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This is my new story
It is pretty long not as long as my other one though
Why is it so Dark?? Where is everyone?? Sniper cried, he sounded very afraid, “I don’t want to be alone anymore, somebody help me, please, can somebody help me??”
Sniper kept hearing voices in his head, “You have no friends, you life cannot go on, you are going to die!!” saying the same thing over and over again, it was driving him insane.
He appeared to be in a dark room, a large dark room. The room was empty, except for Sniper, sitting in the middle, all alone, no one talk to except himself, he had eaten in days and the voices had started becoming unbearable.
He had lost all hope of surviving, he had lost all hope of seeing his friends again (they never really liked him anyway) but worst of all he lost all hope of posting a message on Special Reserve ever again.
Another day passed, Sniper was ready to lie down and die (again), then suddenly he saw a light start to appear on the wall furthest wall from him, it was in a door shape, a door he had never noticed before, and the light Sniper saw a silhouette of what appeared to be a man, a tall man.
And then came a deep voice, it said “Sniper, you have been lucky to survive until now, and I am shocked, but now you will find out that all that struggle was for nothing, it is time for your execution, come with me!?”
A bright light filled the room, and because Sniper had been in the Dark room for so long he was temporarily blinded. He did not manage to see the mans face, as he was wearing a black robe and the hood of the robe shrouded his face, but he recognised the voice from somewhere, but the question was where??
Sniper was thrown into, what seemed to be an execution chamber, filled with robed men, but to a different coloured robe to the man that escorted him. In one corner there was, what appeared to be an electric chair, and in the other corner stood another robed man, he was smaller than the other robed man. The man stood next to a kind of decapitation device, it had a large blade, which was suspended above it, with tiny blood droplets, dripping on to a pool of blood on the floor, beneath it.
“I’m glad you could make it Sniper, as you can see this is my EXECUTION CHAMBER!! And this is the last place you’ll see, before you ummm… depart us!? Muah hahaha!!” the man laughed evilly “well as you can see most of these execution devices are, as you say it, slightly primitive, my new toy isn’t quite finished, so take this as getting off lucky!!”
“Who are you people?? How do you know my name?? I haven’t done anything wrong, please let me go!?” Sniper was on the floor begging for his life.
“Sniper enough with the questions, I want to let you in on a little secret, my little toy that I just mentioned, isn’t an execution device, which can only kill one person at a time, actually that’s far from it, my new “toy” will execute everybody on planet Earth!! Muah ha ha ha!!” the man continued “Sniper as I said you are getting off lucky, you will have a relatively quick death, but the rest of the world will have a slow and agonising one, including your friends, muah ha ha ha!!”
“Why are you doing this?? Tell me why!!” Sniper roared
“Well to send a message to the world and any other living thing in the universe, I am the almighty, I cannot be defeated, muah ha ha ha!! Now any last requests?? Before you die!! Muah ha ha ha!!”
“Yeah quit with the muah ha ha ha it’s starting to get so annoying and it is so passé!? Sniper snidely said, then he roared “OH yeah AND BURN IN HELL!!!!!!!”
“Well ok, I’ll try my best, muah ha h… ahem… sorry!? The robed laughed sarcastically “Now take him away, I’m starting to get sick of him.”
The second robed man dragged Sniper across the room to the electric chair; Sniper was the strapped to the chair so that he could not escape. Sniper knew what was about to come, all he had to do was wait, it was not like it had never happened before, his time was nie.
The robed man pulled down a switch; electricity started rushing through Snipers body, the lights in the room dimmed and started to flicker, with in minutes and a lot of pain Sniper was dead, there was nothing left except his burnt corpse which slowly faded away.
IN THE SR POSSE HQ
“Yo, Grix, do you know where Sniper has got to?? Grim Fish questioned
“Haven’t got a clue, probably dead or something, you know him,” replied Grix.
A deadly silence filled the air “Yeah true, he does that a lot.”
Suddenly the front door of the SR posse’s HQ burst open, and in the door way stood a rather angry, but scared looking Sniper, everybody turned to look at him, all of them looked amused.
“Sniper, we were just talking about you, been dying again have you,” blurted er-no.
“SHUT UP!!” Sniper growled “YOU HAVEN’T GOT A CLUE WHAT I’VE BEEN THROUGH THESE LAST COUPLE OF DAYS!!”
