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London was the town to be. It was made of little streets that made the town the city! London was all over the place and at times, i think that the bakery was making money. The pastrys say that they like being made, and the fact they talk is what can make the baker a very happy chapy.
Baker was Troy and he loved working there for money. This meant it was like a job to him. And a job is what he wanted and had hopped for his hole life. He wished he could meet a woman. A woman who liked eating bakery food. For he made lots and alot of bakery food.
Helen was a girl. She knew how to eat. She met troy annd troy grew up to be happy chapy. He loved the fact that he had a woman. He maryed her and they lived happy ever after in a boat. The oat was really big and they loved it.
Baker was Troy and he loved working there for money. This meant it was like a job to him. And a job is what he wanted and had hopped for his hole life. He wished he could meet a woman. A woman who liked eating bakery food. For he made lots and alot of bakery food.
Helen was a girl. She knew how to eat. She met troy annd troy grew up to be happy chapy. He loved the fact that he had a woman. He maryed her and they lived happy ever after in a boat. The oat was really big and they loved it.
LOOK JUST STOP. Can you lot just stop taking the pish,and get on with you lifes!
i prefer to read crossbobs dribble than this. GOD that kid thought what he wrote was GOOD. OMG
Fair point, but still. Mine have more credibility than that.
Im just saying you can talk. Sheesh...
Give credit where it's due MrGlitch. I have more excitement in my stories. And my true horror story was great. And as for teh stories on my character 'Jody Adams' I think I did well.
You can talk.
I think I speak for everyone on these forums when I say, that Troy isn't really a baker's kind of name. And as for the story? Have you been speaking to Crossbob. Well I guess if you had he could give you some pointers.
London was the town to be. It was made of little streets that made the town the city! London was all over the place and at times, i think that the bakery was making money. The pastrys say that they like being made, and the fact they talk is what can make the baker a very happy chapy.
Baker was Troy and he loved working there for money. This meant it was like a job to him. And a job is what he wanted and had hopped for his hole life. He wished he could meet a woman. A woman who liked eating bakery food. For he made lots and alot of bakery food.
Helen was a girl. She knew how to eat. She met troy annd troy grew up to be happy chapy. He loved the fact that he had a woman. He maryed her and they lived happy ever after in a boat. The oat was really big and they loved it.
Baker was Troy and he loved working there for money. This meant it was like a job to him. And a job is what he wanted and had hopped for his hole life. He wished he could meet a woman. A woman who liked eating bakery food. For he made lots and alot of bakery food.
Helen was a girl. She knew how to eat. She met troy annd troy grew up to be happy chapy. He loved the fact that he had a woman. He maryed her and they lived happy ever after in a boat. The oat was really big and they loved it.