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The car stopped and out stepped the driver. He walked along the street and into the news agents. This was where he was going to buy todays paper. Now Jody felt like reading the Mirror today, so that's exactly what he bought.
He payed, at the counter and walked back out of the shop to find that the steering wheel had been taken from his car. Gang warfare had played a big part in Jody Adams' life, and now they finally had to pay, they had gone too far.
Jody walked back to the farm, where he lived, and found the door open ajar. He stepped in to find blood on the floor. He looked to the right, and saw a note. It told Jody something about the situation he was in. Jody knew what he must do. He must file for diplomatic immunity before he could take these guys down, but first he'd have to get deported, and then re-inported and file from a foreigners perspective. Could Jody do it? Could he really use his know how to outsmart these crooked crooks......
He payed, at the counter and walked back out of the shop to find that the steering wheel had been taken from his car. Gang warfare had played a big part in Jody Adams' life, and now they finally had to pay, they had gone too far.
Jody walked back to the farm, where he lived, and found the door open ajar. He stepped in to find blood on the floor. He looked to the right, and saw a note. It told Jody something about the situation he was in. Jody knew what he must do. He must file for diplomatic immunity before he could take these guys down, but first he'd have to get deported, and then re-inported and file from a foreigners perspective. Could Jody do it? Could he really use his know how to outsmart these crooked crooks......
Yeah, i was planning to continue it. Quite interested myself, to see how my character is going to fight off the gang warfare.
Deported and re-inported? Interesting... I like the way it starts with him buying a paper, then his steering wheel gets stolen. I take it that you plan to continue this...
The car stopped and out stepped the driver. He walked along the street and into the news agents. This was where he was going to buy todays paper. Now Jody felt like reading the Mirror today, so that's exactly what he bought.
He payed, at the counter and walked back out of the shop to find that the steering wheel had been taken from his car. Gang warfare had played a big part in Jody Adams' life, and now they finally had to pay, they had gone too far.
Jody walked back to the farm, where he lived, and found the door open ajar. He stepped in to find blood on the floor. He looked to the right, and saw a note. It told Jody something about the situation he was in. Jody knew what he must do. He must file for diplomatic immunity before he could take these guys down, but first he'd have to get deported, and then re-inported and file from a foreigners perspective. Could Jody do it? Could he really use his know how to outsmart these crooked crooks......
He payed, at the counter and walked back out of the shop to find that the steering wheel had been taken from his car. Gang warfare had played a big part in Jody Adams' life, and now they finally had to pay, they had gone too far.
Jody walked back to the farm, where he lived, and found the door open ajar. He stepped in to find blood on the floor. He looked to the right, and saw a note. It told Jody something about the situation he was in. Jody knew what he must do. He must file for diplomatic immunity before he could take these guys down, but first he'd have to get deported, and then re-inported and file from a foreigners perspective. Could Jody do it? Could he really use his know how to outsmart these crooked crooks......