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Well it was when she said "Goodbye" I had to cry that day. As she step into her car and drove away I stood there tears running down my face. I then said "Bye forever" after she had already drove half way down the road. He just stood there looking down at the floor he then turned and walked into his house slamming the door behind him he then threw his self down on the hard sofa. He sat there still staring at the floor the phone he jumped up hoping it was her. "HELLO AND YOU'VE JUST WON A HOLIDAY TO HAWAIIA". "HAVE IT!" I screamed and went to Hawaiia. Owned.
Well it was when she said "Goodbye" I had to cry that day. As she step into her car and drove away I stood there tears running down my face. I then said "Bye forever" after she had already drove half way down the road. He just stood there looking down at the floor he then turned and walked into his house slamming the door behind him he then threw his self down on the hard sofa. He sat there still staring at the floor the phone he jumped up hoping it was her. "HELLO AND YOU'VE JUST WON A HOLIDAY TO HAWAIIA". "HAVE IT!" I screamed and went to Hawaiia. Owned.
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