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It was not long before the seven notables ran into an empty room, they looked at each other and then looked at er-no who was completing a level of Mario Advance...
'What are you looking at?' er-no asked disbelief,
'I really don't think this is the time nor place!' Grix answered,
'...but I have found the last egg....'
'Look although it may have taken you many hours to locate the egg there is an axe maniac on the loose, and he wants the head of a notable....' Ant said.
FantasyMeister reaches for er-no's GameBoy Advance, picks it up and throws it back down the dark corridor, they hear the mahine break when it hits the floor,
'Ohhh, I don't care, I have another one at home' er-no smirked
'Well if he kills you, you won't be able to use it. HA!' Fantasy chuckled
'Just who is he? and why does he want to kill us!' Sniper asked
' As far as I can tell, everyone is a suspect, everyone apart from us six, oh sorry SHEEPY, I mean seven' meka explained.
The group passed comments for a few more minutes, names were thrown back and forth and not knowing who was after them they passed around the underground passage.....
'I reckon we should sacrifice Ant to the murderor!' Sniper shouted.
'Why? wwwhhyyy?' asked Ant
'Well Ant's don't feel pain, so you would quite happily die without feeling a single bit of pain, infact the axe maniac could chop your legs off and you would still think you had them!' Sniper said.
'Look, its just a name....'
'That didn't stop you from peeing on my floor and stealing my sugar....'
'Guys, guys stop arguing and keep up with us, we are trying to get out of this passage maze...'
The great noise of the passing train sounded against the underground tunnels, SHEEPY began to moan and argued that he was hungry, he was beginning to feel tired, Fantasy suggested that Ant live up to his name and carry SHEEPY for a few minutes. Ant agreed and made sure SHEEPY was grateful
There they were, Sniper, Ant, Grix Thraves, FantasyMeister, Meka_Dragon, er-no and SHEEPY. The seven notables trying to get out of a maze of underground passages, knowing that each corner they turn could bring them face to face with their follower. The options as to who it could be were endless, many people had run for notable, and many feel that notables shouldn't exist. The group passed through another passage, and turned another corner, they looked carefully for signs that they had been there before, but the group were getting more and more lost into the tunnels of the city.
Then, Sniper spotted a bright light at the end of a turning,
'Hey guys I have spotted something!'
'Oh, shutup Sniper' The rest said.
'Hey guys I have spotted something!' Ant said,
'What is it Ant?' meka asked,
'Well look, theres this bright light at the end of this passage..'
'Wha the fffffuuuu...' Sniper shouted
'Hey nice find Ant' er-no said
'.....ddddggggeee'
The group pondered walking down into the bright light, Sniper was kicking the waste water from the tunnel floor at Ant.
'Hey Sniper, watch out man...' SHEEPY said on Ants back
They pondered for many minutes,
'Guys lets stop this pondering and take the tunnel towards the bright light' Grix said.
They all set off down the tunnel, still not knowing how they ended up in the passages in the first place, for they couldn't see how one minute they were awake, turbonutter was talking to them about banners and quick websites, RBS and TW were laughing at a small newbie, and then they found themselves here? What had happened...
The bright light drew closer, the eyes of the tired SHEEPY made him moan, er-no was beginning to laugh at the brickwork, Grix was controlled as ever, meka was rethinking the actions of what had happened, Ant was awake and alert, Fantasy was wondering how much Bill Gates has made while he has been down there and Sniper had picked up a metal pole and was scraping it along the walls of the tunnel, causing a majorily annoying noise.....
'SHUT UP SNIPER' the narrator of the story said.
'Woah, I didn't know you could talk...' Sniper answered.
'HOW THE HELL DO YOU GUYS COPE WITH THAT NOISE?...'
'Well lets just say, we have become immune to it' Fantasy answered
'WELL THEN BACK TO THE STORY'
...The light grew closer, and meka began to worry, for the light was no longer such a huge subject anymore, but looked a lot smaller now, the distance had changed its appearance, meka was looking carefully, for a clue as to what it could be.... he then saw the answer, the light was flickering, moving at the smallest amount of degrees left and right, it was a light that was being held!
'RUN GUYS RUN!' er-no said.
'Wha the...' meka said
'Well you ain't the only one who is allowed to think meka'
'oh yeah'
'Well RRRUUUNNN'
Sniper was already well ahead of him running for his life, not really caring for the life and safety of the others, Ant had dropped SHEEPY and was told by meka and Fantasy not to go back for him as two would be dead, er-no looked back and saw the light flying and bouncing against the murky grey walls, he saw SHEEPY lying there shaking, the light meet up with SHEEPY and the screaming that sounded from him were no more, the instant the light meet up with him it stopped moving...SHEEPY was gone....
'Well looks as if we are all safe now guys!' said Sniper
'Don't be such an inconsiderate...'
'Well look, we should all be glad it was him and not one of us!'
'Well now you put it like that..' er-no said.
'Guys.... guys help!!' a now distant voice called.
