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Hello, I'm a little Jack Russell, named Bauble. I'm going to tell you a story about a fun day called Dogsmas Day.
It all started one cold Christmas Eve. It was snowing, as always, so the little children went outside to make snowmen. Then it got dark and all of the children had to go indoors, except Emily. Emily is a small human child, and my owner, she loves decorations, which is why my name is Bauble and the fish is named Tinsel. Anyway, Emily had taken all of the Christmas Tree's decorations and put them on a snowman, but forgot to take them off. By the time it was dark, Emily wanted to make a snow angel, so she did. But then it got really dark, and Emily got tired, so she finally went in. After having her hot chocolate and reading her bedtime story, she fell asleep. Not long after her parents went to bed. I starting to fall asleep aswell.
Until I was rudely interrupted by someone falling down the chimney. Some thing had painted itself green, and then put on a Santa outfit. It started sneaking into peoples houses, stealing all colours of tinsel and baubles. I hid under the sofa, until he finally left our house.
I then ran out of the house, to see where he had gone, I found a trail of baubles and being named Bauble made me feel like it was my destiny to catch this guy and save Christmas. So I set off, knowing I may not return and that I wouldn't return until I reached my goal.
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I'M LESS BUSY.......
It all started one cold Christmas Eve. It was snowing, as always, so the little children went outside to make snowmen. Then it got dark and all of the children had to go indoors, except Emily. Emily is a small human child, and my owner, she loves decorations, which is why my name is Bauble and the fish is named Tinsel. Anyway, Emily had taken all of the Christmas Tree's decorations and put them on a snowman, but forgot to take them off. By the time it was dark, Emily wanted to make a snow angel, so she did. But then it got really dark, and Emily got tired, so she finally went in. After having her hot chocolate and reading her bedtime story, she fell asleep. Not long after her parents went to bed. I starting to fall asleep aswell.
Until I was rudely interrupted by someone falling down the chimney. Some thing had painted itself green, and then put on a Santa outfit. It started sneaking into peoples houses, stealing all colours of tinsel and baubles. I hid under the sofa, until he finally left our house.
I then ran out of the house, to see where he had gone, I found a trail of baubles and being named Bauble made me feel like it was my destiny to catch this guy and save Christmas. So I set off, knowing I may not return and that I wouldn't return until I reached my goal.
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I'M LESS BUSY.......
No I don't think I can judge this. It's a very wordy introduction to nowhere :D
I've given up on this story, can't think of a good ending...
Sleepy, up to you if you want to judge it as it is, not sure if you can properly though...
Sleepy, up to you if you want to judge it as it is, not sure if you can properly though...
Hello, I'm a little Jack Russell, named Bauble. I'm going to tell you a story about a fun day called Dogsmas Day.
It all started one cold Christmas Eve. It was snowing, as always, so the little children went outside to make snowmen. Then it got dark and all of the children had to go indoors, except Emily. Emily is a small human child, and my owner, she loves decorations, which is why my name is Bauble and the fish is named Tinsel. Anyway, Emily had taken all of the Christmas Tree's decorations and put them on a snowman, but forgot to take them off. By the time it was dark, Emily wanted to make a snow angel, so she did. But then it got really dark, and Emily got tired, so she finally went in. After having her hot chocolate and reading her bedtime story, she fell asleep. Not long after her parents went to bed. I starting to fall asleep aswell.
Until I was rudely interrupted by someone falling down the chimney. Some thing had painted itself green, and then put on a Santa outfit. It started sneaking into peoples houses, stealing all colours of tinsel and baubles. I hid under the sofa, until he finally left our house.
I then ran out of the house, to see where he had gone, I found a trail of baubles and being named Bauble made me feel like it was my destiny to catch this guy and save Christmas. So I set off, knowing I may not return and that I wouldn't return until I reached my goal.
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I'M LESS BUSY.......
It all started one cold Christmas Eve. It was snowing, as always, so the little children went outside to make snowmen. Then it got dark and all of the children had to go indoors, except Emily. Emily is a small human child, and my owner, she loves decorations, which is why my name is Bauble and the fish is named Tinsel. Anyway, Emily had taken all of the Christmas Tree's decorations and put them on a snowman, but forgot to take them off. By the time it was dark, Emily wanted to make a snow angel, so she did. But then it got really dark, and Emily got tired, so she finally went in. After having her hot chocolate and reading her bedtime story, she fell asleep. Not long after her parents went to bed. I starting to fall asleep aswell.
Until I was rudely interrupted by someone falling down the chimney. Some thing had painted itself green, and then put on a Santa outfit. It started sneaking into peoples houses, stealing all colours of tinsel and baubles. I hid under the sofa, until he finally left our house.
I then ran out of the house, to see where he had gone, I found a trail of baubles and being named Bauble made me feel like it was my destiny to catch this guy and save Christmas. So I set off, knowing I may not return and that I wouldn't return until I reached my goal.
TO BE CONTINUED WHEN I'M LESS BUSY.......