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Tuesday night skateboarding night for Bill as Bill skateboarded along the road. He watched the stars fly by the moon shone down on him. He loved skateboarding at night coz no-one else was around. But this night a killer in the shadows was following him watching every move he did. This Killer had a sharp knife clenched in his hand waiting for the man to fall off his skateboard or to stop. The killer had been following him for one hour now and was getting very annoyed. But then it happened as the man was in the middle of doing a manual he fell to the floor and smacked his head on the concrete. "Ah crap that really hurt ahhhh my head" screamed Bill. But then Killer ran over to him and stabbed in the back killing him straight away. "That’s for winning the skateboarding competition" moaned the Killer.
The next day the killer followed a BMX Rider and killed him the same as he did the Skateboarder and said the same words but with BMX Competition. It had became big a habit for the Killer but you could tell he was just a bad loser.
The next day the killer followed a BMX Rider and killed him the same as he did the Skateboarder and said the same words but with BMX Competition. It had became big a habit for the Killer but you could tell he was just a bad loser.
Thank you very much Timmargh.
I liked it.
klasovdan_1 wrote:
> How come you don't write any dodgy romance stories anymore, they were
> the funniest things you ever wrote. pure comic genius.
Yeah I might do some more of those soon.
> How come you don't write any dodgy romance stories anymore, they were
> the funniest things you ever wrote. pure comic genius.
Yeah I might do some more of those soon.
Two things:
1.) This reminds me of an old story by ZZZZ, about a skateboarding competition. (Or as he put it competion)
2.) And why didn't something more funny happen. I expected the murderer's hand to bleed or something when he clenched the knife.
1.) This reminds me of an old story by ZZZZ, about a skateboarding competition. (Or as he put it competion)
2.) And why didn't something more funny happen. I expected the murderer's hand to bleed or something when he clenched the knife.
How come you don't write any dodgy romance stories anymore, they were the funniest things you ever wrote. pure comic genius.
*speechless*
Come on someone say something about this please?
Tuesday night skateboarding night for Bill as Bill skateboarded along the road. He watched the stars fly by the moon shone down on him. He loved skateboarding at night coz no-one else was around. But this night a killer in the shadows was following him watching every move he did. This Killer had a sharp knife clenched in his hand waiting for the man to fall off his skateboard or to stop. The killer had been following him for one hour now and was getting very annoyed. But then it happened as the man was in the middle of doing a manual he fell to the floor and smacked his head on the concrete. "Ah crap that really hurt ahhhh my head" screamed Bill. But then Killer ran over to him and stabbed in the back killing him straight away. "That’s for winning the skateboarding competition" moaned the Killer.
The next day the killer followed a BMX Rider and killed him the same as he did the Skateboarder and said the same words but with BMX Competition. It had became big a habit for the Killer but you could tell he was just a bad loser.
The next day the killer followed a BMX Rider and killed him the same as he did the Skateboarder and said the same words but with BMX Competition. It had became big a habit for the Killer but you could tell he was just a bad loser.