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Gone in a gun of bullets.
It could be ruined but he took the pills.
Was ill for three days, no top button done up.
Ripped blue wallpaper from the walls.
Ink falls from the pupil of the eye.
Nothing could every happen.
She helps me through the meadow.
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Hello Dolly how have you been today? I smiled today. Can you Smile Dolly with your Mask? Yes I can? I like to watch the blood dripped from their cut fingers. What Dolly? What do you mean? Speak Dolly.
I like it when the blood splats to the floor and splats into other bits. Thats very sick Dolly. SICK SICK YES I KNOW DOCTOR IT'S SICK!!!!
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Her Dolls all lined up like soliders off to war. GONE in a scribble. What you say??????? How could this be happening today. Merote. Red Sofa, Green sky, purple mango, orange strings. Go away are the things.
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So Dolly what have your done today? You've drawn a picture let's see. [URL]http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/1820/dollysscribble9xm.jpg[/URL] What is this Dolly??? Its how today is. As you can see it is raining Doctor and look there's a rain cloud on there. But it's just a scribble Ok Dolly I'm going now I will be back tomorrow. So goodbye.
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How can I return to such a thing, such a strange thing.
That worries me inside and makes me want to run away.
Last week Dolly had spoken to me about her friend Betty but I knew Betty wasn't real. Dolly said she was in the room when I was speaking. Dolly said it wasn't very nice for me to say Betty wasn't real. So I will go back see what has happened.
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So Dolly anymore scribbles today? No,no more scribbles I drew on the wall paper but I had to clean it off. What did you draw on the wallpaper Dolly? Clouds with thunder and lightning thats what will happened today as well. BANG It will make your ears explode and you cry in pain. Dolly don't say such things. I knew I shouldn't have came back today,I knew she would be like this. ~~~~DoLLY PUT THE CHAIR DOWN~~~~ What are you doing that for Dolly??? They are all around watching through shadows and then. PFFFFTTT GONE. My friends are gone. You made Betty go,it was all your fault.
How My fault Dolly?
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The Wind is blowing down the chimney.
Your door rattles.
Yes there is thunder and lightning Dolly was right.
Hello YOU never knew me I was her friend.
But you made me GO Now Im unhappy.
Soon you will be.
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Her wall's coloured red.
Im Dolly I'm here to haunt you forever.
Im your Patient make you be gone from this world.
You will help me through time's.
Ask me the question's and never leave coz I'm coming to make it hell. Your Day will be ruined.
Coz Im the lighting, the thunder, the rain. I will pour on you.
Make the tear's fall from your eyes never leave.
Remember I'm Dolly I was your patient you left me.
Now Im alone laying on the floor of that room waiting for you to come and asking myself question's. I drew more pictures but ripped them up and only have one left it's on the side.
Hope you like it but it will confuse you. Remember most of my picture's showed the future well this one does show the future and be afraid. This is for how you treated me. You never came back that made me cry and I wanted to talk to you. So now here you go. [URL]http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/3231/ssecondscribble3sb.jpg[/URL]
It could be ruined but he took the pills.
Was ill for three days, no top button done up.
Ripped blue wallpaper from the walls.
Ink falls from the pupil of the eye.
Nothing could every happen.
She helps me through the meadow.
----------------
Hello Dolly how have you been today? I smiled today. Can you Smile Dolly with your Mask? Yes I can? I like to watch the blood dripped from their cut fingers. What Dolly? What do you mean? Speak Dolly.
I like it when the blood splats to the floor and splats into other bits. Thats very sick Dolly. SICK SICK YES I KNOW DOCTOR IT'S SICK!!!!
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Her Dolls all lined up like soliders off to war. GONE in a scribble. What you say??????? How could this be happening today. Merote. Red Sofa, Green sky, purple mango, orange strings. Go away are the things.
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So Dolly what have your done today? You've drawn a picture let's see. [URL]http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/1820/dollysscribble9xm.jpg[/URL] What is this Dolly??? Its how today is. As you can see it is raining Doctor and look there's a rain cloud on there. But it's just a scribble Ok Dolly I'm going now I will be back tomorrow. So goodbye.
---------------------
How can I return to such a thing, such a strange thing.
That worries me inside and makes me want to run away.
Last week Dolly had spoken to me about her friend Betty but I knew Betty wasn't real. Dolly said she was in the room when I was speaking. Dolly said it wasn't very nice for me to say Betty wasn't real. So I will go back see what has happened.
