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Mark David. He was the target. The would kidnap him and inject it into him. Mark David was walking down the street and went into the shops. But Mark David did not know that the scientists had payed every single shop owner to drug whatever food or drink they sell to Mark David. But this time round Mark was lucky. He just came in to buy a magazine. He bought it and returned to his house.
"Damn!" said one of the scientists in Techni. "We'll have to storm into his house and get him!"
Mark David read the magazine and left it on the chair he was sitting on. He went out of his house to have a walk. He ran to the Park and looked around. In Mark's house the scientists broke the window and came in. They searched the house for Mark David. But he wasn't there.
"Damn!" said one of the scientists who was in his house, "Ok then he's been lucky and escaped twice. But we'll get him the third time."
The scientists looked everywhere and spotted him in the park. They spied on him. There weren't any people in the park. Just Mark David and the scientists - who were hiding. They hid behind some bushes. Mark David went to the bin and through all the stuff he had in his pockets in the bin.
"Quick!" said one of the scientists, "GRAB HIM!"
Mark turned around and saw four people jump onto him.
"Oh god, get of me!" Mark shouted.
One of the scientists saw a Guard approaching them.
"Damn! Damn! A guard's comin'!"
The four scientists quickly jumped of and ran all the way back to Techni.
"Damn! That's third time lucky!" Shouted a scientist.
Mark talked to the guard about what happened. He went back home to find it all a mess and he found one window broken. He went to his phone and Dialed 999.
"Hello?" Mark said.
"Hello this is the emergency helpline how may I - MARK!"
"AA!"
"This is one of the members at Techni. We need to inject some blood into you and test if it can save your lives. We've had three attempts of getting you-"
Mark hanged up. He couldn't believe it. He was a target. He had heard of this operation. He knew it was called Blood In The Snow. A crane came smashing into Mark's house. "AAAAAAAAAA!" Mark shouted.
The crane scooped up Mark and smashed him into the wall. He was now outside and was facing the crane. The crane dropped him from a height. Mark should've been killed. But there was a truck carrying a matress on top of it and Mark landed on it. He was grateful it wasn't moving otherwise he could've bouced of and hurt himself. He climbed down.
"That was lucky," he said to himself.
Before he knew it the crane was charging for him again. He leapt out of the way. The crane smashed in the concrete. He ran and a car almost hit him. The crane hit the car and it exploded. The crane exploded with it. Mark went into the Techni buiding and went to the top floor to where all the scientists were. The room was locked but he kicked it open.
"Mark! I was expecting you to come - aaaa!"
Mark punched the scientist. He grabbed hold of him and threw him out of the window.
"NOW EVERYONE LISTEN UP!" Mark shouted. "LEAVE ME ALONE. GET SOMEONE ELSE TO DO YOUR PROJECT."
All of the scientists were silent. Which wasn't most of them as most of the scientists were in the crane and died.
Mark went angry. He grabbed a knife and flung it and it hit a scientist. He died. There were only two more. He charged at the and threw them out of the window.
Mark sat down in his new home and thought about his freaky adventure he had...two years ago.
Mark David. He was the target. The would kidnap him and inject it into him. Mark David was walking down the street and went into the shops. But Mark David did not know that the scientists had payed every single shop owner to drug whatever food or drink they sell to Mark David. But this time round Mark was lucky. He just came in to buy a magazine. He bought it and returned to his house.
"Damn!" said one of the scientists in Techni. "We'll have to storm into his house and get him!"
Mark David read the magazine and left it on the chair he was sitting on. He went out of his house to have a walk. He ran to the Park and looked around. In Mark's house the scientists broke the window and came in. They searched the house for Mark David. But he wasn't there.
"Damn!" said one of the scientists who was in his house, "Ok then he's been lucky and escaped twice. But we'll get him the third time."
The scientists looked everywhere and spotted him in the park. They spied on him. There weren't any people in the park. Just Mark David and the scientists - who were hiding. They hid behind some bushes. Mark David went to the bin and through all the stuff he had in his pockets in the bin.
"Quick!" said one of the scientists, "GRAB HIM!"
Mark turned around and saw four people jump onto him.
"Oh god, get of me!" Mark shouted.
One of the scientists saw a Guard approaching them.
"Damn! Damn! A guard's comin'!"
The four scientists quickly jumped of and ran all the way back to Techni.
"Damn! That's third time lucky!" Shouted a scientist.
Mark talked to the guard about what happened. He went back home to find it all a mess and he found one window broken. He went to his phone and Dialed 999.
"Hello?" Mark said.
"Hello this is the emergency helpline how may I - MARK!"
"AA!"
"This is one of the members at Techni. We need to inject some blood into you and test if it can save your lives. We've had three attempts of getting you-"
Mark hanged up. He couldn't believe it. He was a target. He had heard of this operation. He knew it was called Blood In The Snow. A crane came smashing into Mark's house. "AAAAAAAAAA!" Mark shouted.
The crane scooped up Mark and smashed him into the wall. He was now outside and was facing the crane. The crane dropped him from a height. Mark should've been killed. But there was a truck carrying a matress on top of it and Mark landed on it. He was grateful it wasn't moving otherwise he could've bouced of and hurt himself. He climbed down.
"That was lucky," he said to himself.
Before he knew it the crane was charging for him again. He leapt out of the way. The crane smashed in the concrete. He ran and a car almost hit him. The crane hit the car and it exploded. The crane exploded with it. Mark went into the Techni buiding and went to the top floor to where all the scientists were. The room was locked but he kicked it open.
"Mark! I was expecting you to come - aaaa!"
Mark punched the scientist. He grabbed hold of him and threw him out of the window.
"NOW EVERYONE LISTEN UP!" Mark shouted. "LEAVE ME ALONE. GET SOMEONE ELSE TO DO YOUR PROJECT."
All of the scientists were silent. Which wasn't most of them as most of the scientists were in the crane and died.
Mark went angry. He grabbed a knife and flung it and it hit a scientist. He died. There were only two more. He charged at the and threw them out of the window.
Mark sat down in his new home and thought about his freaky adventure he had...two years ago.
Are you trying to outshine CrossBob?
Enjoyable in a bizarre kind of illogical way. And the pointo fthe last sentance was..?