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"SSC29 - No, That Red Letterbox Over The Road Isn't Related To You"

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Sun 24/07/05 at 00:20
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Ye, the venom-beaten shades of darkness that hung from his poppy-tinted pupils were expanding as he coughed wafers of smoke into the mist of the Friday night, but does he actually care?

Do I actually care?

My head drums the agony of it all through my bloated veins, as we stumble. Stumble on. Light headed as helium balloons. Many versions of the velvet heavens intersect to create and artistic blur of shallow colour. That man over there isnít actually walking his dog.

They just donít exactly take a liking to our behaviour.

I never did like the way those primroses were arranged in that window. And now my bones shake. Vibrations of a cruel nature agitate until I cry with confusion.

But it feels so good. So free. I am free.

The broad, red guy never does walk. He just stands there, digesting the folded envelopes that are laid before him.

Spiders!

Please! I donít enjoy these hallucinations of a crimson nature. Eating isnít that important, so long as the oozing butter that melts upon a crumpet like humid ice isnít put to waste. But then again, why is my pillow gushed with fluid in the early hours?

Donít cry afterward. Just donít.

All that organ-churning concentration that engulfs my beating heart. Why?

But, I canít,

So authentic. I can escape.

Shivering,

Ö

So cold,

Ö

Check my eyelids please,

Ö

Ö

I cannot bear to look at the life-wishing shades of darkness that hang from his eyelids as I sit upon this park bench. But I know tomorrow night, it wonít even matter.
Sat 10/09/05 at 11:17
"period drama"
Posts: 19,792
Some fantastic turns of phrase there ... more of a snap-shot than a story, but still good.
Tue 09/08/05 at 22:13
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"I like cheese"
Posts: 16,918
I think 'imaginative' is an appropriate word to use here.
Sun 24/07/05 at 15:55
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"tokyo police club"
Posts: 12,540
YOU GOTH

also:

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GOTH.
Sun 24/07/05 at 15:54
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"bei-jing-jing-jing"
Posts: 7,403
I think you said it best yourself:

"..."
Sun 24/07/05 at 00:20
Regular
Posts: 2,048
Ye, the venom-beaten shades of darkness that hung from his poppy-tinted pupils were expanding as he coughed wafers of smoke into the mist of the Friday night, but does he actually care?

Do I actually care?

My head drums the agony of it all through my bloated veins, as we stumble. Stumble on. Light headed as helium balloons. Many versions of the velvet heavens intersect to create and artistic blur of shallow colour. That man over there isnít actually walking his dog.

They just donít exactly take a liking to our behaviour.

I never did like the way those primroses were arranged in that window. And now my bones shake. Vibrations of a cruel nature agitate until I cry with confusion.

But it feels so good. So free. I am free.

The broad, red guy never does walk. He just stands there, digesting the folded envelopes that are laid before him.

Spiders!

Please! I donít enjoy these hallucinations of a crimson nature. Eating isnít that important, so long as the oozing butter that melts upon a crumpet like humid ice isnít put to waste. But then again, why is my pillow gushed with fluid in the early hours?

Donít cry afterward. Just donít.

All that organ-churning concentration that engulfs my beating heart. Why?

But, I canít,

So authentic. I can escape.

Shivering,

Ö

So cold,

Ö

Check my eyelids please,

Ö

Ö

I cannot bear to look at the life-wishing shades of darkness that hang from his eyelids as I sit upon this park bench. But I know tomorrow night, it wonít even matter.

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