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So Dolly anymore scribbles today? No,no more scribbles I drew on the wall paper but I had to clean it off. What did you draw on the wallpaper Dolly? Clouds with thunder and lightning thats what will happened today as well. BANG It will make your ears explode and you cry in pain. Dolly don't say such things. I knew I shouldn't have came back today,I knew she would be like this. ~~~~DoLLY PUT THE CHAIR DOWN~~~~ What are you doing that for Dolly??? They are all around watching through shadows and then. PFFFFTTT GONE. My friends are gone. You made Betty go,it was all your fault.
How My fault Dolly?
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The Wind is blowing down the chimney.
Your door rattles.
Yes there is thunder and lightning Dolly was right.
Hello YOU never knew me I was her friend.
But you made me GO Now Im unhappy.
Soon you will be.
-----------------------------------
Her wall's coloured red.
Im Dolly I'm here to haunt you forever.
Im your Patient make you be gone from this world.
You will help me through time's.
Ask me the question's and never leave coz I'm coming to make it hell. Your Day will be ruined.
Coz Im the lighting, the thunder, the rain. I will pour on you.
Make the tear's fall from your eyes never leave.
Remember I'm Dolly I was your patient you left me.
Now Im alone laying on the floor of that room waiting for you to come and asking myself question's. I drew more pictures but ripped them up and only have one left it's on the side.
Hope you like it but it will confuse you. Remember most of my picture's showed the future well this one does show the future and be afraid. This is for how you treated me. You never came back that made me cry and I wanted to talk to you. So now here you go. [URL]http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/3231/ssecondscribble3sb.jpg[/URL]
tnc wrote:
> The pictures spoiled it to be honest, I only skimmed through it but
> putting pictures in ruins the context of a story, and the shoddy
> drawing makes it less powerful.
>
> I thought it was slightly clumsy in its arrangement, simply because
> you insisted on scattering lines of dashes all throughout it.
>
> Some of the phrases were still not very well worded, like "a gun
> of bullets"
They are Dollys drawings and a gun of bullets is a quote I made before.
> The pictures spoiled it to be honest, I only skimmed through it but
> putting pictures in ruins the context of a story, and the shoddy
> drawing makes it less powerful.
>
> I thought it was slightly clumsy in its arrangement, simply because
> you insisted on scattering lines of dashes all throughout it.
>
> Some of the phrases were still not very well worded, like "a gun
> of bullets"
They are Dollys drawings and a gun of bullets is a quote I made before.
The pictures spoiled it to be honest, I only skimmed through it but putting pictures in ruins the context of a story, and the shoddy drawing makes it less powerful.
I thought it was slightly clumsy in its arrangement, simply because you insisted on scattering lines of dashes all throughout it.
Some of the phrases were still not very well worded, like "a gun of bullets"
I thought it was slightly clumsy in its arrangement, simply because you insisted on scattering lines of dashes all throughout it.
Some of the phrases were still not very well worded, like "a gun of bullets"
Well doesn't look like many people have read this yet.
No. In what way did you mean?
It seemed to be sort of similar to Salad Fingers. Intentional?
Gone in a gun of bullets.
It could be ruined but he took the pills.
Was ill for three days, no top button done up.
Ripped blue wallpaper from the walls.
Ink falls from the pupil of the eye.
Nothing could every happen.
She helps me through the meadow.
----------------
Hello Dolly how have you been today? I smiled today. Can you Smile Dolly with your Mask? Yes I can? I like to watch the blood dripped from their cut fingers. What Dolly? What do you mean? Speak Dolly.
I like it when the blood splats to the floor and splats into other bits. Thats very sick Dolly. SICK SICK YES I KNOW DOCTOR IT'S SICK!!!!
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Her Dolls all lined up like soliders off to war. GONE in a scribble. What you say??????? How could this be happening today. Merote. Red Sofa, Green sky, purple mango, orange strings. Go away are the things.
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So Dolly what have your done today? You've drawn a picture let's see. [URL]http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/1820/dollysscribble9xm.jpg[/URL] What is this Dolly??? Its how today is. As you can see it is raining Doctor and look there's a rain cloud on there. But it's just a scribble Ok Dolly I'm going now I will be back tomorrow. So goodbye.
---------------------
How can I return to such a thing, such a strange thing.
That worries me inside and makes me want to run away.
Last week Dolly had spoken to me about her friend Betty but I knew Betty wasn't real. Dolly said she was in the room when I was speaking. Dolly said it wasn't very nice for me to say Betty wasn't real. So I will go back see what has happened.
