then... and then I looked up and saw it was Goatboy.”
As Lady Sniper said Goatboy’s name she suddenly went white as a ghost, his name haunted her Emmalou realised. Lady Sniper started to scream, like something was taking her over. She got up and in a flash grabbed hold of Er-no, and dragged him by his hair over to the ballroom stairs from the production. He struggled with all his might to break free from her psychotic grip, but it was in vain, he yelled and screamed but now Lady Sniper was beyond the power of reason.
Emmalou looked on helplessly as she watched the one man she loved being dragged by the insane girl. Er-no and his captor went behind the 4 meter high staircase which was counter balanced by stage weights. Emma lou started to scream and cry out is hopeless agony as they went out of view behind the prop. Emmalou cryed out with all her might, “Lady Sniper... Please... Don’t...” then collapsed in shock and horror as she heard Er-no scream out, “NOOOOO....” His voice deadened as she heard his rib cage be crushed by a stage weight that Lady Sniper hurled down with all her might.
Emmalou wailed as she saw a trickle of blood come from behind the stairs. “Er-no,” she cried out in desperation, “Don’t leave me come back.” but it was too late.
Lady Sniper came round, her face screwed up in disgust and anger, her hands covered in the bright red blood of Er-no and she carried a metal bar.
It did not take long for Emmalou to join Er-no
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it
Here's the rest
“It’s ok,” Big Sally said comforting her, “It’s just, you’re scared because you’ve come here for the first time after finding Goatboy. It’s ok we’re all here for you,” Emmalou stopped crying and felt her inner strength come back, “Anyway we’re all going now, are you going to come?” Emmalou stood for a second, realising now was the time, it was now or never,
“I think so, I’m going to see what Er-no’s doing.” They both walked up to the stage together, Emmalou noticed that the broken glass had been cleaned up. Once up on the stage, Emmalou looked round but couldn’t see Er-no.
“Grand Prix do you know where Er-no is?” she asked, looking round still.
“Yes he’s practicing some of his lines with Lady Sniper,” He said they were going to stop back, “Are you going to come now?”
“No,” she answered, “There’s something I need to do. Where are they?” she asked.
“Over there,” he pointed behind the curtain, Everyone was now leaving. Grix Thraves came over and gave her the keys and said to pass them on to Er-no. The stage was empty. She took three deep breaths and walked to the curtain.
Chapter 14
Emmalou opened the curtain to find Er-no sat with Lady Sniper, practicing the final scene. Emmalou looked at Er-no, he nodded at her, so she started,
“Lady Sniper,” she asked, “Did you love Goatboy?”
“Of course I did,” answered Lady Sniper.
“Why didn’t you ever tell me about what happened to you when you were young?” she was being very cautious because she did not know how Lady Sniper would react. Lady Sniper tried to act innocently,
“I don’t know what you mean!” Lady Sniper said.
“Lady Sniper I’m talking about when you were abducted when you were eight. Please, I understand how you must be feeling. You need to talk about it.”
Lady Sniper was shocked, “Know how I must be feeling. How can you say that? You weren’t there you didn’t go through what I went through. You can’t say you know what it is like to be there.”
“Was he ever caught?” Emmalou asked.
“Yes he denied it and got let off. He never went to prison.”
“Is that why he still haunts you to this day? Why you’ve never been able to put it behind you?”
“Yes.” Emmalou went in for the kill.
“Did you have a flashback on the night that Goatboy died? Lady Sniper I want to know what happened,” Er-no said, “Did he make love to you?”
“After everyone left,” Lady Sniper began, her voice wavering, “He took me to the stage and sat me down on the bed. Then he whispered in my ear, ‘I have a surprise for you.’ He stood back from me and went into his pocket to get something. Then... then... then he changed. He wasn’t Goatboy anymore...”
“He was the paedophile,” finished off Emmalou. Lady Sniper nodded and continued.
“I didn’t want him to attack me again so I had to get away from him. I got tangled up in the covers and only just got free, and I threw the chair at him and it missed him. He was trying to get me. He kept getting nearer. He kept shouting out my name. I was trying to get away but I kept falling. Then he grabbed me,” she was crying, “I managed to break myself free and then I found a stage weight. When I turned round he was right in front of me so I hurled it at him and it knocked him out.
“I didn’t know what to do, I was so scared and then he woke up. He started to move and I saw a rope hanging above him so I grabbed it and tied a knot. I knew how to do it...”
“Because you were in the girls scouts. Yes I know,” finished Emmalou.
Lady Sniper continued, “I put his head in it and I put more and more stage weights on the rope so he would die. I had to kill him, he would have hurt me. Then his robe fell of and the box hit me on the head. I think it knocked me out of the flashback and I looked in the box and saw the ring. I read what it said and then... and then I looked up and saw it was Goatboy.”
As Lady Sniper said Goatboy’s name she suddenly went white as a ghost, his name haunted her Emmalou realised. Lady Sniper started to scream, like something was taking her over. She got up and in a flash grabbed hold of Er-no, and dragged him by his hair over to the ballroom stairs from the production. He struggled with all his might to break free from her psychotic grip, but it was in vain, he yelled and screamed but now Lady Sniper was beyond the power of reason.
Emmalou looked on helplessly as she watched the one man she loved being dragged by the insane girl. Er-no and his captor went behind the 4 meter high staircase which was counter balanced by stage weights. Emma lou started to scream and cry out is hopeless agony as they went out of view behind the prop. Emmalou cryed out with all her might, “Lady Sniper... Please... Don’t...” then collapsed in shock and horror as she heard Er-no scream out, “NOOOOO....” His voice deadened as she heard his rib cage be crushed by a stage weight that Lady Sniper hurled down with all her might.
Emmalou wailed as she saw a trickle of blood come from behind the stairs. “Er-no,” she cried out in desperation, “Don’t leave me come back.” but it was too late.
Lady Sniper came round, her face screwed up in disgust and anger, her hands covered in the bright red blood of Er-no and she carried a metal bar.
It did not take long for Emmalou to join Er-no
Thanks for reading, I hope you enjoyed it