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"Those Little Voices In Your Head-The Return-Part One."

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Fri 29/06/01 at 21:35
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The sequel to my short story entry is being written. It will be posted in parts over the next few days. Here is part one.

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Dan2K1 strolled down the road. He whistled as he went, pleased at his recent success in Gameaday and Filmaday competitions. He wasn’t sure where he was walking, he just wanted to walk.

He looked across the busy road. A man was walking along, sweating. He looked…troubled. He began to stagger, and then began to speak,

“No…I won’t do it…leave me alone, I’m not going to do it…No! You have to be joking! No way! Stop!”

The man clenched his fist, and him himself hard across the face. He winced in pain. Again, he hit himself, this time in the stomach. He doubled over, winded.

‘What the hell is he doing?’ Dan2K1 wondered to himself. He saw a gap in the traffic, and ran over to the man.

“Hello, is something wrong?” Dan asked confidently.

The man slowly looked up. He was shaking all over, and there was fear in his eyes.

“Please…please help me.” He said quietly, yet desperately.

“I can help, just tell me what to do.”

“There is a…a…I can’t stop myself! Wha…NO! NO, PLEASE NO!”

The man ran into the road, straight in front of a silver Renault Laguna, that was travelling at well over 40mph. The Laguna hit him with such force, that guts and brains went flying all over Dan2K1.

“Oh my God!!” Dan screamed, shocked and disgusted. Dan turned, and ran away. As far away as possible.

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RastaBillySkank walked over to his neighbour’s house. His neighbour was a…happy man. There was no other way to describe him. He laughed at everything, and always managed to find the good side of things.
RBS knew him well, and they were good friends.

He rang the doorbell. No answer. He rang it again. No answer. The car was in the drive, so he was definitely in. He went over to the window, and looked through. No one.

But wait-there he was. In the kitchen. RBS gazed closer, and saw his neighbour draw a large kitchen knife from a drawer. He looked at the knife closely, and then turned it so that the tip of the blade was facing him.

“Oh crap…please no…” RBS whispered to himself.

The man pulled the knife back, and then shoved into his stomach.

“NOOO!!” He screamed as the knife penetrated his soft skin.

RBS kicked the front door down, ran over to him, and asked the simple question,

“Why?!”

His neighbour, through gasps of breath, managed to say just 4 words.

“I…di-didn’t…want to.” The man’s heart stopped, and his head slumped to the ground.

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Grix Thraves and er-no stared woefully over the planet Earth.



“No…it can’t be…” Grix said, shocked and worried.



“There is only 1 way…”

Sat 07/07/01 at 23:50
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Sleeping most likely.

Ant, your story will be read by many as it has been promoted well, hyped up and fuetures many FOG gamers:)
Sat 07/07/01 at 23:12
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That reminds me - where is RBS anyway?
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:52
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I've always got 20-30 minutes spare!
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:51
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Your right IB. You're so right.
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:50
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Grandprix wrote:
> I read Grix's story. I also posted my thoughts.

I have also read
> this story and I'm putting my thoughts on now.

Great start Ant.
> Looking forward to the second part.

Remember Matt, it's all in one big part now!!

When it's posted, make sure you have 20-30 mins spare! {:)
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:47
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Ant can u type like lightning or what? lol
nice stories tho
gr8 fun reading them.
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:43
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Thats because we are in it Matt!! heh.
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:42
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I read Grix's story. I also posted my thoughts.

I have also read this story and I'm putting my thoughts on now.

Great start Ant. Looking forward to the second part.
Sat 07/07/01 at 22:39
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Grix Thraves wrote:
> Ant wrote:

"I hope for it to be as good as Grix's story on
> Chat"

The difference being people will read yours.
> ;0)

>Thanks for liking it, anyway. :0)

Hmmmm...did not many read yours?? Why not??

I had over 100 reples on mine...time to POP Grix's story!
Sat 07/07/01 at 21:48
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Me too!

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