“I don’t particularly care what you’ve been through but I’m sure your going to tell us anyway!?” Said Grim Fish ignorantly
“Your damn right I’m going to tell, because believe it or not it is extremely serious!?” Said Sniper looking evilly at Grim Fish.
I took Sniper about an hour, to tell them every important detail, and once again there was a deadly silence.
“Hmmm, interesting,” said turbonutter breaking the silence “I think that it is time to consult the Dragon!!”
“THE WHAT??” nobody knew what he was talking about.
“You know, Meka_dragon, our trusted ally, the one with the kids!?”
“Oh yeah I remember him, a nice chap he is to,” Pb said “but how are we going to find him??”
“Easy,” said SHEEPY while pulling out a mobile “by using one of these babies.”
Minutes later Turbonutter got off the phone to Meka, after cutting the story short, and they all awaited his arrival. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Reaper[DC] opened the door, and was immediately greeted by Meka.
“How did you get here so fast??” asked Reaper looking and sounding shocked.
“No time for questions we have business to attend to, Sniper if you will??” Meka called Sniper, and this seemed serious, “Sniper I know about your dying problem, at thinking about it must get damn annoying.”
“Well Yeah it does”
“Ok take this,” Meka handed Sniper a green Jewelled ring and said “It is an invincibility ring your body is immune to any physical and unnatural deaths, and now Grim Fish if you will??”
“Yeah”
“Take this” Meka handed Grim Fish a red jewelled necklace “Put it on!! It Is called a power necklace, I don’t know it’s exact power, but the myths say that you can release it’s true power, because you are the CHOSEN ONE!! And now to the Enchanted dark castle, your time is running short.
There was a flash of light, and everybody appeared outside of the Enchanted Dark Castle, they don’t know how, but they didn’t particularly care, it was time to save the world.
“I’m sorry my friends, I must leave you now, for there if I enter the castle my life force will surely fade away,” Meka_dragon disappeared form sight, with a flash of light.
“Lets move,” Grix signalled, “we don’t have much time left.”
The Posse headed into the castle, not aware what was about to happen to the. Two giant Dark warriors jumped out on front of them; dark warriors that were thirsty for blood.
The Posse stepped a side so that Dringo could do his work. Dringo started chanting, it seemed to be in a different language, but no one cared, they all disappeared from sight, the enchanting music started playing and the scenery turned black. And there was Odin in all his glory, with the moon shining in the background, he held aloft his mighty sword and with one foul swoop brought down across the dark warriors heads decapitating. Odin disappeared into the darkness well the Posse reappeared.
“Well that was fun, we must do it more often,” said er-no sarcastically, “Well shall we move on??”
“We shall,” Turbonutter replied.
They walked up the large flight of stairs; it seemed like the obvious way to go. On the way up they ran into many of the evil mans henchmen but they weren’t a task to turbonutter, one foul swoop of his mighty sword and they are dead. After a lot of stair climbing, they came across the throne room and with it the two leaders.
Sniper burst in to the room shouting “I’m not going to let you destroy the world, never you here me??” he charged at the two men, but he was easily flicked aside, he did not hold special powers such as there.
“I thought I killed you, Sniper well never mind, I’m glad you brought your friends along with you I can finally have some fun, muah ha ha ha!!” The robed man laughed, “It is time for you all to die.”
“NEVER!!” SHEEPY roared.
“I wouldn’t resist if I were you Grix, it will only cause you more pain, now allow me to reveal myself,” The man pulled off his cloak, and there stood Bill Gates.
“You can’t be, I killed you, you’re dead!!” Grim Fish stepped back, he looked afraid.
“That was just a feeble clone, you could never defeat me I am the almighty Bill Gates, muah ha ha ha!!” Bill Gates laughed easily “Now enough questions, it’s time for you demise!!”
Bill Gates charged at an extreme speed towards Grim Fish and landed a mighty punch on his face, Grim Fish flew backwards hitting the wall, he was too afraid to fight, and he was going to die. Bill Gates carried on pummelling Grim Fish, every punch was deadly and Grim Fish grew weaker and weaker.