------------------------------------
So Dolly anymore scribbles today? No,no more scribbles I drew on the wall paper but I had to clean it off. What did you draw on the wallpaper Dolly? Clouds with thunder and lightning thats what will happened today as well. BANG It will make your ears explode and you cry in pain. Dolly don't say such things. I knew I shouldn't have came back today,I knew she would be like this. ~~~~DoLLY PUT THE CHAIR DOWN~~~~ What are you doing that for Dolly??? They are all around watching through shadows and then. PFFFFTTT GONE. My friends are gone. You made Betty go,it was all your fault.
How My fault Dolly?
---------------------------
The Wind is blowing down the chimney.
Your door rattles.
Yes there is thunder and lightning Dolly was right.
Hello YOU never knew me I was her friend.
But you made me GO Now Im unhappy.
Soon you will be.
-----------------------------------
Her wall's coloured red.
Im Dolly I'm here to haunt you forever.
Im your Patient make you be gone from this world.
You will help me through time's.
Ask me the question's and never leave coz I'm coming to make it hell. Your Day will be ruined.
Coz Im the lighting, the thunder, the rain. I will pour on you.
Make the tear's fall from your eyes never leave.
Remember I'm Dolly I was your patient you left me.
Now Im alone laying on the floor of that room waiting for you to come and asking myself question's. I drew more pictures but ripped them up and only have one left it's on the side.
Hope you like it but it will confuse you. Remember most of my picture's showed the future well this one does show the future and be afraid. This is for how you treated me. You never came back that made me cry and I wanted to talk to you. So now here you go. [URL]http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/3231/ssecondscribble3sb.jpg[/URL]
It could be ruined but he took the pills.
Was ill for three days, no top button done up.
Ripped blue wallpaper from the walls.
Ink falls from the pupil of the eye.
Nothing could every happen.
She helps me through the meadow.
----------------
Hello Dolly how have you been today? I smiled today. Can you Smile Dolly with your Mask? Yes I can? I like to watch the blood dripped from their cut fingers. What Dolly? What do you mean? Speak Dolly.
I like it when the blood splats to the floor and splats into other bits. Thats very sick Dolly. SICK SICK YES I KNOW DOCTOR IT'S SICK!!!!
-----------------------
Her Dolls all lined up like soliders off to war. GONE in a scribble. What you say??????? How could this be happening today. Merote. Red Sofa, Green sky, purple mango, orange strings. Go away are the things.
-------------------------------------
So Dolly what have your done today? You've drawn a picture let's see. [URL]http://img481.imageshack.us/img481/1820/dollysscribble9xm.jpg[/URL] What is this Dolly??? Its how today is. As you can see it is raining Doctor and look there's a rain cloud on there. But it's just a scribble Ok Dolly I'm going now I will be back tomorrow. So goodbye.
---------------------
How can I return to such a thing, such a strange thing.
That worries me inside and makes me want to run away.
Last week Dolly had spoken to me about her friend Betty but I knew Betty wasn't real. Dolly said she was in the room when I was speaking. Dolly said it wasn't very nice for me to say Betty wasn't real. So I will go back see what has happened.
------------------------------------
So Dolly anymore scribbles today? No,no more scribbles I drew on the wall paper but I had to clean it off. What did you draw on the wallpaper Dolly? Clouds with thunder and lightning thats what will happened today as well. BANG It will make your ears explode and you cry in pain. Dolly don't say such things. I knew I shouldn't have came back today,I knew she would be like this. ~~~~DoLLY PUT THE CHAIR DOWN~~~~ What are you doing that for Dolly??? They are all around watching through shadows and then. PFFFFTTT GONE. My friends are gone. You made Betty go,it was all your fault.
How My fault Dolly?
---------------------------
The Wind is blowing down the chimney.
Your door rattles.
Yes there is thunder and lightning Dolly was right.
Hello YOU never knew me I was her friend.
But you made me GO Now Im unhappy.
Soon you will be.
-----------------------------------
Her wall's coloured red.
Im Dolly I'm here to haunt you forever.
Im your Patient make you be gone from this world.
You will help me through time's.
Ask me the question's and never leave coz I'm coming to make it hell. Your Day will be ruined.
Coz Im the lighting, the thunder, the rain. I will pour on you.
Make the tear's fall from your eyes never leave.
Remember I'm Dolly I was your patient you left me.
Now Im alone laying on the floor of that room waiting for you to come and asking myself question's. I drew more pictures but ripped them up and only have one left it's on the side.
Hope you like it but it will confuse you. Remember most of my picture's showed the future well this one does show the future and be afraid. This is for how you treated me. You never came back that made me cry and I wanted to talk to you. So now here you go. [URL]http://img457.imageshack.us/img457/3231/ssecondscribble3sb.jpg[/URL]