Grix stopped the remaining group from running, he told Ant to stop sulking and told them to listen,
'...co...ba...g.ys'
'Lets go back' Grix said
'You are joking aren't you' said Sniper.
'No, I think SHEEPY needs us'
'Yeah, we could help him...' said meka
'..or die'... said er-no
'Well let me just say now, it was Snipers idea to go towards the light...' Ant explained
'You little, soon to be four footed kreatin...' Sniper shouted.
'Guys I think its time to help SHEEPY now' narrator explains.
'Oh, ok Mr. Story Writer, come on guys lets go back' Fantasy said.
The group set back towards the narrowing light, er-no began to find the brickwork funny...
'Each to their own' meka muttered
The calling bagan to sound again, this time SHEEPY's voice was very clear, when the group saw him he was lying on the floor, with a faceful of waste on him, he was near death, and Grix sharply looked up to the light which at that moment disappered...
'What happened' meka asked SHEEPY.
'He nearly killed me' SHEEPY coughed up.
'So we know it was a male, well that narrows it down for us.'
'Why didn't he kill you?' Sniper asked
'He said I was not the one' SHEEPY answered
'Yeah but thats no excuse for not killing you...'
'Did you see what he looked like?' Ant asked
'No, it was all over to quickly'
'Did you see anything' Grix asked
'No, he continued to blind me with that tourch thing'
'Damn, DAMN DAMN DAMN!' er-no shouted, 'LOOK YOU TOURCH BOY, QUIT MUCKING ABOUT AND KILL THE ONE YOU WANT'
'Hey calm down er-no' Fantasy said.
SHEEPY looked up at the group, the light had gone a few minutes earlier, they looked exhausted, Ant picked up SHEEPY and they looked at each other... knowing that one of them was near death, and only time was the difference between this....
'What are you looking at?' er-no asked disbelief,
'I really don't think this is the time nor place!' Grix answered,
'...but I have found the last egg....'
'Look although it may have taken you many hours to locate the egg there is an axe maniac on the loose, and he wants the head of a notable....' Ant said.
FantasyMeister reaches for er-no's GameBoy Advance, picks it up and throws it back down the dark corridor, they hear the mahine break when it hits the floor,
'Ohhh, I don't care, I have another one at home' er-no smirked
'Well if he kills you, you won't be able to use it. HA!' Fantasy chuckled
'Just who is he? and why does he want to kill us!' Sniper asked
' As far as I can tell, everyone is a suspect, everyone apart from us six, oh sorry SHEEPY, I mean seven' meka explained.
The group passed comments for a few more minutes, names were thrown back and forth and not knowing who was after them they passed around the underground passage.....
'I reckon we should sacrifice Ant to the murderor!' Sniper shouted.
'Why? wwwhhyyy?' asked Ant
'Well Ant's don't feel pain, so you would quite happily die without feeling a single bit of pain, infact the axe maniac could chop your legs off and you would still think you had them!' Sniper said.
'Look, its just a name....'
'That didn't stop you from peeing on my floor and stealing my sugar....'
'Guys, guys stop arguing and keep up with us, we are trying to get out of this passage maze...'
The great noise of the passing train sounded against the underground tunnels, SHEEPY began to moan and argued that he was hungry, he was beginning to feel tired, Fantasy suggested that Ant live up to his name and carry SHEEPY for a few minutes. Ant agreed and made sure SHEEPY was grateful
There they were, Sniper, Ant, Grix Thraves, FantasyMeister, Meka_Dragon, er-no and SHEEPY. The seven notables trying to get out of a maze of underground passages, knowing that each corner they turn could bring them face to face with their follower. The options as to who it could be were endless, many people had run for notable, and many feel that notables shouldn't exist. The group passed through another passage, and turned another corner, they looked carefully for signs that they had been there before, but the group were getting more and more lost into the tunnels of the city.
Then, Sniper spotted a bright light at the end of a turning,
'Hey guys I have spotted something!'
'Oh, shutup Sniper' The rest said.
'Hey guys I have spotted something!' Ant said,
'What is it Ant?' meka asked,
'Well look, theres this bright light at the end of this passage..'
'Wha the fffffuuuu...' Sniper shouted
'Hey nice find Ant' er-no said
'.....ddddggggeee'
The group pondered walking down into the bright light, Sniper was kicking the waste water from the tunnel floor at Ant.
'Hey Sniper, watch out man...' SHEEPY said on Ants back
They pondered for many minutes,
'Guys lets stop this pondering and take the tunnel towards the bright light' Grix said.
They all set off down the tunnel, still not knowing how they ended up in the passages in the first place, for they couldn't see how one minute they were awake, turbonutter was talking to them about banners and quick websites, RBS and TW were laughing at a small newbie, and then they found themselves here? What had happened...
The bright light drew closer, the eyes of the tired SHEEPY made him moan, er-no was beginning to laugh at the brickwork, Grix was controlled as ever, meka was rethinking the actions of what had happened, Ant was awake and alert, Fantasy was wondering how much Bill Gates has made while he has been down there and Sniper had picked up a metal pole and was scraping it along the walls of the tunnel, causing a majorily annoying noise.....