Turbonutter was growing angrier every punch Bill Gates landed on Grim Fishes face, and then that was enough turbonutter exploded in rage. “GRIM FISH, YOU CAN’T DIE, YOU MUST FIGHT BACK, YOU’RE OUR ONLY HOPE!!!”
Suddenly the necklace around Grim Fish’s neck began to glow, Bill Gates was forced back, away from Grim Fish and he couldn’t move any closer. A bright light shrouded grim Fish, it was almost blinding. Moments later it died down, and there stood Grim Fish, wait it wasn’t Grim Fish it was Fish-e, Grim Fish’s ultimate evolutionary level. Bill Gates stood there shocked, almost scared, but he wasn’t intimidated.
“Do you think a crappy light show like that would scare me??”
“No, it is me you should be scared of,” Fish-e powered an energy ball in hi hand, forcing as much energy into it as possible.
“Everybody, leave here if you want to survive, NOW!!” Fish-e sounded angry, very angry.
Fish-e fired a huge beam at Bill Gates. Bill Gates tried to block it but it was just too powerful, the beam covered Bill Gates body. His body started disintegrating and suddenly Bill Gates was no more, not even a speck of dust.
Fish-e flew up through the ceiling of the castle, in the air above the castle he charged up another energy ball and threw it straight towards the castle. The castle was destroyed and so was everything inside of it, the world was safe once more and Bill Gates Finally defeated.
“We’ve finally done it, the world is finally safe, and Bill Gates is dead.” Said Grix sounding relieved.
“Yeah now I can sleep in peace, without worry of being killed,” sighed Sniper
“Yeah, lets go home,” suggested SHEEPY.
The Posse headed off into the darkness, they can live happily ever after now the world is safe or is it???
Dum Dum Duuuuuuummmmmmmm
Thanx for reading
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It is pretty long not as long as my other one though
Why is it so Dark?? Where is everyone?? Sniper cried, he sounded very afraid, “I don’t want to be alone anymore, somebody help me, please, can somebody help me??”
Sniper kept hearing voices in his head, “You have no friends, you life cannot go on, you are going to die!!” saying the same thing over and over again, it was driving him insane.
He appeared to be in a dark room, a large dark room. The room was empty, except for Sniper, sitting in the middle, all alone, no one talk to except himself, he had eaten in days and the voices had started becoming unbearable.
He had lost all hope of surviving, he had lost all hope of seeing his friends again (they never really liked him anyway) but worst of all he lost all hope of posting a message on Special Reserve ever again.
Another day passed, Sniper was ready to lie down and die (again), then suddenly he saw a light start to appear on the wall furthest wall from him, it was in a door shape, a door he had never noticed before, and the light Sniper saw a silhouette of what appeared to be a man, a tall man.
And then came a deep voice, it said “Sniper, you have been lucky to survive until now, and I am shocked, but now you will find out that all that struggle was for nothing, it is time for your execution, come with me!?”
A bright light filled the room, and because Sniper had been in the Dark room for so long he was temporarily blinded. He did not manage to see the mans face, as he was wearing a black robe and the hood of the robe shrouded his face, but he recognised the voice from somewhere, but the question was where??
Sniper was thrown into, what seemed to be an execution chamber, filled with robed men, but to a different coloured robe to the man that escorted him. In one corner there was, what appeared to be an electric chair, and in the other corner stood another robed man, he was smaller than the other robed man. The man stood next to a kind of decapitation device, it had a large blade, which was suspended above it, with tiny blood droplets, dripping on to a pool of blood on the floor, beneath it.
“I’m glad you could make it Sniper, as you can see this is my EXECUTION CHAMBER!! And this is the last place you’ll see, before you ummm… depart us!? Muah hahaha!!” the man laughed evilly “well as you can see most of these execution devices are, as you say it, slightly primitive, my new toy isn’t quite finished, so take this as getting off lucky!!”
“Who are you people?? How do you know my name?? I haven’t done anything wrong, please let me go!?” Sniper was on the floor begging for his life.
“Sniper enough with the questions, I want to let you in on a little secret, my little toy that I just mentioned, isn’t an execution device, which can only kill one person at a time, actually that’s far from it, my new “toy” will execute everybody on planet Earth!! Muah ha ha ha!!” the man continued “Sniper as I said you are getting off lucky, you will have a relatively quick death, but the rest of the world will have a slow and agonising one, including your friends, muah ha ha ha!!”
