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The purple ford escort pulled into the car park. The leather booted foot hit the floor. Darren stepped out of the car. He was finally here!
For Darren has come for a reason. He had come to the forsaken house, and was destined to put a stop to the evil home owner's ways. Darren knew he had it in him to do it, and he knew well of the treasure that lay deep within the house. Preston House.
Darren appraoched the door, and knocked 3 times. He then stepped back. He pulled a flash grenade out of his pocket and threw it in through the cat flap. "BANG!" The door swung ajar. Darreb walked in.
He appraoched and ascended the stairs. He appraoched a room at the top of the stairs, with the door widely open. He went in and found the man he was looking for. Darren hid in the doorway, and watched the man crawl under the bed, and down a trap door.
Darren followed, knowing that his life, had now changed and he was in deep. Deeper than a swimming pool that had 2 metre deep end.
Darren was now in a maze, made of series of tunnels. He walked a few of the tunnels, and then felt a stabing sensation in his back. He had been stabbed! The man who stabbed him then killed himself.
Darren lay on the floor as the soil from the underground maze filled him up with evil thoughts and evil plots. The maze was alive, and was aware of the treasures of which it consumed. And knew to protect them at any cost. And now has minipulated Darren and got inside him. Darren has this force inside him! Darren is no more. Darunia is born! Darunia aquired the house and roles of the former villan. For the old tendant, Larry Flint, was no more. What could this possibly mean for the future, of the world, and it's riches......
For Darren has come for a reason. He had come to the forsaken house, and was destined to put a stop to the evil home owner's ways. Darren knew he had it in him to do it, and he knew well of the treasure that lay deep within the house. Preston House.
Darren appraoched the door, and knocked 3 times. He then stepped back. He pulled a flash grenade out of his pocket and threw it in through the cat flap. "BANG!" The door swung ajar. Darreb walked in.
He appraoched and ascended the stairs. He appraoched a room at the top of the stairs, with the door widely open. He went in and found the man he was looking for. Darren hid in the doorway, and watched the man crawl under the bed, and down a trap door.
Darren followed, knowing that his life, had now changed and he was in deep. Deeper than a swimming pool that had 2 metre deep end.
Darren was now in a maze, made of series of tunnels. He walked a few of the tunnels, and then felt a stabing sensation in his back. He had been stabbed! The man who stabbed him then killed himself.
Darren lay on the floor as the soil from the underground maze filled him up with evil thoughts and evil plots. The maze was alive, and was aware of the treasures of which it consumed. And knew to protect them at any cost. And now has minipulated Darren and got inside him. Darren has this force inside him! Darren is no more. Darunia is born! Darunia aquired the house and roles of the former villan. For the old tendant, Larry Flint, was no more. What could this possibly mean for the future, of the world, and it's riches......
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The purple ford escort pulled into the car park. The leather booted foot hit the floor. Darren stepped out of the car. He was finally here!
For Darren has come for a reason. He had come to the forsaken house, and was destined to put a stop to the evil home owner's ways. Darren knew he had it in him to do it, and he knew well of the treasure that lay deep within the house. Preston House.
Darren appraoched the door, and knocked 3 times. He then stepped back. He pulled a flash grenade out of his pocket and threw it in through the cat flap. "BANG!" The door swung ajar. Darreb walked in.
He appraoched and ascended the stairs. He appraoched a room at the top of the stairs, with the door widely open. He went in and found the man he was looking for. Darren hid in the doorway, and watched the man crawl under the bed, and down a trap door.
Darren followed, knowing that his life, had now changed and he was in deep. Deeper than a swimming pool that had 2 metre deep end.
Darren was now in a maze, made of series of tunnels. He walked a few of the tunnels, and then felt a stabing sensation in his back. He had been stabbed! The man who stabbed him then killed himself.
Darren lay on the floor as the soil from the underground maze filled him up with evil thoughts and evil plots. The maze was alive, and was aware of the treasures of which it consumed. And knew to protect them at any cost. And now has minipulated Darren and got inside him. Darren has this force inside him! Darren is no more. Darunia is born! Darunia aquired the house and roles of the former villan. For the old tendant, Larry Flint, was no more. What could this possibly mean for the future, of the world, and it's riches......
For Darren has come for a reason. He had come to the forsaken house, and was destined to put a stop to the evil home owner's ways. Darren knew he had it in him to do it, and he knew well of the treasure that lay deep within the house. Preston House.
Darren appraoched the door, and knocked 3 times. He then stepped back. He pulled a flash grenade out of his pocket and threw it in through the cat flap. "BANG!" The door swung ajar. Darreb walked in.
He appraoched and ascended the stairs. He appraoched a room at the top of the stairs, with the door widely open. He went in and found the man he was looking for. Darren hid in the doorway, and watched the man crawl under the bed, and down a trap door.
Darren followed, knowing that his life, had now changed and he was in deep. Deeper than a swimming pool that had 2 metre deep end.
Darren was now in a maze, made of series of tunnels. He walked a few of the tunnels, and then felt a stabing sensation in his back. He had been stabbed! The man who stabbed him then killed himself.
Darren lay on the floor as the soil from the underground maze filled him up with evil thoughts and evil plots. The maze was alive, and was aware of the treasures of which it consumed. And knew to protect them at any cost. And now has minipulated Darren and got inside him. Darren has this force inside him! Darren is no more. Darunia is born! Darunia aquired the house and roles of the former villan. For the old tendant, Larry Flint, was no more. What could this possibly mean for the future, of the world, and it's riches......