'SHUT UP SNIPER' the narrator of the story said.
'Woah, I didn't know you could talk...' Sniper answered.
'HOW THE HELL DO YOU GUYS COPE WITH THAT NOISE?...'
'Well lets just say, we have become immune to it' Fantasy answered
'WELL THEN BACK TO THE STORY'
...The light grew closer, and meka began to worry, for the light was no longer such a huge subject anymore, but looked a lot smaller now, the distance had changed its appearance, meka was looking carefully, for a clue as to what it could be.... he then saw the answer, the light was flickering, moving at the smallest amount of degrees left and right, it was a light that was being held!
'RUN GUYS RUN!' er-no said.
'Wha the...' meka said
'Well you ain't the only one who is allowed to think meka'
'oh yeah'
'Well RRRUUUNNN'
Sniper was already well ahead of him running for his life, not really caring for the life and safety of the others, Ant had dropped SHEEPY and was told by meka and Fantasy not to go back for him as two would be dead, er-no looked back and saw the light flying and bouncing against the murky grey walls, he saw SHEEPY lying there shaking, the light meet up with SHEEPY and the screaming that sounded from him were no more, the instant the light meet up with him it stopped moving...SHEEPY was gone....
'Well looks as if we are all safe now guys!' said Sniper
'Don't be such an inconsiderate...'
'Well look, we should all be glad it was him and not one of us!'
'Well now you put it like that..' er-no said.
'Guys.... guys help!!' a now distant voice called.
Grix stopped the remaining group from running, he told Ant to stop sulking and told them to listen,
'...co...ba...g.ys'
'Lets go back' Grix said
'You are joking aren't you' said Sniper.
'No, I think SHEEPY needs us'
'Yeah, we could help him...' said meka
'..or die'... said er-no
'Well let me just say now, it was Snipers idea to go towards the light...' Ant explained
'You little, soon to be four footed kreatin...' Sniper shouted.
'Guys I think its time to help SHEEPY now' narrator explains.
'Oh, ok Mr. Story Writer, come on guys lets go back' Fantasy said.
The group set back towards the narrowing light, er-no began to find the brickwork funny...
'Each to their own' meka muttered
The calling bagan to sound again, this time SHEEPY's voice was very clear, when the group saw him he was lying on the floor, with a faceful of waste on him, he was near death, and Grix sharply looked up to the light which at that moment disappered...
'What happened' meka asked SHEEPY.
'He nearly killed me' SHEEPY coughed up.
'So we know it was a male, well that narrows it down for us.'
'Why didn't he kill you?' Sniper asked
'He said I was not the one' SHEEPY answered
'Yeah but thats no excuse for not killing you...'
'Did you see what he looked like?' Ant asked
'No, it was all over to quickly'
'Did you see anything' Grix asked
'No, he continued to blind me with that tourch thing'
'Damn, DAMN DAMN DAMN!' er-no shouted, 'LOOK YOU TOURCH BOY, QUIT MUCKING ABOUT AND KILL THE ONE YOU WANT'
'Hey calm down er-no' Fantasy said.
SHEEPY looked up at the group, the light had gone a few minutes earlier, they looked exhausted, Ant picked up SHEEPY and they looked at each other... knowing that one of them was near death, and only time was the difference between this....
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Spoken by a king!
Dringo wrote:
> I think you should, i wanna be a notable now, damn my reluctance to
> be one!
I am typing a huge story at the moment, I will retype this one after my current project!
Its got everyone in it and is fast approaching 4000 words...
> I think you should, i wanna be a notable now, damn my reluctance to
> be one!
I am typing a huge story at the moment, I will retype this one after my current project!
Its got everyone in it and is fast approaching 4000 words...
I think you should, i wanna be a notable now, damn my reluctance to be one!
Should I finish this story?
Hmmm er-no who could be this Notable killer you speak of.
Someone who doesn't like the Notable idea I presume, hmmm i'm interested!
Dringo picks up his tourch and cackles!
Someone who doesn't like the Notable idea I presume, hmmm i'm interested!
Dringo picks up his tourch and cackles!
Dan uk wrote:
> pop
why?
> pop
why?
pop
MJswerve wrote:
> Ok Turbonutter I demand you take back that "stupid
> newbies" phrase. I am insulted and surprised at you. You never
> minded when I was a JAT now that I am a Newbie we are all stupid
> apparently.
Aha, but:
a) You are not a newbie
and
b) You are an exception.
> Ok Turbonutter I demand you take back that "stupid
> newbies" phrase. I am insulted and surprised at you. You never
> minded when I was a JAT now that I am a Newbie we are all stupid
> apparently.
Aha, but:
a) You are not a newbie
and
b) You are an exception.
zeldapro wrote:
> Bummer!
Like totally.
(;o( Unhappy I am a Newbie.
> Bummer!
Like totally.
(;o( Unhappy I am a Newbie.
Bummer!
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