“Why are you doing this?? Tell me why!!” Sniper roared
“Well to send a message to the world and any other living thing in the universe, I am the almighty, I cannot be defeated, muah ha ha ha!! Now any last requests?? Before you die!! Muah ha ha ha!!”
“Yeah quit with the muah ha ha ha it’s starting to get so annoying and it is so passé!? Sniper snidely said, then he roared “OH yeah AND BURN IN HELL!!!!!!!”
“Well ok, I’ll try my best, muah ha h… ahem… sorry!? The robed laughed sarcastically “Now take him away, I’m starting to get sick of him.”
The second robed man dragged Sniper across the room to the electric chair; Sniper was the strapped to the chair so that he could not escape. Sniper knew what was about to come, all he had to do was wait, it was not like it had never happened before, his time was nie.
The robed man pulled down a switch; electricity started rushing through Snipers body, the lights in the room dimmed and started to flicker, with in minutes and a lot of pain Sniper was dead, there was nothing left except his burnt corpse which slowly faded away.
IN THE SR POSSE HQ
“Yo, Grix, do you know where Sniper has got to?? Grim Fish questioned
“Haven’t got a clue, probably dead or something, you know him,” replied Grix.
A deadly silence filled the air “Yeah true, he does that a lot.”
Suddenly the front door of the SR posse’s HQ burst open, and in the door way stood a rather angry, but scared looking Sniper, everybody turned to look at him, all of them looked amused.
“Sniper, we were just talking about you, been dying again have you,” blurted er-no.
“SHUT UP!!” Sniper growled “YOU HAVEN’T GOT A CLUE WHAT I’VE BEEN THROUGH THESE LAST COUPLE OF DAYS!!”
“I don’t particularly care what you’ve been through but I’m sure your going to tell us anyway!?” Said Grim Fish ignorantly
“Your damn right I’m going to tell, because believe it or not it is extremely serious!?” Said Sniper looking evilly at Grim Fish.
I took Sniper about an hour, to tell them every important detail, and once again there was a deadly silence.
“Hmmm, interesting,” said turbonutter breaking the silence “I think that it is time to consult the Dragon!!”
“THE WHAT??” nobody knew what he was talking about.
“You know, Meka_dragon, our trusted ally, the one with the kids!?”
“Oh yeah I remember him, a nice chap he is to,” Pb said “but how are we going to find him??”
“Easy,” said SHEEPY while pulling out a mobile “by using one of these babies.”
Minutes later Turbonutter got off the phone to Meka, after cutting the story short, and they all awaited his arrival. Suddenly there was a knock at the door. Reaper[DC] opened the door, and was immediately greeted by Meka.
“How did you get here so fast??” asked Reaper looking and sounding shocked.
“No time for questions we have business to attend to, Sniper if you will??” Meka called Sniper, and this seemed serious, “Sniper I know about your dying problem, at thinking about it must get damn annoying.”
“Well Yeah it does”
“Ok take this,” Meka handed Sniper a green Jewelled ring and said “It is an invincibility ring your body is immune to any physical and unnatural deaths, and now Grim Fish if you will??”
“Yeah”
“Take this” Meka handed Grim Fish a red jewelled necklace “Put it on!! It Is called a power necklace, I don’t know it’s exact power, but the myths say that you can release it’s true power, because you are the CHOSEN ONE!! And now to the Enchanted dark castle, your time is running short.
There was a flash of light, and everybody appeared outside of the Enchanted Dark Castle, they don’t know how, but they didn’t particularly care, it was time to save the world.
“I’m sorry my friends, I must leave you now, for there if I enter the castle my life force will surely fade away,” Meka_dragon disappeared form sight, with a flash of light.
“Lets move,” Grix signalled, “we don’t have much time left.”
The Posse headed into the castle, not aware what was about to happen to the. Two giant Dark warriors jumped out on front of them; dark warriors that were thirsty for blood.
The Posse stepped a side so that Dringo could do his work. Dringo started chanting, it seemed to be in a different language, but no one cared, they all disappeared from sight, the enchanting music started playing and the scenery turned black. And there was Odin in all his glory, with the moon shining in the background, he held aloft his mighty sword and with one foul swoop brought down across the dark warriors heads decapitating. Odin disappeared into the darkness well the Posse reappeared.
