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Here's my story. I didn't post it as the main topic so that it doesn't appear twice on the page - slowing download times and stuff.
Enjoy (I hope). And no - it doesn't have anything to do with clocks!
Enjoy (I hope). And no - it doesn't have anything to do with clocks!
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Swish wrote:
> the three laps and won the race; he had also set a new record,
> breaking the previous one by 1.13 minutes. Wow!
Ant blatantly cheated. He used Action Replay to make his kart go faster.. Cheaters these days hey? They ruin the world ;-)
> the three laps and won the race; he had also set a new record,
> breaking the previous one by 1.13 minutes. Wow!
Ant blatantly cheated. He used Action Replay to make his kart go faster.. Cheaters these days hey? They ruin the world ;-)
Thanks all for your positive comments. It really is fun writing your own story. It's a shame, though, that the chapters didn't set out right - it destroyed the suspense and made the whole story seem like one big thing, when it wasn't - it was set out in different parts. Oh well. Hopefully you realised where a new chapter should start because of the sudden change in what was going on, like when Spider was first heard of in the story.
Cheers,
Swish (namostar)
Cheers,
Swish (namostar)
RastaBillySkank wrote:
> MJ, Ant IS Rumplestiltskin
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Thought as much. I wasn'y sure though so I had to have a go at the newbie who I didn't recognise.
> MJ, Ant IS Rumplestiltskin
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Thought as much. I wasn'y sure though so I had to have a go at the newbie who I didn't recognise.
MJ, Ant IS Rumplestiltskin
Pity you didn't do one of the preset beginnings.
You oucld've entered this for the competition if you had.
It would've been a strong contender too.
You oucld've entered this for the competition if you had.
It would've been a strong contender too.
What are you on about Rumplestiltskin if that is your real name? Ant kicked Bowsers @ss not you. Great story Swish. Much better than my poor poor attempt. How long did it take to write a sit was fantastic. I'm good at Smash Bros. how did you now. Hyrule is also my favourite level. Freaky isn't it. Brilliant other than the fact that it made the first part of mine look like a t**d.
Great story Swish!! Superb!!
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