“Well that was fun, we must do it more often,” said er-no sarcastically, “Well shall we move on??”
“We shall,” Turbonutter replied.
They walked up the large flight of stairs; it seemed like the obvious way to go. On the way up they ran into many of the evil mans henchmen but they weren’t a task to turbonutter, one foul swoop of his mighty sword and they are dead. After a lot of stair climbing, they came across the throne room and with it the two leaders.
Sniper burst in to the room shouting “I’m not going to let you destroy the world, never you here me??” he charged at the two men, but he was easily flicked aside, he did not hold special powers such as there.
“I thought I killed you, Sniper well never mind, I’m glad you brought your friends along with you I can finally have some fun, muah ha ha ha!!” The robed man laughed, “It is time for you all to die.”
“NEVER!!” SHEEPY roared.
“I wouldn’t resist if I were you Grix, it will only cause you more pain, now allow me to reveal myself,” The man pulled off his cloak, and there stood Bill Gates.
“You can’t be, I killed you, you’re dead!!” Grim Fish stepped back, he looked afraid.
“That was just a feeble clone, you could never defeat me I am the almighty Bill Gates, muah ha ha ha!!” Bill Gates laughed easily “Now enough questions, it’s time for you demise!!”
Bill Gates charged at an extreme speed towards Grim Fish and landed a mighty punch on his face, Grim Fish flew backwards hitting the wall, he was too afraid to fight, and he was going to die. Bill Gates carried on pummelling Grim Fish, every punch was deadly and Grim Fish grew weaker and weaker.
Turbonutter was growing angrier every punch Bill Gates landed on Grim Fishes face, and then that was enough turbonutter exploded in rage. “GRIM FISH, YOU CAN’T DIE, YOU MUST FIGHT BACK, YOU’RE OUR ONLY HOPE!!!”
Suddenly the necklace around Grim Fish’s neck began to glow, Bill Gates was forced back, away from Grim Fish and he couldn’t move any closer. A bright light shrouded grim Fish, it was almost blinding. Moments later it died down, and there stood Grim Fish, wait it wasn’t Grim Fish it was Fish-e, Grim Fish’s ultimate evolutionary level. Bill Gates stood there shocked, almost scared, but he wasn’t intimidated.
“Do you think a crappy light show like that would scare me??”
“No, it is me you should be scared of,” Fish-e powered an energy ball in hi hand, forcing as much energy into it as possible.
“Everybody, leave here if you want to survive, NOW!!” Fish-e sounded angry, very angry.
Fish-e fired a huge beam at Bill Gates. Bill Gates tried to block it but it was just too powerful, the beam covered Bill Gates body. His body started disintegrating and suddenly Bill Gates was no more, not even a speck of dust.
Fish-e flew up through the ceiling of the castle, in the air above the castle he charged up another energy ball and threw it straight towards the castle. The castle was destroyed and so was everything inside of it, the world was safe once more and Bill Gates Finally defeated.
“We’ve finally done it, the world is finally safe, and Bill Gates is dead.” Said Grix sounding relieved.
“Yeah now I can sleep in peace, without worry of being killed,” sighed Sniper
“Yeah, lets go home,” suggested SHEEPY.
The Posse headed off into the darkness, they can live happily ever after now the world is safe or is it???
Dum Dum Duuuuuuummmmmmmm
Thanx for reading
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Yes! the fame, the glory !
I can see it now ZP in lightS!
I can see it now ZP in lightS!
It was a great story but it would of been better if I was in it!
Nice story. Thanks for giving me a speaking part!
Fish-e wrote:
> Ok Sheepy, you notable you, i voted for you
Emm ta
I don't know what to say, so I will remain quite.
That was my last post as a regular (sniff)
> Ok Sheepy, you notable you, i voted for you
Emm ta
I don't know what to say, so I will remain quite.
That was my last post as a regular (sniff)
Yeah its good!
See when you write my name though, I will give you special permission to write it as Sheepy and not SHEEPY as it stands out like a sore thumb ;)
POWER OF THE SHEEP
See when you write my name though, I will give you special permission to write it as Sheepy and not SHEEPY as it stands out like a sore thumb ;)
POWER OF THE SHEEP
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